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Officially, Hermione Granger was killed in action during the Battle of Hogwarts. Unofficially, Draco Malfoy has never stopped searching for her. Years after the war during a mission in France, his salvation comes in the form of a little blond boy and a familiar half-Kneazle.

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1,219 reviews3,643 followers
July 25, 2022
✅ Characters
✅ Adorable moments
✅ Smut (not that much though)
✅ Cute romance
✅ Pace
✅ Funny moments
✅ Dramione family 💙
✅ 2 POVs
✅🆗 Plot

After being hit by an unknown curse and disappearing during the Battle of Hogwarts, Hermione is presumed dead. Draco never gave up hope of finding her though, since there was no body left behind, she just disappeared. Six years after the end of the war, Harry and Malfoy are both Aurors and partners, and Draco comes across someone in France who recognizes the picture of Hermione he’s been carrying with him to show wherever he is sent on missions. After meeting a little boy with white-blond hair and his cat who suspiciously looks like Crookshanks, Draco is devastated to find out that Hermione has no memories at all of what happened before she was hit by the curse. She doesn’t even know that she is a witch and that magic exists, so it’s up to Draco to make her fall in love with him again in hopes that she will finally gain back her memories.

I loved all of the Dramione I’ve read so far, but this version of Draco is so sweet and adorable. He spent the last 6 years hoping that the love of his life is still alive, and he never gave up on her. He’s even willing to pass as a muggle and leave the wizarding world behind if that’s what it takes to be with Hermione and their son. He is so devoted to them, it was heartwarming. I admit that I also have a big weakness when it comes to fictions with an adorable child involved. Seeing Draco and his son interact was soooooooo cute!

I would have loved to know more about how Draco and Hermione came to be together during the war. All we have are a few flashbacks that give us the very basics of their relationship, but nothing more. I am not a fan of flashbacks usually, but for this particular story, I think it would have been good to have more of them.

"Good then. Now, the next part might be even worse depending on how you look at it. Your father is a menace."
“Your hair is atrocious."
Harry's eyebrows shot up. "What?"
"I'm sorry. I thought we were stating things that we already knew were true." Whisky sloshed against the edge of his glass, burning a path down his throat.


I really like the idea of Malfoy and Harry being buddies, and even sharing a flat together. We don’t see them interact much as the story is focused on Draco and Hermione, but I really enjoyed the little I saw of them together.

Overall, the plot is quite simple and straightforward. It’s all about Draco trying to get Hermione to remember him, and her falling in love with him again, but it’s a fluffy and sweet fanfiction that’s a page-turner and a quick read.


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555 reviews7,134 followers
November 17, 2021
4 ⭐ Such a great Hermione memory loss story 😭

Word Count: 81,752 | Chapters: 21

Hermione Granger
1979 - 1997
Order of the Phoenix Member, Dumbledore's Army, Order of Merlin, First Class—posthumously.
"You've always been the best of me."



Summary:

Hermione disappeared during the Battle of Hogwarts and is presumed dead. However, Draco doesn't give up hope.

Six years later, on an Auror mission in France, he spots a young boy with blonde hair holding a half-kneazle that looks like Crookshanks. When the boy leads Draco home to his mother, he is elated to find Hermione but utterly devastated to learn she doesn't remember anything before six years ago.

Post War | Lost Love | Devoted Draco | Single Parent Hermione | Memory Loss | Romance | Angst | Mystery | HEA


My Thoughts:

I could not put this story down! The beginning is heart-wrenching, and there's a bit of angst, but don't worry, the ending is HEA (Happily-Ever-After). ❤️

The storyline was so unique and hooked me from Chapter 1. I mean, Hermione goes missing and is presumed dead, and then six years later Draco finds her in a small town with his son. . . COME ON! How could you stop reading????

This Draco has my heart. He spends six bloody years looking for the love of his life. And even when everyone tells him to move on, he doesn't give up hope. He is so in love with Hermione that it will make your heart ache. Like, why is he so perfect???? 😭 I am in love with Draco and his absolute devotion to Hermione and Scorpius. What he's willing to give up for them is the definition of love.

