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An Appearance of Goodness
Can a Derbyshire meeting lead to love or will Pemberley be plunged into mystery?
In the rainy summer of 1812, Mr Darcy returns to Pemberley with a large party with the hope that coming home will help him recover from his disappointment. He lost Elizabeth Bennet’s good opinion, but Darcy did all he could to rectify his errors. Meanwhile, Elizabeth hopes that travelling with a newly-wed Jane and Bingley will raise her spirits and distract her from thoughts of Darcy.
When a misunderstanding causes the Bingley party and Darcy’s to spend a fortnight together at Pemberley, both Elizabeth and Darcy wonder if the other could love them. When the season’s wet weather causes flooding throughout Derbyshire, Darcy’s attention reluctantly shifts from his guests—and Elizabeth—to managing the tragedy.
But when someone drowns and Darcy refuses to believe their death was an accident from the storm, he and Elizabeth must work together to uncover the truth before his houseguests leave, and before anyone else gets hurt.
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Published October 1, 2022
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September 20, 2022
A JAFF Mystery
4.5* rounded up
This variation begins at Netherfield, post the infamous refused proposal at Hunsford. Elizabeth lives at Netherfield with the now married Jane and Charles. They, along with Bingley’s sisters and Hurst will journey north to Scarborough to introduce Jane to family and friends along the way. Bingley, being Bingley, hasn’t made his intentions to stop at Pemberley clear to Elizabeth until their near arrival and the last person Darcy expects to see disembark from the carriage is Elizabeth. Needless to say, both are a little mortified and embarrassed. So begins Darcy’s house party, which also includes two other gentlemen friends and a sister to one of them. Colonel Fitzwilliam will eventually join the party.
As the the visit unfolds, not only will Darcy be dealing with his feelings for Elizabeth, but extreme weather and its after effects will cause great damage, along with stress to his mind and finances. All this, then the unexpected discovery of a murdered Pemberley maid and an uncooperative magistrate.
I really loved this large-and-in-charge, master of Pemberley, Darcy. He never waivers in his duties and responsibilities to the people of his estate, while still providing hospitality to his guests during a trying time. Elizabeth also sees a different Darcy when among his friends, and as she experiences his goodness, her own feelings about him change.
I was not too crazy about the two gentlemen guests—no doubt written purposely that way, and from that perspective, written well. I don’t think we’re supposed to like them. For myself, I found them insufferable, and their banter a bit repetitive. However, I was intrigued and definitely wanted to discover what they were about. I can’t say too much more about them without a spoiler.
A very good read, I was interested throughout and enjoyed the added murder mystery twist to the plot. Elizabeth and Darcy work together as sleuths seeking evidence they need to bring a murderer to justice, and in the process, Darcy’s love is finally requited.
Mature content.
I received an ARC from the author and am voluntarily providing a review.
4.5* rounded up
This variation begins at Netherfield, post the infamous refused proposal at Hunsford. Elizabeth lives at Netherfield with the now married Jane and Charles. They, along with Bingley’s sisters and Hurst will journey north to Scarborough to introduce Jane to family and friends along the way. Bingley, being Bingley, hasn’t made his intentions to stop at Pemberley clear to Elizabeth until their near arrival and the last person Darcy expects to see disembark from the carriage is Elizabeth. Needless to say, both are a little mortified and embarrassed. So begins Darcy’s house party, which also includes two other gentlemen friends and a sister to one of them. Colonel Fitzwilliam will eventually join the party.
As the the visit unfolds, not only will Darcy be dealing with his feelings for Elizabeth, but extreme weather and its after effects will cause great damage, along with stress to his mind and finances. All this, then the unexpected discovery of a murdered Pemberley maid and an uncooperative magistrate.
I really loved this large-and-in-charge, master of Pemberley, Darcy. He never waivers in his duties and responsibilities to the people of his estate, while still providing hospitality to his guests during a trying time. Elizabeth also sees a different Darcy when among his friends, and as she experiences his goodness, her own feelings about him change.
I was not too crazy about the two gentlemen guests—no doubt written purposely that way, and from that perspective, written well. I don’t think we’re supposed to like them. For myself, I found them insufferable, and their banter a bit repetitive. However, I was intrigued and definitely wanted to discover what they were about. I can’t say too much more about them without a spoiler.
A very good read, I was interested throughout and enjoyed the added murder mystery twist to the plot. Elizabeth and Darcy work together as sleuths seeking evidence they need to bring a murderer to justice, and in the process, Darcy’s love is finally requited.
Mature content.
I received an ARC from the author and am voluntarily providing a review.
May 5, 2025
Do not judge by appearances. A rich heart may be under a poor coat. ~ Scottish Proverb
Is it also true that a poor heart may be hidden under a rich coat?
“An Appearance of Goodness” begins at Pemberley. After the DPH (Disastrous Proposal at Hunsford) Charles Bingley marries Jane Bennet. Fitzwilliam Darcy does not marry Elizabeth Bennet.
Months later, Elizabeth is making her home with Jane and Charles. A journey north is planned and includes visits to Bingley’s relations and friends. However, Bingley has not made it clear that the visit with some of his friends will take place at Pemberley! Elizabeth and Jane are concerned about Elizabeth’s reception there.
Good news for everyone except Caroline Bingley — Darcy welcomes Elizabeth warmly. Their friendship and love increase from there.
There are more important things than outward appearance. No amount of makeup can cover an ugly personality. ~ Audrey Hepburn
Other friends of Bingley and Darcy are also present at the house party: James Utterson, Louis Balfour, and Balfour’s widowed sister, Mrs. Hester Lanyon. Colonel Fitzwilliam arrives later, intent on furthering his acquaintance with Mrs. Lanyon.
The group is congenial, except for the snipes of Caroline Bingley. She has her usual witticisms about Elizabeth but her more serious concerns are for Mr. Balfour and Mrs. Lanyon, who are of Indian descent. Mrs. Lanyon avoids all the women, thinking they share Miss Bingley’s racism. Her friendship is hard-won but steady.
A storm causes damage and multiple deaths in Lambton and Pemberley. One death seems suspicious. Was the maid really a casualty of the rainfall? Or is a murderer among the house guests?
Small items appear to be missing from Pemberley and elsewhere. Is a thief also present? But all the house guests are financially comfortable, aren’t they? Why would someone steal from a friend?
The common practice of keeping up appearances with society, is a mere selfish struggle of the vain, with the vain. ~ John Ruskin
How far will a vain person travel to keep up appearances?
“An Appearance of Goodness” has Mystery and Romance rolled into one book. I recommend it to anyone who enjoys JAFF.
No one is so miserable as the poor person who maintains the appearance of wealth. ~ Charles Spurgeon
The author gave me an early copy of this book. I am voluntarily leaving a review.
Is it also true that a poor heart may be hidden under a rich coat?
“An Appearance of Goodness” begins at Pemberley. After the DPH (Disastrous Proposal at Hunsford) Charles Bingley marries Jane Bennet. Fitzwilliam Darcy does not marry Elizabeth Bennet.
Months later, Elizabeth is making her home with Jane and Charles. A journey north is planned and includes visits to Bingley’s relations and friends. However, Bingley has not made it clear that the visit with some of his friends will take place at Pemberley! Elizabeth and Jane are concerned about Elizabeth’s reception there.
Good news for everyone except Caroline Bingley — Darcy welcomes Elizabeth warmly. Their friendship and love increase from there.
