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Any Fair Interference
To be a fool is one thing, to be a fool for love is something else altogether.
SHORTLY AFTER THE PRECIPITOUS DEPARTURE of Mr Bingley and his party from Netherfield Park, disaster strikes Miss Elizabeth Bennet’s family. Not only is Mr Bennet ill, Longbourn and indeed all of Meryton is struggling through one of England’s worst winters. Elizabeth draws on every strength to care for her family, but faces the alarming prospect of losing both her father and her home. Her lonely struggles lead her to revise her opinion of a certain gentleman, and she finds unexpected solace in dreams of Mr Darcy.
FITZWILLIAM DARCY BELIEVES HE CAN ESCAPE his attraction to Elizabeth by leaving Netherfield. He soon finds himself snowbound at Pemberley, where forced isolation compels him to contemplate his duty, and contrast it with dreams of his heart’s desire. No matter how he considers it, though, he feels he cannot have Elizabeth, the one he truly loves.
FORTUNATELY DARCY'S FRIENDS and his family–Georgiana, Colonel Fitzwilliam, and the Hursts–feel far differently than he, and soon even the most unlikely allies have come together to help him see that happiness is the highest consideration of all. But will he and Elizabeth find the courage to follow their hearts before it is too late?
SHORTLY AFTER THE PRECIPITOUS DEPARTURE of Mr Bingley and his party from Netherfield Park, disaster strikes Miss Elizabeth Bennet’s family. Not only is Mr Bennet ill, Longbourn and indeed all of Meryton is struggling through one of England’s worst winters. Elizabeth draws on every strength to care for her family, but faces the alarming prospect of losing both her father and her home. Her lonely struggles lead her to revise her opinion of a certain gentleman, and she finds unexpected solace in dreams of Mr Darcy.
FITZWILLIAM DARCY BELIEVES HE CAN ESCAPE his attraction to Elizabeth by leaving Netherfield. He soon finds himself snowbound at Pemberley, where forced isolation compels him to contemplate his duty, and contrast it with dreams of his heart’s desire. No matter how he considers it, though, he feels he cannot have Elizabeth, the one he truly loves.
FORTUNATELY DARCY'S FRIENDS and his family–Georgiana, Colonel Fitzwilliam, and the Hursts–feel far differently than he, and soon even the most unlikely allies have come together to help him see that happiness is the highest consideration of all. But will he and Elizabeth find the courage to follow their hearts before it is too late?
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April 4, 2025
Advice is priceless; when it becomes interference it is preposterous. ~ Idries Shah
“Any Fair Interference” begins at a familiar place: the Netherfield Ball. Regular Austen Aficionados will recognize the scene, but maybe not all the characters.
One altered character is Mr. Hurst: Quis custodiet ipsos custodes? Who watches the watcher? mused Gilbert Hurst, as he observed the great and powerful Fitzwilliam Darcy half-hiding in a corner, staring at Miss Elizabeth Bennet.
Apparently, I do.
Here is an unlikely hero in any JAFF story! How often is Hurst described as “a tall, slender man” with a “thin, handsome face” and a “habitual scowl”? It sounds more like a Darcy description, doesn’t it? Gilbert Hurst’s thoughts are revealed at regular intervals. We learn about his family’s estate and the source of his unhappy marriage. His actions lead to Happy Endings for more than himself.
Insistent advice may develop into interference, and interference, someone has said, is the hind hoof of the devil. ~ Carolyn Wells
The Netherfield party has left Meryton and left Elizabeth Bennet with negative thoughts about one of the party. Clues to the real person are dropped in front of her.
Quote from the book: As the sisters retraced their steps towards Longbourn, the stiffening breeze dropped a piece of fabric right at Elizabeth’s feet. She bent to pick it up and found she was holding a man’s large handkerchief made of fine lawn material. It had been made into a handkerchief dolly, the middle tied into a head and two corners tied into knots approximating hands. It was smudged and dirty, and had a sticky spot of jam on it. Someone had crudely stitched a smiling face on the head with yarn, but of greater interest were the initials FD, expertly and exquisitely embroidered on a corner in a complicated entwining design. It was the most beautiful silk thread she had ever seen; even through the dirt, it glowed in the pale afternoon light.
What kind of man would make a dolly for the blacksmith’s daughter? A man with a fine black horse needing a shoe repaired. A man who made dollies for his little sister when she could not sit still for the entire church service.
Troubles plague the Bennets: a cold, snowy winter makes travel and mail delivery almost impossible. Mr. Bennet’s health declines.
Quote from the book: Mrs. Bennet’s grief, fear, even tattered remnants of love; indeed, all her feelings for her husband were inextricably mixed with anger; for more than twenty years of mockery, for his isolating himself from his family, for not making the most of his income.
Darcy joins Georgiana in Derbyshire where massive snowfall impedes communication with the outside world for weeks and weeks.
Caroline Bingley, the numero uno interferer in the lives of those around her, is ensnared by another woman in a plot that Caroline is not clever enough to unravel. It seems like Caroline finally has everything (almost) that she wants. But is any of it true?
The most important thing to do in your life is to not interfere in somebody else’s life. ~ Frank Zappa
“Any Fair Interference” explores both the good and bad edges of interference. Most quotes I found warn of interfering, but we also learn about helpful interferences, especially from our unlikely hero.
I would have liked to see more of Caroline Bingley’s comeuppance — but then, I always love to see that woman get her comeuppance. We see the circumstances; we see the realization; we don’t see much of the aftermath.
All in all, this is a unique story from a new author.
I loved it.
Interfere with the reality of my world, and you therefore take the very life and heart out of my will. ~ Josiah Royce
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
“Any Fair Interference” begins at a familiar place: the Netherfield Ball. Regular Austen Aficionados will recognize the scene, but maybe not all the characters.
One altered character is Mr. Hurst: Quis custodiet ipsos custodes? Who watches the watcher? mused Gilbert Hurst, as he observed the great and powerful Fitzwilliam Darcy half-hiding in a corner, staring at Miss Elizabeth Bennet.
Apparently, I do.
Here is an unlikely hero in any JAFF story! How often is Hurst described as “a tall, slender man” with a “thin, handsome face” and a “habitual scowl”? It sounds more like a Darcy description, doesn’t it? Gilbert Hurst’s thoughts are revealed at regular intervals. We learn about his family’s estate and the source of his unhappy marriage. His actions lead to Happy Endings for more than himself.
Insistent advice may develop into interference, and interference, someone has said, is the hind hoof of the devil. ~ Carolyn Wells
The Netherfield party has left Meryton and left Elizabeth Bennet with negative thoughts about one of the party. Clues to the real person are dropped in front of her.
Quote from the book: As the sisters retraced their steps towards Longbourn, the stiffening breeze dropped a piece of fabric right at Elizabeth’s feet. She bent to pick it up and found she was holding a man’s large handkerchief made of fine lawn material. It had been made into a handkerchief dolly, the middle tied into a head and two corners tied into knots approximating hands. It was smudged and dirty, and had a sticky spot of jam on it. Someone had crudely stitched a smiling face on the head with yarn, but of greater interest were the initials FD, expertly and exquisitely embroidered on a corner in a complicated entwining design. It was the most beautiful silk thread she had ever seen; even through the dirt, it glowed in the pale afternoon light.
What kind of man would make a dolly for the blacksmith’s daughter? A man with a fine black horse needing a shoe repaired. A man who made dollies for his little sister when she could not sit still for the entire church service.
Troubles plague the Bennets: a cold, snowy winter makes travel and mail delivery almost impossible. Mr. Bennet’s health declines.
Quote from the book: Mrs. Bennet’s grief, fear, even tattered remnants of love; indeed, all her feelings for her husband were inextricably mixed with anger; for more than twenty years of mockery, for his isolating himself from his family, for not making the most of his income.
Darcy joins Georgiana in Derbyshire where massive snowfall impedes communication with the outside world for weeks and weeks.
Caroline Bingley, the numero uno interferer in the lives of those around her, is ensnared by another woman in a plot that Caroline is not clever enough to unravel. It seems like Caroline finally has everything (almost) that she wants. But is any of it true?
The most important thing to do in your life is to not interfere in somebody else’s life. ~ Frank Zappa
“Any Fair Interference” explores both the good and bad edges of interference. Most quotes I found warn of interfering, but we also learn about helpful interferences, especially from our unlikely hero.
I would have liked to see more of Caroline Bingley’s comeuppance — but then, I always love to see that woman get her comeuppance. We see the circumstances; we see the realization; we don’t see much of the aftermath.
All in all, this is a unique story from a new author.
I loved it.
Interfere with the reality of my world, and you therefore take the very life and heart out of my will. ~ Josiah Royce
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
January 24, 2022
“Those not chasing their dreams should stay out of the way of those who are.” –Tim Fargo
>>Rating: PG17: due to sensual content, not graphic but adult themes discussed and described
>>Angst Level: low-to-medium due to stressors for our characters
>>Tissue Alert: grab a box, you may need it.
>>Trope: A Bennet dies
>>Source: I received an ARC via Booksprout [1-22-22] with no expectation of a review. The views and opinions expressed are my own. 36-chapters... estimated launch date: February 21, 2022.
