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117 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 9, 2022
Pastor has done the work of seeing. Tracery of other writers gleams out throughout the collection. In “Hold,” I hear W. S. Merwin’s voice in “This one’s a pen / that makes words disappear”; Franz Wright’s in “The Sea, The Tower” (“Do waves weep as they die on the shore / with laughter, with the wine-dark hymns?”). The anonymous author of Sir Gawain and the Green Knight speaks in the closing stanza of “The Green Chapel”:
…for when I was one year younger and a day,
I held the heavy axe and brought it down,
And in the final moment as skin and sinew tore,
I heard a voice I knew:
Welcome friend. It’s only you you’re striking.
Seamus Heaney hides behind the bony clicks and kenning(s?) of “click crack / blood sap / joint back / man tree from a bone seed.” Derek Walcott might have liked “how it would feel / to hunt some younger god,” and Vladimir Nabokov would certainly appreciate the closing lines of that poem. Hopkins glories as “Ice of Eden / bobs in the glass-green brine pitching fits, / yawing yawned lessenings.” And of course, MacDonald is everywhere.