There are more important things than outward appearance. No amount of makeup can cover an ugly personality. ~ Audrey Hepburn
Other friends of Bingley and Darcy are also present at the house party: James Utterson, Louis Balfour, and Balfour’s widowed sister, Mrs. Hester Lanyon. Colonel Fitzwilliam arrives later, intent on furthering his acquaintance with Mrs. Lanyon.
The group is congenial, except for the snipes of Caroline Bingley. She has her usual witticisms about Elizabeth but her more serious concerns are for Mr. Balfour and Mrs. Lanyon, who are of Indian descent. Mrs. Lanyon avoids all the women, thinking they share Miss Bingley’s racism. Her friendship is hard-won but steady.
A storm causes damage and multiple deaths in Lambton and Pemberley. One death seems suspicious. Was the maid really a casualty of the rainfall? Or is a murderer among the house guests?
Small items appear to be missing from Pemberley and elsewhere. Is a thief also present? But all the house guests are financially comfortable, aren’t they? Why would someone steal from a friend?
The common practice of keeping up appearances with society, is a mere selfish struggle of the vain, with the vain. ~ John Ruskin
How far will a vain person travel to keep up appearances?
“An Appearance of Goodness” has Mystery and Romance rolled into one book. I recommend it to anyone who enjoys JAFF.
No one is so miserable as the poor person who maintains the appearance of wealth. ~ Charles Spurgeon
The author gave me an early copy of this book. I am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 8, 2022
You'll find a good premise and a lot of story elements to like here, particularly in the last half of the book, when the pace finally picks up.
The timeline is post-Hunsford marriage proposal and argument between Darcy and Elizabeth. He has taken her reproofs to heart. As a result, Mr. Bingley and Elizabeth's sister Jane are now happily married, and Mr. Bennet has been thoroughly warned about Mr. Wickham and takes appropriate precautions to protect his youngest daughters.
Elizabeth now lives with Jane and Bingley, who bring her along on a travel excursion with the Hursts and Caroline Bingley through northern England to visit various Bingley friends and relations. Some miscommunication lands the group at Pemberley without Elizabeth being aware of their destination or Darcy being forewarned that Elizabeth is part of the traveling group. #awkward!
Darcy has other houseguests too. There are Mr. Balfour and his widowed sister, Hester Lanyon, who are half Scottish and half-Indian. Mr. Utterson is a more recent acquaintance, actually having a closer friendship with Balfour than with Darcy. Georgiana is a bit overwhelmed with all the company but manages with Mrs. Annesley's assistance.
The set up for the mystery part of the book is very drawn out, describing the house party's daily activities including meals, day trips, riding excursions, and party games. Caroline and Louisa display their expected snark and prejudice, which extends to the brown-skinned Mrs. Lanyon and her brother. Balfour and Utterson have opposite personalities, with the latter a prickly sort of man and the former dauntlessly jovial, but both are irresponsible about money and annoyed that their fathers won't give them more to spend. Meanwhile, Darcy and Elizabeth tentatively draw closer, each uncertain about the other's feelings.
A natural disaster immediately alters everyone's plans, and it's at this point where the plot begins to move forward with more purpose. Darcy grapples with the horrific aftereffects of a major storm that has brought death and destruction to his tenants and lands. Then it appears there's a thief in the area, and a Pemberley maid is found dead. Though this death is officially deemed accidental, Darcy and Elizabeth suspect murder.
Ms. Moll's writing is excellent, but after the promising early chapters establishing the premise, there's a long section that really drags - to the point that I almost abandoned the book altogether. I understand the need to set up what follows, but it could have and should have been done in far fewer pages. The second half after the storm and flooding introduces another new subplot - a secondary romance that's irrelevant to the rest of the story. While the romance between Elizabeth and Darcy is developed nicely, some passages expounding upon their thoughts/feelings get repetitive. Descriptive scenes of the two enjoying premarital sex are also unnecessary.
Overall, it's a very good, well-written story that would be a better and more tightly woven book had at least a third of its content been left out.
Mature content warning.
The timeline is post-Hunsford marriage proposal and argument between Darcy and Elizabeth. He has taken her reproofs to heart. As a result, Mr. Bingley and Elizabeth's sister Jane are now happily married, and Mr. Bennet has been thoroughly warned about Mr. Wickham and takes appropriate precautions to protect his youngest daughters.
Elizabeth now lives with Jane and Bingley, who bring her along on a travel excursion with the Hursts and Caroline Bingley through northern England to visit various Bingley friends and relations. Some miscommunication lands the group at Pemberley without Elizabeth being aware of their destination or Darcy being forewarned that Elizabeth is part of the traveling group. #awkward!
Darcy has other houseguests too. There are Mr. Balfour and his widowed sister, Hester Lanyon, who are half Scottish and half-Indian. Mr. Utterson is a more recent acquaintance, actually having a closer friendship with Balfour than with Darcy. Georgiana is a bit overwhelmed with all the company but manages with Mrs. Annesley's assistance.
The set up for the mystery part of the book is very drawn out, describing the house party's daily activities including meals, day trips, riding excursions, and party games. Caroline and Louisa display their expected snark and prejudice, which extends to the brown-skinned Mrs. Lanyon and her brother. Balfour and Utterson have opposite personalities, with the latter a prickly sort of man and the former dauntlessly jovial, but both are irresponsible about money and annoyed that their fathers won't give them more to spend. Meanwhile, Darcy and Elizabeth tentatively draw closer, each uncertain about the other's feelings.
A natural disaster immediately alters everyone's plans, and it's at this point where the plot begins to move forward with more purpose. Darcy grapples with the horrific aftereffects of a major storm that has brought death and destruction to his tenants and lands. Then it appears there's a thief in the area, and a Pemberley maid is found dead. Though this death is officially deemed accidental, Darcy and Elizabeth suspect murder.
Ms. Moll's writing is excellent, but after the promising early chapters establishing the premise, there's a long section that really drags - to the point that I almost abandoned the book altogether. I understand the need to set up what follows, but it could have and should have been done in far fewer pages. The second half after the storm and flooding introduces another new subplot - a secondary romance that's irrelevant to the rest of the story. While the romance between Elizabeth and Darcy is developed nicely, some passages expounding upon their thoughts/feelings get repetitive. Descriptive scenes of the two enjoying premarital sex are also unnecessary.
Overall, it's a very good, well-written story that would be a better and more tightly woven book had at least a third of its content been left out.
Mature content warning.
August 26, 2022
We open with both a description of visitors to Pemberley -introducing several new characters- a wealthy gentleman, although not yet inherited, his widowed sister and a second son learning law.
As well as realizing there has been a misunderstanding in the Bingley party’s travels, which includes Elizabeth who now lives with them and where they would be staying during their journey north to Scarborough.
ODC meet with a mix of emotions and the consequent misunderstanding and miscommunication. This goes on for a bit, while all the guests settle, make themselves comfortable at Pemberley, becoming acquainted and in one case trying to cause trouble (guess who).
Feeling pretty much ignored by Jane, who is busy with Bingley and Louisa, the only other married lady, Elizabeth tries to befriend the shy Georgiana, the widow Mrs. Lanyon and Georgiana’s Ladys maid sent to assist her.
(Personally, I kept waiting for the story to take a turn regarding the ring scraping her skin, but it was more a clue in a completely different direction.)
A constant theme running through the whole book is the complaints regarding the significant lack of funds for both gentlemen, either from over spending/lifestyle or a very low allowance from the father of the second son and much is made of it time and again and this too becomes a clue.
