The whole Witch Boy series is so shallow and heavy handed without actually delivering on the themes it's bringing up.
The change in setting provides slightly higher stakes for this book but it's shoddy structure just builds up to an underwhelming climax. I wish Ostertag could go deeper into Jolrun and how that would affect the magical family dynamics.
Ariel kind of became the protagonist of the last two books and Aster got pushed aside. It doesn't help that Aster is so vanilla and passive, but I feel like the second Ostertag introduced an angsty lesbian character she had nothing else to say about the non-conforming boy. Why does Aster have to be convinced to partake in the Jolrun after his mom shut him down? It's condescending seeing Ariel effortlessly win the Jolrun and then just give the honor of winning to Aster. Aster actually worked for it, but no of course the lighter skinned character is better than him despite putting in less work.
Charlie just exists to be Ariel's love interest. Somehow even when dark skinned poc are the main characters, they managed to get sidelined by a the lighter skinned side character when white people write them. Charlie just blushes a bunch and offers support. Also at one point she says "jumping off a cliff isn't my idea of fun" when?? She literally did that in the first Witch Boy Book? Molly's ability to care about her BIPOC characters is so non-existent that she forgets their own stories.
Ariel's arc with her aunt Isabel is so shallow. Her aunt uses evil exploity magic and thinks everyone else is weak for doing unharmful magic! I though this meant that Ariel would be tempted to hurt people again, but she just...wins a Jolrun contest? Without hurting anyone? When Aster calls her out on taking his victory in the Jolrun she lashes out and says he's just scared that she'll be more powerful than him??? Nothing in the narrative showed that. Aster corrects her by saying that she should know how much winning the Jolrun would mean to him as a Witch Boy and she just...leaves and calls up evil auntie. Evil auntie arrives and Ariel immediately changes her mind about joining her when Isabel puts Aster in danger. What's bizarre is that Ariel says "I mess everything up! The last time I did, someone died!" (yes that was a weird sentence grammatically) referring to Mikasi sacrificing himself only for Aster to correct her later when he tries to rescue her that "You didn't kill Mikasi. He died to give you a choice". Did?? This family really make it so they let Ariel believe she killed Mikasi? It's not held up by the narrative at all. Either way they get away and happy ending! Guh.
Holly (Aster's mom) becomes a more prominent character in this book. She wants to encourage Ariel into feeling more welcome in the Vanissens by getting her to partake in the Jolrun, but doesn't want Aster to join because the rest of the extended family isn't ready to accept a Witch Boy just yet. I get why she wants to look over an orphaned magical child, but it's weird how the narrative brushes off the boundaries she's crossing by rushing a kid into a whole new family culture. Holly asks Ariel's parents' permission to take her to the Jolrun before checking if Ariel herself is actually okay with it?? Like Ariel already has an adopted family of her own that she's hasn't even gotten along with yet. I wish Holly was called out on this. In general the family dynamics just feel brushed over and surface level. I'm glad that Aster got to have a confrontation with his mom about how she "accepts" him but thinks she's protecting him by hiding his witchery from others. I wish there were more moments like that in the Witch Boy series, where kids can navigate how complicated gaining acceptance can be. What about how Tohor told Aster that he's actually supportive of him joining the Jolrun? He didn't do anything to help his son out. This would have been a great opportunity to show how parents can be good allies in helping kids navigate bigotry. But most of the time we just get hand-wavy "accept differences!" messages from a heavy handed metaphor.
Aster's kind of back to square one in this book? He wants to prove himself a Witch but boo family isn't accepting. If Aster could just win a family contest, maybe that'll mean something! Flint is literally Sedge 2.0. He doesn't make a compelling rival because he's not even competing against Aster as a shifter, so we barely get any interaction between the two. It would have been way more interesting if Aster's rival in the Jolrun was a competitive Witch girl. Then we'd cover new ground the series hasn't already done and see an actual competitive dynamic in this story. It would have been so satisfying to see that rivalry, skill building and respect for each other build up instead of having it be pushed to the background for Ariel's angst.
Either way I'm tired of middle grade stories that constantly frame beauty pageants, school plays and contests as the key to acceptance. I get that not every member of the Vanissen family cheered for Aster's pity victory and that it's all about how other non-conforming kids will feel knowing there's someone like him, but it's just so shallow in the way it's framed. I'm truly sick of metaphors about queerness and not actual queer representation. Gay dads exist and girls crush on each other but it's all treated like incidental details for a story apparently ABOUT queerness. Why doesn't Aster's relationship with Aunt Iris ever get resolved? That would have been a great opportunity to talk about internalized prejudice within the queer community. Iris is also never shown to hang out with her wife. It's frustrating that a narrative that exploits trans people's experiences into a fantasy metaphor has no trans characters in it.
The art in this third installment is just a new level of phoning it in. For a book dedicated to sporty contests, the action sequences sure are uninspired or just awkwardly paced. Through all three books, Ostertag still can't draw Charlie's hairline competently. The design of Isabel is such cliche villain coding. You'd think a queer artist would know better than to go for pointy-nosed, hyper femme classic Disney physiognomy. Maarta Laiho is the colorist for this book and is really incompetent with coloring dark skin. Juniper's skin tone keeps changing, she used to be the same complexion as Aster, but she's lighter in this book? In night time scenes some characters look straight up white washed. In pages 176 and 177, Charlie (a Black girl) has the SAME skin tone as Holly (a white woman).
Overall, it really feels like Ostertag wanted to cash in on trans visibility with a queer-baity metaphor and just do nothing with it after getting two more books with that story. QPOC, especially trans people of color, deserve better than an ambiguously brown, indigenous-coded character written by a white person. The Witch Boy series is just white cis queerness dressed up in shallow diversity.