>>Recommendation: For those who love something different for our Jane Austen characters.
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
“To restore a lost relationship is your choice.” –Sunday Adelaja
This was a very strange story. The author took our P&P characters on a very different story arc. It was interesting to read. I teared up on several occasions as the unthinkable happened at Longbourn. We did a lot of head-hopping but not in a bad way. We knew what everyone was thinking and it was interesting to see just what those thoughts were. There were several story threads that I enjoyed following. The first was… Mr. and Mrs. Hurst. The other story thread was Caroline Bingley and I looked forward to a good Caroline comeuppance.
“The day you feel completely broken is the day you can actually start restoring every broken piece!” –Sakshi Mishra
The D&E HEA: Good Grief! I wasn’t sure it was going to happen. This was the douche Darcy and the stubborn Lizzy trope that drives me crazy. They were their own worst enemy and I could only tolerate their behaviors for short periods of time. It took a village and a crowbar to pull them from their own worst selves and put them back on the right track. They were both in a downward spiral that was self-destructive and probably would have eventually killed them had others not intervened. Seriously? I wanted to yell and tell them to get a grip. Life goes on in spite of grief and disappointments. Once all misunderstandings were cleared up, they were adorable… and certainly needed a chaperone. Propriety was thrown out the window on more than one occasion. I questioned whether that would have been allowed but this was the author’s universe.
“You’ve always been my safe place, my escape when life gets crazy. You’re my calm through every storm.” –Courtney Giardina, Behind the Strings
What I liked: The Hurst story. They were so cute. You know… I really liked him and Louisa. I know… who knew? Their happy-ever-after was a pleasure to read. I also enjoyed how Jane and Charles came together. Uncle and Aunt Gardiner were delightful as were their children. And, of course, children will steal the scene every time. Charlotte Collins née Lucas had a part to play in this story. She has always been the voice of reason when others crash and burn around her. As much as it drove me crazy, I still enjoyed the courtship of D&E. I loved Georgiana and our dear Colonel. I even liked his parents Lord and Lady Matlock. Cousin Anne was a surprise… way to go, Anne! Bless her heart, to have such a mother. Speaking of… Lady Catherine was amazingly horrid as she stormed Matlock House and then Darcy House… it was perfection. What a scene. Those are always fun.
What I didn’t like: Oh, there were several things that gave me pause:
Caroline Bingley: “Your behaviour, visible or invisible, makes your prestige, personality, and trust, amongst your circles. If you lose that will be very difficult to restore again as it was.” –Ehsan Sehgal
What was the deal with Caroline Bingley? I waited through the entire book for the ax to fall and it didn’t. Did I miss something? I was prepared for something horrid to happen to her and it sort of fizzled out at the end. What was the point? I didn’t get it. IMHO, she didn’t LEARN a thing. As far as she was concerned, she had the ton in the palm of her hand. Where was her comeuppance? I wanted a damage report. The sharks were circling and… pfft… nothing happened. There was no epilogue so I have no idea what happened to her. What lesson was she to have learned? I think I missed something.
D&E: Their HEA took way too long. I realize Elizabeth was in mourning but still their love arc was dragged through the mud for nearly the entire book. Then they couldn’t keep their hands off each other. Good Grief.
>>Rating: PG17: due to sensual content, not graphic but adult themes discussed and described
>>Angst Level: low-to-medium due to stressors for our characters
>>Tissue Alert: grab a box, you may need it.
>>Trope: A Bennet dies
>>Source: I received an ARC via Booksprout [1-22-22] with no expectation of a review. The views and opinions expressed are my own. 36-chapters... estimated launch date: February 21, 2022.
>>Recommendation: For those who love something different for our Jane Austen characters.
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
“To restore a lost relationship is your choice.” –Sunday Adelaja
This was a very strange story. The author took our P&P characters on a very different story arc. It was interesting to read. I teared up on several occasions as the unthinkable happened at Longbourn. We did a lot of head-hopping but not in a bad way. We knew what everyone was thinking and it was interesting to see just what those thoughts were. There were several story threads that I enjoyed following. The first was… Mr. and Mrs. Hurst. The other story thread was Caroline Bingley and I looked forward to a good Caroline comeuppance.
“The day you feel completely broken is the day you can actually start restoring every broken piece!” –Sakshi Mishra
The D&E HEA: Good Grief! I wasn’t sure it was going to happen. This was the douche Darcy and the stubborn Lizzy trope that drives me crazy. They were their own worst enemy and I could only tolerate their behaviors for short periods of time. It took a village and a crowbar to pull them from their own worst selves and put them back on the right track. They were both in a downward spiral that was self-destructive and probably would have eventually killed them had others not intervened. Seriously? I wanted to yell and tell them to get a grip. Life goes on in spite of grief and disappointments. Once all misunderstandings were cleared up, they were adorable… and certainly needed a chaperone. Propriety was thrown out the window on more than one occasion. I questioned whether that would have been allowed but this was the author’s universe.
“You’ve always been my safe place, my escape when life gets crazy. You’re my calm through every storm.” –Courtney Giardina, Behind the Strings
What I liked: The Hurst story. They were so cute. You know… I really liked him and Louisa. I know… who knew? Their happy-ever-after was a pleasure to read. I also enjoyed how Jane and Charles came together. Uncle and Aunt Gardiner were delightful as were their children. And, of course, children will steal the scene every time. Charlotte Collins née Lucas had a part to play in this story. She has always been the voice of reason when others crash and burn around her. As much as it drove me crazy, I still enjoyed the courtship of D&E. I loved Georgiana and our dear Colonel. I even liked his parents Lord and Lady Matlock. Cousin Anne was a surprise… way to go, Anne! Bless her heart, to have such a mother. Speaking of… Lady Catherine was amazingly horrid as she stormed Matlock House and then Darcy House… it was perfection. What a scene. Those are always fun.
What I didn’t like: Oh, there were several things that gave me pause:
Caroline Bingley: “Your behaviour, visible or invisible, makes your prestige, personality, and trust, amongst your circles. If you lose that will be very difficult to restore again as it was.” –Ehsan Sehgal
What was the deal with Caroline Bingley? I waited through the entire book for the ax to fall and it didn’t. Did I miss something? I was prepared for something horrid to happen to her and it sort of fizzled out at the end. What was the point? I didn’t get it. IMHO, she didn’t LEARN a thing. As far as she was concerned, she had the ton in the palm of her hand. Where was her comeuppance? I wanted a damage report. The sharks were circling and… pfft… nothing happened. There was no epilogue so I have no idea what happened to her. What lesson was she to have learned? I think I missed something.
D&E: Their HEA took way too long. I realize Elizabeth was in mourning but still their love arc was dragged through the mud for nearly the entire book. Then they couldn’t keep their hands off each other. Good Grief.
June 26, 2024
As is common in many variations, Darcy and Caroline convince Bingley not to return to Hertfordshire after he returns to London following the Netherfield ball. There, Bingley tries to get over a broken heart and Darcy flees to Pemberley to try and escape the memory of Elizabeth Bennet. Mr. Bennet succumbs to a fatal illness, leaving his family in dire straits.
I liken reading this book to simultaneously watching more than one tennis match on multiple courts, as it continually jumps from one party or cluster of people to another. Not necessarily a bad thing, as the story had me enjoying doing so.
There was much to like in this page-turning debut novel. I was captivated by the roles of the Hursts and their association with the Gardiners. Caroline’s desertion of the Hursts in favour of new acquaintances of the ton (more on this follows). I appreciated Mr. Bennet’s last conversations with Jane and Elizabeth and, the changes in Lydia, Kitty and Mary. I also loved how albeit unknown by them, ODC receive a little help from their friends. I wanted to hug Mrs. Hill.
However, I was left scratching my head regarding the whole effort by Baroness Riverton concerning disingenuously befriending Caroline. It wasn’t clear to me what this had to do with Lord Havering. I just didn’t get all that. What did I miss? Yes, Caroline is a determined social climber, but without a defining explanation of the Baroness’s true motive, I almost felt bad for Caroline being so used—almost, because Caroline has her own selfish motives too.
My favourite part of this story was two-fold. The different storyline for the Hursts who were very likeable and well portrayed; and, Darcy and Elizabeth’s love story once Darcy decided to let his pride go.
I do recommend this book for the reasons I loved it and, as a worthy debut novel.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
June 25, 2024 - Audiobook
After paying close attention throughout and listening to this story via audio after reading it previously, I still can’t figure out for the life of me what Baroness Riverton’s goal was with respect to Caroline.
The narrator, Lauren Aycock has a very pleasant and sweet voice, which serves well for the female characters, however, her performance of the male characters in such a sweet voice doesn’t fit so well. The narration is pretty much a straight reading of the book, which she does very well, but I prefer a change of voices and tones for the different characters when I listen to an audiobook.
I liken reading this book to simultaneously watching more than one tennis match on multiple courts, as it continually jumps from one party or cluster of people to another. Not necessarily a bad thing, as the story had me enjoying doing so.
