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Myths of Revelore #1
From the Mouths of Sirens
Win the Tournament. Kill the Prince. Take the Crown.
Since childhood, Princess Saoirse has trained for the sole purpose of being chosen for the Tournament, a gladiator-style competition in which four enemy nations compete for the right to rule. An angel-like people known as the Aura have won the Tournament for a century, enacting exploitative treaties and ruling the continent with a merciless grip. If Saoirse survives the three infamous trials, she will win the Crown of Revelore and overthrow the nation responsible for her mother’s death.
But when Saoirse is denied entry into the Tournament by the Mer king, she makes a bargain with an imprisoned sea witch. In exchange for entrance into the competition, Saoirse agrees to kill the Auran prince and bring back the witch’s stolen dagger. But while fighting for her life in the arena, the last thing Saoirse expects to do is fall for her greatest enemy, the arrogant Prince Rook.
When Rook and Saoirse uncover the sinister secrets of their ancestors, they realize the animosity between their people is rooted in long-forgotten lore. What once was a competition for the Crown evolves into a perilous ancient game in which Saoirse and Rook are both pawns. As twisted truths are revealed and myths become real, Saoirse must decide if she should kill the man she is falling for and avenge her people, or spare his life and face the wrath of the Titans.
Fans of THE CRUEL PRINCE, THE HUNGER GAMES, and THE LITTLE MERMAID will enjoy this first installment in a compelling new YA fantasy series.
Since childhood, Princess Saoirse has trained for the sole purpose of being chosen for the Tournament, a gladiator-style competition in which four enemy nations compete for the right to rule. An angel-like people known as the Aura have won the Tournament for a century, enacting exploitative treaties and ruling the continent with a merciless grip. If Saoirse survives the three infamous trials, she will win the Crown of Revelore and overthrow the nation responsible for her mother’s death.
But when Saoirse is denied entry into the Tournament by the Mer king, she makes a bargain with an imprisoned sea witch. In exchange for entrance into the competition, Saoirse agrees to kill the Auran prince and bring back the witch’s stolen dagger. But while fighting for her life in the arena, the last thing Saoirse expects to do is fall for her greatest enemy, the arrogant Prince Rook.
When Rook and Saoirse uncover the sinister secrets of their ancestors, they realize the animosity between their people is rooted in long-forgotten lore. What once was a competition for the Crown evolves into a perilous ancient game in which Saoirse and Rook are both pawns. As twisted truths are revealed and myths become real, Saoirse must decide if she should kill the man she is falling for and avenge her people, or spare his life and face the wrath of the Titans.
Fans of THE CRUEL PRINCE, THE HUNGER GAMES, and THE LITTLE MERMAID will enjoy this first installment in a compelling new YA fantasy series.
300 pages, Hardcover
First published May 7, 2022
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Abigail Hair
3 books200 followersHi friends! I am not on Goodreads often, but please feel free to contact me at abigailhairbooks.com :)
When I published my debut novel From the Mouths of Sirens in May 2022, I fulfilled my lifelong dream of being a published author. My love of fantasy began at an early age and I’ve been writing about fairies, unicorns, and mermaids all my life! I’m currently writing the sequel to From the Mouths of Sirens, which will be available in July 2024 :)
When I am not writing or reading, I'm most likely playing with my two puppies, creating digital artwork, or watching too much television with my husband.
When I published my debut novel From the Mouths of Sirens in May 2022, I fulfilled my lifelong dream of being a published author. My love of fantasy began at an early age and I’ve been writing about fairies, unicorns, and mermaids all my life! I’m currently writing the sequel to From the Mouths of Sirens, which will be available in July 2024 :)
When I am not writing or reading, I'm most likely playing with my two puppies, creating digital artwork, or watching too much television with my husband.
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April 5, 2022
Hi, you may be wondering why I am leaving a review for my own book! I’m not writing this because I think my book is particularly revolutionary or that it is perfection in book form. In fact, I know about a thousand ways I’d like to improve the story! That being said, I am so proud of my debut novel. It took a lot of courage and tenacity to get this far at all (not to mention stellar encouragement from incredible friends & family).There were times when I wanted to give up, and times where I almost shut the door on writing altogether. But From the Mouths of Sirens is a testament to never giving up, both in the context of the story itself and in the process of publishing it. As many of you know, I self published this book all on my own. It was a scary decision, believe me. But it has been such a powerful personal journey for me to go on, and I’m truly proud of myself for following through till the end. I love this story and these characters, and I can’t wait for you all to enjoy them too. Are there a couple spelling errors? I’ll be the first to admit this! Are there little things here and there I would like to change one day? Probably. But I love this book, and I wrote it for all the dreamers out there, including my eight year old self. I have always dreamed of being an author, and now I can finally say I am🤍 happy reading!!!
Side note: Saoirse’s name is pronounced “Sur-sha” 😂
Side note: Saoirse’s name is pronounced “Sur-sha” 😂
January 26, 2022
I was lucky enough to be a beta reader for this incredible story. This book is abundant with multi-layered characters, beautiful prose, and a sinister Sea Witch. Abigail does an amazing job at taking a beloved classic and transforming it into something new while still maintaining the essence of the original story. Whether you're a lover of “The Little Mermaid,” the fantasy genre, or both, this is a story you won't want to miss out on reading.
May 15, 2022
I was sold as soon as I heard enemies to lovers meets hunger games meets little mermaid. Lucky for me, I got to be a beta read and lemme tell you — it did not disappoint. The dynamics between characters are great, my shipper heart felt so at home, and the world building is excellent - a lovely balance of details that leave you immersed without feeling overwhelmed. I am super excited to see what the final version looks like, and pumped for what’s in store in the book(s) to follow!! 😍🧜🏼♀️🌊
June 6, 2022
After seeing the author's many posts about her story on Instagram, I preordered this and was eagerly awaiting to read this story. It took me a bit to get into the tale, which may have been from book hangover from my previous read, but once I got past chapter one, I was unable to put it down.
