🌟🌟🌟⭐ (3.75/5 stars, rounded up to 4)
This is a wonderfully whimsical debut by J. T. Michaels, full of potential. The writing is a little amateurish, but I mean that positively - it's full of little details that do get repetitive at times, but for the most part, communicates the main character's relatability, and Michaels' excitement in sharing his world with us. This may not be for some readers, but personally, it pulls me in and makes me just as eager.
Some parts of it are paced weird, if only for a paragraph or two. Like, who decides to just start running down a tunnel of unknown length? I guess the implication was that since the character couldn't see the end of it, he knew it was long enough to have to run through it, but then it seems dangerous... I don't know. Further instances, generally, included the main character getting immediately used to wild ideas unlike anything he was used to being possible in his life, and either being good at new skills immediately or just having a single summary of the "hard" learning/training part. I guess that'll appeal to some people, but I love the depth and drudge that fantasy books can be. This is pretty short for a fantasy novel, which doesn't leave a lot of room for extra details.
There's also quite a few minor typos, and mistakes happen, though they do lessen my immersion. Missing commas, misplaced quotation marks, etc. Somewhat along the same lines, there's a lot of internal monologuing in this (for good reason), though I had a bit of trouble discerning if some things were italicized to indicate an internal monologue by accident, and if other things weren't italicized by accident.
Overall, this was a pretty good debut novel with decent pacing and a lot of thought and love put into the world. Being the first in a series, it is a little bit like watching the first few episodes of a new show and waiting for it to hook you, but by the end, I had a pretty good image of the world, and the events and characters were clear in my mind when referred back to. It intrigued me enough to possibly pick up the next one, but it doesn't leave on a cliffhanger, either, which is appreciated.