There was much to like in this page-turning debut novel. I was captivated by the roles of the Hursts and their association with the Gardiners. Caroline’s desertion of the Hursts in favour of new acquaintances of the ton (more on this follows). I appreciated Mr. Bennet’s last conversations with Jane and Elizabeth and, the changes in Lydia, Kitty and Mary. I also loved how albeit unknown by them, ODC receive a little help from their friends. I wanted to hug Mrs. Hill.
However, I was left scratching my head regarding the whole effort by Baroness Riverton concerning disingenuously befriending Caroline. It wasn’t clear to me what this had to do with Lord Havering. I just didn’t get all that. What did I miss? Yes, Caroline is a determined social climber, but without a defining explanation of the Baroness’s true motive, I almost felt bad for Caroline being so used—almost, because Caroline has her own selfish motives too.
My favourite part of this story was two-fold. The different storyline for the Hursts who were very likeable and well portrayed; and, Darcy and Elizabeth’s love story once Darcy decided to let his pride go.
I do recommend this book for the reasons I loved it and, as a worthy debut novel.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
June 25, 2024 - Audiobook
After paying close attention throughout and listening to this story via audio after reading it previously, I still can’t figure out for the life of me what Baroness Riverton’s goal was with respect to Caroline.
The narrator, Lauren Aycock has a very pleasant and sweet voice, which serves well for the female characters, however, her performance of the male characters in such a sweet voice doesn’t fit so well. The narration is pretty much a straight reading of the book, which she does very well, but I prefer a change of voices and tones for the different characters when I listen to an audiobook.
January 2, 2023
This starts out with the Bingleys leaving after the ball and a very cold, harsh winter follows for Hertfordshire, London and Derbyshire.
In Hertfordshire, Mr. Bennet becomes fatally ill and Elizabeth carries the burden of running the estate. The younger sisters each have personal experiences that result in them all banding together to assist.
The Bennet's suffer loss and heartache and Mrs B's behavior to E borders on cruel. E 's opinion of D slowly changes after she is disillusioned by Wickham and remembers D's kindness and intelligence. Her initial attraction to him grows in her dreams. Ultimately, she reaches emotional collapse when she moves to live with the Gardiners.
At Darcy House in London, Bingley is sulking. Caroline leaves to spend time with "friends" of the Ton, thinking she has finally made it.
Hurst, in his late 20s and rather well looking, decides to woo his wife and make his marriage to Louisa happier. He makes a business connection which also brings joy to both Hursts.
In Derbyshire, Darcy slowly unravels as he grapples with his desire for E vs his duty. A little too much emphasis on physical/lust at this point. However, at about the 50%, with the help of Col. F and Georgiana, Darcy finally realizes he can marry E despite society, but figuring she doesn't really like him, he knows he has to earn her trust, love and respect! (Very well done-loved this part!)
Rosings especially brings delightful scenes, with hysterical LOL moments.
There are multiple layers going on. There is the story, which was so enjoyable, but to me it seemed also to be stories of redemption for all of our main characters. Each begins their process alone, but reach that final stage only on revealing love and letting go enough to trust.
A few clever uses of iconic p&p quotes, although some were forced and might have been better paraphrased than directly quoted.
A well written book, it was a pleasure to read and has some truly funny moments peppered throughout.
This is a fine effort from a first time author!
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review
In Hertfordshire, Mr. Bennet becomes fatally ill and Elizabeth carries the burden of running the estate. The younger sisters each have personal experiences that result in them all banding together to assist.
The Bennet's suffer loss and heartache and Mrs B's behavior to E borders on cruel. E 's opinion of D slowly changes after she is disillusioned by Wickham and remembers D's kindness and intelligence. Her initial attraction to him grows in her dreams. Ultimately, she reaches emotional collapse when she moves to live with the Gardiners.
At Darcy House in London, Bingley is sulking. Caroline leaves to spend time with "friends" of the Ton, thinking she has finally made it.
Hurst, in his late 20s and rather well looking, decides to woo his wife and make his marriage to Louisa happier. He makes a business connection which also brings joy to both Hursts.
In Derbyshire, Darcy slowly unravels as he grapples with his desire for E vs his duty. A little too much emphasis on physical/lust at this point. However, at about the 50%, with the help of Col. F and Georgiana, Darcy finally realizes he can marry E despite society, but figuring she doesn't really like him, he knows he has to earn her trust, love and respect! (Very well done-loved this part!)
Rosings especially brings delightful scenes, with hysterical LOL moments.
There are multiple layers going on. There is the story, which was so enjoyable, but to me it seemed also to be stories of redemption for all of our main characters. Each begins their process alone, but reach that final stage only on revealing love and letting go enough to trust.
A few clever uses of iconic p&p quotes, although some were forced and might have been better paraphrased than directly quoted.
A well written book, it was a pleasure to read and has some truly funny moments peppered throughout.
This is a fine effort from a first time author!
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review
March 17, 2022
This is a unique book that gives agency to a lot a background characters in P&P allowing them to shine. It is also a strange book presented from multiple POVS and overlapping time lines which made things confusing...
While I was reading I was mostly happy but this is another book that upon reflect leaves me bit disappointed. And here's why; there are just too many subplots. And way too many timelines.
We have the traditional Darcy and Lizzy plot; in which I will include Jane and Bingley
We have Mr and Mrs Hurst being improved and finding true love in their business arrangement marriage
We have Caroline Bingley becoming enmeshed in a plot that will give her access to the highest circles, alas breeding will out.
A crisis at Longbourn that keeps Lizzy & Jane from traveling while Lizzy realizes that Wickham is a no goodnick and Lydia gets some sense.
Lizzy and Darcy Falling in love via dreams
Anne deBourgh coming to life and thriving.
And while these are all lovely and unique Ideas it just becomes too much.
There are some clever bits, some steamy bits and some tiresome bits
While I was reading I was mostly happy but this is another book that upon reflect leaves me bit disappointed. And here's why; there are just too many subplots. And way too many timelines.
We have the traditional Darcy and Lizzy plot; in which I will include Jane and Bingley
We have Mr and Mrs Hurst being improved and finding true love in their business arrangement marriage
We have Caroline Bingley becoming enmeshed in a plot that will give her access to the highest circles, alas breeding will out.
A crisis at Longbourn that keeps Lizzy & Jane from traveling while Lizzy realizes that Wickham is a no goodnick and Lydia gets some sense.
Lizzy and Darcy Falling in love via dreams
Anne deBourgh coming to life and thriving.
And while these are all lovely and unique Ideas it just becomes too much.
There are some clever bits, some steamy bits and some tiresome bits
February 4, 2022
I believe this is this author’s first published book and it was very impressive debut novel. This was a solid P&P variation that was very well written and enjoyable. We were given some insight into some supporting characters from the original that were developed and expanded in this book in a way that gave them some depth, but they were still recognizable. Very well done.
I love the chance to get to know some of the minor characters of P&P better in variations, and I absolutely loved what this author did with Mr. Hurst! He was the first character to win my regard in this story. He and Louisa had their own journey that was lovely and rewarding! Georgiana and Anne were also portrayed really well in this story. I loved Georgiana’s enthusiasm and youth and tender heart and Anne’s coming into her own. I also thought the changes in the younger Bennet sisters were pleasing and plausible given the circumstances.
The love story between Darcy and Elizabeth had an unusual development as the recognition and acceptance and even changes in their feelings took place through introspection and interaction with others connected to them and not their personal interactions since D&E do not actually meet face to face until about 70% into the book. This was a bit frustrating as I was anxious for them to meet again and obstacle after obstacle kept preventing this from happening. Once they are reunited, it was beautiful to see the trust, respect and tender feelings slowly come to surface. Elizabeth was in a bad place and could not get our of the slump of grief, depression, anger, regret, etc. and Darcy was so patient and kind that it melted my heart. Sometimes it just takes the right person to connect where others cannot. I appreciated that once the trust and intimacy were earned in their relationship, they both treasured it and appreciated it and that no more misunderstandings came between them.
There were only a couple minor things that struck me. This was a very long book and I felt like it really didn’t need to be quite so long. Some of the introspection and even some of the side stories could have been cut down or even eliminated, especially Caroline’s story. I’ve read other reviews and am glad I am not the only one who was a bit confused about Caroline’s involvement with Sophy. When it began, I anticipated some mysterious and nefarious plot was unfolding, but nothing really materialized and in the end it made little sense and just dragged the book out unnecessarily. I understand Caroline needed to be out of the picture for the benefit of some other plot lines, but once her absence was established, she should have just stayed absent and off page or there should have been some definitive plot and resolution that would have been satisfying. The last thing was, while every other aspect of Darcy’s character was great, Darcy is a very private man and I always cringe in variations where Darcy is so open about his most personal feelings and shares them with so many others, including those he is not on intimate terms with. I can understand him confiding in Colonel Fitzwilliam, and maybe, to a very limited degree, Georgiana, but here he was an open book sharing the most personal wishes and the desires of his heart with everyone except Elizabeth, which, to me, is very UNDarcylike.
Overall, while this was a slow moving book at times, it still kept my attention and was very enjoyable. The writing was beautiful and I hope to see more offerings in the future from this author.
