I'm unsure how to feel about this because, honestly, there's nothing much that happened in this story—well, aside from Damian's (31) OTT caveman behavior and his and Angie's (27) smutfest.
He saw her months ago but couldn't understand why he was drawn to her. She was all wrong for the type of man in his wealth level, and I think not his usual type of woman. But he can't stay away from her, so he goes every few weeks to the salon she's working at just to see her. Anyway, he finally approached her but acted like a real grade-A d*ck, hence why she doesn't want to do anything with him. But her rejection won't do, so of course, he charmed her, or he tried to. Angie only gave in to his proposition when he agreed that it would be casual. Cue the start of their FWB setup.
I liked Angie; she held her ground most of the time, but the BBS is still very present in the book. Yet she didn't back down when it came to Damian, and while sometimes her hormones got the best of her, she wasn't completely led by them. It's kind of refreshing to read a FMC with some sort of spine. The bar is so low that I was actually surprised and enjoyed to read that the FMC is not a freaking doormat for once. 🤧
As for Damian, I'm 50-50 with him; sometimes I like him, sometimes I don't. He's way too controlling for me, and not in a hot way. I think if it were up to him, he would gladly imprison Angie at his house because he couldn't handle his obsession with her. Yet it wasn't until the 80% mark and the presence of Angie's friend, who happens to be gay, that he acknowledged the real reason behind his attraction to her.
He's been in denial for too long about what he would want her to be in his life. All he knew was that he couldn't live without her, and he wanted her to be by his side all the freaking time. He's basically dependent on her. He even ordered her to move in with him and quit her job, not even asking if she would be fine with that. Thank God, she didn't do any of those. 😮💨
I'm sure other readers would love and probably swoon over Damian's character, but his overbearing personality bothered and annoyed me. He can be sweet if he wants to, but the majority of this story was all about him and what he wants, with Angie playing along with everything. It was always his way or the highway. I'm trying to remember if they ever did things she wanted, but I can't think of anything. 🫠
Also, his volatile temper is kind of scary. He would snap first at Angie before asking her for an explanation. I mean, they've been together for months with their arrangement, and he still couldn't find it in him to give her the benefit of the doubt or any semblance of trust?? He's seriously making it hard to root for him. But like I said, he wasn't bad all the time; he had his good moments too. But his a-hole ways consistently ruin the sweet things he does for Angie. 🤷♀️
Anyway, this was a short read with 160 pages, and most of it was heavily focused on the physical aspect of the romance. And there were a lot of time jumps, but not specifically how long at times; it could be days, weeks, or months. It was still somehow entertaining to see how Damian is almost close to losing his sh*t every time he's around (or not) Angie. If readers want an OTT J/P MMC, he'd checked all the boxes.
Book info:
- Novella
- No cheating, OPD, breakup
- Strangers to lovers
- OTT J/P MMC
- No Vs (h's still inexperienced, while H is definitely the opposite😒)
- HEA (years later, married with twins)