I loved this collection and cannot wait to see more from Fanta Ballo. For a debut collection I think this collection was very well done. The way her words flow feels incredibly natural and made a lot of the poems really stick more than what I've experienced while reading other poetry. I loved the rawness of her writing, my only critique, which I wouldn't even call it that honestly, is that I would love to see more imagery from her. I don't necessarily think any of the poems in the collection needed it, it's more of that I just want more imagery poems from what is in this collection she is able to write some really powerful imagery.