I did like the story, but the writing style just annoyed me sometimes, and I just felt like some sentences really werent gramatically correct, just like the times, she would talk in past tense, the present, past-future whatever tense, and it just got confusing for me, to the Point where I started re-forming the sentences (their verbs atleast), because I couldn't read the book like that.
Otherwise I think the story, for Wattpad one, was decent :)
PS: as Im writing this review im Running on not enough hours of sleep and have been stuck in a car reading for 12h, my review might be.. uh.. not gramatically and vocabulary (wich isn't a word I think) correct (‼️also English isn't my first language ‼️)
I lovee the whole action.i love how he didn't turned like his dad or like the rest of the man from the book and i love everything of that book.
They're chimistry was soo good too🤌
I was just so happy reading and discovering and rediscovering their happiness in fact Dalia was like a queen and a killer too,was his tesoro and his queen too🥺
'I don't know how can I live without you.....I wonder how I even lived before you'
I really loved that story🥺 She could burn the world for him and he could distroy all for seeing her happy and not hurt.💝