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Okay, But Try Not to Murder Anyone #3
Okay, But Try Not to Murder Anyone 3
Life has been crazy ever since I found an ancient pair of magical cuffs that allow me to absorb and redirect kinetic energy.
I’ve taken down a mob boss, caught a copy-cat serial killer, and won the affections of not just one, but two, badass women. Maybe even three.
But my work’s not nearly done yet.
I still have the real Sigil Killer to catch, and the Black Market group continues to lurk in the shadows.
I’ve taken down a mob boss, caught a copy-cat serial killer, and won the affections of not just one, but two, badass women. Maybe even three.
But my work’s not nearly done yet.
I still have the real Sigil Killer to catch, and the Black Market group continues to lurk in the shadows.
- GenresHaremUrban Fantasy
387 pages, Kindle Edition
Published February 18, 2022
68 people are currently reading
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Eric Vall
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February 25, 2022
What Happened?
Started out REALLY liking the story and the MC through the first two books, but thinking I may have to re-evaluate; in this installment the MC alternates between the likable MC of the first row installments and bouts of being smirky, smarmy, and oh-so-full-of-themselves. That’s fine, if an unlikable MC is the intent, but it wears pretty thin pretty quickly for a ‘super powered, good-guy’ MC who struggles to hit the broad side of a barn and is regularly knocked on his arse by the lowest-level opponents when they “surprise” him in a scuffle, and walks in to every battle being a wisea$$.
I dunno. I still really enjoy other aspects of this story, but the writing around the MC in this installment seems shallow and one-dimensional, and it drags down the rest of the story. Maybe OK BlahBlahBlahBlah Murder isn’t for me.
Started out REALLY liking the story and the MC through the first two books, but thinking I may have to re-evaluate; in this installment the MC alternates between the likable MC of the first row installments and bouts of being smirky, smarmy, and oh-so-full-of-themselves. That’s fine, if an unlikable MC is the intent, but it wears pretty thin pretty quickly for a ‘super powered, good-guy’ MC who struggles to hit the broad side of a barn and is regularly knocked on his arse by the lowest-level opponents when they “surprise” him in a scuffle, and walks in to every battle being a wisea$$.
I dunno. I still really enjoy other aspects of this story, but the writing around the MC in this installment seems shallow and one-dimensional, and it drags down the rest of the story. Maybe OK BlahBlahBlahBlah Murder isn’t for me.
February 25, 2022
Story wise this is one of Eric's best series. A good police/detective novel with elements of the supernatural. Alas the sub par effort to keep it the erotica genre spoils the net result. "boy and girl have opportunity, boy grabs T&A, boy licks girl to orgasm, boy enters and thrust to another girl orgasm, change position, continue thrusting to mutual orgasm." That simple sentence is the entire content of 6 separate scenes of approximately 3.5 pages each, almost 10 % of the book. Its repetitive, ultimately boring and reduces the literary quality. Be warned.
February 23, 2022
Unique, thrilling and brilliant to read!
Eric Vall has a penchant for the unique and interesting world building in his books and this series lives up to the reputation.
Thrilling, exciting and full of weirdness, mad cults and a serial killer with paranormal abilities, it keeps you on the edge of your seat right to the end!
Looking forward to more!
Eric Vall has a penchant for the unique and interesting world building in his books and this series lives up to the reputation.
Thrilling, exciting and full of weirdness, mad cults and a serial killer with paranormal abilities, it keeps you on the edge of your seat right to the end!
Looking forward to more!
July 21, 2022
I must admit I often skip the sex chapters as I'm more interested in the plot, and I enjoyed this book a lot, but there are some little plot holes... Why didn't the team use radios in the first raid? They had them for the copy-cat and the second raid. Why are they going to look for another condo when Laura already has a the awesome penthouse with plenty of bedrooms and bathrooms?
February 20, 2022
Way too good
An awesome new chapter to the story. This is an amazing book that really makes me think back to the old noir detective novels I read when I was young. Can't wait to see what happens next.
An awesome new chapter to the story. This is an amazing book that really makes me think back to the old noir detective novels I read when I was young. Can't wait to see what happens next.
February 25, 2022
Supernatural crime and punishment
This was a phenomenal read the story is fast paced with a great premise! The characters are really engaging and leave you rooting for them at every turn! I eagerly await the next in the series!
This was a phenomenal read the story is fast paced with a great premise! The characters are really engaging and leave you rooting for them at every turn! I eagerly await the next in the series!
March 9, 2022
Great
Truly enjoyed this work. It is both over the top and each character is well fleshed out.qonderful distraction from the world we now live in. Keep writing them and I'll keep reading
Truly enjoyed this work. It is both over the top and each character is well fleshed out.qonderful distraction from the world we now live in. Keep writing them and I'll keep reading
March 13, 2022
Amazing!