I love the chance to get to know some of the minor characters of P&P better in variations, and I absolutely loved what this author did with Mr. Hurst! He was the first character to win my regard in this story. He and Louisa had their own journey that was lovely and rewarding! Georgiana and Anne were also portrayed really well in this story. I loved Georgiana’s enthusiasm and youth and tender heart and Anne’s coming into her own. I also thought the changes in the younger Bennet sisters were pleasing and plausible given the circumstances.
The love story between Darcy and Elizabeth had an unusual development as the recognition and acceptance and even changes in their feelings took place through introspection and interaction with others connected to them and not their personal interactions since D&E do not actually meet face to face until about 70% into the book. This was a bit frustrating as I was anxious for them to meet again and obstacle after obstacle kept preventing this from happening. Once they are reunited, it was beautiful to see the trust, respect and tender feelings slowly come to surface. Elizabeth was in a bad place and could not get our of the slump of grief, depression, anger, regret, etc. and Darcy was so patient and kind that it melted my heart. Sometimes it just takes the right person to connect where others cannot. I appreciated that once the trust and intimacy were earned in their relationship, they both treasured it and appreciated it and that no more misunderstandings came between them.
There were only a couple minor things that struck me. This was a very long book and I felt like it really didn’t need to be quite so long. Some of the introspection and even some of the side stories could have been cut down or even eliminated, especially Caroline’s story. I’ve read other reviews and am glad I am not the only one who was a bit confused about Caroline’s involvement with Sophy. When it began, I anticipated some mysterious and nefarious plot was unfolding, but nothing really materialized and in the end it made little sense and just dragged the book out unnecessarily. I understand Caroline needed to be out of the picture for the benefit of some other plot lines, but once her absence was established, she should have just stayed absent and off page or there should have been some definitive plot and resolution that would have been satisfying. The last thing was, while every other aspect of Darcy’s character was great, Darcy is a very private man and I always cringe in variations where Darcy is so open about his most personal feelings and shares them with so many others, including those he is not on intimate terms with. I can understand him confiding in Colonel Fitzwilliam, and maybe, to a very limited degree, Georgiana, but here he was an open book sharing the most personal wishes and the desires of his heart with everyone except Elizabeth, which, to me, is very UNDarcylike.
Overall, while this was a slow moving book at times, it still kept my attention and was very enjoyable. The writing was beautiful and I hope to see more offerings in the future from this author.
March 3, 2022
I was drawn to this book as it was featured on a blog tour. This is a new author and I enjoyed this first effort.
In this story two things stand out in my memory: first we have a Mr. Hurst who makes a number of good observations and also who makes some connections which come full circle in the story. We also have a Mr. Hurst who decides to make a new effort for a happy marriage - Hooray! Hurst makes some investments with Mr. Gardiner and that friendship features at various times in the story...not only as his investments prove to be profitable but also as the men consult and advise each other.
The second thing that stands out in my recollections is the fact that both Darcy and Elizabeth seem to spend a lot of time dreaming and thinking about the other rather than taking steps to reveal their growing attachment.
Yes, Mr. Bennet is dying. It is not a quick death so he has time to talk to his family and speak of his regrets and even give some advice. Elizabeth soon finds herself doing much of what he should have been doing. Plus she decides that she will seek employment upon her father's death.
Collins does take over Longbourn but delays doing it for awhile and the Bennet females are given some time to seek a place to live and ways of supporting themselves. Fortunately there is a savior. (I am not going to reveal that as it would be a SPOILER.)
Others have mentioned in their reviews dissatisfaction with the end of the story for Caroline. I agree. Caroline finds a "friend" in the ton who takes her in to live with her. But we read of how that person snickers (with her other acquaintances) at Caroline behind her back. You may get the feeling that the only reason Caroline is kept is for the amusement factor...that and a distraction for the love affair her friend is involves in. The story has that relationship continue but we never read of an AHA moment when Caroline comes to realize what that "friend" really thinks about her.
This story has many threads. We do have Elizabeth coming to her own conclusions about Wickham. And there are those other couples which we had in canon who also have parts here. I enjoyed this story and recommend it.
In this story two things stand out in my memory: first we have a Mr. Hurst who makes a number of good observations and also who makes some connections which come full circle in the story. We also have a Mr. Hurst who decides to make a new effort for a happy marriage - Hooray! Hurst makes some investments with Mr. Gardiner and that friendship features at various times in the story...not only as his investments prove to be profitable but also as the men consult and advise each other.
The second thing that stands out in my recollections is the fact that both Darcy and Elizabeth seem to spend a lot of time dreaming and thinking about the other rather than taking steps to reveal their growing attachment.
Yes, Mr. Bennet is dying. It is not a quick death so he has time to talk to his family and speak of his regrets and even give some advice. Elizabeth soon finds herself doing much of what he should have been doing. Plus she decides that she will seek employment upon her father's death.
Collins does take over Longbourn but delays doing it for awhile and the Bennet females are given some time to seek a place to live and ways of supporting themselves. Fortunately there is a savior. (I am not going to reveal that as it would be a SPOILER.)
Others have mentioned in their reviews dissatisfaction with the end of the story for Caroline. I agree. Caroline finds a "friend" in the ton who takes her in to live with her. But we read of how that person snickers (with her other acquaintances) at Caroline behind her back. You may get the feeling that the only reason Caroline is kept is for the amusement factor...that and a distraction for the love affair her friend is involves in. The story has that relationship continue but we never read of an AHA moment when Caroline comes to realize what that "friend" really thinks about her.
This story has many threads. We do have Elizabeth coming to her own conclusions about Wickham. And there are those other couples which we had in canon who also have parts here. I enjoyed this story and recommend it.
March 17, 2022
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars
April 8, 2022
This is a beautifully written story with multiple points of view. I loved Darcy, Elizabeth, and most surprising of all Mr. & Mrs. Hurst - I've never seen them written this way before.
I loved the multiple POV and was a bit disappointed when that seems to fall apart halfway through the book. It was like the author had so much to say about so many people at first and then shifted the focus to ODC. The Hurst subplot peters out completely and there are rare Caroline "updates".
This was probably not the best story for me to read just weeks after I've lost my Mom because I felt the grief in this a little too much and will need to stick to some lighthearted stories for a while.
I loved the multiple POV and was a bit disappointed when that seems to fall apart halfway through the book. It was like the author had so much to say about so many people at first and then shifted the focus to ODC. The Hurst subplot peters out completely and there are rare Caroline "updates".
This was probably not the best story for me to read just weeks after I've lost my Mom because I felt the grief in this a little too much and will need to stick to some lighthearted stories for a while.
April 26, 2022
Review also posted on my blog
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On the day after the Netherfield ball, Mr Bingley and his party quit Netherfield, with no intention of returning.
Caroline Bingley hates Hertfordshire and is keen to drag her brother to London. She and friend, Fitzwilliam Darcy persuade Bingley that the woman he loves, does not return his affections. They even suggest, Jane Bennet might marry him to gain security for her family.
Darcy is desperate to leave as he is infatuated with Elizabeth Bennet, who he feels is unsuitable to be Mrs Darcy.
In London, Darcy continues to battle with his desire versus his duty to family. Eventually, he flees home to Pemberley.
Meanwhile, Bingley is miserable and heartbroken.
At Longbourn, Jane is heartbroken and tormented by her mother, who won’t stop wailing about Mr Bingley’s defection.
On Boxing Day, Mr Bennet becomes ill and takes to his bed, never to leave it.
As snow and freezing weather grips the country, Elizabeth takes on managing the estate. When the snow keeps the estate workers away, she takes on the labour needed to tend the animals. In addition to this, Elizabeth tends her ailing father and tries to placate her vindictive mother.
Fortunately, her sisters rally around. Lydia is a revelation, showing a fine aptitude with a pitchfork.
Darcy is snowed in at Pemberley for weeks. In between sterling efforts to ensure all on his estate are safe and warm during the winter, he broods. He realises that his infatuation has become love, but still feels he cannot have her.
In London, Caroline meets an old schoolmate, who invites her into her home and provides her with access to the highest circles of Society. She is delighted and eschews all contact with her family.
Unsurprisingly, she is not missed. Mr Hurst is delighted to have her away from his wife, Louisa. Married for the convenience of Louisa Bingley’s dowry, their relationship has been a business arrangement. Taking advantage of Caroline’s absence, he decides to court his wife. While initially surprised Louisa is delighted when they develop a relationship of true love and affection.
When the winter is over, the Bennet’s must leave Longbourn.
Elizabeth goes to stay with her relatives in London. The struggle of the winter, combined with grief over her loss and her mother’s spite, tip Elizabeth into the deepest depression.
But there is one man determined to help pull her back.
What a wonderful book!
As Lizzy and Darcy both face trials, they each come to esteem each other.
Darcy very gently draws Elizabeth from her depression.
They come together in the deepest love.
All the characters are developed on from canon.
Hurst shows hidden depth. Lydia and Kitty find new maturity.
Caroline gaining access to the highest circles and being unbelievably crass and embarrassing was like watching a car crash in slow motion.
