Wanted: Gentle Daddy is the first book in the ‘Love on Tap: Fragile Hearts’ series. It stars Tucker, a real estate agent and Daddy, and Joey, his assistant and boy. This is told in first person from Tucker and Joey’s povs.
I don’t remember reading a book by this author before, and if this is their style of writing, I won’t be reading any in the future. The blurb is jumbled in regards to sequence of events, but it gives the basic plot so I won’t go over it again. I want to talk about the writing style for this story.
The plot was predictable, like the author had written down all the expected tropes and items that make up a Daddy/boy relationship, except none of it felt natural or flowed. It’s like the plot points were put in to tick off boxes that the author guessed readers would like. Right off the bat, the writing was an info dump with loads of monologue. I was so bored, I almost stopped reading, but decided to push my way through in case the writing improved. It did not. This book was told and not shown, so that I never felt pulled into the story or felt any interest in either Joey or Tucker. And the repetitive overuse of Tucker calling Joey, ‘cutie-pie’ was mind-numbing. The only good thing about this story, was the author made Tucker the Bossy, Bottom Daddy, and Joey the subby, top boy.
The relationship between Joey and Tucker felt forced, and I couldn’t believe in them as a couple. They didn’t act like a Daddy/boy relationship except for Joey calling Tucker ‘Daddy,’ and Tucker calling Joey, ‘cutie-pie,’ incessantly.
There are also numerous inconsistencies. One I disliked the most had to do with Tucker and him not knowing what he wanted. At one point, Joey responds in a sassy tone to Tucker, it wasn't anything mean. But Tucker thinks that he'll have to teach Joey not to sass at him. Later near the end, Joey is sassy again, and Tucker's attitude this time is that he loves Joey's sassy attitude and is glad that Joey is feeling comfortable enough to be his true self with him. So which one is it? If the author is going to write a Daddy, they should write a consistent Daddy, not a Daddy that sends conflicting messages that will only confuse his boy. This is what I mean by the author not knowing what a Daddy/boy relationship is like.
Wanted: Gentle Daddy is overflowing with info-dumping and internal monologue. The ticky boxes the author used to create the Tucker and Joey relationship and the plot were obvious, like the summation of all the Daddy/boy stories the author had read without the understanding or emotional depth. There are many other better written Daddy/boy books out there. Just not this one. I don’t recommend this book. I give this, 2 Stars.