And now my situation with this new group of aliens has gone from bad to worse. I was with a bunch of elf-like aliens who had unparalleled technology, but now I’m in the midst of a group of primitive gargoyle aliens running around in loincloths.
Which doesn’t hide much, let me tell you. There’s one gargoyle in particular who watches my every move, but what’s under his loincloth scares me more than his beastly appearance.
To be sure we’re worthy to breed with, the savages have us each perform a rite of passage.
And by that I mean a test of survival. Navigate the terrain, scavenge for food, defend myself against wildlife—basically all the things that could cause bodily harm or death. So that’s fun.
And as much as I’d like to be rescued by the alien who’s stalking me, it looks like I’m on my own. Maybe I shouldn’t have flipped him off, but how was I supposed to know I’d need his help?
Now, I’m going to have to tap into my survival skills or I’ll be dead by morning. May the odds and the aliens be ever in my favor. Or something.
*This is spin off from the House of Kaimar series. If you want to know Makayla's tiny backstory, please read those books first. *It's highly recommended that this series be read in order.
Miranda Bridges began sneaking romance novels as a teenager and did not confess to reading them until she became a legal adult. After years and years as a voracious reader she woke up one day with a story in mind. She decided to write it down in order to silence her imaginary friends, but they’ve grown in number and have gotten louder. When she is not reading, writing, or drinking coffee she is taking care of two princesses who are of a reading age. Needless to say Miranda is still hiding romance books around the house, but now some of them have her name on the cover.
I need to preface this review with the information that I have loved all the romances by Miranda Bridges that I have read in the House of Kaimar sci-fi romance series. My problem with this novel stems from my personal loathing of cultures that openly practice slavery and the systemic exploitation of women. This novel never addresses the moral problem of slavery or the exploitation of the women classified as breeders in this society. In fact, this novel has the background information that this culture bought a whole spaceship cargo of enslaved human women to exploit as slaves who then infected the tribe with a human disease which wiped out most of the tribe's women and children. This incident is positioned by the author as supposed to make us understand or sympathize with the alien tribe's hostility toward human women. For this reader, all it did was make me regret that this human disease spared most of the men. In my opinion, this tribe only got what they deserved for practicing slavery in the first place. The heroine is completely unconcerned with the suffering of the human women chosen by these disgusting rapist males as breeders, too. Breeders in this culture are women who are breeding slaves who will have their rapist's male children forcibly taken away from them. Also, a woman's consent is completely missing from this culture's marriage ceremony. Honestly, in my opinion, the only acceptable Happy Ever After for this novel is the human breeders and slaves murdering all the males in the tribe. For this reader, slavery has no business in a romance novel, which is supposed to showcase women triumphing over patriarchy and getting their HEA. The hero of this novel was fairly sweet and devoted to the heroine. The characterization of the hero and heroine was well done, with both hero and heroine being vibrant distinct individuals. I personally loathed this heroine for her passivity and acceptance of this terrible culture, but there are many women like that in real life, so her characterization was very well done. The world building in this novel was also very well done, with the alien wildlife and primitive village culture richly drawn. This novel would have been five stars for me if this culture did not enslave and exploit women as a matter of course. I took off two stars because this novel portrays sexual and labor slavery as a perfectly normal and acceptable activity. Other readers who aren't triggered by slavery in their romance novels would probably quite enjoy this novel, because it is quite well written.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
