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The Girl He Marked

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Two Part Book.

PART ONE:
Myra Archer hasn't had it easy being the only human in her family. She knows that she probably doesn't have a mate and is learning to accept it. Enter Jayce Daniels.

PART TWO:
Alena is a human who happens to bump into her mate on a camping trip. Elijah has been without his mate for so long that it is taking a toll on his body. Out of his mind with excitement about finding her, he kidnaps her and takes her home. It's up to her friends to get Alena back.

180 pages, Unbound

Published January 1, 2021

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Naughty Christian

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Writes under pseudonym Laila Callaway

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April 12, 2021
I REALLY want to read this book but I can't find anywhere to read it without having to either buy it a couple of chapters at a time or only read a couple of chapters at a time and then wait until the next day to get 'daily check in' rewards to read it!

It's literally driving me crazy!!

Naughty, have you considered putting your book out any other way?
At this point, the book isn't worth the mucking around with stupid Apps to read?!
1 review
March 7, 2021
Why won't it let me read the book
1 review
April 19, 2021
I don’t read books I hate reading I seen a short story of this book on fb and it Interested me and oh my god I can’t put it down I wish I had an easier time finding all the books in the series and had them in my had or on audio so I could listen while I drive to and from work not just read it but I voices are hotter lol
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153 reviews31 followers
April 26, 2021
This was a very poorly written book. Numerous errors and poor plot. And the concept behind iReader is dumb and too expensive. I did not finish this book
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1,277 reviews5 followers
March 8, 2021
This was a pretty good book, I randomly found it on an app and surprisingly I was sucked right in. I does jump around a lot but it was also like 3 books in one. With way I enjoyed it.
2 reviews
July 7, 2021
I read the first couple chapters on the I reader app and was addicted but that app got me so mad that I deleted it. I was wondering if there is any other way that I could read the books? What I read was sooooo good I hope somebody can help
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9 reviews
February 7, 2021
Review contains some information about the characters don’t read if you don’t want things to be spoiled.