When a terrible storm happens, following months of too much rain, the destruction and loss of life takes a heavy toll on Darcy. One death in particular seems to have happened under suspicious circumstances. Darcy takes charge as is his duty and responsibility, but he feels it deeply and is overwrought. It is this along with other little nudges that pushes Elizabeth to boldly declare herself.
Romances and murder investigation continue with the help of Col. Fitzwilliam who shows up as soon as he hears of the significant flooding in Derbyshire.
Angst level is fairly low, up until nearly the end.
While the intimate scenes are tastefully written, they are still quite forward and OOC for ODG.
4.5 from me. I am not a fan of OOC sexcapades, and I felt the jump of 2-3 weeks, from being abashed at seeing Darcy again to basically inviting him at night, even with being engaged, was farfetched for me.
As far as characters go, I'm not too fond of this Elizabeth, but there is something poignant and also yummy about this Darcy, he is quite multi-layered.
The last HM book I read (An Affectionate Heart) was intense in the suffering of our characters and that anguish leapt off the page through the style of writing.
I am amazed that the author can once again create the tone mirroring this story and the occurrences that take place with her writing style. I felt they were quite different.
I received an Advanced Copy of this book for my honest review.
As well as realizing there has been a misunderstanding in the Bingley party’s travels, which includes Elizabeth who now lives with them and where they would be staying during their journey north to Scarborough.
ODC meet with a mix of emotions and the consequent misunderstanding and miscommunication. This goes on for a bit, while all the guests settle, make themselves comfortable at Pemberley, becoming acquainted and in one case trying to cause trouble (guess who).
Feeling pretty much ignored by Jane, who is busy with Bingley and Louisa, the only other married lady, Elizabeth tries to befriend the shy Georgiana, the widow Mrs. Lanyon and Georgiana’s Ladys maid sent to assist her.
(Personally, I kept waiting for the story to take a turn regarding the ring scraping her skin, but it was more a clue in a completely different direction.)
A constant theme running through the whole book is the complaints regarding the significant lack of funds for both gentlemen, either from over spending/lifestyle or a very low allowance from the father of the second son and much is made of it time and again and this too becomes a clue.
When a terrible storm happens, following months of too much rain, the destruction and loss of life takes a heavy toll on Darcy. One death in particular seems to have happened under suspicious circumstances. Darcy takes charge as is his duty and responsibility, but he feels it deeply and is overwrought. It is this along with other little nudges that pushes Elizabeth to boldly declare herself.
Romances and murder investigation continue with the help of Col. Fitzwilliam who shows up as soon as he hears of the significant flooding in Derbyshire.
Angst level is fairly low, up until nearly the end.
While the intimate scenes are tastefully written, they are still quite forward and OOC for ODG.
4.5 from me. I am not a fan of OOC sexcapades, and I felt the jump of 2-3 weeks, from being abashed at seeing Darcy again to basically inviting him at night, even with being engaged, was farfetched for me.
As far as characters go, I'm not too fond of this Elizabeth, but there is something poignant and also yummy about this Darcy, he is quite multi-layered.
The last HM book I read (An Affectionate Heart) was intense in the suffering of our characters and that anguish leapt off the page through the style of writing.
I am amazed that the author can once again create the tone mirroring this story and the occurrences that take place with her writing style. I felt they were quite different.
I received an Advanced Copy of this book for my honest review.
July 28, 2024
Review also posted on my blog
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Fitzwilliam Darcy loves Elizabeth Bennet. Unfortunately, having delivered the world’s most insulting proposal, he was vehemently denied.
In an effort to explain himself and correct some misunderstandings, he writes a letter to Elizabeth, then drags his broken heart back to London.
Elizabeth feels mortified for having been so uncivil to Darcy and for misjudging him.
Some months later, Elizabeth is travelling with her newly married sister, Jane and her husband Charles.
She is shocked to find out that their destination is a house party at Pemberley, Darcy’s home.
Elizabeth expects a distinctly chilly welcome, but Darcy does his best to make her feel welcome.
There is some angst as Darcy won’t risk his heart by declaring himself, while Elizabeth grows closer to Darcy and yearns to tell him, but fears that she has lost his love.
During the house party, a flood hits Pemberley and the local town, Lambton.
Darcy must deal with the disaster, which has led to death and destruction.
In addition are some irritating guests, thefts, desecration of the drowned and a murder.
With the guests departure imminent, Darcy, Elizabeth and Colonel Fitzwilliam join forces to identify the culprit.
As expected ODC have a happy ending, but not before they face serious peril!
Excellent book!
I received a free copy of this book from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review. All views expressed are my own.
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November 2, 2022
Elizabeth Bennet stops at Pemberley with her sister and brother in law (post Hunsford) much to her surprise. It is a surprise to Darcy as well. He has a house full of additional guests as well. Elizabeth and Darcy try to spend time and reveal their feelings while in the midst of a natural disaster and a mysterious death! They find that by working together, they find happiness and resolutions.
The story is interesting but there seems to be many plot holes and behaviors that don’t match the time period.
FYI Once they do make their attachment official they do anticipate their vows.
The story is interesting but there seems to be many plot holes and behaviors that don’t match the time period.
FYI Once they do make their attachment official they do anticipate their vows.
October 1, 2022
As always Heather wrote a very different story ....wonderful new characters and to boot a murder mystery...I feel the story was well executed had me on tenderhooks....when you combine Darcy and Elizabeth in the murder mystery anything can happen
.also with matchmaking friends ....well Done Heather
.also with matchmaking friends ....well Done Heather
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 12, 2022
Heather Moll has topped herself!!
Thinking of the last book I read of hers-An Affectionate Heart-I that headline above seemed nearly impossible. But it is the truth. The story takes place at Pemberley, some months after Jane and Bingley have married. Lizzy lives with them at Netherfield. When they join a group of Bingley’s friends and tour northern England they make a stop at Pemberley much to Elizabeth’s surprise and unease. She was so uncomfortable with the idea that she was tempted to spend the entire fortnight in the carriage.
But Derbyshire and Pemberley has suffered a disaster. Flooding has destroyed his tenant’s homes, crops and has even caused death from drowning loved ones. Darcy has a frightening load of responsibility on his shoulders. Elizabeth sees not only a changed Darcy but also the responsibility and the honorable way he cares for his people. Her heart, already changed by the infamous ‘letter,’ alters much more seeing the real man he is.
The house party that should have broken up as soon as it was evident that their host had too much on his hands continued despite or in some cases because of it. What an odd group that was. The Bingley’s decide to leave but another member of the party has become friends with Elizabeth and begs her to stay. Her new friend has seen how Elizabeth and Darcy look at each other when the other isn’t aware. Mrs Lanyon thinks to give them the opportunity to come together. What a fascinating character Moll has created in this woman. Indeed all the new characters are such big personalities that in the hands of a less experienced author might have stolen the show.
Before I spoil the story I have to say that I loved this book and recommend it highly. For those who are concerned about these things, there is a lot of premarital sexual content. 5+*****
Thinking of the last book I read of hers-An Affectionate Heart-I that headline above seemed nearly impossible. But it is the truth. The story takes place at Pemberley, some months after Jane and Bingley have married. Lizzy lives with them at Netherfield. When they join a group of Bingley’s friends and tour northern England they make a stop at Pemberley much to Elizabeth’s surprise and unease. She was so uncomfortable with the idea that she was tempted to spend the entire fortnight in the carriage.
But Derbyshire and Pemberley has suffered a disaster. Flooding has destroyed his tenant’s homes, crops and has even caused death from drowning loved ones. Darcy has a frightening load of responsibility on his shoulders. Elizabeth sees not only a changed Darcy but also the responsibility and the honorable way he cares for his people. Her heart, already changed by the infamous ‘letter,’ alters much more seeing the real man he is.
