Ever since her parents died, nerdy Amelia Forbes has always been bullied by the school's bad boy and jock, Jason. Ruthless and drop dead gorgeous, Jason makes her school years a living hell. Meaner than the devil himself, he is always sure to ruin Mel's day. One day, they are paired up for a school project and in the process of working on the project at home, Jason forces himself on her. Ashamed, Mel feels disgusted with her inability to stand up for herself and soon, she finds out she is pregnant with her bully's baby.
Scared out of her wits, poor Mel is helpless. No one is willing to come to her aid except Adrian, Jason's best friend. And as Jason sees Mel with Adrian, he begins to get jealous and soon, he finds himself falling for Mel.
But will Mel ever forgive him? Will she ever forget the wrongs he had done to her?
Hello good day people. Please do not buy this version of Pregnant For My Bully: Book1. There is no book one or book two, rather Goodnovel took my book on Kindle without my consent. My book has been published on Amazon now, both hardcopy and a kindle version and if you would like to finish reading the book, please do so. Title is Pregnant For My Bully (Edited Version)
This book was a wild ride … wow! Very interesting… I could not believe the villain gets redeemed after being complete evil for 75% of the story. I would give 5 stars but book 1 should have the complete story and book two shouldn’t be a separate fee.
Okay so why is romance mentioned anywhere in this title....this book was horrible! If you're looking for romance move along...even this Adrian...he's definitely not the hero in this book. :(
First off, I read all the reviews about this book, so I knew it would likely be terrible, but the sample I read intrigued me. However, be advised, there are two versions of this same book on sale at Amazon. One is priced at $8.99. The other at $4.99. Be sure to purchase the cheaper version, which claims to be edited unlike the nine dollar version. 🤷🏽♀️ Go figure that mystery out for yourself.
Now…having read this I agree with pretty much all the reviews that say this book is terrible. I would zero rate this if I could. I don’t think this is a coherent story, but a series of POVs written by the author. It’s more like a character study of two damaged individuals, that the author decided should have a HEA. There is no chemistry or spark between the h or H. He begins to feel sexual attraction to her, but it comes off more like reverse Stockholm syndrome. The h, on the other hand, is just a depressed and suicidal mess who lets this guy bully and rape her because her parents died. She doesn’t even know why he bullies her.
The H bullies the h because he blames her for his mother’s death. His mother and both of her parents died in the same car accident. It was an accident, but his damaged mind has put all his anger for the death of his mother on this poor girl who lost both her parents in the same accident. I think the author was trying to draw a fated connection between the couple, but it’s so poorly done b/c the story is not coherent. It doesn’t support this connection.
What you get in this story is epic bullying, rape, and an author trying to redeem the H by having him do manual labor on a farm 😏 That solves it all and the HEA has arrives…and the end. There is some other stuff, but again it’s not a coherent story, so it really doesn’t matter. It’s just stuff.
If you decide to take the plunge on this then get the $4.99 version. You will thank me 😁
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
I occasionally like to indulge in the bully romance trope, mainly, because I am a sucker for anti-heroes or guys that you love to hate and hate to love. Love the conflicting emotions and the angst. Sadly, this book only had half of the trope: it was bullying alright, but no romance in it whatsoever.
For a story to be effective or enjoyable for me, there has to be balance between good and evil. It cannot all be bad or all good. There has to be tension between the two poles. Unfortunately, in this book, it was all evil. There was bullying from the the beginning until the end. It just kept getting worse. The zero was abusive in every sense of the word: physical, mental and emotional. The heroine cried the whole book and seemed to have zero sense of self-preservation.
There was zero character development. I kept hoping that she would grow a spine or not be as gullible but she never did. The zero did not develop a single redeeming quality. He had zero remorse for all the evil things that he continue doing to her including brutal rape. He wasn't even an interesting character, just a bully.
It was also kind of unbelievable that nobody in the school (staff) would notice the heavy bullying by everyone. Or, that the zero would get away with just a week off the team after the atrocity that he did (not even the most offensive one).
I cannot believe that readers are asked to pay another $7.99 for less than 200 pages in a sequel to see how this train wreck of a story ends. This should have been one book.
The one star goes to the stunning fact that I finished this book.
I haven’t read a lot of bully romance books so I really do not have a clue what they do in this genre. I’m going to assume the bullies are sociopaths (?) like Jake is in this book. He gets so sadistic towards Amelia (Mel) that you’re left wondering why he isn’t in in-patient treatment at a psych ward. The sexual assault was terrible.. as they all are but the way he would think this girl would want to have sex with him is insanity.. I gave Mel a pass as I thought she would at least call the police.. but the book just stops. It did not end.. it just stopped. So we do not know what Mel is going to do until the next book I guess. Mel is a beaten down girl but she is incredibly smart and has the good sense to have self preservation. How she manages to keep up her grades and Jakes’ all while being bullied by others in that school is something I couldn’t do. Also.. where are the teachers.. counselors.. some adult?!? They don’t know this child is being bullied?!? If a second book ever comes out I would read just to see if Mel puts that psycho in prison.
The only thing I hate is that Amelia keeps letting Jason ruin her friendship with people who actually like her, what I mean by that is she let's him get in her head and I hate the way he bullys her and i hope she allows Adrian and Dani to be friends with her
The book started out good, I feel like it was longer than necessary, like adding all the friend hangouts, didn’t really care for it, so he is mean to her for 50% of the book, the other 50 it kinda gets a bit boring. I liked the ending though.
The book was very emotional but there were so many grammar issues. And it was actually kind of rushed not enough dialogue between characters to much flipping back and forth from points of view. Wish I could of given it more stars
I really enjoyed this story and at first I felt like she shouldn't forgive him, but I love how he grew and changed himself around and I'm glad they both became two strong individuals