Smitten

by Ali Rivers

Unknown Binding

Reviews

[Killayne Kennedy · Rating 3 out of 5]

After reading the “Attraction” series, this new storyline is going down a faster path. I’m starting to see more showing than telling, so I’m not totally drowning in narration, and with the short story format, the physical romance angle is beginning sooner. There are some pretty clear tense shift issues, and also some oddities of language that are disruptive to the fluency. For example, men that are vocally explicit in what they want their women to do or think about the body in more graphic terms typically don’t say “Gosh,” women don’t wear gowns during the daytime hours, and some of the idiomatic expressions are really forced, particularly when a contraction would be more appropriate. This is a style issue that would work itself out with more experience. Perhaps even slowing down the speed of material being turned out and taking more time with the editing process.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[casvec · Rating 5 out of 5]

Work may come first for Mark, but when he gets into a fight with his sisters, a walk is what he needs to change his life. Katherine is still in school; she has her routine and one of that was coming to a small bar. When she walks in, she did not realize the man you take her on an amazing journey.

This is a fast and steamy story, where love comes out of know where and holds on tight. Mark is struggling with what his head is saying and what his heart wants, but when he decides there is no stopping him. Hot sizzling chemistry and passion that melts your kindle, the is a great quick read.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[Brenda Moser · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is a short,fast paced story with tons of steam. The author brings strong characters,gives them an instant attraction and hot chemistry and takes them on a whirlwind romance. It's well written,moves quickly and smoothly and I enjoyed reading.

I voluntarily reviewed an ARC of this book. All opinions in this review are my own and freely given.

[Maja · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was a short story I read in one sitting. I enjoyed the story, however the reason I gave it four stars is because it was written in the third person point of view which is a deal breaker for me.

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[Lizette Diaz · Rating 5 out of 5]

Mark has a lot on his plate and after a fight with his sister he heads to a var where he meets Katherine. She shows him how to live in the moment and he starts to live when he realizes there is so much more to life. Their story was absolutely perfect and I truly can't wait for more stories.

[Kathleen Bradbury (Bulfon) · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book, is entertaining, action packed, and thoroughly enjoyable. The chemistry between the characters is wonderful. I can't wait for more from this author.

[Nate · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was an action-packed read. I got a copy of the book. And am voluntarily leaving my review.