On her 16th birthday, Lana’s older brother and the king of Alphas held the annual Alpha meeting. Lana hates all things to do with Alphas, having grown up under her mother’s reign and meeting plenty of Alphas, she longed to be normal. When the meeting is held, she has a run-in with Alpha Tate who declares she is his mate and he refuses to leave without her, but little does she know things were about to get stranger when not only one Alpha declares her as their mate, but a second comes forward claiming the same thing.
Alpha Drake is from a rival Pack and hates Alpha Tate. Not only does she learn she has a mate but discovers she has two and both men hate each other. Now she has to choose. There is just one catch, Lana is a hybrid. So, without a wolf, she can’t recognize a mate bond and now she must choose whom to believe and they must try to win her over. Lana finds herself stuck between two Alpha’s who hate each but they have a secret of their own, one they don’t want her to find out. Will Lana be able to navigate through their web of lies and the secrets they try to hide, or will she walk away from both of them and find a way to break the bonds that tie her?
Jessica Hall is an award-winning and internationally best-selling author with over 64 books; 55 of those books are on Amazon Kindle. She is an award-winning author on numerous apps like iReader, KISS, Dreame, and AlphaNovel. Jessica Hall primarily writes Dark Paranormal Romance and Why Choose Romance Books. She lives in NSW, Australia, with her husband and 5 children.
The story itself is good. Quick read, with good “spice”. The character development isn’t excellent, and all 3 main characters are a little all over the place. I can get past all of that…because I liked story. But lord…I can’t tell you how many times I had to reread a paragraph because the punctuation was so poor. Sometimes I can’t even tell who is speaking because it all runs together. There are even examples of the author referring to Lily’s kids as Lana’s nice and nephew ( which I thought..ok…maybe that makes sense since Aria was more of a mother to Lily than a sister) then a chapter later the author refers to Lily’s kids as Lana’s cousins. Later in the book, the author accidentally refers to Lana as Lily. I gave it 4 stars because I’m enjoying this series…but can someone please get this author an editor ?!?!
Great continuation of the storyline, but there are so many misspellings and grammatical errors, it nearly made parts unreadable. There was a bit of repetitive dialog between one POV and another too. Completely unnecessary.
Great book! However, whomever proof reads these should do better. Several times they mixed Lana and Ariel and Chase and Nate. When reading it is rather annoying to feel confused or as you have missed something to go back a bit just to realize it wasnt you at all. It also sucks when you have paid for the book to have these issues and multiple spots with incorrect spelling.
Overall this is the 3rd book in this series and it was great. Definitely recommend this series. Hard to put down!
Honestly loved this book a real page turner. The only reason I have marked it down is because some of the grammar is off and in some places the wrong names are written. I did really enjoy this book so please don't allow that to put you off.
Least favourite so far due to editing errors. Which twin is which? Sometimes not even the story is sure. The story line itself was alright, pretty predictable, though. Here's to the last book in the series.
I didn't care for the characters. It seems that most of them are underdeveloped. They truly have potential. They writing isn't bad at all, just lacking in depth feeling and emotional connection. They go from extremely abusive to having sex.
I am excited to read the next book in the series. It has been great to see how the characters have grown. Since the beginning you see how each one finds it’s own path. I enjoyed the evolution of the characters so far.
The whole series was a good read, 4/5 because it could use a little more editing for grammar and the names are mixed up a bit when multiple characters are talking to each other. But the storyline is great
The author went an interesting route with the chatacters. It was sad on so many levels but I'm happy that the male protagonists had a satisfying end to their story
So much better than the second book. It has those anoying habits as well but it was soo much better. Ill keep saying it, the second book SUCKS! This one really made the series go up a little bit more to me.
But really, Jess, you should try and read this book again. English is not my first language and even I can see all the grammatical errors and all the times Lana was reffering to Arial as Lana lol I was soo confused the first time it happened. It was kinda sad to see it kept happening all along, almost every time they were together.
One thing I didnt liked was that the twins wanted something so different to their lives at first and then they totally forgot. For example, Arial wanted to travel and become a doctor...but then she wanted to have kids and stuff?? That anoys me in every story of yours, not that is wrong but for once I would love a lead couple that the mate totally respects the fact that the other wanted to live more than just being "in love" and then have children. I dont know, something more like a really new generation. But oh well, as long as the plot is good.