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Not to be bad but at first I though it be a cliche to read a book that I found a paragraph on Facebook but let me tell you this..... I was glued to it I couldn’t put it down. ❤️
The young adult book is simply written but VERY vivid in the “mating” scenes.
I loved how this book basically contained 3 different stories that where still entangled in each other.
I read it basically in 3 days but that’s because I worked and ready when I could but it’s easily readable in a day.
I enjoyed the trilling emotions between the characters the first touch, the first understating of a mate. To later on them stealing there mates from the camping trip. At that moment I was like what is going on and the strong connection of the mating bond that you fall in love with your kidnapper few days later. Can’t wait to read the next book I wonder what way the story is going to go for the main characters. 🤔
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1 review
May 26, 2021
Holly hell. All I can say is WOW. I CANT PUT THIS BOOK DOWN. ITS AMAZING. The story itself is delicious, the details make me quiver. Makes me want to be marked just to have that much more ..... OMG!
3 reviews
July 20, 2022
This book is $50 on ireader. It is NOT worth $50 whatsoever. Save yourself the hassle and disappointment. I did the math in every app I could find it, and the avg. cost of this book is BEYOND what it should be. I’m all for authors making money and selling their works, but not poorly edited, bland story lines that are repetitive of free, or even cheaper books out there you can buy on Amazon, apple and physical bookstores.
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Currently reading
April 7, 2021
I love what I have read so far, sad I can't get past chapter 9 without paying apps for points. I wish I could find these in a store!
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73 reviews1 follower
July 27, 2021
I enjoyed this little series of books. They were short stories and they were very sweet. So in order to read this short series of stories you have to have the ireader app i took the risk and i paid for it all out right and it was alomst $40.00 that is way more than i would ever pay for a book. I liked the stories but I'm just saying it wasn't worth the money. They are incorporated together by the characters but each set basicly ends once they complete their mating and then it jumps to the next set. I would have enjoyed a little more past that but im not a writer and what do i know to each there own. So in the end if tou have the money to do so pay for it all at once or you will pay closer to $100.00 to read these srories.
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681 reviews4 followers
July 14, 2021
It started off strong, then became flat out disappointing. Though I would say that the "featured" chapters are always strong and then the rest is usually flat out terrible with this medium. I've only found one or two from the online exclusives that have been good, and they're not on this platform. There's no romantic tension in this novel. Everything is too easy. Half of the main characters are bland. It moves too fast. To learn how to properly write a short novella, Sherrilyn Kenyon has an excellent one called Winter Born.
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1 review
June 3, 2021
I was not expecting to be so caught up with the storyline but as soon as I read the first chapter I couldn’t put it down. Romanticizing on where they met and will meet again, to Tristan falling in love with his strategy intern and wanting her to succeed. Struggled at first with the name Federica, couldn’t find a face for her but as the story went on I was able to put a face and like her being called Freddie. I really think readers would enjoy “The girl he marked”
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1 review
June 15, 2023
Loved this story line and these characters. I also like how it didn’t feel pornographic reading. I would’ve given a 5/5 if there was more only on Jayce and Myra. I loved how she set it all up but a bit disappointed the series isn’t only them that it covers other people and other story lines within Jayce and Myra’s. I’m honestly only here for those two and their story line and need more Jayce and Myra. It was really well thought out and didn’t feel like done wanna be twilight.
1 review
November 21, 2022
Its a great book just irritation you dont do so we Can read it all on nextory or something cause now we need to pay to read from chatter 9 and not everybody have that kinda money i really want to read the full Series and i would like to have it as an ebook or a literally book i tried stigning up fir a site that Said i could read it all but that wasnt true sadly 🥺
1 review
July 10, 2021
Found a sample to read at fb, now reading on iReader and it’s hard, only a little
A day. Really hope this book can be found somewhere else. Cuz it’s awesome!
Looked everywhere in Sweden for it and it’s nowhere to be found accept iReader. Really hope they publish these books so I can buy it.
40 reviews
May 4, 2022
Loved the whole book how all the stories tied in together.. with the parents then the children but it was still all the stories where different and weren't the same and kept interesting! All around 10 out of 10! The only down side was the ireader programe you read it on! 💛💛
32 reviews
December 30, 2022
Great story! I liked the different POVs. I gave four stars because there were quite a few typos and grammatical errors. I think it needed to be thoroughly proofread before publishing. Otherwise, love the story and the sexiness of the characters!
1 review
February 16, 2021
I am reading this on another app!!! Trying to read it all without having to wait a day per chapter. I am up to the son axel and his mate grace. Would really like to read more then one chapter a day.
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1 review1 follower
March 3, 2021
Would like to read this book but I have downloaded about 5 different e readers and still no joy could someone please point me in the right direction tia
19 reviews1 follower
March 14, 2021
Cannot find the whole book...only allowed to read a few chapters...very frustrating when it started out a very good read
469 reviews1 follower
March 17, 2021
Lots of jumping around between POVs. Kept me interested to finish, so I guess it's okay. It was a bit haphazard and I'm not sure where it's going but will try to find out.
5 reviews1 follower
March 26, 2021
I really like this book series. The only problem I have is that I payed for the entire series and did not receive it. If you could make it available on other platforms that would be amazing.
1 review
March 29, 2021
The book itself was enjoyable. The platform was horrible. Suffered through the platform glitches and gave up trying to read it. Finally deleted the platform and stopped reading the book.
1 review
April 22, 2021
I havent read the whole book but im hooked on the first 8 chapters...
4 reviews
May 15, 2021
Started reading this book via the app, but I'd rather buy the book than be paying for icons which seems expensive in the long run. This book is awesome, just wish I could just buy the whole book.
3 reviews
May 19, 2021
Book is only on iReader. Platform sucks. Would rather just buy the book. Author blames it on iReader although she herself put it there. It´s always easy to blame someone else...
1 review
May 26, 2021
can we read full books. it is bothersome to read in apps
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