There's a bit of mystery in figuring out what exactly happened to Hermione and why she's lost her memories, but it was a tad predictable and wrapped up pretty quickly.

My only wish. . .

There should have been more flashbacks. It would have really helped the reader understand Draco's devotion to Hermione if we saw the development of their relationship during the war. Honestly, this would make for an amazing prequel!


Overall, it's a sweet and romantic Dramione fanfic with a bit of angst and mystery. Read this for all the feels. ❤️



My Current Dramione Fanfic Rankings

⭐ = Must-Reads
🌶️ = Best Smut


Novels (150,000+ words):

1. Manacled - SenLinYu ⭐
2. Remain Nameless - HeyJude19 ⭐🌶️
3. Cruel and Beautiful World - Lena Phoria
4. The Disappearances of Draco Malfoy - Speechwriter ⭐
5. Various Storms and Saints - ViridianAtNight
6. Isolation - Bex-Chan ⭐
7. Bring Him To His Knees - Musyc 🌶️
8. The Auction - LovesBitca8 ⭐
9. All You Want - SenLinYu 🌶️
10. Breath Mints / Battle Scars - Onyx_and_Elm 🌶️
11. The Right Thing To Do - LovesBitca8
12. Beginning and End - MightBeWriting
13. The Gloriana Set - ThebeMoon
14. All The Wrong Things - LovesBitca8
15. Hunted - Bex-Chan
16. The Fallout - EveryThursday (DNF)


Novellas (less than 150,000 words):

1. Hot For Teacher - MotherOfBulls ⭐🌶️
2. Apple Pies and Other Amends - ToEatAPeach ⭐
3. Thirteenth Night - Nelpher ⭐
4. Sex Ed - MrBenzedrine89 🌶️
5. Still Life - monsterleadmehome
6. A Second Look - RiverWriter
7. The Best Of Me - MrsRen
8. Silencio - AkashaTheKitty
9. Wait and Hope - MightBeWriting
10. Between Certifiable and Bliss - HeyJude19
11. Incomplete - Niffizzle
12. Love and Other Misfortunes - SenLinYu
13. An Indefinite Amount of Forever - MotherOfBulls (sequel)
14. Making Amends - slytherin_prince27
15. Proximate - In_Dreams
16. The List - AureliaBlack90
17. The Erised Effect - Ada_P_Rix


Short Stories (less than 50,000 words):

1. Best Shot - AccioMjolnir ⭐
2. The Library of Alexandria - SenLinYu ⭐
3. The First Rule of Fight Club… - LadyKenz347
4. Until The Ink Runs Dry & Indelible Ink - AccioMjolnir
5. Break For Me - Ada_P_Rix 🌶️
6. Call It What You Want - HawthorneWhisperer
7.Under The Wings of The Shadow - AccioMjolnir
8. The Watergaw - smokybaltic
9. Write For Me - Ada_P_Rix
10. Amateur Cartography - worksofstone
11. Blood Rights - uselessenglishmajor
12. Big Dick Energy - louiseob
13. Jammed - Ada_P_Rix
14. One and Done - PacificRimbaud


One Shots (less than 15,000 words):

1. Your Lonely Calls To Me - SenLinYu ⭐
2. The Unbearable Tedium of Romance - smokybaltic
3. For Her - dirtymudblood
4. Because You’ll Like it - BedtimeFantasies 🌶️
5. A Patient Man - LadyKenz347
6. Between Pages - DarkoftheMoon
7. An Unlikely Companion & An Unlikely Family - happy_valley
8. Potions, Perfume, and Apples - ellywolf111
9. Les Pelerins - PacificRumbaud
10. Like A Dagger To The Heart - hxllowsandhorcruxes
11. Fantasy - krissyxkat 🌶️
12. Head over Dragonhide Thigh High Heels - rubykrishna
13. Coming Down - nikitajobson and raven_maiden
14. A Matter of Practicality - OlivieBlake
15. Elevator - its_banannaz
16. Preface - ephemeraltoxic
17. Friends - poppyclocks
18. Familiar Faces, Worn Out Places - LovesBitca8
19. The Art of Seating Etiquette - inadaze22
20. Self-Preservation - SenLinYu
21. Height - SenLinYu
22. Minimal Risk - Galfoy
23. The Seduction - SenLinYu
24. Chasing For Keeps - In_Dreams
25. The Labyrinth - AccioMjolnir
26. Who Am I To You? - ViridianAtNight
27. Knee Socks - trix_of_bella
28. Quiver - Keii_sha
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555 reviews7,134 followers
July 29, 2021
4 ⭐ Such a great Hermione memory loss story 😭