The series in which this one spun off of isn’t terrible, so I had high hopes for this one going in based on the preview of these aliens in that series. Unfortunately it ended up being a primitive alien plantation. So here’s the break down with some sp oi ler ish c o n tent. Human women taken from Earth once, then again by a second alien species, then those second aliens give these human women to a third race of aliens as tradesies to go help them bang bang boom boom war play with these other fourth alien species. NO ONE asks these women what THEY want. They just round some up out of the group the second set had of humans and say okay, now you’re going with these guys. So now they’re supposed to trek through the jungle to be worthy to join this primitive aliens village. She helps a dragon she calls it, but let’s be real it’s just a lizard with wings that sorta kinda likes her and she thinks of it as a pet even though it still wonders off and does it’s own thing. These aliens apparently think they’re special. Okay, but WHY? The lizard with wings never has any cool scenes or super powers. So turns out the H, Masse, has been able to speak perfect English the whole time, but acts like he can’t to get to know the h. EVEN GOING INTO THEIR WEDDING night, which is like the first day, he’s still letting her think he can’t understand her so he can, as he says get to know her. Uh, so lie by omission? Not cool wings boy. She gets right over that. THIS PLANET IS COMPLETELY PRIMITIVE. They’re rocking cloths, no running water and living in tents. I’d be throwing a serious hissy fit taken from a tech involved civilization to living in the mud. No thanks. So here’s the real kicker, the h, Makayla, DOES NOT CARE and neither does Vivian that they’re the only two selected as BRIDES while the other human women are taken as BRE EDERS OR SLA VES! Yes, you read that right. This society openly practices bree der sla ves and regular ol fashion sla very! Get this, the poor baby maker chicks, if they have a male baby the dad takes it and if it’s a girl they allow the female to keep it. LOL. The Masse still HAS NOT fed Makayla or the other humans even though they’ve done a trek through the jungle survival course, been picked and had this craptastic wedding....so like 48 hours or whatever. But they give her some booze and that’s supposed to be sufficient. And Yania says it’s because the Masse lets his people eat first. Uh, hello she’s a starving human over there. Yeah, that really shows he cares. Then when she does get food HE HAS TO FEED HER and limits what she eats because she might throw it up. That’s a good point, but seriously you starved her and now she can’t even feed herself? And hilarious part, one of the human sla ve girls looks at HER with pity. Let’s not forget these people don’t accept the humans, because at some point the Masse, how old is this dude?, brought in other human sla ves who had a disease that knocked off a ton of his people, especially the women. So they just killed the traders before. So where did the humans go? But yet, he still brings more. This all seems very Europeans coming to America and taking out native Americans with diseases they had no immunity to. Would not recommend this book.
Overall: 3.5 rounded to ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Readability: 📖📖📖📖 Feels: 🦋🦋🦋 Emotional Depth: 💔💔💔 Sexual Tension: ⚡⚡⚡ Romance: 💞💞💞💞 Sensuality: 💋💋💋💋 Sex Scene Length: 🍑🍑🍑🍑 Steam Scale (Number of Sex Scenes): 🔥🔥🔥 Humor: Yes – a bit of a one liner style of humor with sarcasm Perspective: First person from the heroine only When mains are first on page together: Almost immediately in Cliffhanger: No, this ends with happy ever after for the couple Epilogue: No Format: bought audiobook (Descriptions found at end of my review)
Should I read in order? So, I started with this one, not realizing it’s a spin off series. So it can be enjoyed alone, but you’ll definitely realize the story doesn’t quite start here. If you want the whole story, you’ll want to start with Bridges’ House of Kaimar series.
Basic plot: Makayla has been kidnapped twice – now she must prove she can survive the wilderness while her new alien clan watches and decides her fate.
Give this a try if you want: - Science fiction romance - alien setting - fated mates/heart mates - never been kissed - other woman drama - language barrier - hero feeds and bathes the heroine - shorter novel - Higher steam – 3 full scenes in a lower page count
Ages: - I didn’t see them mentioned.
First line: E.T. phone this bitch home.
My thoughts: I thought this one was a decent read. It’s short so I tolerated some things that might have annoyed me in a longer book. I do think I would have enjoyed it more if I had read the prior series – so that’s definitely something to keep in mind.
What I loved here was the kind of ‘all in’ vibe from the hero. I loved the possessiveness and ‘I’m taking you’ mentality. I enjoyed when the mains were together.
I can’t say I loved the writing style though. There were a lot of weird one liners that I think others might find funny but I just didn’t enjoy. I liked the narrator okay but didn’t love her. For some reason I felt like I could hear here swallow a lot and it was really distracting, haha!
I personally was not a fan of the other woman plot line here. I think I am a bit tired of the catty, jealous, evil ‘other woman’.
I’d try this author again though! The steam was pretty fun.
Quotes/spoiler-y thoughts:Any mistakes/typos are my own
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Content warnings: These should be taken as a minimum of what to expect. It’s very possible I have missed some.