It took a little bit for me to get around to reading this series but it's so good, lots of opportunity for the story to evolve and dig into and the girls are so diverse. Can't wait for more!
It took a little bit for me to get around to reading this series but it's so good, lots of opportunity for the story to evolve and dig into and the girls are so diverse. Can't wait for more!
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March 14, 2022Wow a heck of a page Turner
I didn't want to put it down. I am excited to see what happens in the next book. I loved the character development and the action kept me reading long after I should have put the book down for the night.
I didn't want to put it down. I am excited to see what happens in the next book. I loved the character development and the action kept me reading long after I should have put the book down for the night.
March 23, 2022
Great wrap up for now
Loved how the story goes and love all the characters my only complaint is turkey bacon ..... No that's just wrong on so many levels..... Kind of lost a little bit of love for you man .
Loved how the story goes and love all the characters my only complaint is turkey bacon ..... No that's just wrong on so many levels..... Kind of lost a little bit of love for you man .
March 26, 2022
Interesting Series
This is an amazing series. Jonah and the girls track down the cult members and killer. Fast paced adventure with spice that keeps you turning pages as the chase powerful artifacts on the black market. Looking forward to the next installment!
This is an amazing series. Jonah and the girls track down the cult members and killer. Fast paced adventure with spice that keeps you turning pages as the chase powerful artifacts on the black market. Looking forward to the next installment!
April 11, 2022
Is history truly what we know?
A good time read. Twist after twist with finally a end in sight. Growing good relationships with people is nice to see. Even with idiots blocking progress.
A good time read. Twist after twist with finally a end in sight. Growing good relationships with people is nice to see. Even with idiots blocking progress.
February 20, 2022
Awesome story
I am enjoying this awesome fun sexy adventure of Johan and his growing harem of ladies as they track down the killer.
I am enjoying this awesome fun sexy adventure of Johan and his growing harem of ladies as they track down the killer.
February 21, 2022
Excellent!
Fantastic read! I absolutely loved it! I can not wait for the next one to be release! Such great characters in this book!
Fantastic read! I absolutely loved it! I can not wait for the next one to be release! Such great characters in this book!
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February 23, 2022Awesome
Great addition to a great series. Love how they took down the sigil killer and his cult. I am looking forward to the next book
Great addition to a great series. Love how they took down the sigil killer and his cult. I am looking forward to the next book
February 24, 2022
Good One
Like the story, characters and the humor. Just me but I don't need the extended harem pages, some necessary for a certain level of reader I guess.
Like the story, characters and the humor. Just me but I don't need the extended harem pages, some necessary for a certain level of reader I guess.
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March 8, 2022Earings?
Will he put on earrings and get more powers or spread them out to the team? Dark and light powers together! What should the necklace do?
Will he put on earrings and get more powers or spread them out to the team? Dark and light powers together! What should the necklace do?
April 17, 2022
Wait, this was number three?!?
Wow, so I managed to forget that this was number three. That is because this one is vivid and fun. Easy to get lost in the series.
TTFN!
Will
Wow, so I managed to forget that this was number three. That is because this one is vivid and fun. Easy to get lost in the series.
TTFN!
Will
May 2, 2022
Okay, what's next?
I love the fact that the MC was able to stop the second killer as well as getting the girl he should of been with to start
I love the fact that the MC was able to stop the second killer as well as getting the girl he should of been with to start
July 23, 2022
Great action
Story good, action of all kinds hot. Villains bad, what else.do you want from a story? Just.buy the book or read it on kindle unlimited
Story good, action of all kinds hot. Villains bad, what else.do you want from a story? Just.buy the book or read it on kindle unlimited
August 5, 2022
Good Book
I liked it anyway, I hope you do as well. Book 3 and still going strong. I hope it runs a long time.
I liked it anyway, I hope you do as well. Book 3 and still going strong. I hope it runs a long time.
November 13, 2022
Wonderful continuation
Wonderful continuation of the story. The use of the different people and places keeps you very well Interested in the upcoming additions
Wonderful continuation of the story. The use of the different people and places keeps you very well Interested in the upcoming additions
February 27, 2022
Okay,But Try Not To Murder Anyone 3
These books are a great series of books by Mr. Vall. They are established in modern day with a few twists. Can't wait until the next one is here.
These books are a great series of books by Mr. Vall. They are established in modern day with a few twists. Can't wait until the next one is here.
November 26, 2022
The writer has thrown any semblance of realism or story right out the window. Too interested in writing sex scenes than creating a story with sex. Just feels low effort and lacking any depth.
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