Word Count: 81,752 | Chapters: 21

Hermione Granger
1979 - 1997
Order of the Phoenix Member, Dumbledore's Army, Order of Merlin, First Class—posthumously.
"You've always been the best of me."



Summary:

Hermione disappeared during the Battle of Hogwarts and is presumed dead. However, Draco doesn't give up hope.

Six years later, on an Auror mission in France, he spots a young boy with blonde hair holding a half-kneazle that looks like Crookshanks. When the boy leads Draco home to his mother, he is elated to find Hermione but utterly devastated to learn she doesn't remember anything before six years ago.

Post War | Lost Love | Devoted Draco | Single Parent Hermione | Memory Loss | Romance | Angst | Mystery | HEA


My Thoughts:

I could not put this story down! The beginning is heart-wrenching, and there's a bit of angst, but don't worry, the ending is HEA (Happily-Ever-After). ❤️

The storyline was so unique and hooked me from Chapter 1. I mean, Hermione goes missing and is presumed dead, and then six years later Draco finds her in a small town with his son. . . COME ON! How could you stop reading????

This Draco has my heart. He spends six bloody years looking for the love of his life. And even when everyone tells him to move on, he doesn't give up hope. He is so in love with Hermione that it will make your heart ache. Like, why is he so perfect???? 😭 I am in love with Draco and his absolute devotion to Hermione and Scorpius. What he's willing to give up for them is the definition of love.

There's a bit of mystery in figuring out what exactly happened to Hermione and why she's lost her memories, but it was a tad predictable and wrapped up pretty quickly.

My only wish. . .

There should have been more flashbacks. It would have really helped the reader understand Draco's devotion to Hermione if we saw the development of their relationship during the war. Honestly, this would make for an amazing prequel!


Overall, it's a sweet and romantic Dramione fanfic with a bit of angst and mystery. Read this for all the feels. ❤️



My Current Dramione Fanfic Rankings

⭐ = Must-Reads
🌶️ = Best Smut

Novels (150,000+ words):

1. Manacled - SenLinYu ⭐
2. Remain Nameless - HeyJude19 ⭐🌶️
3. Cruel and Beautiful World - Lena Phoria
4. Various Storms and Saints - ViridianAtNight
5. Isolation - Bex-Chan ⭐
6. Bring Him To His Knees - Musyc 🌶️
7. The Auction - LovesBitca8 ⭐
8. All You Want - SenLinYu 🌶️
9. Breath Mints / Battle Scars - Onyx_and_Elm 🌶️
10. The Right Thing To Do - LovesBitca8
11. Beginning and End - MightBeWriting
12. All The Wrong Things - LovesBitca8
13. Hunted - Bex-Chan
14. The Fallout - EveryThursday (DNF)


Novellas (less than 150,000 words):

1. Hot For Teacher - MotherOfBulls ⭐🌶️
2. Apple Pies and Other Amends - ToEatAPeach ⭐
3. Sex Ed - MrBenzedrine89 🌶️
4. Still Life - monsterleadmehome
5. The Best Of Me - MrsRen
6. Silencio - AkashaTheKitty
7. Wait and Hope - MightBeWriting
8. Love and Other Misfortunes - SenLinYu
9. An Indefinite Amount of Forever - MotherOfBulls (sequel)
10. Proximate - In_Dreams
11. The List - AureliaBlack90
12. The Erised Effect - Ada_P_Rix


Short Stories / One Shots (less than 50,000 words):

1. Best Shot - AccioMjolnir ⭐
2. The Library of Alexandria - SenLinYu ⭐
3. Your Lonely Calls To Me - SenLinYu / Avendell ⭐
4. Until The Ink Runs Dry & Indelible Ink - AccioMjolnir
5. Break For Me - Ada_P_Rix 🌶️
6. Like A Dagger To The Heart - hxllowsandhorcruxes
7. Blood Rights - uselessenglishmajor
8. Familiar Faces, Worn Out Places - LovesBitca8
9. The Art of Seating Etiquette - inadaze22
10. Self-Preservation - SenLinYu
11. Height - SenLinYu
12. Minimal Risk - Galfoy
13. Jammed - Ada_P_Rix
14. The Seduction - SenLinYu
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316 reviews44 followers
July 14, 2022
3.25☆

Cute story but it could've used more action and suspense.

