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Bailey Dunn
Small town Mayfield in Montana has been abuzz with excitement and chatter since blond bombshell Bailey Dunn moved to town and opened a modern-day barber shop in the town center. Men of every shape and size have suddenly started to care about their appearance and line the street to see the beauty and have her transform them from beasts to gentlemen.
The only problem is, she can’t seem to take her eyes off of just one man out of the masses.
Finn Camden.
Or was it Walker Camden?
The giant tattooed identical twin brothers usually spend their days policing the county and their nights coaching high school football, but as of late, they spend every other spare minute lusting after the enchanting new girl.
They couldn’t be more different in personality, but they have one thing in common for sure; the animalistic need to possess Bailey Dunn as theirs together.
They protect her from jealous locals that won’t accept her rejection and tempt her inner submissive good girl in the process.
They know what they want, and they want her. They’re ready to take Bailey as theirs, marking her as property of the Camden brothers, but is she prepared to be claimed by both of them?
The only problem is, she can’t seem to take her eyes off of just one man out of the masses.
Finn Camden.
Or was it Walker Camden?
The giant tattooed identical twin brothers usually spend their days policing the county and their nights coaching high school football, but as of late, they spend every other spare minute lusting after the enchanting new girl.
They couldn’t be more different in personality, but they have one thing in common for sure; the animalistic need to possess Bailey Dunn as theirs together.
They protect her from jealous locals that won’t accept her rejection and tempt her inner submissive good girl in the process.
They know what they want, and they want her. They’re ready to take Bailey as theirs, marking her as property of the Camden brothers, but is she prepared to be claimed by both of them?
456 pages, ebook
Published March 13, 2022
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February 17, 2023
2.5⭐️
This would’ve been great if half the smut was deleted and the author would have hired an editor.
This would’ve been great if half the smut was deleted and the author would have hired an editor.
January 5, 2023
Deceiving cover!
The cover makes you think this book is a wholesome small-town romance novel, but NOPE! Yeah it takes place in a small town that the FMC, Bailey, moves to in order to start a new life, but the wholesomeness ends there!
Bailey is a barber and opens a barbershop, where she meets identical twins Walker and Finn Camden. Right off the bat, sparks fly between the trio. This book was ALL smut, and I loved it! The Camden twins are pure 🔥 🥵 🔥. If there is such a thing as too many sex scenes (and IMO there isn’t), this book was guilty of that! There was a bit of plot, involving a stalker who was obsessed with Bailey. But, honestly it didn’t make that much sense to me, and I would have been fine without it.
I will say there were quite a few grammatical mistakes (this author doesn’t seem to know the difference between “to” and “too”), but not so many that it was distracting.
The cover makes you think this book is a wholesome small-town romance novel, but NOPE! Yeah it takes place in a small town that the FMC, Bailey, moves to in order to start a new life, but the wholesomeness ends there!
Bailey is a barber and opens a barbershop, where she meets identical twins Walker and Finn Camden. Right off the bat, sparks fly between the trio. This book was ALL smut, and I loved it! The Camden twins are pure 🔥 🥵 🔥. If there is such a thing as too many sex scenes (and IMO there isn’t), this book was guilty of that! There was a bit of plot, involving a stalker who was obsessed with Bailey. But, honestly it didn’t make that much sense to me, and I would have been fine without it.
I will say there were quite a few grammatical mistakes (this author doesn’t seem to know the difference between “to” and “too”), but not so many that it was distracting.
June 24, 2022
I unfortunately had to DNF at 23% of this book. This is my personal opinion, not saying don’t read it, but why I couldn’t finish it. I liked how it started and how the story was developing but I couldn’t continue since the writing was not that great. It mostly felt like someone describing a porno play by play. I love smutty books, the smuttier the better, but you have to mix the feelings of the characters with how intensely they are being f*cked, not sound like we are watching a football game. There were some grammatical errors as well. I would have loved to continue the book, but I really couldn’t go past that.
April 3, 2023
This was too much smut.
Yup, I said it.
Never thought those words would ever leave my mouth. The sex starts at 15% and doesn’t ever stop. It just keeps going. Almost 250+ pages. There’s only so many scenes you can do before it gets repetitive. I got bored fast.
