Child of Dawn

by Sarahfraser

A broken engagement, a betrothal contract, and too much champagne leads to Hermione moving to the United States with a piece of Draco Malfoy that she most certainly hadn't packed in her bags. Five years later, she's back in London to embark on a new journey and finds herself a bit in over head as a single mother to a special little girl.

Genres: Fan Fiction

ebook

Published November 30, 2021

Reviews

[Lexie · Rating 2 out of 5]

Yanno I usually avoid infidelity fics but I was highly interested in prosecutor Draco.

And I stan Theo & Harry and Ginny & Blaise fics hard.

I'm just so disappointed in it.

[Jane · Rating 2 out of 5]

It started off so well only for me to kind of lose interest about halfway through. Well, I read all of it in the end, but the first half was definitely more engaging, and if this 4yo really was 91 cm tall and 13,5 kg, then she really was on the smaller size, because these are basically the measurements for my 2.5yo (she's 93 cm tall and weighs 13 kg). Also, I understand my experience with my kids doesn't translate to all kids, but this Aurora is waaaaaaay out of my experience with kids and I have tought at a kindergarten as well. She's very talkative with strangers, accepts basically everyone as someone close... when according to my experience, the adult has to really work for it so that the kid would even talk to them.

Theo and Harry ... oh my god, what a fluff-fest these two were in this story.

Also, I got the feeling that a lot of things that should have been talked about in more detail, were basically fade to black scenes. And when you could have easily skipped something, more detail is given.

All in all, not bad, but not the best one either

[Megan Oneail · Rating 3 out of 5]

I think I would be able to bump this up a bit *if* someone went through and edited. The sheer magnitude of spelling errors pulled me out of the book constantly. Spellcheck alone would have done wonders.

[Emilia · Rating 2 out of 5]

Comenzó bien pero luego fue cayendo , literal una vez que draco conoció la verdad esperaba más , todo fue muy fácil ,muy natural.
Odie a este draco, no tenía personalidad ,todo era plano y aburrido , creo que muchas veces ni hablo jajaja

[Mariah · Rating 2 out of 5]

2.5

[Ceilidhchaos · Rating 5 out of 5]

Dramione. Secret Child. Hermione got pregnant with Dracos kid and hides her from him until she can't anymore. Angst. Nottpott side pairing.

[Niti Patel · Rating 5 out of 5]

10⭐️s

[˗ˏˋNat´ˎ˗ · Rating 1 out of 5]

DNF halfway through, for the "secret child plot" to be credible, the story and the actions of the characters have to be very well developed, here I felt that everyone was annoying.