A little spiritless.
PNR that is low on both the paranormal, and the romance.
I was disappointed by this book. It started off with a bang, literally, then fizzled out, with a halfhearted attempt to revive it at the end.
The book begins with the main characters Josh and Ewan having a one night stand. Not my preferred way for a relationship to start, and there is the dreaded conversation about not needing to use condoms as they’re both on PrEP - enjoy the gonorrhea boys! However, it is mostly fade to black and at least started the book off with a bit of energy.
This is continued into the next day as Josh rushes off to a job interview that is hijacked by a ghost. I thought “Yes! We’re in for some laughs here!”
However, things went swiftly downhill as soon as Josh got to the Mannix Estate. Josh is unreasonably rude to Ewan, and even after that is cleared up, there is a distinct lack of warmth between them. For more than half of the book there is no relationship development at all. I wouldn’t even call them friends, just work colleagues. The sex scenes continue to mostly fade to black, and are kind of cold.
The comedy potential of the ghosts is lost too. Aside from walking through a few walls, it’s easy to forget that they’re even ghosts. Just like the rest of us, they’re tired and a little miserable.
At about 70% in, you blink and suddenly Josh and Ewan are a loved up couple. They are very cute, but it’s disorientating with almost no lead-up to it. I have always had trouble with the romance aspect of Louisa Masters’ books, however the overall story arc, comedy, group dynamic and worldbuilding in the Hidden Species series was more than enough to keep me reading.
The paranormal aspect of this book is not satisfying if you are a fan of the genre. The whole storyline is predicated on the ghost’s tale, and Josh having a funny feeling when he walked past the basement door once. There were no signs whatsoever that there was a terrible menace threatening to befall them. There’s a lot of tell-not-show which I really dislike in books: the ghosts telling their story, Josh and Ewan telling us what must have happened through putting their interpretation on that lady’s diary, the rando on the internet telling Josh how to deal with the situation.
I was equally prepared for them to find that there was nothing there (that at least would have given me a laugh) as I was for them all to be killed. Blindly following the instructions of some random person on the internet was also strange. There’s a flurry of activity towards the end of the book as they deal with the menace, but I was far too disinterested by this point to care what the outcome was.
I feel this would have done better as a series prequel of half the length since there’s very little content or worldbuilding. The only draw to continue the series is wondering whether Skye will land Daniel, but I doubt that will be enough to keep me reading.
I listened to the audiobook, and Nick J. Russo did an outstanding job, definitely a 5 star narration. Somehow I haven’t listened to him before, but I will look forward to diving into his back catalogue as I seem to have many of his narrations on my wishlist!