Rating: minus 2 on a scale of minus five to plus five. I am doing yet another rewrite of an original review to clarify my writing. Annoying hateful Goodreads idiots is a bonus.
Before I begin, I must recharge my enthusiasm with a YouTube visit. This review was made possible by Doctor Who/They Break My Heart - RecklessGirl100, Lily Simpson, LuckyBlackCat, ScaredKetchup, Willow Talks Books, Sailing Melody, Kris Atomic, Red Glasgow, Lena Down Under, Riverboat Jack, kgb detected, aidan knight, Biz, Don't F@ck With Ukraine, Leeja Miller, Shades of Orange, Outlaw Bookseller, Subha Reads, A Cosy Creative, Authentic Observer, Reads with Rachel, Hardy's Books, The Brothers Gwynne, Jean's Thoughts, Lily Alexandre, Owen Jones, Keffals, PPR Mundial, KernowDamo, Sakhalia Net, Operator Starsky, Real Time History, Kings and Generals, Anna from Ukraine, Ukraine Calling, Boat Time, Northern Narrowboaters, Narrowboat Pirate, Lily Simpson, Just in Time Worldbuilding, Kyiv Independent, Matriarchetype, Ukraine:The Latest, The Confused Adipose, Fit 2B Read, BobbyBroccoli, Wednesday Addams -Paint it Black, Tom Powell, Reese Waters, Jen the Librarian, Acollierastro, NFKRZ, Lena Petrova, Unlearning Economics, Rats That Enable, Silicon Curtain, Truth to Power, The Queer Kiwi, Queen Coke Francis, Skyscraper Museum, Lynn Saga, Sweet but Psycho, Kady 2.0, Scottish Independence Podcast, Dan Davis History, Military History Visualized, Dungeons and Discourse, Ministry of Miniatures, Military Aviation History, Erutan, Drop It Like Spock, Kyiv Independent, Cruising Crafts, Nomadic Crobot, Turn Left, Econ Lessons, Think Ukraine, Yanis Varoufakis, Today I Found Out, Bobbing Along, Ben and Emily, Kimberly Reads, Miranda Mills, A Sunny Book Nook, AuroraTrek, Combat Veteran Reacts, Wednesday Addams -Safety Dance, A Very Casual Librarian, Mom on the Spectrum, ThePrimeChronus, Radio Retrofuture, Fantasy and World Music by the Fletchers, Verilybitchie, Eugenia from Ukraine, EssenceOfThought, Philosophy Tube, Songs Sped Up, Rick the Ukrainian, France24, Steve Shives, Venom Geek Media, Scott Bradlee's Postmodern Jukebox, Jessica Kellgren Fozard, CBC News, The Military Show, Artur Rehi, Dr Ben Miles, Michael Lambert, Roads with Belle, Jessie Gender, Roisin's Reading, Well Deck Diaries, Cruising Alba, Girl Gone London, Geo Girl, A Clockwork Reader, Roughest Drafts, Don't Fret, Sumatha Reads, Yoyomi, Irish Myths, Gracey D, Claus Kellerman POV, Reese Waters, Agro Squirrel Narrates, Parkrose Permaculture, I've Had It, SiegeMental, Dr Ben Miles, Paul Warburg, Clouds and Sky, Wes O'Donnell, Historical Africa, Nicole Chilaka-Ukpo, RevolutionarythOt, Andrewism, Grace McGuire, Mythic Concept, Britta Bohler, NerdForge, Mercado Media, PPR Mundial, Anka Daily News, Shannon Makes, Hat Historian, Bernadette Banner, Caolan Robertson, Debs Unfiltered, FAFO, The Historian's Craft.
One idiot whilst attacking a trans woman essayist complained to her that I included trans women creators among the channels I mention. It no longer amazes me how unselfaware US males can be. To that Idiot and his ilk, be aware that the channels which I mention include primatologist, cis, anthropologist, gay, WOC, Irish, het, physicist, science communicator, bi, archaeologist, psychologist, trans, Scottish, economist, older, intersex, book tuber, linguist, German, boater, gamer and other female creators or as the sane refer to them Women. Almost as disturbing are channels which include the other BIPOC, anarchist, fashion historian, redhead, Canadian, communist, physicist, other LGBTQ+, mathematician, Danish, socialist, archaeologist, modeller, Australian and others or as the healthily socialised refer to them Human Beings. If the voices still drive you to seek these out, seek emergency therapy, take up a hobby (not to include assaulting women, which is mental illness) or apply for our Catholic exorcism. My feelings towards these arrogant morons are similar to that of the 13 Ukrainian marines defending Snake Island, when their surrender was demanded by the Russian navy. Their response was "Russian warship, go f@ck yourself." Glory to Ukraine. Glory to the Heroes. Crimea is Ukraine.