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Extra stuff like what my review breakdown means, where to find me, and book clubs
Full break down on what my ratings above mean here: Overall: How I felt about it everything considered! Readability: How ‘readable’ was the book? Did I fly through it? Did I have to tell myself to pick it back up repeatedly? Were any passages confusing? (I will probably score like (1) is literally unreadable due to formatting/typing errors, etc (2) There were lots of errors that made it difficult to read OR It was extremely confusing and I had to reread passages to make sense of it OR I disliked it so much I had to bribe myself to keep reading (3) I didn’t really want to keep reading and would have preferred to abandon the read and start something else OR some minor continuity issues/confusion (4) I liked it fine, maybe a minor error or 2. I was happy to pick it up when I had time. (5) I never wanted to put this down. I thought about it when I wasn’t reading it. I hid in the bathroom from my kids to read. I threw inappropriate food at my children for dinner so I could read instead.) Feels: Totally subjective to each person but did the book give me any tingles? Any butterflies? Did it rip my heart out (in a good way?) Emotional depth: How well do I feel I know the characters at the end? How much did I feel their emotions throughout the story? Sexual tension: Again, subjective, but how strong was the wanting and longing to me between the characters? A book might have strong sexual tension without a single touch. Romance: Was there romance? Did romantic things happen? This can be actions/words/thoughts of the characters and again is subjective. Sensuality: This is how the intimate scenes are written. Kisses and sexual scenes – how sensual were they? Were they on the mechanical side? Was there emotional pull tied in? Were the details explicit or flowery? These are subjective but generally (1) too short to get a good judgement (2) not all what I'm looking for - very vague or flowery prose (3) either not explicit enough or not enough emotional pull (too mechanical/physically descriptive without the emotions) (4) what I love in a scene (5) absolute perfection - perfect balance of emotional longing and explicit descriptions Sex Scene Length: How long the bedroom scenes are (generally (1) is 1-3 sentences (2) is a few paragraphs to a page-ish (3) is about average, a few pages (4) more well developed scenes, quite a few pages with descriptions (4) the majority of the book takes place in the bedroom. This is always hard to tell for me on audio! Steam Scale: Generally, each flame is a scene. If scenes are super close together I sometimes combine them. If a scene is super short or so vague I don’t know what’s happening, I don’t count it. There’s some levels of grey but generally the number of flames is how many sex scenes there are (I max out at 5 so I’ll put a + after if there’s more than that)
3.75 Stars MINOR SPOILERS THROUGHOUT: I really liked this book. It was a solid start to the series and included enough stuff from the other series to make it a satisfying spin-off for fans.
I loved Makayla’s inner monologue and her attitude was a constant source of amusement. I enjoyed her banter with Jaxar and I felt like their story progressed well.
I am fascinated by the whole Boraq race and I’m so excited to learn more about them. I am a sucker for an alien race with wings and a tail and throw in a heart of stone and you’ve got me! I can’t wait to continue this series with the next book!
I really enjoyed this book.... It was funny, packed with emotion, and suspenseful in parts. These Bleak have hearts of stone until they find their mates. Jaxal is the ruler of his people and Makayla is a human spitfire.
Together they are a perfect couple. I really liked the side characters Yania and Vivienne.
Ok,so this is a bit of a train wreck, you can tell immediately that it is getting worse by second, yet you keep hoping for a miracle. It would be easier to tell everything that is NOT terrible in this story . But let me try to give the most glaring problems a shot. 1.Slavery. Basically every human on the planet is bought as a property, treated as a property and called a property. Just because somewhere along the way they are divided in groups called " slaves","breeders " and "brides" ,does not mean these women are no longer slaves. You can slap whatever title or name you want on a person, but if they have no freedom to make choices and are subject to someone else's will,it is still a slavery. Just because you slap a rose on piece of crap,doesn't mean it doesn't stink anymore. 2. Mindset of said slaves. Author obviously expected readers to believe how comfortable and good being a slave is and I guess every woman shoud relate and want to become one. Instead I seriously doubted mental health of these women. No normal person react this way to becoming a slave. It just doesn't happen. Ever. 3. Bravery of main heroine. There is nada. Nil. Zero. She is not brave ,she doesn't fight for herself, or her friend or other women even when she comes in power to do so. Am I supposed to admire her? For what exactly? 4. Worldbuilding. Practically nonexistent apart from some trees,snakes and tents. 5. Romance. I guess there was supposedly one. At least it was declared immediately. Did I feel it? Nope. There was again a lot of fluttering, flapping body parts that does all thinking for their hosts,so I guess it was supposed to count as one. 6. Sex scenes. I skipped after first few, just couldn't stomach them. If you can't write them well,maybe you should avoid them. 7. Plot. Or a hole where one was supposed to be. Etc. Etc. Etc.
