This is the second book in the "enhanced" series by this author. I strongly suggest reading the first book, Five Minutes More, before taking on this book. I really liked the first book in the series -- this book not so much.
In the last book in the series, there is a short side plot concerning the kidnapping of kids who have enhanced abilities. Well, in this book, they are following up on that theme. Finn is designated to go into a boy's home for unwanted enhanced children. He supposedly is able to pull off looking like a 17 year old boy named Joe (despite the fact that he is also the full-time lover of Talon . . . There is just something incredibly wrong with that picture.).
While Finn is in a very restrictive boy's home -- almost like a prison -- the rest of the HERO squad are out doing their normal duties.
The problem with this book is that it reads like a hodge lodge of disjointed thoughts. That, however, doesn't make a good story. It makes a stream of consciousness mess. While book one in the series had a very clear outline and plan. This book is sorely lacking anything resembling an outline, and that makes it very hard to read. Too many flash backs and side references to make entertaining reading.
Additionally, the author beats the reader over the head to make her points. For example, Talon tells a story about being drugged by hot chocolate when he was a kid. And while Finn is in the children's home, he is given hot chocolate and then falls asleep. Can't someone please put two and two together and reach the conclusion that Finn is being drugged in the child house without spending chapters to reach that conclusion?!? It is so very annoying.
Once Finn infiltrates the children's home, this story becomes very disjointed. Every chapter changes the locale and the focus of the story. Basically, this is what happens, a bad guy named Alan Swann (not Peter O'Toole from My Favorite Year but a televangelist type who hates all enhanced people) is building a "school" to teach young enhanced kids. But, of course, it is not designed to teach anything, but to manipulate and abuse the kids who have powers that Swann can use.
Ultimately, Swann kidnaps Finn and a couple of other enhanced kids, and tries to force them to use their powers. Since Finn is not enhanced and is just wearing a sticker on his face where the raised tattoo of an enhanced person should be -- he just gets abused. And Talon and his crew come to the rescue, but get caught by Swann. Swann has learned that by injecting an enhanced person with a lot of caffeine causes them to go crazy. Swann injects Talon with the overdose of caffeine, and Talon can't control any of his powers, and he destroys the buildings he is in (Swann hopes that Talon will kill himself and every enhanced in the building). But, Finn realizes that saying "I love you" and kissing Talon will stop the caffeine induces craze. (Can we throw up yet at the sicky sweetness?)
Talon destroys the building but not the people in the building who are miraculously saved, and everyone goes on to have a wonderful life working at HERO.
The first book in this series was a promising look at an interesting concept, and I really looked forward to the second book. This was, however, a poorly written and edited disappointment. While the theme still has potential, if it is poorly presented like in this book, then it has little merit. Unfortunately, I give this book two stars. If there is another book in the series, the author and the editor need to do a much better job at making a flowing story that does not seem like bits and pieces of short stories joined together into something that they want to call a novel.