The writing is uneven. Her prose is solid. Where she placed her attention characters and description were good. Where it slipped characters, description and plot suffered.
The great weakness is the deficiency in worldbuilding. Because of the holes in and general vagueness of the background, characters were often emotionless, reactions and plot points seemed disjointed.
The society is a sketch of 17th or 18th century Scotland in an alternate world dominated by wizards. Wizards have no responsibilities it seems, other than to terrorise the population and murder women who give birth to wizards. An article of faith is that women do not possess magic, therefore women who possess magic are also murdered? There is no governmental structure and so no one to maintain the roads, dispose of waste, provide emergency services, maintain sanitation, provide medical care, policing, collect taxes even. The economics are a black box. The class divisions are never discussed.
It is mentioned in passing that the town is part of a larger polity "organised" in a similar fashion. This is a sad representation of a feudal society. There are more story elements which make little sense to me but I am not invested enough to bother to list them.
I need a stepaway to reset my mood. This next was courtesy of YouTube's M -The Ritual Kitchen with Laura May, The Norse Witch, Diary of a Ditch Witch, Narrowboat, Serena Skybourne, Hej Sokoly -Eileen, The Queer Kiwi, Jack Edwards, ScaredKetchup, Supertanskiii, Lily Simpson, Shitty Book Club, CTV, Eva Schubert, Gutsick Gibbon, Read Rant Review, The Council of Geeks, The Life Guide, Cindy's Villa, Guard the Leaf, Mom on the Spectrum, Queen Penguin, Nikki Carreon, The New Enlightenment, declassified UK, FPR Global, DW2012, Aid Thompsin, AllShorts, Kyiv Post, Ukraine Matters, Horses, HBomberGuy, James Tullos, Elyse Myers, Jean's Thoughts, Quinn's Ideas, Andrew's Wizardly Reads, Princess Weekes, Tibees, Angela Collier, Dr Fatima physicist, Dark Brandon, Jay Exci, James Tullos, Think that Through, UATV, Central Crossing, Verilybitchie, Fundie Fridays, Ukraine Matters, It's Black Friday, Reads with Rachel, The Great War, Terrible Writing Advice, It ain't half hot mum, Military Aviation History, Veritas et Caritas, Kat Blacque, DW News, The Bands of HM Royal Marines, Processor Gerdes Explains, Friendly Atheist, Ukraine Today, Alex Fleev, Mythology and Fiction Explained, A Clockwork Reader, Shades of Orange, United 24, Xiran Jay Zhao, Raw News and Politics, Political CUSTARD, Knowing Better, Gabi Belle, Ember Green, Prose and Petticoats, Evie Lupine, Foster on the Spectrum, Fun Size Reader, Ian Gubeli, Hoots, Books and Things, Skip Intro, Lexi aka NewlyNova, Self Publishing Central, The Welsh Viking, Savy Writes Books, Steve Shives, Keffals, Kathy's Flog in France, Angelisa Reads, CriminOlly, Yoyomi, Ukraine Matters, D'Angelo, Brandon Fisichella, Amie's Literary Empire, Kazachka, Atun Shei Films, Wizards and Warriors, Dungeons and Discourse, DUST, Mandy, Tale Foundry, Candlelit Tales, The Grungeon Master, Living Anachronism, Radio Retrofuture, Deerstalker Pictures, Riverboat Jack, Weirdo Book Club, 3rd Regiment SOF, Professor Tim Wilson, Don't F@ck with Ukraine, OrangeRiver, Jessie Gender.
I also watched KAOS, Kim's Convenience, Dark Winds, Landscape with Invisible Hand, Kath and Kim.
The absence of elves, dwarves, trolls and others are noticeable and a shame. These beings exist in her wider universe in sufficient numbers as to be major characters in other books. Her descriptions can be first rate and almost distract from the world building problems and the major character decisions and actions. It was not her best book and the breezy first and last chapters sandwich a dark story with all its flaws. She devoted little thought to background universe, the various interactions and in place of plot created a loosely logical string of interesting scenes instead.
Current US speculative fiction sometimes seem to have only four categories: the Serviceable; the Low Effort; the Minimal Effort; the No Effort. Very little of the Kindle collection do not fall into the latter three categories. If you find a book in the first category, the natural inclination is to hold it close to the bosom, lest the gods snatch it away. I believe that acceptance of the substandard, leads to erosion of the ability to discriminate between good, mediocre and Godawful. Current US publishers and writers have had a negative global impact on the genre, I think. It is sad that this was not always true. My disappointment with loan options led me to end my Unlimited sub.
I found myself applauding books, whose main virtues were no misspellings, avoidance of word misuse, no overtly racist/sexist dialogue, no plot holes, no contrivance as plot driver, no uninspired use of language, no poor world building. The YA label being applied to adult science fiction puzzled me at the start. The average reader level for romance is the eleven years old and for science fiction seems to be ten years. That judgement is based on my 1000+ attempts at Kindle loans science fiction.
