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The Young Luna
The #1 online story with millions of readers and followers. Dionne Michaela is a top online author has previously won several online amateur writing awards for her fantasy and romance novels.
"I understand that you want me you just won't admit it"
"No, Mabel, you don't understand anything. I don't want you. I want to f*ck you senseless, there is a large difference. I don't want to see you face, I want your face pressed into the cushions as I f*ck you from behind. I don't want to speak to you, I just want to hear you cry out my name. Don't confuse sexual desire for want. I don't want you, freckles, I just want to f*ck you".
On the brink of the largest Werewolf war in history, Alpha Seth Zev is travelling through the country to gather allies. What he never expected was to find his mate, loud mouth sixteen year old Mabel Thorne. Way too young for him and far too disrespectful to be a Luna. But despite the fact that everyone is against their relationship, Seth can't keep his hands off her and May doesn't want him to keep his hands off her.
taboo erotic romance with age-gap
"I understand that you want me you just won't admit it"
"No, Mabel, you don't understand anything. I don't want you. I want to f*ck you senseless, there is a large difference. I don't want to see you face, I want your face pressed into the cushions as I f*ck you from behind. I don't want to speak to you, I just want to hear you cry out my name. Don't confuse sexual desire for want. I don't want you, freckles, I just want to f*ck you".
On the brink of the largest Werewolf war in history, Alpha Seth Zev is travelling through the country to gather allies. What he never expected was to find his mate, loud mouth sixteen year old Mabel Thorne. Way too young for him and far too disrespectful to be a Luna. But despite the fact that everyone is against their relationship, Seth can't keep his hands off her and May doesn't want him to keep his hands off her.
taboo erotic romance with age-gap
314 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 28, 2022
115 people are currently reading
104 people want to read
About the author
Dionne Michaela
14 books18 followersDionne Michaela was found in an enchanted forest, raised by Faeries and Wolves, she battled through beasts and dragons to bring the world stories of distant lands and distance loves. Her world is full of fantasy, romance and epic battles, but she had been known to solve a few murders in her time...
Dionne Michaela was a #1 online writer on several amateur writing sites before branching into published work.
Dionne Michaela was a #1 online writer on several amateur writing sites before branching into published work.
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June 12, 2022
Wattpad-y. I think this one started from one of those pay per chapter apps. This was A trainwreck from start to finish but in the beginning half I was enjoy the OTT-ness of it. The story drags though and there is no flow. There are also just so many inconsistencies and plot holes that kept pulling me out of the story, it was difficult to stay focused especially in the end. It needs to be rework with some more editing because the bones of the story are good and I liked the characters chemistry.
August 23, 2023
A good read!
I’ve already read this story a few years back, but on Wattpad. I was pleasantly surprised to find it on KU, and thought the author had polished and edited it before having it up. That is unfortunately not the case. The overall plot would have benefited with fine tuning and better pacing. May’s character and portrayal were perfect for her age, but more depth to Seth would have been amazing.
Despite that, it was great to revisit the couple.
I’ve already read this story a few years back, but on Wattpad. I was pleasantly surprised to find it on KU, and thought the author had polished and edited it before having it up. That is unfortunately not the case. The overall plot would have benefited with fine tuning and better pacing. May’s character and portrayal were perfect for her age, but more depth to Seth would have been amazing.
Despite that, it was great to revisit the couple.
June 8, 2022
Decent but lacking
The story line is fine but it jumps around a bit. There’s too many details in some parts that don’t require it and not enough in others. The book is full of typos and while you can figure out what the writer is trying to say, the misspelling is annoying. All in all, enjoyed the book but wouldn’t pay for it.
The story line is fine but it jumps around a bit. There’s too many details in some parts that don’t require it and not enough in others. The book is full of typos and while you can figure out what the writer is trying to say, the misspelling is annoying. All in all, enjoyed the book but wouldn’t pay for it.
June 16, 2022
Young Luna
The age gap was hard to get passed, add the daddy/baby girl role playing and it became a major buzz kill. Story was good though. This needs some heavy editing. It was like reading a high school essay assignment that was turned in at the last moment. Also, the story takes place in the US but European spelling and phrases were used.
The age gap was hard to get passed, add the daddy/baby girl role playing and it became a major buzz kill. Story was good though. This needs some heavy editing. It was like reading a high school essay assignment that was turned in at the last moment. Also, the story takes place in the US but European spelling and phrases were used.