The house party that should have broken up as soon as it was evident that their host had too much on his hands continued despite or in some cases because of it. What an odd group that was. The Bingley’s decide to leave but another member of the party has become friends with Elizabeth and begs her to stay. Her new friend has seen how Elizabeth and Darcy look at each other when the other isn’t aware. Mrs Lanyon thinks to give them the opportunity to come together. What a fascinating character Moll has created in this woman. Indeed all the new characters are such big personalities that in the hands of a less experienced author might have stolen the show.
Before I spoil the story I have to say that I loved this book and recommend it highly. For those who are concerned about these things, there is a lot of premarital sexual content. 5+*****
October 11, 2022
I love this author's other books but this one was predictable, repetitive, and dull.
October 10, 2022
After Hunsford's disastrous proposal, Mr. Darcy does not return to Hertfordshire with Mr. Bingley, who finally marries Jane Bennet.
Elizabeth then comes to live with them in Netherfield and when they decide to travel north they decide that she will go with them.
Due to miscommunication by Mr. Bingley, Elizabeth does not know that she is going to Pemberley and Mr. Darcy doesn't know that Elizabeth is going there with the Bingleys.
In Pemberley, in addition to the Netherfield group, will be a group of guests from Mr. Darcy, who are also friends with Mr. Bingley: Mr. James Utterson, Mr. Louis Balfour and Mrs. Hester Lanyon, the widowed sister of Mr. Balfour.
Elizabeth and Mr. Dacry are still very impacted by what happened in Kent and they believe they will be rejected or even antagonized by the other.
After a string of torrential rains with subsequent flooding, Mr. Darcy needs to assume a leadership role and work together with the community to assess the damage, bury the dead and prevent even worse situations.
Amidst all this, there is still the suspicious death of a person dressed in an Elizabeth Bennet outfit.
As they deal with a natural disaster and a possible murderer among the guests, Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy need to clarify how they really feel about each other.
Even changing the usual context, the story manages to hold attention from beginning to end.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review
Elizabeth then comes to live with them in Netherfield and when they decide to travel north they decide that she will go with them.
Due to miscommunication by Mr. Bingley, Elizabeth does not know that she is going to Pemberley and Mr. Darcy doesn't know that Elizabeth is going there with the Bingleys.
In Pemberley, in addition to the Netherfield group, will be a group of guests from Mr. Darcy, who are also friends with Mr. Bingley: Mr. James Utterson, Mr. Louis Balfour and Mrs. Hester Lanyon, the widowed sister of Mr. Balfour.
Elizabeth and Mr. Dacry are still very impacted by what happened in Kent and they believe they will be rejected or even antagonized by the other.
After a string of torrential rains with subsequent flooding, Mr. Darcy needs to assume a leadership role and work together with the community to assess the damage, bury the dead and prevent even worse situations.
Amidst all this, there is still the suspicious death of a person dressed in an Elizabeth Bennet outfit.
As they deal with a natural disaster and a possible murderer among the guests, Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy need to clarify how they really feel about each other.
Even changing the usual context, the story manages to hold attention from beginning to end.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review
December 18, 2022
The twist for this mystery romance starts after the Hunsford proposal. Darcy encourages Bingley back to Longbourn right away. Jane-gley have their HEA which also prevents Lydia’s trip to Brighton (Thank goodness) Elizabeth joins the couple for a trip to visit his family and is surprised by a stop at Pemberley. Shocker:Bingley forgets to tell Darcy that E has joined his household. Great set up for romance, some misunderstandings and mystery. There is a murder and our ODC join forces to solve the crime and their misunderstandings.
Enjoyable book. The mystery was intriguing and kept my attention all the way to the end. The culprit was a surprise and I love a surprise.
I received an Advanced Reader Copy, my views are my own.
Enjoyable book. The mystery was intriguing and kept my attention all the way to the end. The culprit was a surprise and I love a surprise.
I received an Advanced Reader Copy, my views are my own.
October 6, 2022
A couple reunited without knowing where they stand.
A beloved and respected servant murdered.
The betrayal of a trusted friend.
Duty, tragedy, desire, and honor collide in this Pride and Prejudice Murder Mystery, An Appearance of Goodness by Heather Moll.
Check out my experiential review at pemberleydarcy.com/blog
It focuses on the imagery, thoughts, and feelings the book provokes. You'll be able to see more of the graphics on a laptop or tablet but it reads fine on mobile.
A beloved and respected servant murdered.
The betrayal of a trusted friend.
Duty, tragedy, desire, and honor collide in this Pride and Prejudice Murder Mystery, An Appearance of Goodness by Heather Moll.
Check out my experiential review at pemberleydarcy.com/blog
It focuses on the imagery, thoughts, and feelings the book provokes. You'll be able to see more of the graphics on a laptop or tablet but it reads fine on mobile.
October 1, 2022
Heather Moll does it again. My favourite JAFF author, this work is just as good as the others. Loved it. My only criticism is I would have wanted even more of it - between the last chapter and the epilogue. Ended too soon
March 19, 2024
Pemberley is Flooded with Tragedy, Turmoil, and Troubling Discoveries
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Author
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation, Mystery, Mature Audiences
THE PREMISE: Elizabeth is on holiday with her sister and new brother, the newly wedded Bingleys, and they make an unanticipated (or in Charles’s case, anticipated, just not communicated) visit to Pemberley. While there Elizabeth encounters the man she rejected, several intriguing acquaintances, unprecedented rain and flooding, and a suspicious death… Is Elizabeth willing to submerse herself in the turmoil that is engulfing Pemberley and show Mr. Darcy her feelings have changed…?
WHAT I LOVED:
- A Different Type of House Party: Boorish houseguests, bad weather, and a very burdened host. While I love Regency house parties this is maybe one I wouldn’t want to attend in person. But it did make for a riveting read!
- Awkward and Emotionally Fraught: I loved witnessing all the emotional turbulence between Darcy and Elizabeth as they encounter each other again – all their awkward feelings, the tentative overtures of amicability, how both strived to treat each other better. I love how their feelings were portrayed, and I greatly appreciated the gradual evolution of their relationship. Mr. Darcy trying to show Elizabeth his kind manners in hopes that thinks better of him, and Elizabeth trying to make clear to Mr. Darcy that she is aware of and deeply regrets her misjudgment. Things definitely progressed from there I’m happy to say! Also, I should issue the warning that part of this book is suited for Mature Audiences. 😏
- In Essentials: Through all the tragedies and traumas, readers see Darcy and Elizabeth bravely and resiliently coming to the helm to steer the ship during the storm. Their true colors and the reasons we find them both so admirable were on full display in this tale. Some of my favorite moments were: Elizabeth’s pointed stand against Caroline’s racist remarks and attitude, Mr. Darcy’s diffusing speech putting everyones’ fears to rest, Mr. Darcy’s ceaseless and immense care for all under his responsibility, and Elizabeth’s confident way of stepping into the role of helpmate and partner.
- Mr. Darcy’s Strength: Poor Mr. Darcy has lost control and order in every aspect of his life, and how he dealt with all of these challenges and burdens is truly admirable. He battles insecurities, maintaining authority, heavy financial loss, guilt, and betrayal. Just one or two of these happening at once could cause someone to lose their temper, break their resolves, or just give up. But not our estimable Mr. Darcy. He truly is the best of men.
- Inclusivity: I greatly appreciated how Ms. Moll found a way to feature some inclusive characters in this tale. I felt the story is richer and more captivating for it, and I enjoyed learning about characters from different backgrounds and families.