Consider treating this as a potentially hostile site. 🤔
Goodreads discourse does not exist. As example, I wrote a short negative review of Powers of the Earth, a poorly written, juvenile salute to the psychotic January 6,2021 hero. The writer Travis Corcoran self-described as libertarian and vocal advocate for the return of chattel slavery, veteran, employee of an unnamed US agency and admirer of Putin. Truly a MAGA exemplar.
I found the premise of a newly wealthy twat enrolling the military to overthrow the US government in order to not pay taxes on his inheritance to be dangerous and unhealthy. The theme is incredibly popular in the Kindle library. The writer and six fellow patriots took exception to my opinion. There followed a year long demand that I respond to their unhinged comments. My refusal to engage was labelled narcissistic.
The final comment was delivered by Claes Rees Jr aka cgr710 now ka Clayton R Jesse Jr who no longer identifies as Nazi, it seems. He grandly declared that They had "won" (?). I discovered that They had launched a year long deluge of vile sexual, racist and anti-LGBTQ I attacks against it seems, every channel which I mentioned and continues still. While They failed to impress the physicist, boater, archaeologist, historian or other female creators, They certainly increased the globe's overabundance of ugliness. In addition They also delivered a splendid self-portrait of the snowflake (stupidly vicious US man-child) to a multinational audience. I imagine this was Their Victory. Goodreads discourse, Yay ?? USA, Yay ??
I wandered onto YouTube for science fiction commentary. From there I stumbled upon the book channels. 😍 BookTube include a variety of reader communities, which are home to readers curious, thoughtful and most of all who love all aspects of the the bookish experience. These are far different to the Goodreads environment.
Another reset is needed. This next was made possible by YouTube channels - Russian Media Monitor, The New Enlightenment with Ashley, Kanal 13, Probably Off Reading, With Cindy, EarleWrites, Female Warriors -Teresatessa, Nomadic Crobot, Natasha's Adventures, Red Viburnam Song, Ship Happens, Yugopnik, Honest Government Ads, Well Deck Diaries, Winging it on a Budget, Cossack and Caucasus Sword Dance, Rachel Oates, D'Angelo, Times Radio, Haley Pham, The Book Leo, Emma Thorne, Girls Rock Asia, Caspian Report, The Researcher, Hardy's Books, Agro Squirrel Narrates, Think Ukraine, DUST, Covers with Cassidy, Rowan is Reading, Adiemus -Carmina Slovenica, Lexi aka NewlyNova, Abby Cox, Stevie Emerson, Trae Crowder, Hej Sokoly, The Juice Media, Songs Sped Up -MSI, According to Alina, Kiko1006, Alina Gingertail, The Snake Charmer, Karolina Zebrowska, Matriarchetype, Reads with Rachel, UNTV, I'm Rosa, With Olivia, Katy Montgomerie, Joe Blogs, Unlearning Economics, Verilybitchie, Bitchuation Room, Gutsick Gibbon, Planarwalker, Dr Ben Miles, Mech West Show, History with Kayleigh, Kings and Generals, Lives and Histories, The British Museum, Bella Ciao -Nikolay Kutuzov, Annamarie Forcino, Shoeonhead, Brigitte Empire, Yarmak -Ragnarok, Amie's Literary Empire, Tibees, Munecat, Reporting from Ukraine, Cambrian Chronicles, Belle of the Ranch, Fit 2B Read, Gabi Belle, Swell Entertainment, Welcome to Ukraine, David and Romany Gilmour, Mercado Media, Some More News, Depressed Russian, The Institute of Art and Ideas, Emilie's Literary Corner, ATP Geopolitics, Wizards and Warriors, Nini Music, Yoyomi, Not the Andrew Marr Show, Ryan McBeth, Jake Broe, Anders Puck Nielsen, Li Speaks, Ro Ramdin, Kirkpattiecake, Scott Bradlee's Postmodern Jukebox, Lily Simpson, Elina Charatsidou, Tara Mooknee, Political X, Russian Dude, No Justice.
Ominous music begins. 😊 I have seen similar comment storms to mine when I was Allowed to scan other reviews. It is a shame that science fiction reader abuse does not receive more attention. In any case the practice of attacking fellow readers is common. Amazon/Goodreads have never acted against mental members, writers leading gangs against the one star reviewer or the employees who enable them. Gang activity includes stalking. doxxing, threats against one star reviewer's friends and family.
There is a member culture which attacks any reviewer who gives a negative reaction to a popular low end science fiction. Female readers attract comments ranging from their gender can not understand science fiction to suggestions that they should get the stick out of their butt to suggesting that their opinion must be a reaction to recent anal rape. High level literary discussion of varied perceptions of a book? Perhaps not.