December 21, 2024
I read and loved that book as it was still on Wattpad. I read it at least 5 times. Now I wanted to reread it and found out it’s a real book so I had to buy it and reread it. And I still love it. It’s clinchy and dripping Wattpad era but that is what I love so much about it so it’s always gonna be a 5⭐️read for me.
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March 12, 2023
I enjoyed reading The Young Luna however imo the editing let it down. I don't mind a few mistakes but this book had 3 mistakes in 1 page which distracted me from the story. Otherwise it would have been a 4 stars.
June 12, 2023
Literal statutory rape
He's 30+ she's 16. When it was mentioned as an age gap my thought was someone of legal age not a child getting manipulated into having sex with a grown man. The relationship is so toxic.
He's 30+ she's 16. When it was mentioned as an age gap my thought was someone of legal age not a child getting manipulated into having sex with a grown man. The relationship is so toxic.
June 6, 2022
Great Storyline!!
Loved the book, finished within a day. Took one star away only due to the extreme amount of grammatical errors and mistakes.
Loved the book, finished within a day. Took one star away only due to the extreme amount of grammatical errors and mistakes.
June 15, 2022
decent story line
The story wasn’t horrible, but the grammar was awful. I’m not sure if this book was translated into English or if the editor just didn’t do their job.
The story wasn’t horrible, but the grammar was awful. I’m not sure if this book was translated into English or if the editor just didn’t do their job.
June 17, 2022
Good read!
The book was pretty good. It woul have been better without all the grammatical errors but I still liked it..
The book was pretty good. It woul have been better without all the grammatical errors but I still liked it..
June 29, 2022
Great
Love this book. Great story plot and lots of twists in it. Great read for anyone intrested in werewolf love novels
Love this book. Great story plot and lots of twists in it. Great read for anyone intrested in werewolf love novels
July 25, 2022
Needs grammar and punctuation editing and rephrasing of some sentences. Good story overall
August 17, 2022
Sooo good
This book was soo good! It was not the typical poor girl miss treated and abused storyline we see so often in these books.
This book was soo good! It was not the typical poor girl miss treated and abused storyline we see so often in these books.
September 15, 2023
Great
Love the book just,wording in the book needs to be fixed. Good story altogether. I'm excited about this, author can not wait to read more.
Love the book just,wording in the book needs to be fixed. Good story altogether. I'm excited about this, author can not wait to read more.
April 11, 2024
Love it
I Finished in two days. It really has a way of keeping my attention. Read it. You won't be disappointed.
I Finished in two days. It really has a way of keeping my attention. Read it. You won't be disappointed.
August 28, 2024
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February 11, 2026
4.6 Stars. it’s a very good book about werewolves if you don’t mind some writing errors or an almost 14 year age gap
I’ve read this book when it was on Wattpad (which yes I digress I’ve alway been a Wattpad girly though I that doesn’t mean I don’t read books that are properly published as well cause I do both and more) it is pretty great book. The only problems I can see people having is the writing errors (which in hindsight should have been fixed before being put on Amazon Kindle but Im used to it but that might be a struggle for others though it doesn’t happen too often) and the age gap of almost 14 years with the male main character having just turned 30 right before the beginning of the story and the female main character (who’s point of view we are reading) is 16 at the beginning and is turning 17 in a few months (that’s all I can tell you without spoilers). But if those things don’t bother you and you like werewolf story’s where the main character is super sassy, fights back in arguments and isn’t completely reliant on her mate then I recommend this book. The second book is also pretty good. Haven’t read the last one though.
I’ve read this book when it was on Wattpad (which yes I digress I’ve alway been a Wattpad girly though I that doesn’t mean I don’t read books that are properly published as well cause I do both and more) it is pretty great book. The only problems I can see people having is the writing errors (which in hindsight should have been fixed before being put on Amazon Kindle but Im used to it but that might be a struggle for others though it doesn’t happen too often) and the age gap of almost 14 years with the male main character having just turned 30 right before the beginning of the story and the female main character (who’s point of view we are reading) is 16 at the beginning and is turning 17 in a few months (that’s all I can tell you without spoilers). But if those things don’t bother you and you like werewolf story’s where the main character is super sassy, fights back in arguments and isn’t completely reliant on her mate then I recommend this book. The second book is also pretty good. Haven’t read the last one though.
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