Most of these stories felt rushed and incomplete. They would have benefitted from a bit more depth. I understand they’re short stories, but they should still give you a complete story, take you on a ride, albeit a short one, but still. These all lacked something and were bland, predictable and had me falling asleep from boredom. Nothing about these stories are scary. If anything, this felt like stories I read in elementary school and these still wouldn’t have scared me back then. There were a couple good ones, but overall, it was work to push through.
Crypt
Predictable, not scary at all, and kind of boring. It’s a mediocre vampire story with nothing new or memorable about it. 1/5
The Mannequin
This was basic and beyond boring. This should have been good. A creepy mannequin that moves in the dark, but it just wasn’t. It felt like a story that’s been told a million times. 1/5
Mirror Man
The first story in here so far to grasp my attention, as I love stories about creepy things in mirrors and reflections, because they remind me of some of my favorite Bloody Mary stories, yet this ended too soon and had a pretty predictable ending. Good concept, bad execution. I also don’t like how nonchalant they were. I get it was something they’ve dealt with seeing since a kid, so it was normal for them, but still. 2/5
Whose Woods These Are
I’m afraid I’m going to start sounding like a broken record, but none of these stories are exceptionally well. They’re all pretty mediocre so far and very predictable. I seen that ending from a mile away. Just far too obvious how this story would pan out. 1/5
Cutty Street Lamp
Rating just for a “horror” story about a killer streetlight. Reminds me of the super low budget, corny movies I used to watch on Sci-fi before the channel was renamed Syfy. The movies were so bad that you just had to keep watching just to see how they ended. That’s how I felt about this story. 1.5/5
Dead Call
Okay, so I liked the format. I like stories told through text messages or online threads, but it just reminds me far too much of a Reddit creepypasta or 2chan story, but not a good one and the ending was too sudden. 0/5
Lucy
Not necessarily something new. It’s basically like many other urban legends we’ve all heard a thousand times, but it was good at least. I liked this one and am interested in what else is going down in West Harob. 3.5/5
Lights Out
Fully enjoyed this one. This, to me, was the better mannequin story in this collection.
It was rather long, in comparison to the stories before it, but I loved that. It felt more fleshed out and complete, in a way. You could predict what would happen, but I dunno, I still really liked this one. 4/5
Sub basement
Meh again, broken record, but they’re just far too predictable. Nothing happened here where I was shocked, beside him being stupid enough to keep going down deeper and not just saying screw that one file. Dude had zero will to live. No survival instincts or anything. 2/5
The Watcher
I’m not trying to be too harsh, but it feels as if these stories were written for children with the “horror” elements. And how desperate was she to do all of this just to join a book club? 1/5
The Mallory Haunting
1.5/5
Crawlspace
2/5 Decent
Mannering House
1/5
Station 331
3.5/5 This was a good little sci-fi one.
Hitchhiker
Not exactly what I was expecting from the title, so for that alone, 3/5