There was a lot of potential for more of a plot; it would've been more exciting if Hermione and/or Scorpius were in danger. Instead, everyone was just going about their lives normally.

I was also hoping that either Hermione's doctor or Clara could be a villain but they were bland supporting actors who were there just to add to the number of characters in the story.

But! Despite all of what I've written above, this was still a cute story that I enjoyed to pass time.
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329 reviews33 followers
August 3, 2023
Ok so that was sweet. I really love a fierce and capable Draco. I am simply fond of fanfictions where one of them suffers from memory loss (preferably Hermione so Draco can grovel at her feet once more and make her fall in love with him twice). Scorpius is always a nice addition to this kind of story. He’s just so cute.

The plot surprised me more than once and it was nice. The writing is easy and pleasant to read.

193 pages, 81 752 words.
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315 reviews89 followers
August 28, 2022
A bit shorter than I like. I wish their past interactions in the safe house and how they got together was explored in more details rather than being mentioned briefly. Some parts of Draco scouring the cities in search for Hermione and the helplessness he felt would serve as a good prelude while he reminisced their past. The part about Scorpious having taken to liking Draco is incredibly sweet and endearing.
115 reviews
June 3, 2021
Really cute! The plot for the mystery could’ve been less predictable and would’ve loved to have seen more flashbacks of the war and how they got together but overall simple, sweet, and well written. Feel good fic.
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158 reviews5 followers
May 12, 2022
This was so cute and I loved it!

My biggest critique is that some parts felt super rushed, especially the ending.
June 7, 2025
★★★★☆ 3.5 out of 5 stars
Chapters: 21
Word Count: 81,752

Review:
I think this was super cuteee. I definally love that they are mature adults who actually communicate and don't allow the miscommunication troupe to flourish, because if I hate anything it's that.

I feel like some of the plot was just shoved in there and just completely brushed over instead of giving us the full story we needed. I think it could have used more chapters to go deeper into thing like the curse and what happened it the attack. I got really confused towards the end because she got attacked but we were never really told who did it?? The last couple chapters felt like it was just shoved in there because the author wanted to finish it.

Otherwise, I think this was super cute and for some reason I really like the "hidden child" (idk what it's properly called) troupe. Couldn't tell you why lol

I really loved the fluff and even though it had smut, it wasn't super detail and mostly had a fade to black aspect.

I absolutely SQUEALED when I realized Dracos patronus turned into a otter like Hermione's

Songs:
- Ghost of you- 5 seconds of summer
- The night we met- Lord Huron


Quotes: (I swore I had more written down but I don't know where they went 😭)

Draco might have avoided poker after the first time he'd been embarrassed by a six year old, but she could tell he Draco was holding back when it came to Monopoly.

Evidently, so could Scorpius. "You're not this dumb."

Draco choked on his tea. "I beg your pardon."

"Beg whatever you want," Scorpius fired back, organizing his properties. "I've landed on Boardwalk three times now!"
****

We always called each other by our surnames. We never got along in school. We always bickered. We fucking fought like mad when it got going. Potter thought we'd tear the house down sometimes, but fuck, there is nothing I've ever loved more than making up with you."
****

"Hermione, even if you forget, I'll still be here. I want you to know that. I'm always going to be here."

Hermione whimpered and tightened her grip on his hand. "Always? Sounds like rotten work."

"Not to me." Draco kissed her temple. "Not if it's you."
****

Wait! Mother, perhaps you might be able to mediate this discussion?"

