I was immediately hooked by the prospect of another nonbinary detective starring in a murder mystery as I have loved queer murder mysteries recently.
Detective Sam is brought to Paradiso Island during the biggest wedding of the season to investigate the murder of a staff memeber working the event. Thrown into a world of influencers and having a language barrier with the staff, will Sam be able to solve this case?
I read this book right when I needed something just like it - being easy to follow, containing humor, and having lots of diverse characters. However, is it the best written book? No. I felt that it was lacking both in character development and writing engagement. I would have loved to learn more about the characters, their personalities, who they are. Instead, they felt rather flat to me. The writing - I'm not quite sure how to describe it, other than it's not one that I would struggle to put down and take breaks reading. It's just missing that really engaging factor for me.
Plotwise, I did really enjoy it. Some pacing was off and the timeline was fairly confusing, but the mystery and way the case was written allowed me to relax and enjoy the book. I was mostly kept guessing along the way which I like in mysteries & thrillers.
Characterwise, we have a nonbinary MC, Sam, who uses they/them pronouns and I really liked the way some of this representation was done. There are also various characters who fall somewhere on the achillean spectrum, including Sam. There's a lot of Latine representation & Spanish language, although it felt too much like it was playing into the stereotype of Latine staff & rich white country clubbers, rather than including POC characters in other positions.
One other reason I couldn't rate this higher, is the poor inclusion of gender neutral language in Spanish. I myself do not speak Spanish aside from a few words here and there, but when it felt off to me, I consulted people in the bookstagram community who do speak Spanish. The consensus on what was done wrong:
- El detectivex: detective is already gender neutral in Spanish, as it ends in -e. The -x is also not pronounceable in Spanish and the -e ending is preferred by Spanish speakers. Using "el" (or the masculine form of "the") also defeats the purpose of gender neutral language and should be "le" instead.
- Ellos as "they": ellos is the masculine version of the plural "they" in Spanish, with ellas being the feminine version. Referring to Sam with the pronoun "ellos" is still using gender to refer to them. Instead, the gender neutral singular they, "elle" is used by Spanish speakers & should be used instead of "ellos".
Overall, I would still probably pick up the next installment out of curiosity and a general state of enjoyment.
Rep: nonbinary MC, achillean MC & SCs, Latine SCs, Spanish language
CW: murder, death, blood, needles, alcohol, explosives, misgendering, cyberbullying, bullying, ableist language
Rating system:
5 - absolutely love, little-to-no dislikes that did not impact my reading experience
4 - great book, minor dislikes that did have an impact on my reading experience
3 - good/decent book but for some reason did not hook me or there were some problematic things that just were not addressed or greatly impacted my reading experience
2 - is either a book I did not click with and did not enjoy, problematic aspects are not addressed and severely impacted my reading experience, or I DNF'd but think it has potential for others
1 - is very problematic, I would not recommend the book to anyone
Thank you to Netgalley & Akleos Productions for an eARC in exchange for an honest review. Expected pub date: June 1, 2022.