This was supposed to be an instalove age gap story. It was more like instalust. We know Jeremy's brother is in his 40's and Bry is 24. Uh, how old is Jeremy? She never asks.
Bry is a bit of a harsh personality. She takes, but gives little. She dominated Jeremy, even in the bedroom, which should have been a refreshing change, but wasn't.
Jeremy cooks for her every night, gives messages and tries to bring fun in her life, what does she bring to the table.
This story could have been better by toning down her #%!* and giving her more substance and making the age gap relevant.