This was good but longer than needed, it definitely needs some trimming. I liked them together, both as their regular adult selves, and as Finny and Emmy. It was also wonderful to see them find friends who accepted them as they are.
I liked this but I didn't love it. This author made me fall in love with the characters in the Dominant Doctor series so much that I could ignore the weaknesses and lack of editing, I haven't found that true in their other books. I would love for them to find a good editor because they have amazing potential.