"Mmm, no." Narcissa laughed quietly. "Whatever this was about, I'm going to go ahead and agree with Hermione."
****

Scorpius wanted me to tell you that he would like a little brother. He's rather sure he wants a brother and not a sister," Draco managed, and it was clear that this hadn't been the way he planned to bring it up as he mouthed an apology.

She giggled. "Maybe one day, okay?"

Scorpius grinned triumphantly. "Can I have my little brother for Christmas?"

"Erm," Draco rubbed the back of his neck. "Might be a bit late.
****
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134 reviews
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November 29, 2024
As a personal rule, I don't rate fanficfion.

Fan fiction is given for free with no editors in place. I don't believe it can be held to the same standard as a conventionally published story with original characters and a team of people. With that said, I did enjoy this story!
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24 reviews
September 25, 2025
idk, the ending felt kind of rushed and a lot of questions were kept unanswered (mr.&mrs. granger, clara, scorpius in hogwarts…)
but still: draco>>>
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1 review
July 11, 2024
In my opinion, this book is a distinct piece of work. It shows a different Draco that we are used to which caught immediately my attention. Hermione is sweet as always and has a little boy, Scorpios, who resembles both of them in many ways. I love how the three of them bounded from the very beginning. However, I wished there was more character development and I think the author could’ve explored further how they met and how they fell in love. Dramione is known for its hard relationships and this one diverges from what we are used to reading.
This book is easy to read and can turn into a quick read, great for when we can’t afford to be obsessed and addicted to a long and hard-to-read book. Also, even though there is some violence described in the book, it is a very soft and light story, good to detox from all of the toxicity that best portrays this kind of fanfictions. We have a happy family, Draco being best pals with Harry and most of all, someone lovely and respectful, a true gentleman.
Even though its plot may seem a bit obvious in some parts, I deeply recommend this work to everyone who wants to witness a good many helping a single mom who has been Obliviated. The cherry on top, really is he bonding with her son (who is also his son, but read so you can understand better).
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161 reviews
May 21, 2024
So, I already read this. But I don't remember when. It could most likely be around this time last year or earlier. But since I already read it, I skipped the first half and started it from 49%.

The angst was absolutely angsting. Probably the best one. Draco looked for her for six years, after he saw her vanish in a purple blast, and everyone would tell him that she was really gone. He didn't believe it once and I'm happy he didn't. He found her after all that time and he would do it again if he could spend that time with her.

Of course Scorpius was absolutely adorable. He was 5 in this fic, which meant, since he was the son of Hermione and Draco, he was smarter than a normal toddler. And I absolutely enjoyed it. This was probably the my first Scorpius fic. But I don't remember anymore so meh who knows.

But in the end this fic was utterly amazing. Bye now.
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287 reviews34 followers
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July 19, 2024
Draco Malfoy has been looking for Hermione Granger for 6 years after she disappeared from the battlefield in a haze of purple smoke.
He and Harry Potter get a lead somewhere in France and Draco is determined to follow it, though Harry isn’t so sure.
That is until a familiar orange half-Kneazle and said half-Kneazle’s little boy stumble into their lives. Draco is beyond excited to see Hermione again.
Until he learns that she remembers exactly nothing of him or her previous life.


We don’t rate fanfictions in this house because that is hella disrespectful to these authors that write for free in their free time. Thank you for coming to my TedTalk.
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449 reviews
October 2, 2024
“I love you. I’ve gone to the end of the world and back for you. Nothing means more to me than you and our son.”

This was cute. I love when there’s a story with little scorpious. I had just reread manacled so I wanted to read a lighter one. And this was light for the most part with a bit of dark undertones. I’m glad she got her memory back though, I was worried with how the story was going that she would not. And I liked that her and Draco and scorpious became a family even before she remembered.
Always I totally called it with Lucius cause he no bueno.
I love how scorpious is always a cute combination of malfoy and hermiones personalities.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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399 reviews5 followers
January 14, 2025
Sono molto contenta di aver letto questa fanfiction dopo aver visto un video su tiktok che ne parlava. È stata una lettura dolce, che mi ha sbloccato il blocco.