The story is a blend of The Little Mermaid and The Hunger Games (which I've yet to read) and full of epic, fantastical world-building, cultures, and creatures as well as many references to ancient mythologies. I loved the relationships as well, and the characters were all very well-written and well-portrayed. (I...may have a bit of a crush on Rook...which I wasn't expecting at all...)
My only critiques are for this book to be properly proofread as it was distracting sometimes when reading, but I doubt the average reader would notice? (Also, please for the love of proper sword-play, don't have spinning, it's unrealistic and makes no sense if you're fighting for your life.) But aside from those two things, I LOVED this book and am so excited to read book two whenever it releases! May glory be given!
The story is a blend of The Little Mermaid and The Hunger Games (which I've yet to read) and full of epic, fantastical world-building, cultures, and creatures as well as many references to ancient mythologies. I loved the relationships as well, and the characters were all very well-written and well-portrayed. (I...may have a bit of a crush on Rook...which I wasn't expecting at all...)
My only critiques are for this book to be properly proofread as it was distracting sometimes when reading, but I doubt the average reader would notice? (Also, please for the love of proper sword-play, don't have spinning, it's unrealistic and makes no sense if you're fighting for your life.) But aside from those two things, I LOVED this book and am so excited to read book two whenever it releases! May glory be given!
May 23, 2022
So, I’ve had two days to think about it profoundly and I think a three star is the more preferred rating for this one.
Don’t get me wrong it was enjoyable! But it lacked a lot of everything, from its loss of character development, lack of a concrete backstory, and how unrealistic the romance was.
Again, it dearly reminded me of The Hunger Games - and the suspense drawn from one trial was definitely amazing, it was perfect. Unfortunately, that would only occur with one trial…out of the three…but the potential was great.
In addition, I was super excited to read about a crossover of the Little Mermaid and HG but I wasn’t completely sold on how it was told. The first half of the book was nice, even paced with the ability to stand without scrutiny. Yet by the second half, there were a bunch of plot holes and everything was extremely quick for my liking, and the betrayal was not at all impactful. In the end, I think it was a bit wrong to classify it as Hunger Games driven, since it’s fantasy and not dystopian.
Although, I will say that the imagery was certainly there! I loved how the author perfectly captured the essence of the soaring winds, the calming cool of the sea, and the beauty of mythological constellations. The attires described for Princess Saoirse was breathtaking!!! And the floating clouds full of waterfalls, open skied buildings and starry nights was out of this world. The imagery, along with the way the author writes, and the nice summer vibes, ultimately give it its three stars.
In the end, it was a nice way to pass time, but I would most likely not continue the series. Onto the next one! 💃🏻
Don’t get me wrong it was enjoyable! But it lacked a lot of everything, from its loss of character development, lack of a concrete backstory, and how unrealistic the romance was.
Again, it dearly reminded me of The Hunger Games - and the suspense drawn from one trial was definitely amazing, it was perfect. Unfortunately, that would only occur with one trial…out of the three…but the potential was great.
In addition, I was super excited to read about a crossover of the Little Mermaid and HG but I wasn’t completely sold on how it was told. The first half of the book was nice, even paced with the ability to stand without scrutiny. Yet by the second half, there were a bunch of plot holes and everything was extremely quick for my liking, and the betrayal was not at all impactful. In the end, I think it was a bit wrong to classify it as Hunger Games driven, since it’s fantasy and not dystopian.
Although, I will say that the imagery was certainly there! I loved how the author perfectly captured the essence of the soaring winds, the calming cool of the sea, and the beauty of mythological constellations. The attires described for Princess Saoirse was breathtaking!!! And the floating clouds full of waterfalls, open skied buildings and starry nights was out of this world. The imagery, along with the way the author writes, and the nice summer vibes, ultimately give it its three stars.
In the end, it was a nice way to pass time, but I would most likely not continue the series. Onto the next one! 💃🏻
March 28, 2022
This book will be my entire personality until I get the rest of the series. I LOVED the retelling concept of the Little Mermaid with all the twists. Plus anything enemies-to-lovers fantasy is a yes from me. I read the entire thing in one day, and will be re-reading it many times. Abigail did an incredible job building the story, and leaving me wanting so much more when it was done. I LOVED the characters, the scenery, and all the work you put into creating this world. Thank for you giving me the opportunity to read the ARC version, and I cannot wait for the rest!
January 13, 2024
3.5 ⭐️ rounded up to 4 ⭐️
I went into this book with no prior knowledge of what it was about. I assumed it was going to be a simple retelling of The Little Mermaid and boy, was I wrong. While there are similarities, this book is more like if the Little Mermaid was on steroids and was sent to the Hunger Games; and honestly, I’m here for it.
I loved the instant vibes between Saoirse and Rook - there’s just something about strong characters falling hard for the first time, and for their sworn enemy no less 🫣😉 Aside from this, I felt the plot was fast but action packed, and although the world building was brief, it was enough for me to be able to understand why things were happening. While I felt the ending was rushed and wish there would have been just a few more chapters to elaborate on certain events, I overall thought this was a great YA read. I can’t wait for the sequel (scheduled for sometime this year) to see how Saoirse and Rook fare in this story! 🧜🏻♀️ 👑 ✨
I went into this book with no prior knowledge of what it was about. I assumed it was going to be a simple retelling of The Little Mermaid and boy, was I wrong. While there are similarities, this book is more like if the Little Mermaid was on steroids and was sent to the Hunger Games; and honestly, I’m here for it.
