2.5
I LOVE Hank Green - I think that he and his brother and his wife put out so much amazing content and are engaged in such wonderful charitable work. I really enjoyed the first book (aside from April's absolutely f*cking brutal death scene) but this book felt so different and disconnected from that foundation that I just did not enjoy it.
First of all, I felt like the first 150 pages and the rest of the book were completely disconnected. (And I have to say, I enjoyed the first part better.) We went from Maya's frankly fascinating hunt for April, Andy's quest for meaning and the mystery of Altus followed by Miranda to too many answers too fast and too many strings left unattached. For example, what the heck happened with Fish?? What even was Fish? What was the white material Maya found at the market and why didn't anyone want her to get her hands on it? Why were there even pieces of it at the market if presumably its something that Carl manufactures for extremely specific purposes? Then, there's the matter of establishing Bex as a character and then completely forgetting about her for most of the book. Even worse, my favorite character from the first novel and an acknowledge member of their best friends chat, Robin, didn't even get a voice with which to tell the story. I was so disappointing and there was absolutely no reason why he wouldn't be in this story.
Second, I understand why Hank did it for the plot, but I didn't love that the characters were all separate for most of the story - I think the strength of the first book came in part from having them all together, so the story felt weaker for me because of that.
Third, I just felt that there were a lot of plot points that didn't make any sense at all. There was Carl becoming a completely different entity from the first book in which he was silent and left everyone to their own devices to solve their problem themselves. Then, here he is, as a MONKEY who TALKS constantly?? It was strange that he had chapters in the story too, which was bizarre - he was entirely different than in the first novel, and if the story was being told after it happened, Carl was already dead. Additionally, the science that Hank was trying to make for Carl didn't work - it seemed like such a convoluted explanation for why he was the way he was. It was unnecessary, dense, and felt like an afterthought to the first novel. I also have no idea what was even happening with Carl having a brother - that just seemed to far fetched to even begin to contemplate.
Related to characterization that made no sense at all, I hated that April felt so entirely different from April in the first novel. Everything that made April April - her impulsiveness, her need for attention - she was completely done with, and felt no temptation to return to those characteristics. She was asleep for six months - how did she undergo this complete 180 in character development? April was also depicted as "the ultimate influencer" at the end of the novel which felt like the opposite of the point that the novel was trying to make - there are no ultimate influencers, no one is chosen or more special than everyone else, even April - what was Hank trying to say with this statement about her character??
There was also the matter of the Book of Good Times which was another plot point I was left totally confused about - why did Carl drop these instead of just interacting with the people he left them for? Why did he chose who he chose? Were the Books truly only existent to help April and Maya bring down Altus? What???
Last, I found that the story took so long to get going and then wound up and wound down way too fast. I was completely confused about the nineteen days and what happened in Val Verde as well as what happened after. Like I said, it didn't feel cohesive to the beginning of the novel or the first book in this series. Then, the closing action happened so fast and tbh, I just don't think Maya and April should have gotten back together. April treated Maya truly horribly in the first book. Maya can be relieved and forgive her, and know that she will always love April without going back into a relationship like this one - it probably helped though, that April was an entirely different person in this novel.
Overall, I felt like there were a ton of interesting elements in this story, but they weren't woven together in a way that felt like a cohesive novel to me, and especially not cohesive to the previous Carls novel. Moreso, I felt like the allegory connecting it to events in the world today were so heavy handed as to beat one over the head with it. I get it, social media is difficult and destructive, and our society is being broken apart by in-fighting - I live in this society every day. To be interesting, I wanted those ideas to be presented in new ways with new solutions but this novel just fell flat with its extolling the virtues of a human race, that quite frankly, would never come to fruition today - 2 billion people donating ten dollars to shut down a corporation? Please.