Nonostante mi sia piaciuta ritengo che sarebbe potuta essere strutturata meglio. A partire dalla seconda metà trovo che diversi momenti siano stati affrettati, per esempio c'è un momento di azione verso la fine che mi è sembrato sia durato tre paragrafi... non ho nemmeno fatto in tempo a "preoccuparmi". E con questo ci sono altri casi.

Inoltre avrei adorato se nella storia ci fossero stati più flashback su come Draco e Hermione si erano innamorati a Hogwarts, una sorta di doppia storia d'amore.
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623 reviews
July 24, 2025
3.5/5 ⭐️ I had just finished a Dramione inspired book (Brigitte Knightley’s new release) and was suddenly craving some Dramione fanfic angst - specifically one where they are parents (I know, a weirdly specific mood). This was exactly what I was looking for! A cute, angsty read that showed Draco trying to get to know Hermione, dealing with memory loss, again and his son. Seeing their family come together was so sweet, and I loved seeing Draco trying to get to know them slowly as a muggle. The plot and greater world wasn’t anything crazy, and I’ve definitely felt more for the characters in other fanfics. However, I had a great time with this one, and it hit the spot perfectly! 🫂👥🫅🏼☁️
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383 reviews106 followers
August 30, 2021
This was okay, but it's definitely one of the weaker fics I've read in terms of pacing and execution. I felt like things could have been less rushed at times and more drawn out - everything happened a bit fast overall. In addition, there were what I'd label as plot-holes throughout the entire fic. For example, although being set in France, speaking French was not discussed or mentioned even once. Everyone just seemingly spoke in English, which was strange thinking about it now. It was little things like this that ended up adding up in the end for me and brought it down in terms of rating.
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Author 4 books61 followers
March 24, 2023
Hermione Granger is killed in action during the battle of hogwarts but unofficially, Draco never stops searching for her. When one day after another lead Draco malfoy stumbles upon a little boy with white blonde hair, Draco’s life is flipped upside down.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💫/ 🌶️
This was so cute. I enjoyed this so much. Draco and Hermione are precious. I’d never pictured hermione being pregnant during the war, but now that I’ve read it, I can’t help but love it. This was precious and I’m content.
I swear I looked at the clock last and it was 11:15 pm…. It’s currently past 1 am. Love that for me.
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408 reviews21 followers
July 22, 2024
It was... fine.

It had its moments and a ver good start. Sadly, it felt too short and rushed at the end. And a little bit anticlimactic. The family dinamic was good but everything was moving very fast.

Anyways, Scorpius was well charactherized according to his age and I really enjoyed imagining the setting (but I'm not sure if it snows in France).

Gladly it was short, that made the interest remain throughout the chapters.

I liked it for what is was, a simple and cozy love story of my favorite ship.
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36 reviews3 followers
November 21, 2024
(2.5 stars i guess)
The book is alright but I would like it to be more in-depth. The idea behind the storyline is interesting but could have been more meaningful, like, more developed, idk I just would have explored it in a different way... What I'm trying to say is that this had pottencial to be more popular.
It's a lighter read than what I've been doing lately. It's the classic fanfiction style, very basic so, if you are into that style I'm sure this one is THE book
I wish I had enjoyed this more... there's nothing wrong with it it's just not my vibe
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954 reviews10 followers
July 29, 2021
4.5⭐️ Wow this was so good! There was so much heart break but it was a HEA ❤️ Lots of angst from Draco trying to track down Hermione and potentially fix her mind but also get to know Scorpius. It’s an AU where Draco turned before the end of the war and started a relationship with Hermione. Even though it was so good, it was on the verge of too much angst for me since Draco missed out on so much.
Worth the read?: YES
Reread?: NO
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11 reviews
April 18, 2024
2.5/3

This one really had potential but i was very disappointed by the final chapters. Everything seemed really rushed and made no sense. It gave me the impression that the author just wanted to write the end and finish the story no matter what. I did like the idea but i am pretty sure this could be much better.
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44 reviews
May 2, 2025
It’s hard to rate shorter stories on the same scale as novels. But here we are.

It was cute. Less than 100,000 words and I ate it up in one setting. Wish we could have seen more of their relationship before the battle and the hardships after FMC was attacked.

FMC was annoying. Just oblivious to the world and absolutely zero stranger danger.
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