I loved the instant vibes between Saoirse and Rook - there’s just something about strong characters falling hard for the first time, and for their sworn enemy no less 🫣😉 Aside from this, I felt the plot was fast but action packed, and although the world building was brief, it was enough for me to be able to understand why things were happening. While I felt the ending was rushed and wish there would have been just a few more chapters to elaborate on certain events, I overall thought this was a great YA read. I can’t wait for the sequel (scheduled for sometime this year) to see how Saoirse and Rook fare in this story! 🧜🏻♀️ 👑 ✨
April 15, 2022
I was selected as an ARC reader, in exchange for an honest review!
This has honestly been on of my most anticipated reads of 2022, and it did not disappoint. The world-building was enchanting- at every step I felt that I was part of the world, right there with the characters. The plot was intriguing and the enemies-to-lovers was just *chef's kiss*.
I would 100% recommend this to everyone loving high fantasy books and fairy-tale retellings.
The only reason I didn't give it 5 stars was a personal little issue of having greek names in the book. I love the fact that they were there, and it was perfectly fine in the beginning, but at some points they threw me out of the narrative, but the author's excellent writing and intriguing story pulled me back in . Again this was a personal issue, that other people won't have.
This has honestly been on of my most anticipated reads of 2022, and it did not disappoint. The world-building was enchanting- at every step I felt that I was part of the world, right there with the characters. The plot was intriguing and the enemies-to-lovers was just *chef's kiss*.
I would 100% recommend this to everyone loving high fantasy books and fairy-tale retellings.
The only reason I didn't give it 5 stars was a personal little issue of having greek names in the book. I love the fact that they were there, and it was perfectly fine in the beginning, but at some points they threw me out of the narrative, but the author's excellent writing and intriguing story pulled me back in . Again this was a personal issue, that other people won't have.
May 31, 2022
I’ve decided on 3.5 but am not sure whether I want to round up or down. On one hand, this book is a well-written debut from an indie author, and avoids pitfalls many non-indie authors fall into despite the editors available to them. On the other hand, while this book does NOT need a grammar edit (barring one or two missing commas, Hair’s prose is very well polished), it dearly needs a copy edit. It is sprinkled with many errors that, while all the kind of error that any talented writer could easily make, should also be easily found and fixed. (Things like using “fowl” instead of “foul”, an extra letter or space in the wrong place, and an inexplicable inability to use em dashes.) I think, without the errors, I would easily round up to 4 stars, so, at least for now, that’s where it will stay.
Overall I enjoy what Abigail Hair did with The Little Mermaid and likely will read the (hopefully well-edited) sequel!
Overall I enjoy what Abigail Hair did with The Little Mermaid and likely will read the (hopefully well-edited) sequel!
September 23, 2023
Hunger Games meets Little Mermaid with rival royalty and a ton of heart pounding action. I absolutely devoured this book. I read it in a single sitting and loved every minute of it. The tournament was especially incredible. From a killer Labyrinth to giant spiders and hydras….the action didn’t stop and it made for a wild ride!!
I loved the determination Saoirse had to help her people and better the world and Rook was the perfect blend of warrior with a heart of gold and a desire to find the truth. These 2 had such angst and tension, true enemies-to-lovers vibes 🔥🔥🔥
The only thing missing for me was more history and lore for the world. The world building could have really benefited from just a little more info given to the reader. So much of the plot hinges on the political conflict and history of this world and which out MCs search for it, I was left wanting to know more.
I need book 2 like now please!!!
4.5 ⭐️
I loved the determination Saoirse had to help her people and better the world and Rook was the perfect blend of warrior with a heart of gold and a desire to find the truth. These 2 had such angst and tension, true enemies-to-lovers vibes 🔥🔥🔥
The only thing missing for me was more history and lore for the world. The world building could have really benefited from just a little more info given to the reader. So much of the plot hinges on the political conflict and history of this world and which out MCs search for it, I was left wanting to know more.
I need book 2 like now please!!!
4.5 ⭐️
April 15, 2022
"May Glory be given."
I was lucky enough to receive a physical ARC of this wonderful book from the author herself (thanks again <3). HOWEVER, this review is entirely my own thoughts and opinions (buckle up, this review is thorough, and hence, very LONG). Also, it's 4.5/5 but since no half stars on Goodreads, I rounded up because it doesn't deserve a four.
Gladiator Style Tournaments/ Hunger Games - Enemies to Lovers - Slow Burn - Dark Fantasy Little Mermaid Retelling
Firstly, I enjoyed how the nations were divided by a different set of elements (sea, air, sand, and earth). I don't often see fantasy nations based around elements that aren't water, earth, air, and fire. That being said, this was well executed! All the element themed nations were well developed with their own clothing style, architecture, etc. Loved how they were all their own people and had their own agendas/views of Revelore. The world-building was truly entertaining in this novel. It really felt like you could picture each setting!
Side Note: My heart was genuinely racing at several parts of the book because of how stressed the characters were.
Now to get into the main plot of the book.
Each nation (Elorshin, Aurandel, Tellusun, Terradrin) in Revelore has their own leaders, though they must ultimately bow to the holder of the Revelore Crown...
Enter: The Tournament. Tributes! Deadly Trials! Cool Beasts and Challenges!
While this is similar to the Hunger Games, I do think Gladiator Style Tournament is a more accurate description - it is literally a fight to the death/ last man standing. In no way did I feel like I was reading a retelling of the Hunger Games during the Tournament chapters and I am SO thankful. The Tournament was original, the trials deadly, and the stakes higher than ever (I mean, competing for the crown to rule over all of Revelore? INTENSE). Action packed but cutthroat competing among tributes ensues. Everyone wants the crown for their nation to overthrow the Aurans who have managed to rule for a century. Which seems suspicious, no? Tensions were already high among the four nations before, but something about the leadup to this year's Tournament really has everyone on edge.