Georgiana finds the strength to overcome her shyness.
Anne de Bourgh is funny, forthright and delighted to help Darcy in his quest for Elizabeth.
It is lovely to see Bingley being resolute and arriving at exactly the time he is needed.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. All views expressed are my own.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 17, 2024
What Happens When Mr. Hurst Takes Action?
Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Publisher
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
THE PREMISE: The Bennets are facing Mrs. Bennet’s worst nightmare, it is the most brutal winter in living memory, and both Darcy and Elizabeth are struggling alone with their despondency and confinement. But these two are brought back together by a very unexpected person. Through new friends, savvy business dealings, and an absence of toxic relations, more than one couple will find their way to love and happiness…
MY THOUGHTS:
The premise of this story hints at some alterations and interference from Mr. Hurst – of all people! Instead of being a tertiary character that is drinking, sleeping, or playing cards, Mr. Hurst becomes a character of interest as he decides to observe the interactions of those around him, take an active role in his finances, and court his wife.
I loved this focus on the Hursts! They are not the dynamic and dominant forces of Mr. Darcy and Caroline Bingley, and I enjoyed learning more about their personalities and layers. Mr. Hurst proves to be more perceptive and wise than he lets on – which is a delightful surprise! While Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth observe a lot of the chaos and drama of during the Netherfield Ball, Mr. Hurst is silently observing them and drawing his own astute conclusions about everyone… I loved the gentle way he tries to steer everybody in the right direction. He proves he has a kind heart and is also a little bit romantic!
In addition, I enjoyed Mr. Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s journey to each other. I loved following Elizabeth’s internal thoughts as she learned tiny snippets about Mr. Darcy. I appreciate how in this variation she is smart enough to distrust Wickham’s claims, and I love how her subconscious takes comfort in dream Mr. Darcy’s consolation and gentle care. It was interesting to see Mr. Darcy in a similar situation – assailed with relentless dreams of life together with Elizabeth. When Darcy is able to finally take action, he does so with such determination, devotion, and compassion. I love how his pursuit of Elizabeth became more about bringing her back to herself than persuading her to love him.
While I loved theses two primary storylines, I did sometimes feel like the story itself was a little disjointed or maybe slow-paced for my liking. Caroline Bingley had her own arc in this variation – one that thrusts her into an elite, upper-set, and I think those parts of the story seemed uninteresting or irrelevant to me. But that may be because Caroline is such an unlikable character – the less time spent with her the better, IMO! Moreover with thoughtful developments for Bingley, Anne de Bourgh, and Lydia perhaps the focus on the primary storylines began to feel too widely dispersed.
Through distance, dreams, and discarded notions, love and happiness prevail in this delightful debut by Nan Harison! This Pride and Prejudice variation is a perfect choice for readers who love low-angst stories where Mr. Darcy gets by with a little help from his friends!
Austenesque Reviews
Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Publisher
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
THE PREMISE: The Bennets are facing Mrs. Bennet’s worst nightmare, it is the most brutal winter in living memory, and both Darcy and Elizabeth are struggling alone with their despondency and confinement. But these two are brought back together by a very unexpected person. Through new friends, savvy business dealings, and an absence of toxic relations, more than one couple will find their way to love and happiness…
MY THOUGHTS:
The premise of this story hints at some alterations and interference from Mr. Hurst – of all people! Instead of being a tertiary character that is drinking, sleeping, or playing cards, Mr. Hurst becomes a character of interest as he decides to observe the interactions of those around him, take an active role in his finances, and court his wife.
I loved this focus on the Hursts! They are not the dynamic and dominant forces of Mr. Darcy and Caroline Bingley, and I enjoyed learning more about their personalities and layers. Mr. Hurst proves to be more perceptive and wise than he lets on – which is a delightful surprise! While Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth observe a lot of the chaos and drama of during the Netherfield Ball, Mr. Hurst is silently observing them and drawing his own astute conclusions about everyone… I loved the gentle way he tries to steer everybody in the right direction. He proves he has a kind heart and is also a little bit romantic!
In addition, I enjoyed Mr. Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s journey to each other. I loved following Elizabeth’s internal thoughts as she learned tiny snippets about Mr. Darcy. I appreciate how in this variation she is smart enough to distrust Wickham’s claims, and I love how her subconscious takes comfort in dream Mr. Darcy’s consolation and gentle care. It was interesting to see Mr. Darcy in a similar situation – assailed with relentless dreams of life together with Elizabeth. When Darcy is able to finally take action, he does so with such determination, devotion, and compassion. I love how his pursuit of Elizabeth became more about bringing her back to herself than persuading her to love him.
While I loved theses two primary storylines, I did sometimes feel like the story itself was a little disjointed or maybe slow-paced for my liking. Caroline Bingley had her own arc in this variation – one that thrusts her into an elite, upper-set, and I think those parts of the story seemed uninteresting or irrelevant to me. But that may be because Caroline is such an unlikable character – the less time spent with her the better, IMO! Moreover with thoughtful developments for Bingley, Anne de Bourgh, and Lydia perhaps the focus on the primary storylines began to feel too widely dispersed.
Through distance, dreams, and discarded notions, love and happiness prevail in this delightful debut by Nan Harison! This Pride and Prejudice variation is a perfect choice for readers who love low-angst stories where Mr. Darcy gets by with a little help from his friends!
Austenesque Reviews
March 28, 2022
good first novel
One of my favorite authors was Issac Asimov. I went to a presentation at Cal Berkeley where he was explaining about how he writes and how he became a professional writer. He opened the floor for questions toward the end of his time there. One young woman asked him if he would have done anything different when he was beginning to be published. He thought a bit and said he wished he hadn’t used up some of his best story ideas before he was skilled enough to do them justice.
I bet this happens to lots of writers.
This is a good story I wish was her third or fourth book.
One of my favorite authors was Issac Asimov. I went to a presentation at Cal Berkeley where he was explaining about how he writes and how he became a professional writer. He opened the floor for questions toward the end of his time there. One young woman asked him if he would have done anything different when he was beginning to be published. He thought a bit and said he wished he hadn’t used up some of his best story ideas before he was skilled enough to do them justice.
I bet this happens to lots of writers.
This is a good story I wish was her third or fourth book.
March 3, 2022
4.5 stars
I have enjoyed reading this way to love. Darcy follows canon: flies from Netherfield to protect his friend but also himself. However, things change a lot after the Netherfield ball.
Even if I normally do not like Caroline Bingley, she is the one that makes a lot of the changes happen, unintentionally because she is invited by a "friend" to spend the Season with her and other friends. I find Caroline's story a bit like unfinished, but it is totally necessary to have other happy endings. (She is being used by that friend but she does not realise). I would have expected a tiny bit more after what we read.
The Hursts, what a discovery! To be honest, I have always been indifferent to this couple but I have loved them from almost the beginning, and not only because of the advice that he gives Bingley.
Elizabeth dreaming of Mr. Darcy is at the same time sweet and heartbreaking due to the reason for those dreams: she is extremely alone.
Georgiana and Colonel Fitzwilliam: great matchmakers whenever I see them plotting! Anne too!!
Bingley was convinced that Jane did not love him back, as in Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice, however, once he is decided to come back after the ill tidings, he does everything to help.
Once, headstrong obstinate Darcy, is pushed to follow his heart, he is super helpful and caring. I know that that is what he should be with the woman he loves, but I still loved it.
I should mention all the Bennet sisters and how they mature. Not only they realise that Wickham is a bit annoying by always telling his misfortunes, and how their behaviour may affect them, but also they help each other and protect each other too. Charlotte is as usual very sensible but not Mr. Collins.
Last but not least, I believe that I prefer this Lady Catherine to this Mrs. Bennet!
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I have enjoyed reading this way to love. Darcy follows canon: flies from Netherfield to protect his friend but also himself. However, things change a lot after the Netherfield ball.
Even if I normally do not like Caroline Bingley, she is the one that makes a lot of the changes happen, unintentionally because she is invited by a "friend" to spend the Season with her and other friends. I find Caroline's story a bit like unfinished, but it is totally necessary to have other happy endings. (She is being used by that friend but she does not realise). I would have expected a tiny bit more after what we read.
The Hursts, what a discovery! To be honest, I have always been indifferent to this couple but I have loved them from almost the beginning, and not only because of the advice that he gives Bingley.
Elizabeth dreaming of Mr. Darcy is at the same time sweet and heartbreaking due to the reason for those dreams: she is extremely alone.
Georgiana and Colonel Fitzwilliam: great matchmakers whenever I see them plotting! Anne too!!
Bingley was convinced that Jane did not love him back, as in Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice, however, once he is decided to come back after the ill tidings, he does everything to help.
Once, headstrong obstinate Darcy, is pushed to follow his heart, he is super helpful and caring. I know that that is what he should be with the woman he loves, but I still loved it.
I should mention all the Bennet sisters and how they mature. Not only they realise that Wickham is a bit annoying by always telling his misfortunes, and how their behaviour may affect them, but also they help each other and protect each other too. Charlotte is as usual very sensible but not Mr. Collins.
Last but not least, I believe that I prefer this Lady Catherine to this Mrs. Bennet!