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
- Some Quibbles: I found Mr. Utterson and Mr. Balfour to be a bit tiresome and unlikable – which maybe was the author’s intent. They were terribly selfish friends! And their constant opining about lack of funds and their incessantly open bitterness of Darcy’s situation felt very redundant and uncomfortable. It did make Mr. Darcy’s friendship with them feel implausible. In addition, with the story’s conclusion and the resolution of the mystery there is some guilt and misery to dwell upon, but I wouldn’t have minded a few more happier and lighter notes to balance this at the end.
CONCLUSION:
Imaginative, exhilarating, and stirring – An Appearance of Goodness is an inspiring Pride and Prejudice tale that has our beloved characters weathering brutal storms yet learning to navigate through the adversity and traverse any challenges in their path. Heather is a skilled storyteller and her understanding and admiration of Jane Austen’s characters shines through on every page. I highly recommend!
Austenesque Reviews
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Author
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation, Mystery, Mature Audiences
THE PREMISE: Elizabeth is on holiday with her sister and new brother, the newly wedded Bingleys, and they make an unanticipated (or in Charles’s case, anticipated, just not communicated) visit to Pemberley. While there Elizabeth encounters the man she rejected, several intriguing acquaintances, unprecedented rain and flooding, and a suspicious death… Is Elizabeth willing to submerse herself in the turmoil that is engulfing Pemberley and show Mr. Darcy her feelings have changed…?
WHAT I LOVED:
- A Different Type of House Party: Boorish houseguests, bad weather, and a very burdened host. While I love Regency house parties this is maybe one I wouldn’t want to attend in person. But it did make for a riveting read!
- Awkward and Emotionally Fraught: I loved witnessing all the emotional turbulence between Darcy and Elizabeth as they encounter each other again – all their awkward feelings, the tentative overtures of amicability, how both strived to treat each other better. I love how their feelings were portrayed, and I greatly appreciated the gradual evolution of their relationship. Mr. Darcy trying to show Elizabeth his kind manners in hopes that thinks better of him, and Elizabeth trying to make clear to Mr. Darcy that she is aware of and deeply regrets her misjudgment. Things definitely progressed from there I’m happy to say! Also, I should issue the warning that part of this book is suited for Mature Audiences. 😏
- In Essentials: Through all the tragedies and traumas, readers see Darcy and Elizabeth bravely and resiliently coming to the helm to steer the ship during the storm. Their true colors and the reasons we find them both so admirable were on full display in this tale. Some of my favorite moments were: Elizabeth’s pointed stand against Caroline’s racist remarks and attitude, Mr. Darcy’s diffusing speech putting everyones’ fears to rest, Mr. Darcy’s ceaseless and immense care for all under his responsibility, and Elizabeth’s confident way of stepping into the role of helpmate and partner.
- Mr. Darcy’s Strength: Poor Mr. Darcy has lost control and order in every aspect of his life, and how he dealt with all of these challenges and burdens is truly admirable. He battles insecurities, maintaining authority, heavy financial loss, guilt, and betrayal. Just one or two of these happening at once could cause someone to lose their temper, break their resolves, or just give up. But not our estimable Mr. Darcy. He truly is the best of men.
- Inclusivity: I greatly appreciated how Ms. Moll found a way to feature some inclusive characters in this tale. I felt the story is richer and more captivating for it, and I enjoyed learning about characters from different backgrounds and families.
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
- Some Quibbles: I found Mr. Utterson and Mr. Balfour to be a bit tiresome and unlikable – which maybe was the author’s intent. They were terribly selfish friends! And their constant opining about lack of funds and their incessantly open bitterness of Darcy’s situation felt very redundant and uncomfortable. It did make Mr. Darcy’s friendship with them feel implausible. In addition, with the story’s conclusion and the resolution of the mystery there is some guilt and misery to dwell upon, but I wouldn’t have minded a few more happier and lighter notes to balance this at the end.
CONCLUSION:
Imaginative, exhilarating, and stirring – An Appearance of Goodness is an inspiring Pride and Prejudice tale that has our beloved characters weathering brutal storms yet learning to navigate through the adversity and traverse any challenges in their path. Heather is a skilled storyteller and her understanding and admiration of Jane Austen’s characters shines through on every page. I highly recommend!
Austenesque Reviews
May 17, 2023
Amidst a flood and a mysterious death at Pemberley is a second chance for Darcy and Elizabeth. There are interesting new characters and old favorites. I stayed up late two nights in a row to finish this, so it definitely held my interest. Contains mature content that I thought was out of character and unnecessary (you can skip it and not miss anything). The cover is lovely and the mystery itself was pretty good.
October 3, 2022
Romance, mystery, and character studies!
Very intriguing story where Darcy and Elizabeth are true to their canon characters, but placed in new and difficult circumstances. After Bingley marries Jane, but Darcy and Elizabeth do not get together, Lizzy ends up accidentally at Darcy’s Pemberley house party in the midst of dreadful storms, which leads to lots of fascinating interactions and witty dialogue as the plot thickens. With the help of a few non-canon characters and Miss Bingley, we experience romantic Regency parlor games, natural disasters, thievery, murder, plenty of mystery, and the growth of true love. Great comments on racism and class issues of the time, without preaching or losing the thread of the story. Firstly a romance starring our dear couple, but also an interesting study of the obligations of loyalty and friendship, with commentaries on integrity and honor. Loved it! I received an ARC with no promise of a review.
Very intriguing story where Darcy and Elizabeth are true to their canon characters, but placed in new and difficult circumstances. After Bingley marries Jane, but Darcy and Elizabeth do not get together, Lizzy ends up accidentally at Darcy’s Pemberley house party in the midst of dreadful storms, which leads to lots of fascinating interactions and witty dialogue as the plot thickens. With the help of a few non-canon characters and Miss Bingley, we experience romantic Regency parlor games, natural disasters, thievery, murder, plenty of mystery, and the growth of true love. Great comments on racism and class issues of the time, without preaching or losing the thread of the story. Firstly a romance starring our dear couple, but also an interesting study of the obligations of loyalty and friendship, with commentaries on integrity and honor. Loved it! I received an ARC with no promise of a review.
October 4, 2022
whew! a wild ride...
I must admit, I had no inkling at where the story would go, but over and over it got me gripped in its suspenseful turns. Enjoy!
I must admit, I had no inkling at where the story would go, but over and over it got me gripped in its suspenseful turns. Enjoy!
February 3, 2023
Несподівано хороше читання, і навіть є невеличка детективна лінія з убивством.
Містер Бінґлі і Джейн побралися, забравши Ліззі до себе. Вони вирішують поподорожувати, але Бінґлі легковажно забуває згадати, що вони по дорозі зупиняться в Пемберлі і що Ліззі буде з ними.
Дарсі і Елізабет намагаються подолати незручну ситуацію і зрозуміти, чи змінилася їхня думка одне про одного.
На жаль, буря спричиняє великі збитки і горе у володіннях Дарсі, і він зайнятий тим, щоб подолати наслідки.
Та якби тільки це. Незабаром знаходять тіло мертвої служниці, і не схоже, що вона просто потонула. Хто вбив її? І чи вбивця справді ховається в Пемберлі?
Якісний slow-burn, де персонажі щиро підтримують одне одного в скрутну хвилину.
Містер Бінґлі і Джейн побралися, забравши Ліззі до себе. Вони вирішують поподорожувати, але Бінґлі легковажно забуває згадати, що вони по дорозі зупиняться в Пемберлі і що Ліззі буде з ними.