Now, The Tension. Yes, this is enemies to lovers. Yes, it is slow burn and the burn is VERY slow. Especially with some revelations that come towards the end of the book. But it is authentic in the buildup and *spoiler alert* Rook falls first. Saoirse is ready to kill him pretty much 24/7 (partially because of her bargain with the Sea Witch, partially because the Mer and the Aurans DO NOT get along). Speaking of the Sea Witch, she's an interesting antagonist. Mostly behind the scenes with her own agenda and we don't hear much from her but, boy oh boy, was she scheming. I did not see the end of this book coming. I was literally in shock. (We get left on a cliffhanger but it feels ok after the events of the book. It opens the door to more of the story while closing the door on a separate section).
Next, the political intrigue in this book was *chef's kiss* I LOVED LOVED LOVED IT. Politics in fantasy novels is perhaps my favorite aspect and this was done WELL. Soooo many secrets and poor Rook isn't privy to any of them :( Oh well! It certainly becomes interesting when he starts questioning everything he thought he knew and then we find out some things that well... you'll see what I mean. This might be my favorite part of the whole novel: trying to figure everything out and making my guesses! So many shocking revelations!!!!
Honorable mentions: Dual POV was very clear and easy to follow and provided some really good insights into the Auran and Mer people's mindsets. I love the map in this book (maps in fantasy novels are just ahhh so lovely)! All the artwork is GORGEOUS (cover + chapter art).
Okay, I've sung the praises loudly. Time for things I didn't really enjoy...
1. I was so confused in the beginning. Yes, I understand with new fantasy books that it takes a while to get used to the names but for the life of me I could not figure out the family history between Saoirse and Rook until they literally sat down and each told their side of the story nearer to the end of the book. I just couldn't wrap my head around it for some reason. Looking back, it all makes sense now but I just couldn't follow in the beginning.
2. Rook was a little too nice. This is subjective. He was just a little too naive to me and I can see how it benefited the character he needed to be, but still. Naive little princeling who lives in a bubble? C'mon. And too trusting!!! He literally revealed a family secret to pretty much a stranger because he felt bad for her and wanted to cheer her up. Rook, pull yourself together, please. Raven (his older sister, and queen) was right for chewing him out!!
3. Found a few typos. They didn't detract from the story and they are very FEW. But still there. It's also her first book so this didn't bother me.
Overall....
I think I've talked about everything I can without giving too much away before release day! Overall, I really enjoyed this novel and HIGHLY RECOMMEND to anyone looking for a fresh and fast paced fantasy novel to love to bits and pieces. Because I certainly will not be able to wait until the next book. Easily going to be one of my favorite reads of the year.
I was lucky enough to receive a physical ARC of this wonderful book from the author herself (thanks again <3). HOWEVER, this review is entirely my own thoughts and opinions (buckle up, this review is thorough, and hence, very LONG). Also, it's 4.5/5 but since no half stars on Goodreads, I rounded up because it doesn't deserve a four.
Gladiator Style Tournaments/ Hunger Games - Enemies to Lovers - Slow Burn - Dark Fantasy Little Mermaid Retelling
Firstly, I enjoyed how the nations were divided by a different set of elements (sea, air, sand, and earth). I don't often see fantasy nations based around elements that aren't water, earth, air, and fire. That being said, this was well executed! All the element themed nations were well developed with their own clothing style, architecture, etc. Loved how they were all their own people and had their own agendas/views of Revelore. The world-building was truly entertaining in this novel. It really felt like you could picture each setting!
Side Note: My heart was genuinely racing at several parts of the book because of how stressed the characters were.
Now to get into the main plot of the book.
Each nation (Elorshin, Aurandel, Tellusun, Terradrin) in Revelore has their own leaders, though they must ultimately bow to the holder of the Revelore Crown...
Enter: The Tournament. Tributes! Deadly Trials! Cool Beasts and Challenges!
While this is similar to the Hunger Games, I do think Gladiator Style Tournament is a more accurate description - it is literally a fight to the death/ last man standing. In no way did I feel like I was reading a retelling of the Hunger Games during the Tournament chapters and I am SO thankful. The Tournament was original, the trials deadly, and the stakes higher than ever (I mean, competing for the crown to rule over all of Revelore? INTENSE). Action packed but cutthroat competing among tributes ensues. Everyone wants the crown for their nation to overthrow the Aurans who have managed to rule for a century. Which seems suspicious, no? Tensions were already high among the four nations before, but something about the leadup to this year's Tournament really has everyone on edge.
Now, The Tension. Yes, this is enemies to lovers. Yes, it is slow burn and the burn is VERY slow. Especially with some revelations that come towards the end of the book. But it is authentic in the buildup and *spoiler alert* Rook falls first. Saoirse is ready to kill him pretty much 24/7 (partially because of her bargain with the Sea Witch, partially because the Mer and the Aurans DO NOT get along). Speaking of the Sea Witch, she's an interesting antagonist. Mostly behind the scenes with her own agenda and we don't hear much from her but, boy oh boy, was she scheming. I did not see the end of this book coming. I was literally in shock. (We get left on a cliffhanger but it feels ok after the events of the book. It opens the door to more of the story while closing the door on a separate section).
Next, the political intrigue in this book was *chef's kiss* I LOVED LOVED LOVED IT. Politics in fantasy novels is perhaps my favorite aspect and this was done WELL. Soooo many secrets and poor Rook isn't privy to any of them :( Oh well! It certainly becomes interesting when he starts questioning everything he thought he knew and then we find out some things that well... you'll see what I mean. This might be my favorite part of the whole novel: trying to figure everything out and making my guesses! So many shocking revelations!!!!