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
December 8, 2022
This was such a lovely story. It was not exactly low angst but at the same time it's not angsty. It also had so many sweet, sigh inducing "aw!" moments. I loved Darcy in wooing mode and that too in such tender way. My only dissatisfaction was with Caroline. I felt as if she was rewarded in a way for her stay with her friend(?) and didn't suffer enough for her despicable behaviour, losing Darcy didn't feel enough (may be because she never had him anyway). Other than that it was a real feel good story.
January 30, 2022
Loved the parts with ODC but there's some distraction
Any Fair Interference is a Pride and Prejudice variation with some original characters. After the Bingleys, Hursts, and Darcy left Meryton there's been a harsh winter and a lot of snow. Travelling is restricted and the mail does not arrive for weeks so people don't have news of each other. Darcy is pining for Elizabeth in Derbyshire but allowed Bingley to stay in his house. Caroline gets invited to stay with an old acquaintance, and as she met people with titles she gets so smug she wouldn't have time to open any letters anyway. When the Hursts have time alone and spend it courting each other's good opinion. They have invested with the Gardiners and begin a friendship, at first not knowing that they're related to the Bennets. At Longbourn, Mr. Bennet is slowly dying, and the female Bennets all get affected by grief differently. Bingley and Darcy return to Hertfordshire and learn that Elizabeth seems the most melancholy. Darcy spends time supporting her in her grief, while hoping for more
The writing style is well polished and flawlessly edited and there are lovely emotional scenes and some great dialogue. I loved the parts with our dear couple and that would have been a five star book for sure. But there's a lot of extraneous material, some of which seems like filler, and at times I thought this got a little bogged down by the frequent changes of perspective. We see the story through the eyes of so many characters, including a couple of original ones. There's an elderly baron and his younger wife who invited Caroline to stay. They don't particularly like her and laugh at her behind her back and it was unclear why they wanted Caroline to live with them. At first it seemed like they had some clever hidden motive that I was waiting to hear, but this never materialized. It seemed like they wanted to set Caroline up for a fall but eventually they just ended up feeding somebody they despised for months, for no reason. The baron and Sophronia had an interesting personal story, it just didn't seem to have anything to do with the main plot. I would have cut their part and shipped Caroline off to an anonymous elderly aunt or something. For the purposes of this story, it was enough that Caroline wasn't there. Caroline does get disappointed in the end but the reason isn't up to the baroness and her friends.
There was a thing about Lady Catherine not telling Anne about her inheritance, and they said this was criminal. But, apparently Darcy and none of the other men in the family who looked after the Rosings affairs, and whoever executed the will and so on, never told Anne either, and never consulted her as the rightful owner instead of Lady Catherine, all happy letting Lady Catherine carry on like she was the heir.
Steam level is kissing and undressing but most of the wedding night is behind closed doors.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Any Fair Interference is a Pride and Prejudice variation with some original characters. After the Bingleys, Hursts, and Darcy left Meryton there's been a harsh winter and a lot of snow. Travelling is restricted and the mail does not arrive for weeks so people don't have news of each other. Darcy is pining for Elizabeth in Derbyshire but allowed Bingley to stay in his house. Caroline gets invited to stay with an old acquaintance, and as she met people with titles she gets so smug she wouldn't have time to open any letters anyway. When the Hursts have time alone and spend it courting each other's good opinion. They have invested with the Gardiners and begin a friendship, at first not knowing that they're related to the Bennets. At Longbourn, Mr. Bennet is slowly dying, and the female Bennets all get affected by grief differently. Bingley and Darcy return to Hertfordshire and learn that Elizabeth seems the most melancholy. Darcy spends time supporting her in her grief, while hoping for more
The writing style is well polished and flawlessly edited and there are lovely emotional scenes and some great dialogue. I loved the parts with our dear couple and that would have been a five star book for sure. But there's a lot of extraneous material, some of which seems like filler, and at times I thought this got a little bogged down by the frequent changes of perspective. We see the story through the eyes of so many characters, including a couple of original ones. There's an elderly baron and his younger wife who invited Caroline to stay. They don't particularly like her and laugh at her behind her back and it was unclear why they wanted Caroline to live with them. At first it seemed like they had some clever hidden motive that I was waiting to hear, but this never materialized. It seemed like they wanted to set Caroline up for a fall but eventually they just ended up feeding somebody they despised for months, for no reason. The baron and Sophronia had an interesting personal story, it just didn't seem to have anything to do with the main plot. I would have cut their part and shipped Caroline off to an anonymous elderly aunt or something. For the purposes of this story, it was enough that Caroline wasn't there. Caroline does get disappointed in the end but the reason isn't up to the baroness and her friends.
There was a thing about Lady Catherine not telling Anne about her inheritance, and they said this was criminal. But, apparently Darcy and none of the other men in the family who looked after the Rosings affairs, and whoever executed the will and so on, never told Anne either, and never consulted her as the rightful owner instead of Lady Catherine, all happy letting Lady Catherine carry on like she was the heir.
Steam level is kissing and undressing but most of the wedding night is behind closed doors.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
February 22, 2025
“To be a fool is one thing, to be a fool for love is something else altogether.” (quote from the book)
This book sparked joy but also tears. I found it poignant as many of the characters reflect on their behaviors and actions and do something about it. Some take longer than others, but those journeys are gently helped along by their loved ones…’any fair interference’ is needed for these two!
“That is not the only sacrifice that was expected of me; the greater sacrifice would have been the surrender of my hopes for a marriage built upon respect, perhaps love…She had always hated being talked down to by men who were her intellectual inferiors: the patronising chuckles, the raised eyebrows and smirks, the smooth or not-so-smooth interruptions as she spoke. Though Mr. Darcy listened to me.” (quote from the book)
There are several characters who experience epiphanies or are shocked into better behavior. Just seeing the changes in the Bennet sisters was such a delight. Also, I loved the portrayal of Mr. and Mrs. Hurst and their role in this story, especially Mr. Hurst – for he plays a pivotal role in bringing together certain outcomes.
“He now understood how truly lonely he was. He knew that his long-held plan to marry any tolerable woman of sufficient breeding and fortune to preside over his establishments would never work. After weeks of denial, it had become painfully clear that he had fallen deeply in love with Elizabeth Bennet. No other woman would ever do for him.” (quote from the book)
Another major ‘character’ in this story is the weather. Snow. One that keeps Mr. Bingley, Mr. Darcy, Elizabeth and Jane Bennet separated for an amount of time. This separation gives them time to brood, reflect, and dream. Mr. Bingley finds his backbone; Jane Bennet wants him to prove himself, Elizabeth Bennet must find herself, and Mr. Darcy is swoon-worthy in his gentle help and pursuit of the only woman he could ever love.
There is some puzzlement over Miss Caroline Bingley’s thread in this novel from other reviews. At first, I didn’t quite understand the point myself. However, it soon became clear to me that she was just a pawn to deflect attention away for another character. It also was a way for the author to remove her influence from Mr. and Mrs. Hurst as well as Mr. Bingley. For me, it was well played. Did she get enough of a comeuppance? She did but maybe not in the way that we were all hoping.
I can honestly say this story line encompassed many of the things I love in a novel; a strong light shown on secondary characters usually not given a voice, the inclusion and development of the Bennet sisters that is plausible, Mr. Wickham being dealt with without interference from Mr. Darcy, a Caroline Bingley who is her own worst enemy, and a Lady Catherine, who has her say, but neatly thwarted! But most of all, an enduring love story of Elizabeth and Darcy.
And, if I must find anything that I didn’t care for, it would be the cover of this book. It just didn’t appeal to me and was one of the main reasons I held off on reading it. However, as I read and adored Ms. Harrison’s second novel, ‘No Less Resentment’ (and bought the paperback – after I had already read it on my Kindle) I knew I had to own and read this one in paperback too! Also, thank you to Gratia for recommending it.
Brava, Ms. Harrison!
February 26, 2025
Reread February 24, 2025
I still love this one on the second reading. I wondered if there would be more ending to Caroline Bingley's part in it, but I enjoyed it all the same. It is a bit tragic, so keep tissues handy.
Review March 21, 2023
A most excellent Pride and Prejudice variation by a new author who, judging by this novel, promises to be a new favorite. There was romance, humor, and a tragedy, but all in all a very satisfying read.
The story begins at the Netherfield ball, with Mr. Darcy deciding at first that he won't dance, but then deciding, perhaps one dance. Gilbert Hurst observes him dancing with Elizabeth Bennet. After the ball, and after the Netherfield party leaves for London, the story continues for a while with Hurst's point of view, and I found this refreshing and that it gave a new slant to the story. Unfortunately, soon after they leave, Mr. Bennet becomes ill. And then a long, cold, snowy winter sets in, one of the worst in anyone's memory.
I don't want to tell more of this story, because it's so original and refreshing a story to read for oneself. Highly recommended. This one's going into my favorites all genres shelf. Brava, Nan Harrison!
I still love this one on the second reading. I wondered if there would be more ending to Caroline Bingley's part in it, but I enjoyed it all the same. It is a bit tragic, so keep tissues handy.
