"Absorbing and chilling...." reads the blurb, and "....thrilling finale". Oh good, I thought, a chilling, thrilling read.....
Something Bad happened to Adrian when he and Kirsty and their two girls lived in London, so never having run a business before, they decide to buy an almost derelict property in Wales and, once refurbished, open it as a B&B. Why? Because Kirsty is Welsh and loves Wales. What better reason could there be. So this is Mistake Number One. Asking Kirsty's domineering and controlling mother for a loan is Mistake Number Two, thus allowing her to move in and be a not-so-silent partner. Mistake Number Three is letting Kirsty''s cousin Selena, a woman she hates and hasn't spoken to for seventeen years, to come and stay.
Kirsty whinges and whines her way through the part of the book I've managed to read. Her teenage daughter sulks, the younger one sleepwalks, her mother is a control freak, always critical of Kirsty and often leaves her to do all the work. Selena arrives and Adrian obviously has more than one eye on her. Will it never end? Oh, and then there's the fact that this house cannot ever be their own because - it's a Bed and Breakfast silly, with strangers wandering in and out, and sleeping in the bedrooms which have all been named, nauseatingly after flowers. She can't even watch Strictly Come Prancing because the telly's in the living room which is occupied by the guests. Could things get any worse? Well yes, actually, because the first guest, Janice, detects some sort of "unrest" within the house. And then Selena's sickly daughter is taken ill.....
I can't go on. Really I can't. Between Kirsty and her whingeing, and the oh so poor writing, and the author treating me like a child and explaining every little detail, such as why Insect day becomes a standing joke for the school's Inset Day. And this:
"..........It has two beds that can either be zipped together to make a double, or separated to make two singles......" Really? Is that how those beds work?
I'm a grown-up - I don't need this sort of explanation.
The structure is confusing as within Part One the timeline hops back and forth, the dialogue is cheesy and the characters are the usual flat, predictable cardboard cutouts, with thumping hearts, and gasping breaths. The author constantly alludes to the Bad Thing That Happened to Adrian, and The Lie Selena told, but she doesn't spit it out. This is obviously her way of trying to keep us guessing by building tension. It fails.
Mistake Number Four? My attempt to read yet another of Ms Douglas's novels. Well, I do like to give the benefit of the doubt, but that's it - no more. I've almost reached my one third place and I give up as this is truly, truly awful
My thanks to Netgalley, without whose free download I would not have known how consistently awful Ms Douglas's books are.