Honorable mentions: Dual POV was very clear and easy to follow and provided some really good insights into the Auran and Mer people's mindsets. I love the map in this book (maps in fantasy novels are just ahhh so lovely)! All the artwork is GORGEOUS (cover + chapter art).
Okay, I've sung the praises loudly. Time for things I didn't really enjoy...
1. I was so confused in the beginning. Yes, I understand with new fantasy books that it takes a while to get used to the names but for the life of me I could not figure out the family history between Saoirse and Rook until they literally sat down and each told their side of the story nearer to the end of the book. I just couldn't wrap my head around it for some reason. Looking back, it all makes sense now but I just couldn't follow in the beginning.
2. Rook was a little too nice. This is subjective. He was just a little too naive to me and I can see how it benefited the character he needed to be, but still. Naive little princeling who lives in a bubble? C'mon. And too trusting!!! He literally revealed a family secret to pretty much a stranger because he felt bad for her and wanted to cheer her up. Rook, pull yourself together, please. Raven (his older sister, and queen) was right for chewing him out!!
3. Found a few typos. They didn't detract from the story and they are very FEW. But still there. It's also her first book so this didn't bother me.
Overall....
I think I've talked about everything I can without giving too much away before release day! Overall, I really enjoyed this novel and HIGHLY RECOMMEND to anyone looking for a fresh and fast paced fantasy novel to love to bits and pieces. Because I certainly will not be able to wait until the next book. Easily going to be one of my favorite reads of the year.
July 31, 2022
I absolutely love how Abigail took some elements of the little mermaid and made it completely her own. I was invested from the start until the end and I can’t wait for the second one.
Both Saoirse and Rook are great characters and oef the slowish burn!
I highly recommend this book to fantasy and enemies to lovers fans 😊
Both Saoirse and Rook are great characters and oef the slowish burn!
I highly recommend this book to fantasy and enemies to lovers fans 😊
August 29, 2022
3.5 stars.
December 2, 2024
Entertaining but quite predictable
December 1, 2024
This book was mid… It had sm potential tho!! This could’ve been one of my best reads this year 😭
It was a fun read ngl. It’s a mix of all the best tropes: enemies to lovers, mermaids, trials blah blah blah. But the thing is that the story felt rushed and slow at the same time… I think it lacked depth, and I couldn’t really connect with the characters, especially the mmc. It’s really hard to explain why I’m disappointed UGHHHH.
Anyways, Ig it was a fun read but not fun enough for me to continue the series, especially knowing that it’s a trilogy and that the author still didn’t finish it. I’m just going to read something better now BYE 😘
THAT’S WHAT I GET BY WANTING TO READ SOME SUPER UNDERGROUND BOOK…AGAIN!
🐚🐉🪸🧜♀️🪽🔮🩸🗡️🌊🕸️
It was a fun read ngl. It’s a mix of all the best tropes: enemies to lovers, mermaids, trials blah blah blah. But the thing is that the story felt rushed and slow at the same time… I think it lacked depth, and I couldn’t really connect with the characters, especially the mmc. It’s really hard to explain why I’m disappointed UGHHHH.
Anyways, Ig it was a fun read but not fun enough for me to continue the series, especially knowing that it’s a trilogy and that the author still didn’t finish it. I’m just going to read something better now BYE 😘
THAT’S WHAT I GET BY WANTING TO READ SOME SUPER UNDERGROUND BOOK…AGAIN!
🐚🐉🪸🧜♀️🪽🔮🩸🗡️🌊🕸️
April 16, 2024
The second trial did almost give me nightmares. Once I realized what it was I was like “No. No. No. Absolutely not.” As I was reading it in my bed. In the dark. Imagination going wild.
The nightmares have not come so far, but that’s not guaranteed.
Anyways, loved the characters, the prose, the world.
And that final trial 😍
OH. And have I mentioned that I LOVE when the title is in the book?!?!?!
The nightmares have not come so far, but that’s not guaranteed.
Anyways, loved the characters, the prose, the world.
And that final trial 😍
OH. And have I mentioned that I LOVE when the title is in the book?!?!?!
Want to read
March 8, 2022so proud of you, abigail, and excited to read ftmos <3
June 16, 2022
I wanted to give this a 4... but the last chapter was a joke. A quick wrap up of the end.
August 10, 2022
Not worth the time. Super middle school. Mediocre writing. Wanted to like it but truly did not.
January 10, 2024
I really liked this book! It actually reads like The Cruel Prince, but much more my taste. And what can I say? I'm a sucker for mermaids. I enjoyed the writing style and the characters, the banter, the tension. It's a cool story, indeed kind of Hunger Games-y, though with a lot more political struggles and intrige. The first trial felt a little easy and I would have loved to slow down the pacing between Saoirse and Rook a little, but I would definitely recommend this book! The ending was a little predictable, but I didn't mind. I was living up to the climax I kind of saw coming, which built up suspense. I would have loved to have seen a little more diversity, so fingers crossed for the next book ;)
My main "concern" with From the Mouths of Sirens is the world building. That could have been better. For instance:
- Kellam Keep still feels tailored to beings that walk instead of tailored to only the Merfolk, while Aurendelle is literally a floating city (very, very cool). Beings without wings can't move around in it, which is what you would expect from a city filled with "angels".
- Parchment and books survive underwater because of "magic", which seems a bit lazy. I guess the same can be said for candles and other sources of fire. Would have been cool to light Kellam Keep with algea or naturally luminescent animals or something, and to have the Merfolk save their stories in an original way.