Дарсі і Елізабет намагаються подолати незручну ситуацію і зрозуміти, чи змінилася їхня думка одне про одного.
На жаль, буря спричиняє великі збитки і горе у володіннях Дарсі, і він зайнятий тим, щоб подолати наслідки.
Та якби тільки це. Незабаром знаходять тіло мертвої служниці, і не схоже, що вона просто потонула. Хто вбив її? І чи вбивця справді ховається в Пемберлі?
Якісний slow-burn, де персонажі щиро підтримують одне одного в скрутну хвилину.
August 25, 2022
4.5 stars rounded up to 5 stars
Jane and Bingley are married, and Elizabeth lives with them. So when Bingley decides to travel to Scarborough and to make stops along the way to introduce his bride to friends and relatives it is only natural that he should also stop at Pemberley (He has a standing invitation to visit there whenever he likes.) However, both Elizabeth and Darcy are taken by surprise, and considering their last meeting was when he handed her his letter in Hunsford their meeting is awkward. Each has unsettled feelings about the other. Also, Darcy has a number of other guests staying there, including two single male friends, Mr. Balfour, his sister, a widow, Mrs. Hester Lanyon and a James Utterson. Georgiana and her companion are also part of those in residence.
The story runs along smoothly with various interactions among guests and even servants. Darcy and Elizabeth warm towards each other. However, the area is hit with massive flooding and Darcy's attentions are diverted to helping his tenants, etc. recover from not only loss of property but also loss of lives. The Bingleys travel on to their final destination with plans to stop and pick up Elizabeth on their way back to Netherfield. She has made friends with Mrs. Layton and been invited to stay in her company.
Now the angst comes into this story. Georgiana's lady's maid is found dead. At first thought to be a victim of drowning it is soon determined that she was struck over the head with a candle stick stolen from Pemberley. So now Darcy adds the burden of determining who killed this woman to his shoulders. He soon has his suspicions but needs proof before he can take the case to a magistrate.
Meanwhile Darcy and Elizabeth overcome all the ill feelings from that Hunsford proposal and as E. sees him care for his servants, his tenants, his neighbors and his family she comes to understand that he is the best of men.
Jane and Bingley are married, and Elizabeth lives with them. So when Bingley decides to travel to Scarborough and to make stops along the way to introduce his bride to friends and relatives it is only natural that he should also stop at Pemberley (He has a standing invitation to visit there whenever he likes.) However, both Elizabeth and Darcy are taken by surprise, and considering their last meeting was when he handed her his letter in Hunsford their meeting is awkward. Each has unsettled feelings about the other. Also, Darcy has a number of other guests staying there, including two single male friends, Mr. Balfour, his sister, a widow, Mrs. Hester Lanyon and a James Utterson. Georgiana and her companion are also part of those in residence.
The story runs along smoothly with various interactions among guests and even servants. Darcy and Elizabeth warm towards each other. However, the area is hit with massive flooding and Darcy's attentions are diverted to helping his tenants, etc. recover from not only loss of property but also loss of lives. The Bingleys travel on to their final destination with plans to stop and pick up Elizabeth on their way back to Netherfield. She has made friends with Mrs. Layton and been invited to stay in her company.
Now the angst comes into this story. Georgiana's lady's maid is found dead. At first thought to be a victim of drowning it is soon determined that she was struck over the head with a candle stick stolen from Pemberley. So now Darcy adds the burden of determining who killed this woman to his shoulders. He soon has his suspicions but needs proof before he can take the case to a magistrate.
Meanwhile Darcy and Elizabeth overcome all the ill feelings from that Hunsford proposal and as E. sees him care for his servants, his tenants, his neighbors and his family she comes to understand that he is the best of men.
April 21, 2023
Amorous and sensual romance highlighted
When Elizabeth Bennet is forced under special circumstances to see in close proximity the true character of the man she rejected in Hunsford, her feelings takes a swift drastic change. While Mr. Darcy, faced with the realization that he cannot live life without Elizabeth Bennet, is resolved to show her he can be a better man for her, if only the timing is right. But circumstances and events surrounding him makes it difficult to declare himself.
There are a few new characters who are cleverly interwoven in this story to enhance Elizabeth’s realization of the man Fitzwilliam Darcy truly is and her growing esteem, respect and eventually, love for him.
However, the remarkable and satisfying element in this variation is how much affection and love Elizabeth felt for Mr. Darcy before he proposed the second time, and how she was all too willing to go all the way to prove her love to the man she previously declared as the last man she will ever marry. Many of the lovers’ thoughts and hidden personal feelings are expressed enough to affect this reader, and their exchanges are heartwarming and romantic.
The author is rather wordy though, and detailed on inconsequential matters. In other words, this variation could have been shorter without taking away its essence. But the details describing places and events are appreciated.
When Elizabeth Bennet is forced under special circumstances to see in close proximity the true character of the man she rejected in Hunsford, her feelings takes a swift drastic change. While Mr. Darcy, faced with the realization that he cannot live life without Elizabeth Bennet, is resolved to show her he can be a better man for her, if only the timing is right. But circumstances and events surrounding him makes it difficult to declare himself.
There are a few new characters who are cleverly interwoven in this story to enhance Elizabeth’s realization of the man Fitzwilliam Darcy truly is and her growing esteem, respect and eventually, love for him.
However, the remarkable and satisfying element in this variation is how much affection and love Elizabeth felt for Mr. Darcy before he proposed the second time, and how she was all too willing to go all the way to prove her love to the man she previously declared as the last man she will ever marry. Many of the lovers’ thoughts and hidden personal feelings are expressed enough to affect this reader, and their exchanges are heartwarming and romantic.
The author is rather wordy though, and detailed on inconsequential matters. In other words, this variation could have been shorter without taking away its essence. But the details describing places and events are appreciated.
November 8, 2022
Wonderful
A very emotional and wonderfully mysterious variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by the talented Heather Moll. It will keep you guessing and wondering until the end. I enjoyed it very much and I hope it won’t be long until her next book debuts.
A very emotional and wonderfully mysterious variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by the talented Heather Moll. It will keep you guessing and wondering until the end. I enjoyed it very much and I hope it won’t be long until her next book debuts.
September 19, 2024
I have been rereading “Appearance of Goodness” and I was up till 5am. I was reminded how much I adore JAFF reading while this again. Author Heather Moll knows how to write a compelling story with solid pacing, tension, interiority, and believable characters. This should not be missed.
(For those that care about the heat level… There are some open door love scenes but not gratuitous.)
(For those that care about the heat level… There are some open door love scenes but not gratuitous.)
March 5, 2023
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, just after his failed proposal at Hunsford, Darcy somehow encouraged Bingley to return to Netherfield, and Bingley and Jane are now married. But Darcy didn't return, and Elizabeth's trip north with her aunt and uncle was canceled due to her uncle's business concerns, so the last time she saw Darcy was when she refused him.
Now she takes a trip north with her sister and new brother-in-law, as well as Miss Bingley and the Hursts, mistakenly believing they'll be staying occasionally with various unknown-to-her friends of Bingley's while they head toward Scarborough. But Bingley has failed to mention that the one friend they'll be staying with for two full weeks is Darcy.
Elizabeth is mortified when they arrive at Pemberley. But Darcy, who is also shocked to see her on his doorstep, having misunderstood Bingley's illegible letters, recovers from his initial awkwardness by making her feel as welcome as he can, hoping beyond hope that he can still somehow win her love. He goes out of his way to show her he is a changed man, and to make her visit the best it can be, even going so far as to assign his sister's lady's maid, Molly Carew, to attend to Miss Bennet. Carew has a mind of her own, and strong opinions, but Lizzy begins to like her.