Review March 21, 2023
A most excellent Pride and Prejudice variation by a new author who, judging by this novel, promises to be a new favorite. There was romance, humor, and a tragedy, but all in all a very satisfying read.
The story begins at the Netherfield ball, with Mr. Darcy deciding at first that he won't dance, but then deciding, perhaps one dance. Gilbert Hurst observes him dancing with Elizabeth Bennet. After the ball, and after the Netherfield party leaves for London, the story continues for a while with Hurst's point of view, and I found this refreshing and that it gave a new slant to the story. Unfortunately, soon after they leave, Mr. Bennet becomes ill. And then a long, cold, snowy winter sets in, one of the worst in anyone's memory.
I don't want to tell more of this story, because it's so original and refreshing a story to read for oneself. Highly recommended. This one's going into my favorites all genres shelf. Brava, Nan Harrison!
March 3, 2022
Well written and edited but like other reviewers; I felt there were plot points that needed an end.
Number one was Caroline Bingley.
All in all an impressive debut novel. I hope to see more from this author.
Number one was Caroline Bingley.
All in all an impressive debut novel. I hope to see more from this author.
March 8, 2023
Heart rending
This one is a wonderfully written tale, full of love and becoming the best version of every person. Be sure to have tissue paper at hand!
This one is a wonderfully written tale, full of love and becoming the best version of every person. Be sure to have tissue paper at hand!
March 9, 2022
I wish the end had a bit more of the Caroline story...
February 6, 2022
An exploration of the power of friendship and love
This story has a refined feel in both plot and style. The characters are authentic and their emotions are revealed with care.
The story starts after the Netherfield ball with the Netherfield party leaving as in canon. Darcy retreats to Pemberley to put as many miles as possible between him and Elizabeth until his traitorous heart can be brought to a better level of order. His dreams he has less control over. At the same time Elizabeth is starting to find little discrepancies in the behaviour of the oh-so-charming Wickham and starts to wonder about the oh-so-haughty Mr Darcy. Her dreams she also has less control over.
Then the snow starts and its effects are devastating.
For the first half of the book the story is running on multiple threads simultaneously and the reader is taken to Hertfordshire with the Bennet family, to Derbyshire with the Darcys and to London with the Hursts and Bingleys. The reader is also treated to time with the thoughts of the key characters. Mr Hurst’s thoughts are particularly enlightening. Time is also given to Anne de Bourgh and is definitely time very well spent.
Grief is a strong theme running through the story but it is not mawkish or excessive. The impact of grief on the different characters is displayed as is the impact this has on their interactions with one another.
The Caroline thread in this story is interesting serving as a skilful balance to the main storyline.
A very strong new entry into the genre which I heartily recommend.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This story has a refined feel in both plot and style. The characters are authentic and their emotions are revealed with care.
The story starts after the Netherfield ball with the Netherfield party leaving as in canon. Darcy retreats to Pemberley to put as many miles as possible between him and Elizabeth until his traitorous heart can be brought to a better level of order. His dreams he has less control over. At the same time Elizabeth is starting to find little discrepancies in the behaviour of the oh-so-charming Wickham and starts to wonder about the oh-so-haughty Mr Darcy. Her dreams she also has less control over.
Then the snow starts and its effects are devastating.
For the first half of the book the story is running on multiple threads simultaneously and the reader is taken to Hertfordshire with the Bennet family, to Derbyshire with the Darcys and to London with the Hursts and Bingleys. The reader is also treated to time with the thoughts of the key characters. Mr Hurst’s thoughts are particularly enlightening. Time is also given to Anne de Bourgh and is definitely time very well spent.
Grief is a strong theme running through the story but it is not mawkish or excessive. The impact of grief on the different characters is displayed as is the impact this has on their interactions with one another.
The Caroline thread in this story is interesting serving as a skilful balance to the main storyline.
A very strong new entry into the genre which I heartily recommend.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
March 10, 2022
At the Netherfield Ball, Mr. Hurt is more aware of his surroundings, which includes noticing Mr. Bennet's intelligent humor, Mr. Darcy's repressed passion for Elizabeth, their quarrel during the dance, and his wife's suffering.
At that moment, he begins to reflect that a change of attitude, on his part, could change his marriage.
Soon after the ball, the group moves to London where Bingley is convinced of Jane Bennet's indifference and becomes increasingly withdrawn.
Mrs. and Mr. Hurt's marriage was arranged, to rescue his family's finances and socially elevate her family. They have feelings for each other but these are repressed.
Mrs. Hurst's £20,000 dowry was not enough to recover Mr. Hurst's family estate. In search of new investments, he became a partner with Mr. Gardiner.
Over time, the couples will grow closer, ignoring the fact that he is related to the Bennet family.
After a trip to the theater where Caroline Bingley is at her worst, Mr. Darcy decides to go to Pemberley while the Bennets have to deal with Jane's sadness, an increasingly cold winter and finally, Mr. Bennet becomes seriously ill.
As winter progresses, the roads become impassable and the characters find themselves stuck: Mr. Darcy in Pemberley with Georgiana and then Colonel Fitzwilliam, Mrs. and Mr. Hurst and Mr. Bingley in London and the Bennet family in Longbourn.
In this moment of adversity and opportunities, some will recognize their own mistakes, seek to improve and know their feelings.
Mr. Hurst decides to value and court his wife.
Mr. Bingley, encouraged by Mr. Hurst, becomes more determined.
Mr. Darcy, while facing the hardships of winter at Pemberley, unsuccessfully resists his feelings for Elizabeth Bennet.
Elizabeth Bennet has to deal with her father's illness, her mother's rejection, running Longbourn in an extremely harsh winter, while rebuilding her image and feelings towards Mr. Wickham and Mr. Darcy.
Kitty and Lydia are confronted about her behavior and change their stance.
As their father's illness progresses and the loss of Longbourn threatens, the five daughters bond and mature.
In the meantime, Caroline Bingley, in an attempt to get closer to who she really thinks is socially important, chooses to distance herself from family and reality.
With the passage of time and an expected news but no less sad, little by little, they all meet again.
Big and small aids, in different places from friends, relatives and even faithful family officials will conspire to try to bring Mr. Darcy closer to a depressed Elizabeth.
A happy ending for many people, including the reader. Great book. It holds your attention from start to finish.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
At that moment, he begins to reflect that a change of attitude, on his part, could change his marriage.
Soon after the ball, the group moves to London where Bingley is convinced of Jane Bennet's indifference and becomes increasingly withdrawn.
Mrs. and Mr. Hurt's marriage was arranged, to rescue his family's finances and socially elevate her family. They have feelings for each other but these are repressed.
Mrs. Hurst's £20,000 dowry was not enough to recover Mr. Hurst's family estate. In search of new investments, he became a partner with Mr. Gardiner.
Over time, the couples will grow closer, ignoring the fact that he is related to the Bennet family.
After a trip to the theater where Caroline Bingley is at her worst, Mr. Darcy decides to go to Pemberley while the Bennets have to deal with Jane's sadness, an increasingly cold winter and finally, Mr. Bennet becomes seriously ill.
As winter progresses, the roads become impassable and the characters find themselves stuck: Mr. Darcy in Pemberley with Georgiana and then Colonel Fitzwilliam, Mrs. and Mr. Hurst and Mr. Bingley in London and the Bennet family in Longbourn.
In this moment of adversity and opportunities, some will recognize their own mistakes, seek to improve and know their feelings.
Mr. Hurst decides to value and court his wife.
Mr. Bingley, encouraged by Mr. Hurst, becomes more determined.
Mr. Darcy, while facing the hardships of winter at Pemberley, unsuccessfully resists his feelings for Elizabeth Bennet.
Elizabeth Bennet has to deal with her father's illness, her mother's rejection, running Longbourn in an extremely harsh winter, while rebuilding her image and feelings towards Mr. Wickham and Mr. Darcy.
Kitty and Lydia are confronted about her behavior and change their stance.
As their father's illness progresses and the loss of Longbourn threatens, the five daughters bond and mature.
In the meantime, Caroline Bingley, in an attempt to get closer to who she really thinks is socially important, chooses to distance herself from family and reality.
With the passage of time and an expected news but no less sad, little by little, they all meet again.
Big and small aids, in different places from friends, relatives and even faithful family officials will conspire to try to bring Mr. Darcy closer to a depressed Elizabeth.
A happy ending for many people, including the reader. Great book. It holds your attention from start to finish.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
July 28, 2022
3,5 stars
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In Any Fair Interference Mr. Bennet falls ill shortly after the Bingley’s departure from Netherfield Park and the emotional consequences for his family, especially Elizabeth are deep. As the narrative progresses, we will see Elizabeth managing her father’s estate, trying to improve her sisters’ behaviors, and dreaming of Mr. Darcy whom she comes to believe is the perfect fit for her.