- How does pouring drinks work underwater? Do Merfolk actually need to drink anything?
- Also, the diet of the Merfolk is very different from that of the other tributes, so is it wise to eat stuff they don't normally right before the tournament? Wouldn't that give the Merfolk stomach aches at the very least?
- (Let's not get into the fact that Merfolk don't need long flowing hair, or the fact that capes are a bad idea in general)
- There are various comments on whether or not the tournament is "fair" or not, but since the Merfolk have to be out of the water, they are always at a disadvantage. Their muscles aren't used to the gravity on land and to walking, their skin easily dries, their lungs hurt (even when using magic potions to be able to breath). The same kind of goes for the underground folk, having to adjust to direct sunlight (eyesight, skin, etc.). It's weird that everyone just accepts this, while still having discussions about fairness.
That being said, I see enormous potential for this series and can't wait to read the next book!
My main "concern" with From the Mouths of Sirens is the world building. That could have been better. For instance:
- Kellam Keep still feels tailored to beings that walk instead of tailored to only the Merfolk, while Aurendelle is literally a floating city (very, very cool). Beings without wings can't move around in it, which is what you would expect from a city filled with "angels".
- Parchment and books survive underwater because of "magic", which seems a bit lazy. I guess the same can be said for candles and other sources of fire. Would have been cool to light Kellam Keep with algea or naturally luminescent animals or something, and to have the Merfolk save their stories in an original way.
- How does pouring drinks work underwater? Do Merfolk actually need to drink anything?
- Also, the diet of the Merfolk is very different from that of the other tributes, so is it wise to eat stuff they don't normally right before the tournament? Wouldn't that give the Merfolk stomach aches at the very least?
- (Let's not get into the fact that Merfolk don't need long flowing hair, or the fact that capes are a bad idea in general)
- There are various comments on whether or not the tournament is "fair" or not, but since the Merfolk have to be out of the water, they are always at a disadvantage. Their muscles aren't used to the gravity on land and to walking, their skin easily dries, their lungs hurt (even when using magic potions to be able to breath). The same kind of goes for the underground folk, having to adjust to direct sunlight (eyesight, skin, etc.). It's weird that everyone just accepts this, while still having discussions about fairness.
That being said, I see enormous potential for this series and can't wait to read the next book!
August 26, 2022
"𝙈𝙖𝙮 𝙜𝙡𝙤𝙧𝙮 𝙗𝙚 𝙜𝙞𝙫𝙚𝙣."
To be honest, I bought this book after being convinced by one of the reels that the author herself had share in Instagram: inspired by The Little Mermaid mixed with The Hunger Games x The Cruel Prince and Greco-Roman gladiator tournament inspired, automatically I pre-ordered this book without thinking twice.
From The Mouths of Sirens used third dual pov between our main characters, Saoirse the Mer Princess and Rook the Auran Prince. The story followed them as they tried to compete in a tournament that only being held for every 10 years. But for Saoirse, it's impossible for her to join the tournament since her father, the Mer King denied her entry for joining the tournament. Hence, she decided to bargain with Selussa the Sea Witch. In exchange for her 'ticket' to compete in the tournament, she had to kill the Auran Prince, Prince Rook.
I love both the main characters' personalities. Saoirse for me is bold, determined and intelligent. Furthermore, she's willing to do everything for her beloved kingdom and her people. While Rook for me is considerate, honest and an open-minded person which make me love his character the most. The chemistry between them is 🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻
The world-building? Oh, this is the best one! I love love every world-building in this book! There are four nations under Revelore: Aurandel (the angel-like human kingdom), Elorshin (the Mer kingdom), Tellusun (the sand kingdom) and Terradrin (the Under Kingdom).
In addition, the legends and lore too were inspired by Greco-Roman. Did I just mention Greco-Roman? Yes! So two more stars for this book!
Lastly, the ending? Oh gosh, I need the next book ASAP! I want to know what will happen in the next book *screaming*.
Rate: A solid 5🌟
—Feyssa.
To be honest, I bought this book after being convinced by one of the reels that the author herself had share in Instagram: inspired by The Little Mermaid mixed with The Hunger Games x The Cruel Prince and Greco-Roman gladiator tournament inspired, automatically I pre-ordered this book without thinking twice.
From The Mouths of Sirens used third dual pov between our main characters, Saoirse the Mer Princess and Rook the Auran Prince. The story followed them as they tried to compete in a tournament that only being held for every 10 years. But for Saoirse, it's impossible for her to join the tournament since her father, the Mer King denied her entry for joining the tournament. Hence, she decided to bargain with Selussa the Sea Witch. In exchange for her 'ticket' to compete in the tournament, she had to kill the Auran Prince, Prince Rook.
I love both the main characters' personalities. Saoirse for me is bold, determined and intelligent. Furthermore, she's willing to do everything for her beloved kingdom and her people. While Rook for me is considerate, honest and an open-minded person which make me love his character the most. The chemistry between them is 🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻
The world-building? Oh, this is the best one! I love love every world-building in this book! There are four nations under Revelore: Aurandel (the angel-like human kingdom), Elorshin (the Mer kingdom), Tellusun (the sand kingdom) and Terradrin (the Under Kingdom).
In addition, the legends and lore too were inspired by Greco-Roman. Did I just mention Greco-Roman? Yes! So two more stars for this book!
Lastly, the ending? Oh gosh, I need the next book ASAP! I want to know what will happen in the next book *screaming*.
Rate: A solid 5🌟
—Feyssa.
May 14, 2022
“She’d been told of the horrid beasts and ravenous sea creatures that lived within the haunting abyss, contained there by an ancient wall that was built by her ancestors. It was a cursed prison that no one dared enter.