Bad weather and a disastrous flood cause extensive damage to Pemberley, its gardens, tenant farms, and even the village of Lambton, and Darcy is soon caught up in managing the recovery from that, necessarily neglecting his guests in doing so. Elizabeth wants to help, and one day she witnesses the anxiety of the locals beginning to turn on Darcy because he can't do enough quickly enough. She pitches in, helping him to record their many concerns so that he can begin to sort it all out and take action. But there are many dead, from drowning in the floods, and even worse a second storm floods the graveyard, causing coffins to surface, so the local schoolhouse has to be turned into a morgue.
Then another body turns up, on Darcy's property, but this death is clearly more recent, and looks to be the result of an accident, or murder.
I love a good mystery, and although there are few suspects in this one, that does not detract from the mystery at all. The romance is definitely there as well, and the historical research is impeccable, almost to the point of disbelief, because I didn't know a lot of these things.
While, for me personally, this novel has its weaknesses, they do not subtract much because it's thoughtfully written, with complex relationships, well-rounded characters, and a certain amount of subtlety that encourages slow, deeper attention by the reader. Unfortunately I didn't have time to give it as deep a consideration as I wanted to. So I may very well read this one again in the near future. While it is not as chaste as I usually prefer my romance reading, there is nothing at all gratuitous about the love scenes, and it seems to me to fit with the somewhat tragic mood of the story and the need for people to comfort one another in whatever ways they can. In fact, in addition to the smattering of humor and teasing, it lightens the story just enough that it doesn't feel too unrelentingly dark. The story also deals with racism to some degree, and with not judging people by initial impressions of their behavior. It's a touching story.
Now she takes a trip north with her sister and new brother-in-law, as well as Miss Bingley and the Hursts, mistakenly believing they'll be staying occasionally with various unknown-to-her friends of Bingley's while they head toward Scarborough. But Bingley has failed to mention that the one friend they'll be staying with for two full weeks is Darcy.
Elizabeth is mortified when they arrive at Pemberley. But Darcy, who is also shocked to see her on his doorstep, having misunderstood Bingley's illegible letters, recovers from his initial awkwardness by making her feel as welcome as he can, hoping beyond hope that he can still somehow win her love. He goes out of his way to show her he is a changed man, and to make her visit the best it can be, even going so far as to assign his sister's lady's maid, Molly Carew, to attend to Miss Bennet. Carew has a mind of her own, and strong opinions, but Lizzy begins to like her.
Bad weather and a disastrous flood cause extensive damage to Pemberley, its gardens, tenant farms, and even the village of Lambton, and Darcy is soon caught up in managing the recovery from that, necessarily neglecting his guests in doing so. Elizabeth wants to help, and one day she witnesses the anxiety of the locals beginning to turn on Darcy because he can't do enough quickly enough. She pitches in, helping him to record their many concerns so that he can begin to sort it all out and take action. But there are many dead, from drowning in the floods, and even worse a second storm floods the graveyard, causing coffins to surface, so the local schoolhouse has to be turned into a morgue.
Then another body turns up, on Darcy's property, but this death is clearly more recent, and looks to be the result of an accident, or murder.
I love a good mystery, and although there are few suspects in this one, that does not detract from the mystery at all. The romance is definitely there as well, and the historical research is impeccable, almost to the point of disbelief, because I didn't know a lot of these things.
While, for me personally, this novel has its weaknesses, they do not subtract much because it's thoughtfully written, with complex relationships, well-rounded characters, and a certain amount of subtlety that encourages slow, deeper attention by the reader. Unfortunately I didn't have time to give it as deep a consideration as I wanted to. So I may very well read this one again in the near future. While it is not as chaste as I usually prefer my romance reading, there is nothing at all gratuitous about the love scenes, and it seems to me to fit with the somewhat tragic mood of the story and the need for people to comfort one another in whatever ways they can. In fact, in addition to the smattering of humor and teasing, it lightens the story just enough that it doesn't feel too unrelentingly dark. The story also deals with racism to some degree, and with not judging people by initial impressions of their behavior. It's a touching story.
September 29, 2022
*4.5 stars. When are review sites going to universally allow half stars already?
Heather Moll never fails to deliver! This latest release is a venture into murder mystery and a lot of D&E pining, which I'm a fan of.
The book picks up in the summer after the disastrous proposal at Hunsford. Bingley returned to Hertfordshire for Jane in June and they were quickly married. Elizabeth, only just beginning to wallow in her regrets, has been invited to live with them, and is included in a trip to Scarborough to visit some Bingley relations. They stop at Pemberley along the way, for Charles' yearly summer visit. Darcy has been at Pemberley licking his wounds and trying to forget Elizabeth. They are each absolutely shocked to see each other, but since Jane is the only other person who knows about their shared history, D&E work very, very hard to appear as simple "indifferent acquaintances".
And this is no simple family party. Also at Pemberley are a few of Darcy's friends: a Mr. Utterson, who is studying the law, a Mr. Balfour, who is waiting to inherit, and his widowed sister, Mrs. Lanyon, and later Colonel Fitzwilliam. D&E think they are being very clever in hiding their mutual admiration, but in reality, their friends and family spend a lot of time "conveniently" leaving the room. We also get to meet a few of Pemberley's servants and learn a little bit about the inner workings of the big house, which I always find fascinating.
Unseasonable torrential downpours cause a lot of flooding at Pemberley and the surrounding villages. In the midst of it all, a body is found, and it is plainly obvious that this person did not die in the floods. Darcy now has a murderer to find in his own household, and is unsure who he can trust among his friends.
The story is very well-written, and the mystery very well done. I was very surprised by which character was murdered, who had committed the crime, and even the killer's motives. This is a very unique setting for Elizabeth to see Darcy in his element, one we don't get very often; in P&P, Darcy improves his character off-screen, and Elizabeth learns of his true nature through third parties. Here, Elizabeth watches Darcy perform as master of Pemberley (and half of Derbyshire) in the midst of natural disaster, and he is given the opportunity to get to know her better.
I removed half a star for two reasons. Firstly, I felt the middle act of the book dragged a little bit. The body had been discovered, and Darcy wasn't sure who could be the killer, so there's some of this "and then" kind of storytelling for a few chapters. I think in a full-blown mystery novel, this is where more crimes would take place that would eventually point to the criminal. However, we don't have that here, and so the story does slow down. Second, the Bingley party leaves after the first act and doesn't come back. We get a brief mention of them in the last chapter, and that's all. Slimming down a big cast of characters is useful, but I feel like their presence could have been helpful in that dragging section, where some minor subplots could arise. But, YMMV, as this is a story about D&E's relationship, not our supporting characters.
All in all, a great read, especially on a gloomy, rainy evening to truly set the atmosphere. I highly recommend it!
I was given an ARC from the author in return for an honest review.
Heather Moll never fails to deliver! This latest release is a venture into murder mystery and a lot of D&E pining, which I'm a fan of.
The book picks up in the summer after the disastrous proposal at Hunsford. Bingley returned to Hertfordshire for Jane in June and they were quickly married. Elizabeth, only just beginning to wallow in her regrets, has been invited to live with them, and is included in a trip to Scarborough to visit some Bingley relations. They stop at Pemberley along the way, for Charles' yearly summer visit. Darcy has been at Pemberley licking his wounds and trying to forget Elizabeth. They are each absolutely shocked to see each other, but since Jane is the only other person who knows about their shared history, D&E work very, very hard to appear as simple "indifferent acquaintances".