I have no idea who the audience was ment to be for this gem of literature. As sci-fi it is laughable. As romance-ridiculous. For novice reader it can turn people away from ever picking any book up again. Writing is bad,like seriously hard to read bad. Especially if you want to get any pleasure from reading.
LOVED. Honestly it just made me laugh! Short read that I thought could have been stretched a bit more in places to add more depth but it really was good. Miss Bridges has found herself in my "read as soon as possible pile". You know the one that you check after every book to see if it has come out yet even though you know the release dates by heart. Yeah, she's in that pile.
I liked the concept but the heroine is just crude and the writer can't work with some fluency beyond four letter words . I wish the heroine was better than just a crude bitch.
Darn it, I just re-read the blurb and it says this is a spin-off of the "House of Kaimar" series. This explains why I felt like I was missing something. I think I will start that series before continuing this one so I can have the full backstory.
Makayla was a little annoying but she grew on me. I liked Jaxar and the whole shattering heart thing was pretty cool.
I have a problem, and that problem is Alien smut. Why? Don't ask me such ridiculous questions!👀
It's your typical girl gets kidnapped by aliens for breeding, aliens have war, aliens gift kidnapped breeders to other aliens who helped win war, then girl reenacts Jumanji as Dora the Explorer, alien chief falls in love with girl, girl falls in love with alien. Nothing else needed, thank you.
This was a sweet story of coming to terms with the path life has given her. learning because it is different from the one you thought you would have doesn’t make it any less as great and worth living.
This is a spin off of the House of Kaimar series. I was happy to dive into this but I was disappointed. It wasn’t so because the story was poorly written but because slavery is normalised in these series. As if that’s alright and a given. Abducting women and forcing them into sexual slavery or manual labour isn’t right no matter the culture or planet. This was not addressed at all. I suppose that people who aren’t triggered by slavery or dub-con will love these series. But I didn’t. Simply because of these themes.
This story is EPIC!! Absolutely loved the feistiness of the heroine, her fierce determination, her need to always be in control, so when that control is wrestled from her by her chosen mate, it makes for a very sexy "downfall." There is no hesitation in recommending this book - nope, none!! I would give it more stars if I could!!
Микаела е отвлечена от извънземни, при това 2 пъти. Първият път, от извънземна раса, която търси жени с подобна на тяхната физиология, за да не умре расата им. Микаела не е избрана от никой от тези мъже и си мисли, че е късметлийка, докато тя и още дузина жени не са предадени в ръцете на други извънземни. Тези са грамадни, със сивкаво лилава кожа, остри черти, остри нокти и огромни криле. Завлечени в джунглите на непозната планета, на всяка жена й са дадени дрехи, нож, огърлица от мъниста и мях с вода, и им е казано, че за трябва да докажат, че могат да оцелеят сами на тази нова планета, затова всяка от тях трябва да намери сама пътят до селото им. Микаела няма никакво намерение да се задържа в това извънземно село и все пак останала сама в нощта, тя знае, че трябва да се добере до него. В едно изпълнено с хапливи, забавни и самоиронични коментари, нощно пътуване, Микаела се сблъсква с опасните обитатели на планетата, успява да се сприятели с малко драконоподобно същество и да се добере до селото на извънземните, където я очаква нова информация. Всяка една от жените ще бъде разпределена в 3 групи. Робиня, която ще изпълнява слугински задължения. Жена за разплод, която трябва да роди деца на мъжете в селото, ако е момче детето ще й бъде взето, а ако е момиче ще може да си го отгледа. И съпруга, която ще се ползва със закрилата на своя съпруг, ще бъде гледана, обгрижвана и пазена. Микаела не знае дали да е щастлива или изплашена, когато се оказва избрана за съпруга на не кой да е, а краля на племето Бурак.
Това е първата книга на авторката и мога да кажа, че определено няма да ми е последната. Изпълнена с толкова хумор и самоирония, за мен беше истинско удоволствие да проследя пътешествието на главната ни героиня. От това как си дуднеше сама под носа, до сцената в която беше много ама много гладна, и точеше лиги докато другите ядяха, през смешните й коментари било то пред главния герой или пред някоя от новите й приятелки. Никога не ми се е случвало толкова много да харесам героиня от самото начало на книгата. Въпреки, че ни е препоръчано да прочетем книгите от предишната поредица, аз започнах от тази, защото само тя има аудио. Голяма част от задоволството ми от книгата идва от страхотният дублаж на Rachel Music. ДО сега не съм слушала книги с неин дублаж и мога да кажа, че доста съм изпуснала, уникално добре се е справила с вдъхването на живот на тази книга.