‘No one could live in such a place,’ Saoirse breathed. ‘No one could survive there.’
‘The Sea Witch does,’ Adda replied in a whisper, leading Saoirse past the final level of the library and out into the streets of Kellam.
‘She will help you.’”
Author Abigail Hair’s debut novel, From the Mouths of Sirens, begins with a choice and ends with a consequence. Mer princess Saoirse strikes a deal with Selussa, Witch of the Sea, for a chance at the Crown of Revelore, a two-fold opportunity to avenge her mother’s death and satisfy her unrest.
But what Saoirse doesn’t count on — love — presents the one choice whose consequence she’s not so sure is worth the fight.
From the Mouth of Sirens STANDS UP. It’s gorgeously told, sumptuously imagined, and rife with angst as disorienting as a crashing wave. Page after page, Abigail Hair leads readers through Saoirse’s journey, bringing them to the edge right along with her.
Will the Mer princess choose revenge for a life taken by malevolence and, thus, become an instrument of malice herself?
…and, honestly, with such evil forces involved, does the girl even possess such a choice?
If you’ve enjoyed Fable, The Hunger Games, or The Young Elites, this one’s for you.
And remember, “She needed him to be the monster she believed him to be.” (yes, chills)
‘No one could live in such a place,’ Saoirse breathed. ‘No one could survive there.’
‘The Sea Witch does,’ Adda replied in a whisper, leading Saoirse past the final level of the library and out into the streets of Kellam.
‘She will help you.’”
Author Abigail Hair’s debut novel, From the Mouths of Sirens, begins with a choice and ends with a consequence. Mer princess Saoirse strikes a deal with Selussa, Witch of the Sea, for a chance at the Crown of Revelore, a two-fold opportunity to avenge her mother’s death and satisfy her unrest.
But what Saoirse doesn’t count on — love — presents the one choice whose consequence she’s not so sure is worth the fight.
From the Mouth of Sirens STANDS UP. It’s gorgeously told, sumptuously imagined, and rife with angst as disorienting as a crashing wave. Page after page, Abigail Hair leads readers through Saoirse’s journey, bringing them to the edge right along with her.
Will the Mer princess choose revenge for a life taken by malevolence and, thus, become an instrument of malice herself?
…and, honestly, with such evil forces involved, does the girl even possess such a choice?
If you’ve enjoyed Fable, The Hunger Games, or The Young Elites, this one’s for you.
And remember, “She needed him to be the monster she believed him to be.” (yes, chills)
July 18, 2022
Ahhh this book was so fun! I saw a TikTok about this book by the author, and immediately preordered it. Which can be risky considering this is self published…but it was worth it!
I really loved the combo of a Little Mermaid retelling meets The Hunger Games! The world building was great and the imagery used by the author was amazing and really added to the story. I do think it started off a little on the slow side but once everyone was in Aurandel and especially when the tournament started, I couldn’t put this down!
The only thing that bothered my story wise was at the end when Rook seemed to forget all about his sister’s betrayal and how corrupt Aurandel is? Idk, that was weird. Otherwise, I think this was a good story with a cute little forbidden romance where things generally made sense and were easy to follow.
Lastly…of course, I can’t ever ignore typos😅 considering this is self published, there actually weren’t as many as I was expecting. A few formatting errors and misspelling of a name once or twice, and weird word swaps like using isles instead of aisles, passed instead of past, ridged instead of rigid…there were a few others but you get the point. The author also used matter-a-factly a couple times, and I’m very sure the phrase is “matter of fact”? That last one really bugged me lol but I think these are things that all could have been avoided with traditional publishing. All in all, I did really enjoy this book!
I really loved the combo of a Little Mermaid retelling meets The Hunger Games! The world building was great and the imagery used by the author was amazing and really added to the story. I do think it started off a little on the slow side but once everyone was in Aurandel and especially when the tournament started, I couldn’t put this down!
The only thing that bothered my story wise was at the end when Rook seemed to forget all about his sister’s betrayal and how corrupt Aurandel is? Idk, that was weird. Otherwise, I think this was a good story with a cute little forbidden romance where things generally made sense and were easy to follow.
Lastly…of course, I can’t ever ignore typos😅 considering this is self published, there actually weren’t as many as I was expecting. A few formatting errors and misspelling of a name once or twice, and weird word swaps like using isles instead of aisles, passed instead of past, ridged instead of rigid…there were a few others but you get the point. The author also used matter-a-factly a couple times, and I’m very sure the phrase is “matter of fact”? That last one really bugged me lol but I think these are things that all could have been avoided with traditional publishing. All in all, I did really enjoy this book!
April 13, 2022
This book has Mer people, high stakes, flying, and an arrogant prince. All things that I love! I've been burned before by self-published books, so I was nervous going in. It was also pitched as being like The Cruel Prince , which I did not enjoy. However, my hesitation was totally not needed.
My favorite parts of the book were the interactions between Saoirse and Rook. I was flying through the banter, the threats, the tentative extensions of peace. Those are the parts that most made me get lost in the world.
Surprisingly, my favorite character was Raven, the Queen and Rook's older sister. She immediately got my attention with the allusions to her backstory and her shifting motivations. Though, of course, I enjoyed both Saoirse and Rook's POV. They clearly had their own motivations for fighting in the tournament, and I respected them both even though they were on opposite sides of a tenuous political situation.
The worldbuilding was so fun. I love mythology, so the hints at the Titans and old heroes of this world caught my attention. I do wish that we got firmer descriptions of the people from the beginning, especially the Mer. (I was picturing mermaid tails and gills, which are not there. They also walk while underwater which I have a hard time imagining.) It was cool to see the Auran world from an outside and Auran perspective. I'm excited that the book seems to be setting up more world exploration in the coming sequels.