And this is no simple family party. Also at Pemberley are a few of Darcy's friends: a Mr. Utterson, who is studying the law, a Mr. Balfour, who is waiting to inherit, and his widowed sister, Mrs. Lanyon, and later Colonel Fitzwilliam. D&E think they are being very clever in hiding their mutual admiration, but in reality, their friends and family spend a lot of time "conveniently" leaving the room. We also get to meet a few of Pemberley's servants and learn a little bit about the inner workings of the big house, which I always find fascinating.
Unseasonable torrential downpours cause a lot of flooding at Pemberley and the surrounding villages. In the midst of it all, a body is found, and it is plainly obvious that this person did not die in the floods. Darcy now has a murderer to find in his own household, and is unsure who he can trust among his friends.
The story is very well-written, and the mystery very well done. I was very surprised by which character was murdered, who had committed the crime, and even the killer's motives. This is a very unique setting for Elizabeth to see Darcy in his element, one we don't get very often; in P&P, Darcy improves his character off-screen, and Elizabeth learns of his true nature through third parties. Here, Elizabeth watches Darcy perform as master of Pemberley (and half of Derbyshire) in the midst of natural disaster, and he is given the opportunity to get to know her better.
I removed half a star for two reasons. Firstly, I felt the middle act of the book dragged a little bit. The body had been discovered, and Darcy wasn't sure who could be the killer, so there's some of this "and then" kind of storytelling for a few chapters. I think in a full-blown mystery novel, this is where more crimes would take place that would eventually point to the criminal. However, we don't have that here, and so the story does slow down. Second, the Bingley party leaves after the first act and doesn't come back. We get a brief mention of them in the last chapter, and that's all. Slimming down a big cast of characters is useful, but I feel like their presence could have been helpful in that dragging section, where some minor subplots could arise. But, YMMV, as this is a story about D&E's relationship, not our supporting characters.
All in all, a great read, especially on a gloomy, rainy evening to truly set the atmosphere. I highly recommend it!
I was given an ARC from the author in return for an honest review.
November 25, 2023
A perfect blend of mystery, angst and romance - highly recommended
This is Darcy laid bare at a time of extreme crisis at Pemberley. Elizabeth is able to see the real man and to appreciate the true depth a quality of his character - this Darcy is most definitely a gentleman.
This is a limited cast, with a number of original characters and without most of the usual protagonists. This enables the author to create an excellent variation utilising her own characters to best effect.
This is Darcy laid bare at a time of extreme crisis at Pemberley. Elizabeth is able to see the real man and to appreciate the true depth a quality of his character - this Darcy is most definitely a gentleman.
This is a limited cast, with a number of original characters and without most of the usual protagonists. This enables the author to create an excellent variation utilising her own characters to best effect.
March 6, 2024
An enjoyable JAFF murder mystery amidst apologies and growing feelings of tenderness post-Hunsford proposal as Elizabeth visits Pemberley not with her aunt and uncle, but with the newly married Jane and Charles Bingley.
January 3, 2023
Didn't know this was going to be a murder mystery and that made me not care about the second half of this
June 13, 2023
Disaster in Derbyshire
This is such a wonderful well-written story with a perfectly paced courtship and interesting characters. The story holds your attention with a variety of romances, a disastrous storm and flood, and the certainty that a houseguest is guilty of theft and murder.
There is some violence and sex for those who desire to know.
4/69
This is such a wonderful well-written story with a perfectly paced courtship and interesting characters. The story holds your attention with a variety of romances, a disastrous storm and flood, and the certainty that a houseguest is guilty of theft and murder.
There is some violence and sex for those who desire to know.
4/69
October 26, 2022
Entertaining, but....
After the disastrous proposal at Hunsford parsonage, Darcy has sent Bingley back to Jane Bennett, Bingley and Jane get married, Elizabeth comes to live with them at Netherfield, and Elizabeth accompanies them on a journey northward to Scarborough, with a stay at Pemberly on the way. The reunion of Darcy and Elizabeth at Pemberly is awkward, since it's their first meeting since all of the acrimonious words they spoke to each other in Kent, but they quickly become comfortable with each other, and then hopeful that they can come to an understanding. Along with the Bingleys, the Hursts, and Elizabeth, Darcy has two friends staying with him, Mr Utterson and Mr Balfour, along with Mr Balfour's widowed sister, Mrs Lanyon.
The weather plays a big role in the plot, with it being an extremely wet and cold summer, resulting in much flooding, and destruction of crops, livestock, buildings, and even the deaths of some local people. A maid from the Pemberly household is found dead, and Darcy is convinced that she was murdered, rather than being just another flood victim. However, he doesn't have enough proof, so he begins his own investigation. Elizabeth is his ally in this.
This is a good enough premise, and the book is well written. It's difficult to maintain enthusiasm for a story when people start doing some stupid things, and when our beloved Elizabeth and Darcy act completely out of character. For example, Darcy's two friends, Mr Utterson and Mr Balfour, seem to be two guys without any merit, without any admirable traits other than being from "good families." It's disappointing that Darcy would esteem either of these two enough to invite them to stay at Pemberly. And then there's Elizabeth. I get disappointed when Elizabeth turns into Lydia in a story. Once she decides that Darcy isn't such a bad guy after all, she becomes this sexual seductress, insisting that Darcy anticipate their wedding vows. She suddenly seems to know everything about how to please her man in the bedroom. The book summary warns of adult content, and that's not a problem. The problem is making Elizabeth into a man eater.
The plot descends into silliness late in the book, and that just ruined it for me. I can't really recommend it.
After the disastrous proposal at Hunsford parsonage, Darcy has sent Bingley back to Jane Bennett, Bingley and Jane get married, Elizabeth comes to live with them at Netherfield, and Elizabeth accompanies them on a journey northward to Scarborough, with a stay at Pemberly on the way. The reunion of Darcy and Elizabeth at Pemberly is awkward, since it's their first meeting since all of the acrimonious words they spoke to each other in Kent, but they quickly become comfortable with each other, and then hopeful that they can come to an understanding. Along with the Bingleys, the Hursts, and Elizabeth, Darcy has two friends staying with him, Mr Utterson and Mr Balfour, along with Mr Balfour's widowed sister, Mrs Lanyon.
The weather plays a big role in the plot, with it being an extremely wet and cold summer, resulting in much flooding, and destruction of crops, livestock, buildings, and even the deaths of some local people. A maid from the Pemberly household is found dead, and Darcy is convinced that she was murdered, rather than being just another flood victim. However, he doesn't have enough proof, so he begins his own investigation. Elizabeth is his ally in this.
This is a good enough premise, and the book is well written. It's difficult to maintain enthusiasm for a story when people start doing some stupid things, and when our beloved Elizabeth and Darcy act completely out of character. For example, Darcy's two friends, Mr Utterson and Mr Balfour, seem to be two guys without any merit, without any admirable traits other than being from "good families." It's disappointing that Darcy would esteem either of these two enough to invite them to stay at Pemberly. And then there's Elizabeth. I get disappointed when Elizabeth turns into Lydia in a story. Once she decides that Darcy isn't such a bad guy after all, she becomes this sexual seductress, insisting that Darcy anticipate their wedding vows. She suddenly seems to know everything about how to please her man in the bedroom. The book summary warns of adult content, and that's not a problem. The problem is making Elizabeth into a man eater.
The plot descends into silliness late in the book, and that just ruined it for me. I can't really recommend it.
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