Относно света в който ни отвежда авторката, мога да кажа, че е нов и много вълнуващ. Имаме планета с извънземни. Преди време на планетата биват доставени група човешки жени, които обаче донасят със себе си мистериозна болест, която покосява и убива почти всички жени и деца в племената. По тази причина сега мъжете търсят своята половинка измежду други извънземни раси. Точно тази раса има нещо много специфично. Мъжете се раждат със сърце обвито в камък, и само когато бъдат интимни със своята истинска половинка, обвивката се пръска и сърцето на мъжа започва да бие. Ако мъжа не намери половинката си, сърцето му бавно се превръща в камък и той умира.
И така Микаела се оказва половинката на Джаксар, и се превръща в негова кралица. Тук в тази книга срещнахме други 2 човешки жени. Едната е Вивиан, която също като Микаела (май само те двете) беше избрана за съпруга, и се оказа истинска половинка на новият си извънземен мъж. Жалкото в случая е, че май нямаме нейната история, или поне това, което прочетох изглежда, че останалите книги са за други двойки. Другата човешка жена, която срещнахме не бе назована по име, знаем само, че е червенокоса, и че е единствената жена, като изключим Вивиан и Микаела, за която двама от извънземните мъже се биха. Беше доста интересна точно тази част. За Вивиан се биха 3ма, за Микаела се биха 7, включително и краля им, който я спечели, а за червенокосата се биха 2ма. Единият бе грамаден и спокоен воин, докато другия покрит с белези и очевидно зъл воин, който гледаше на жената така, сякаш иска да й причини нещо наистина лошо. Та, да видим дали следващата книга не е за нея.
Хареса ми частта с която главната спаси малко драконоподобно същество и то се лепна за нея. Всички гледаха доста удивено и както и очаквах после се оказа, че това същество е почитано от племето и е невиждано някой до сега да е успявал да го докосне, и още повече да го превърне в домашен любимец. Доста интересна концепция, която ми допадна наистина много.
Надявам се скоро да имаме още аудио книги от тази поредица, че и от предишната. Наистина страхотният дублаж е огромен плюс за една хубава история и тук останах доволна от всяка една част от книгата.
Definitely love the gargoyles theme, just a little irritated with the ***SPOILERS***whole slaves, breeders, and brides choice that these poor abducted ladies are stuck with. If females are truly so rare why are some wasted as “slaves”? Wouldn’t they be a protected class? At least for their uterus? 😠But maybe that’s a topic for a later book in the series, not to mention did some of them die on their forced walk to the village because of their weakness? How many of us would survive a midnight run in an alien jungle? I admired Yania, and how adorable is Tika? Jaxar seems to have a one track mind, but Makayla was strong and resilient.
I have enjoyed every book in this series but this one is my favorite. I liked Mikayla's personality in Morgan's book and I was really looking forward to her book. She did not disappoint and I am anxious to see if there will be more books in this series...I hope so. I fully recommend this book and the series as a whole.
Trop rapide. Tout est beaucoup trop rapide dans ce livre ! L'arrivée, la romance, l'acceptation du peuple... Bref, il y a très peu de développement et c'est dommage car il y a du potentiel. Je ne lirais pas les prochains tomes cependant donc je ne sais pas si je le recommanderais.
OMG, I was laughing at all the sarcastic humor between Mikayla and her alien king. This author has a unique sense of humor and good stories! I highly recommend this series!
I wanted to read something lighter and I found this book. And it was :) Initially I wanted to give it 3* but I read better books and rated them 3* also. So only 2* for now.
Speechless. This was fantastic and everything an alien/human romance should be. No wasted words or necessary scenes. Less than 200 pages but filled with action, romance, spice and found family.
Fated mates, size difference, unique alien culture/traditions, and love.
This author even includes footnotes for the language barrier which is the first time I’ve come across that. Amazing 🤌🏼
Although I have a feeling I missed something the way the story started made me feel like I started up on a new spin off of a different series they kept mentioning the Dravians but I don't know anything about them so I will have to look around see if I did miss something but other then that I loved the story the characters were awesome I highly recommend reading this
This is a spin off series but you don't have to read the original series to keep up. I still think the original series is my favorite but I did enjoy this book as well.