Oh, and I cannot help but mention the plot twists and reveals. The climax of this book is packed with tension and both POV characters discover new information that changes everything.
The biggest things holding me back from giving five stars are pacing and background characters. The beginning of the book felt a bit slow to me. This was partially because every page had dense paragraphs that are easy to get lost in. When the trial finally started, I was nearly halfway through the book when I was expecting to be there much earlier. Additionally, while I enjoyed some of the side characters like Raven and Hasana, I was missing that spark of life from some of the others. At one point, a narrator observes how it's hard to imagine hurting the other tributes because they're clearly individuals with their own hopes and lives. I didn't feel that sentiment, and I wish I had.
Overall, I believe this is a wonderful debut. If you're looking for a fun fantasy world with tense political alliances, a soft magic system, and a deadly tournament, this is the book for you. You'll also have fun with a retelling that includes enemies-to-lovers and betrayals.
**I was given a free ARC copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.**
My favorite parts of the book were the interactions between Saoirse and Rook. I was flying through the banter, the threats, the tentative extensions of peace. Those are the parts that most made me get lost in the world.
Surprisingly, my favorite character was Raven, the Queen and Rook's older sister. She immediately got my attention with the allusions to her backstory and her shifting motivations. Though, of course, I enjoyed both Saoirse and Rook's POV. They clearly had their own motivations for fighting in the tournament, and I respected them both even though they were on opposite sides of a tenuous political situation.
The worldbuilding was so fun. I love mythology, so the hints at the Titans and old heroes of this world caught my attention. I do wish that we got firmer descriptions of the people from the beginning, especially the Mer. (I was picturing mermaid tails and gills, which are not there. They also walk while underwater which I have a hard time imagining.) It was cool to see the Auran world from an outside and Auran perspective. I'm excited that the book seems to be setting up more world exploration in the coming sequels.
Oh, and I cannot help but mention the plot twists and reveals. The climax of this book is packed with tension and both POV characters discover new information that changes everything.
The biggest things holding me back from giving five stars are pacing and background characters. The beginning of the book felt a bit slow to me. This was partially because every page had dense paragraphs that are easy to get lost in. When the trial finally started, I was nearly halfway through the book when I was expecting to be there much earlier. Additionally, while I enjoyed some of the side characters like Raven and Hasana, I was missing that spark of life from some of the others. At one point, a narrator observes how it's hard to imagine hurting the other tributes because they're clearly individuals with their own hopes and lives. I didn't feel that sentiment, and I wish I had.
Overall, I believe this is a wonderful debut. If you're looking for a fun fantasy world with tense political alliances, a soft magic system, and a deadly tournament, this is the book for you. You'll also have fun with a retelling that includes enemies-to-lovers and betrayals.
**I was given a free ARC copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.**
June 15, 2022
I received an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
This book was fantastic! From the Mouths of Sirens is an amazing retelling of The Little Mermaid, giving the whimsical classic a dark and mature twist. There were lush descriptions, unique new creatures and characters, and two absolute heartthrobs for protagonists. The enemies to lovers arc was excellently executed, and I found myself both swooning and yelling at the love story because it was so well done. As a primarily Adult age category reader, this YA was still very enjoyable! I felt like it strayed away from the cookie-cutter YA feel which was super refreshing!
Overall a super fun read, and I'm so excited for book 2!!!
This book was fantastic! From the Mouths of Sirens is an amazing retelling of The Little Mermaid, giving the whimsical classic a dark and mature twist. There were lush descriptions, unique new creatures and characters, and two absolute heartthrobs for protagonists. The enemies to lovers arc was excellently executed, and I found myself both swooning and yelling at the love story because it was so well done. As a primarily Adult age category reader, this YA was still very enjoyable! I felt like it strayed away from the cookie-cutter YA feel which was super refreshing!
Overall a super fun read, and I'm so excited for book 2!!!
March 30, 2023
3.5 stars. I liked this book and thought it was very well written. The plot continued forward and the characters were lovely. I think I would have liked this book more if I had been in the fantasy mood, but I didn’t think about that when I started it. Overall I would recommend to people who love high stakes fantasy drizzled with romance.
May 22, 2024
The promotions for this book had me on "The Little Mermaid" I didn't even stop to read that it also has Hunger Games meets enemies to lovers, I was already hooked :D
But the best part is, this book is exactly what it has been marketed for and I can't wait for the second one!!!!! Thank you Abigail for such a masterpiece.. seriously!
But the best part is, this book is exactly what it has been marketed for and I can't wait for the second one!!!!! Thank you Abigail for such a masterpiece.. seriously!
June 10, 2022
An amazing & fun read. I can’t wait for book 2 and am so excited about the conclusion of this duology. I loved the lore, action, & romance so much. I wish there was a prequel series and ten more books set in this world. Full review to come soon!
January 22, 2024
3.5 ⭐️ Started off a bit slow but at around 50/60% of the way through it really picked up! Really enjoyed the trials in this book, as well as the political elements. The plot twist at the end also got me, definitely will be continuing this series!
September 7, 2022
*3.5
Engaging, lush, descriptive. Concept is great, as well as most of the worldbuilding. And the opening scene was awesome. But it definitely needed another few rounds of editing. Still, I flew through the first half and was left wanting more by the end. I hope we get more about the Titans in the next book. And gorgeous cover!
Engaging, lush, descriptive. Concept is great, as well as most of the worldbuilding. And the opening scene was awesome. But it definitely needed another few rounds of editing. Still, I flew through the first half and was left wanting more by the end. I hope we get more about the Titans in the next book. And gorgeous cover!
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