2.5 stars rounded up
This had some enjoyable and cute parts, but also had some issues that bogged it down for me. With some editing, I think the story could have really shined more.
Things I liked:
The shifter family dynamic struggles: I liked reading about the shifter society and their rituals and expectations and such. I wish that had been explored more, especially after the weirdness at Thanksgiving.
Shifter science: There was some neat bits of actual science included in here for the shifters. It’s not something I see very often, which made it pretty unique. It was written at a level where it was science-y without being overbearing.
Shifter myths: This was neat as well - the myths and old fairytale type books that Thor was researching. The balance of this with the science blended well together for some intriguing background.
I would have liked both the science parts and mythology parts to be more expanded on though - these were very interesting world building (and important to plot!) and I felt like they got buried under other things.
Things I had problems with:
Would you please, please stop fucking: Once they mated, it felt like all they ever did was fuck. Constantly. Interesting conversations - like about important myths! - were interrupted in favor of banging. It also felt like the story leaned on making the sex stand in for emotional connection, and that didn’t quite work for me.
There was too much going on: By the end, there were so many threads going on that it felt really scattered as the story tried to address and wrap them all up. A mystery, family, romantic relationship, the friends, etc. Just so much.
The strangest plot thread(?) was that Cas played hockey. It didn’t matter, at all. It could have been any sport. It could have been any scholarship lost. It felt…yeah, just noise to me.
There was dual family drama/struggles, which again, could have been great for developing deeper connection, but ended up feeling glossed over a bit. Especially in favor of sex.
Time transitions were not well delineated: A small thing, but I got confused by sudden, not well marked time and location jumps. It was just another distraction from my reading immersion. Section breaks would have solved this.
Weird dated pop culture references: I will admit this tends to be one of my personal pet peeves, and may not bother others as much. There are strangely added pop culture references throughout the book, and rarely do they add to the story.
There’s a reference to the Brady Bunch (which aired in 1969, I googled it because all I know about it is that it was a tv show), to some comedian in the 90’s (unnamed? no idea what that was), I think a reference to The Good Place (have never seen it, but someone told me that’s what it was), Stephen King’s Misery, and then…A Christmas Carole. ???pls
These were extremely distracting for me, especially because I did not understand them (I am not even that babby? but 1970 is olden times now i am sorry to tell you)
Editing, typos, etc: This needed significant editing, both for length/meandering plot, and for the high number of typos/errors. Apparently some of these were fixed in the KU file, so that’s a good start.
Overall, while this had potential, it feels a bit more like a rough draft to me. With some refocusing on the more important plot threads, it would really showcase the authors talent.
I received this ARC from the author in exchange for my honest review. All the opinions are my own.