My limited history was given over to these madmen. They used it to generate a request of Australian security through Pine Gap Centre to interrogate for my personal history the one friend whom I messaged occasionally. The Corcoran must have been terribly butthurt. The attempt failed and left two outraged customers. Amazon only became concerned after we began publicising the event. Suddenly the lurkers whom Goodreads had not Allowed me to remove all disappeared, as well as harassment visible to other readers such as comments and Altered pages. The year long distortion of my Kindle keyboard was removed and no multiday disruption of Kindle access to the internet has occurred since. I received a message that Kindle will no longer support Goodreads, as if removing the Goodreads icon reflects an internal separation between Goodreads and Kindle. That Amazon employees are vicious, cowardly and more, surprised me slightly at the beginning but Their idiocy insulted.
Recently the seventh ex-employee of EBay was sentenced as a result of harassment against a couple producing a small ecommerce channel deemed unkind to EBay. They were awarded multi-millions of pounds and the ex-employee had been the EBay Chief of Security. These are things worth a thought or three.
I recommend a few precautions which have served me well. Remove personal information on Goodreads profile which might allow tracking of your address or history and avoid messaging. Remove lurkers, those friends who never post. They are monitors not admirers. Given the Goodreads penchant for customer page Alteration, the screenshot of the odd, the ugly and threatening can be invaluable.
There are other ereader options. Do Not use Kindle Files, Email, Calendar or Contacts, if concerned with safety. Do Not buy ebooks through Kindle for a number of reasons. I began buying ebooks and now regret that choice. Amazon sell the device but I recently discovered that my book purchases are leases. Amazon own them and can remove them on a whim. Jared Henderson did an interesting video concerning this issue. Searches on Silk should be innocuous and non-critical. To implement the above costs nothing, to not is dangerous.
Please consider that these unhinged mostly male employees and members alike adhere to no non-Randian morality, are often openly fascistic, despise women especially but above all are US patriots. Ominous music ends. 😊
Be safe. May we all find Good Reading. 🤗
Some of my favourite YouTube channels.
UATV English, Munecat, Ship Happens, Savy Writes Books, J Draper, RobWords, Answer in Progress, Emma Thorne, Novara Media, Tara Mooknee, Some More News, Eleanor Morton, Tulia, VerilyBitchie, SciFi Odyssey, May, Planet D, Karolina Zebrowska, Lady of the Library, Books and Lala, Epimetheus, Crecganford, Amie's Literary Empire, Cruising Alba, Ben and Emily, Weir on the move, Sabine Hossenfelder, Ancient Americas, Paleo Analysis, Adult Wednesday Addams - 2 seasons, Northern Narrowboaters, Boat Time, 2Cellos, Ash L G, Engineering Knits, Bernadette Banner, Cruising Crafts, Sarah Z, EarleWrites, Yanis Varoufakis, Perimeter Institute, History with Kayleigh, Kohto Yamamoto, Spacedock, The Piano Boat, Travelling K, No Justice, Political X, Patrick is a Navajo, Discourse Minis, Thirdworld Booknerd, The Templin Institute, Tibees, World War Two, Eckharts Ladder, The Sunny Book Nook, Books N Cats, Jess Owens, Lady Knight the Brave, Para Bellum, Just in Time Worldbuilding, Renegade Cut, The New Enlightenment with Ashley, Books with Emily Fox, Abbie Emmons, Snappy Dragon, Perun, The Piano Guys, IzzzYzzz, Ancient Geographics, Naughty Nana DUZ, Thersites the Historian, What Vivi did next, The Historian's Craft, Philosophy Tube, The Ritual Kitchen with Laura May, Sarah C M Paine, PolyMatter, Diane Callahan Quotidian Writer, The Indigo Life, Engineering with Rosie, Serena Skybourne, Lisa McLeod, Dr Becky, Dr Rian Ridden, FAFO, Media Death Cult, Gary's Economics, Cecilia Blomdahl, DM IT All, Tale Foundry, Captured in Words, Venom Geek Media, Battle Order, Kings and Generals, Thought Potato, Prime of Midlife, Chris Animations, Anthropology Club, History Valley, David John Wellman, Rowan J Coleman, Tech Space, Slaggy Book Club, Kathy's Flog in France, Gingers are Black, The Yankee Farm Wife, Alt Shift X, Ben G Thomas, Austin McConnell, Lindsey Stirling, Then & Now, Mythology and Fiction Explained, Brittany Page, Hello Future Me, Maggie Mae Fish, Linguoer Mechanic.
I wish for you a glorious morning, a gorgeous afternoon, a splendid evening, a pleasant night and may we all continue learning. Elbows Up.
A person's Humanity is measured by their Empathy.