Nan Harrison decided to bring several new characters to the spotlight and the points of view in this book are shared between Elizabeth, Darcy, but also Mr. Hurst, Caroline Bingley, etc. I liked the fact that these characters were given a voice, and I particularly loved the way Mr. and Mrs. Hurst were portrayed. Their story was endearing, and it was invigorating to see that without Caroline’s presence they were able to conduct themselves differently and be much happier in their marriage. However, especially in the beginning of the book, I found it a little hard to concentrate with so many points of view changing so frequently. I also felt many storylines could have been removed or strongly reduced as they didn’t add much to the narrative, namely the entire Caroline Bingley arc and the details of the lives of her friends. I believe explaining she was away for some reason would have achieved the same result and allowed the book to focus on the main story that was occurring instead of distracting readers with this secondary plot and new secondary characters who were irrelevant to the Darcy/Elizabeth arc.
I enjoyed Elizabeth’s inner struggles as it demonstrated she was a three-dimensional character who went through a hard time in life and had to overcome it somehow. I enjoyed understanding her deepest feelings and seeing how she was dealing with her situation in life, having lost my own father a few years ago, I could particularly relate with how she dealt with her feelings, but I also found it hard to believe that she would fall in love with Mr. Darcy after the Netherfield Ball without meeting him personally, and only because she was dreaming about him. In my perspective Darcy and Elizabeth met too late in the story, and because of that, it was harder to engage in it and feel their love growing for one another.
I believe Any Fair Interference has two strong storylines, but I would have preferred for them to be developed separately in two different books because in the end, I didn’t feel as engaged as I could have with either the Hursts storyline or the Darcy/Elizabeth one.
Summing up, in Any Fair Interference Nan Harrison brought some interesting ideas upfront and revealed to us an appealing background story for the Hursts. It shows the reader there is always time to fight for happiness, no mater what lies in the past and provides us with a sense of hope that is necessary in our daily lives. Readers who enjoy books that focus mainly on the characters inner thoughts and who do not mind having little interactions between Darcy and Elizabeth will enjoy this one.
Published at:
https://frompemberleytomilton.wordpre...
In Any Fair Interference Mr. Bennet falls ill shortly after the Bingley’s departure from Netherfield Park and the emotional consequences for his family, especially Elizabeth are deep. As the narrative progresses, we will see Elizabeth managing her father’s estate, trying to improve her sisters’ behaviors, and dreaming of Mr. Darcy whom she comes to believe is the perfect fit for her.
Nan Harrison decided to bring several new characters to the spotlight and the points of view in this book are shared between Elizabeth, Darcy, but also Mr. Hurst, Caroline Bingley, etc. I liked the fact that these characters were given a voice, and I particularly loved the way Mr. and Mrs. Hurst were portrayed. Their story was endearing, and it was invigorating to see that without Caroline’s presence they were able to conduct themselves differently and be much happier in their marriage. However, especially in the beginning of the book, I found it a little hard to concentrate with so many points of view changing so frequently. I also felt many storylines could have been removed or strongly reduced as they didn’t add much to the narrative, namely the entire Caroline Bingley arc and the details of the lives of her friends. I believe explaining she was away for some reason would have achieved the same result and allowed the book to focus on the main story that was occurring instead of distracting readers with this secondary plot and new secondary characters who were irrelevant to the Darcy/Elizabeth arc.
I enjoyed Elizabeth’s inner struggles as it demonstrated she was a three-dimensional character who went through a hard time in life and had to overcome it somehow. I enjoyed understanding her deepest feelings and seeing how she was dealing with her situation in life, having lost my own father a few years ago, I could particularly relate with how she dealt with her feelings, but I also found it hard to believe that she would fall in love with Mr. Darcy after the Netherfield Ball without meeting him personally, and only because she was dreaming about him. In my perspective Darcy and Elizabeth met too late in the story, and because of that, it was harder to engage in it and feel their love growing for one another.
I believe Any Fair Interference has two strong storylines, but I would have preferred for them to be developed separately in two different books because in the end, I didn’t feel as engaged as I could have with either the Hursts storyline or the Darcy/Elizabeth one.
Summing up, in Any Fair Interference Nan Harrison brought some interesting ideas upfront and revealed to us an appealing background story for the Hursts. It shows the reader there is always time to fight for happiness, no mater what lies in the past and provides us with a sense of hope that is necessary in our daily lives. Readers who enjoy books that focus mainly on the characters inner thoughts and who do not mind having little interactions between Darcy and Elizabeth will enjoy this one.
February 26, 2023
This is my second reading of this work and I enjoyed it just as much the second go 'round.
After the Netherfield Ball, the Bingley party decamps as in cannon, except a few of its members have made some interesting observations about some of the others. Back in London, Caroline receives an invitation to stay w some...friends. Bingley is miserable. Darcy flees Town for Pemberley and gets snowed in due to an exceedingly harsh winter plaguing the entire country.
Meanwhile, back at Longbourn, MrB falls ill and all his daughters must rally to care for him and their home.
I loved the Hursts, they were adorable. Without the interference of Caroline, their relationship (and their own characters) flourish. They become instrumental in bringing about the happiness of others.
I really enjoyed Caroline's arc and, contrary to what other reviewers have said, I felt she was dealt with well enough. I remembered her story ending slightly differently from the first time I read this, but I still enjoyed it. Her own ego and ambitions got in her way.
My only point of contention w this book is Darcy's development. He doeesn's do much of anything throughout the vast majority of this book. He acknowledges, while stranded at Pemberley, that he is in love w E, but is so bull-headedly stuck on her lack of fortune and poor connections. Every time the book brings us to Pemb to see what he's up to, he's just wallowing. It's not until pretty much everyone else has developed and altered that the colonel gives him the kick in the pants he needs to chase after his own happiness.
Still, I thoroughly enjoyed this. I smiled a lot, I cried a little, and I heartily recommend it.
After the Netherfield Ball, the Bingley party decamps as in cannon, except a few of its members have made some interesting observations about some of the others. Back in London, Caroline receives an invitation to stay w some...friends. Bingley is miserable. Darcy flees Town for Pemberley and gets snowed in due to an exceedingly harsh winter plaguing the entire country.
Meanwhile, back at Longbourn, MrB falls ill and all his daughters must rally to care for him and their home.
I loved the Hursts, they were adorable. Without the interference of Caroline, their relationship (and their own characters) flourish. They become instrumental in bringing about the happiness of others.
I really enjoyed Caroline's arc and, contrary to what other reviewers have said, I felt she was dealt with well enough. I remembered her story ending slightly differently from the first time I read this, but I still enjoyed it. Her own ego and ambitions got in her way.
My only point of contention w this book is Darcy's development. He doeesn's do much of anything throughout the vast majority of this book. He acknowledges, while stranded at Pemberley, that he is in love w E, but is so bull-headedly stuck on her lack of fortune and poor connections. Every time the book brings us to Pemb to see what he's up to, he's just wallowing. It's not until pretty much everyone else has developed and altered that the colonel gives him the kick in the pants he needs to chase after his own happiness.
Still, I thoroughly enjoyed this. I smiled a lot, I cried a little, and I heartily recommend it.
April 20, 2022
I enjoyed this book and the fresh perspective- I can’t recall another work of JAFF with Mr Hurst as an interpreter of the action.
March 3, 2022
Should have been about half as long but I still enjoyed it overall
April 22, 2025
"Those who decided to choose love and show kindness did indeed have everything." A delightful quote and a wonderful read. And HEAs as plentiful as sunshine after storms. Totally recommend it <3
February 22, 2022
Encouragement rather than interference
Horrible weather and interesting character changes immediately after the Netherfield Ball create very different paths for our canon group of characters. Family and friends offer love, kindness, and continuing encouragement to our lonely and grieving couples, resulting in more love and kindness! Lovely romantic stories develop, of course, and Caroline makes an absolute fool of herself. Charles comes in on a white horse, Darcy sees reality sooner than canon, and the Hursts learn about love without Caroline. Very sweet.
Horrible weather and interesting character changes immediately after the Netherfield Ball create very different paths for our canon group of characters. Family and friends offer love, kindness, and continuing encouragement to our lonely and grieving couples, resulting in more love and kindness! Lovely romantic stories develop, of course, and Caroline makes an absolute fool of herself. Charles comes in on a white horse, Darcy sees reality sooner than canon, and the Hursts learn about love without Caroline. Very sweet.
November 21, 2024
The acknowledgments on this were an absolute delight.
February 21, 2022
I loved this variation and recommend it. I enjoyed the relationship of Mr. and Mrs. Hurst as it matured and grew into a thing of beauty. Their relationship and interference help our two couples reach their happily ever after.
Elizabeth and Darcy are apart and dream of one another. Of course, they fight their attraction to each other. The Hursts and others help these two come together. This Elizabeth is stronger and more emotional than canon. Darcy is more dependable and romantic.
During Mr. Bennet's illness, the Bennet sisters grew closer together. I appreciated this storyline. Caroline's comeuppance is lovely and well deserved.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Elizabeth and Darcy are apart and dream of one another. Of course, they fight their attraction to each other. The Hursts and others help these two come together. This Elizabeth is stronger and more emotional than canon. Darcy is more dependable and romantic.
During Mr. Bennet's illness, the Bennet sisters grew closer together. I appreciated this storyline. Caroline's comeuppance is lovely and well deserved.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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