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A Devil Dies Tonight

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A short fiction work of horror that finds a teenager making a deal with the devil. But was it worth it? And who really is the devil?

15 pages, Kindle Edition

Published February 19, 2022

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Profile Image for Zain.
1,910 reviews293 followers
December 14, 2023
Surprisingly Wonderful!

This is a fantastic little story that I just finished. I picked it up from Amazon a few days ago.

A teenager who is suffering from depression and who has chronic bullying terrorizing him, makes a deal with the devil.

Things go as they are expected.

Five stars. ✨✨✨✨✨
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February 23, 2022
I really enjoyed this story about a teenager who is bullied at school because of his weight. Things turn dark when someone makes him an offer he can’t refuse. I felt for the main character with all he was dealing with and the author did a great job with conveying his emotions in this short story. The ending was fantastic!
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January 8, 2024
He didn’t want the mirror to defog, because he didn’t want to see himself again; he only wanted to look if the person in the mirror was a fraction of himself and not the abomination he thought he saw mere moments before.


Brandon is severely depressed. He has gained a lot of weight, and it’s gotten even worse since his father passed away.

Brandon endures brutal teasing and bullying in high school. He is constantly hassled about his weight—particularly his “man boobs.” His medications increase his appetite.

Brandon’s mother works a lot of hours to provide for the both of them, especially since they’re now a single-income household.

The voice from the darkness…the man…the visions…He knows so many things. A deal is struck.

The three wishes…the head…

Well, damn. That’s one vicious ending.


“Now, little one, I was only trying to help. Do you still want my help?”
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