It’s twin brothers who share one woman. That’s the whole book. How they fell in love I’ll never know cause we barely got any other scenes besides sex. 🤷🏼♀️
The most exciting thing about this was the drama with that guy Clay - at least we got a semi interesting storyline with him.
*This could really use an editor. There are a lot of mistakes.
Yup, I said it.
Never thought those words would ever leave my mouth. The sex starts at 15% and doesn’t ever stop. It just keeps going. Almost 250+ pages. There’s only so many scenes you can do before it gets repetitive. I got bored fast.
It’s twin brothers who share one woman. That’s the whole book. How they fell in love I’ll never know cause we barely got any other scenes besides sex. 🤷🏼♀️
The most exciting thing about this was the drama with that guy Clay - at least we got a semi interesting storyline with him.
*This could really use an editor. There are a lot of mistakes.
June 26, 2023
4.5 stars
dont let this cover fool you, it's really that smutty *wink*
dont let this cover fool you, it's really that smutty *wink*
April 20, 2022
🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤
I loved this book!! You will go from "aww" to "omfg 🤤🥰" to "🔥🤤🔥🤤🔥🤤🔥🤤🔥" to "😢😭😭😭" and back to "🔥🤤🔥🤤 I need to change my panties" you get hooked from chapter 1 and fall in love with them quickly. I giggled at their banter, aww at their sweetness, cried at their troubles, and soaked through me panties ( a few times) the amount of detail in this book will have you drawn into "🎶 A whole new world🎶" where you will want to stay forever. I loved the dynamic, the banter, the love, and the way it all came together in the end.
Yes there are a few grammar errors but nothing major. Keep in mind new writers can't have their books combed through with a fine toothed comb.
You ma'am are a damn good writer and I need more either from them or more like them. 🥰🥰🥰 if you have an advanced reader group please let me know so I can join!!! Thank you tiktok for blessing me with this woman's video on my fyp and thank you for writing such a captivating book
I loved this book!! You will go from "aww" to "omfg 🤤🥰" to "🔥🤤🔥🤤🔥🤤🔥🤤🔥" to "😢😭😭😭" and back to "🔥🤤🔥🤤 I need to change my panties" you get hooked from chapter 1 and fall in love with them quickly. I giggled at their banter, aww at their sweetness, cried at their troubles, and soaked through me panties ( a few times) the amount of detail in this book will have you drawn into "🎶 A whole new world🎶" where you will want to stay forever. I loved the dynamic, the banter, the love, and the way it all came together in the end.
Yes there are a few grammar errors but nothing major. Keep in mind new writers can't have their books combed through with a fine toothed comb.
You ma'am are a damn good writer and I need more either from them or more like them. 🥰🥰🥰 if you have an advanced reader group please let me know so I can join!!! Thank you tiktok for blessing me with this woman's video on my fyp and thank you for writing such a captivating book
dnf
January 20, 2023Kinda boring and obvious sort of writing, potential for mega cattiness right in the first chapter, probably won't be getting back to it.
December 19, 2022
DNF’d at 39%. This book is all smut and zero plot. There was no depth with any of the characters, literally it was just all sex. Don’t get me wrong, I love smutty books as much as anyone else, but this was entirely too much. Every single chapter. Sex is all they talked about. I was waiting to get to ANY type of story line but I couldn’t read any further. Would loved to have seen more of a build up or plot line before they f*cked like rabbits for 30 chapters. Also needs editing, so many typos and grammatical errors.
September 28, 2022
This book frustrated me. There was zero connection between the characters. It was purely sexual, and that’s fine and dandy but why make it 400+ pages of repetitive scenes?? And what made it worse was that we are told of a ton of drama that happens off screen but the author rushes through the explanation but then spends 90% of the book on sex scenes. So excessive. It was incredibly unbalanced which really ruined it for me.
July 31, 2023
This is a super smutty read, and that's not at all a bad thing, but for me it was a little too much and the story was a little too long. It was just scene after scene of sex and sure it was hot for the most part but it just kept going and the longer it went on the more I was hoping for something more. Some connection between the characters that would really take the book over the edge.
Maybe this was just a me issue and I picked this book at the wrong time for my mood.
Maybe this was just a me issue and I picked this book at the wrong time for my mood.
March 1, 2023
Steamy as all get out but just tons of typos, formatting, & grammar mistakes. Was this even copy edited?? Also like, having a stalker be the foil in this was 1) predictable and 2) not a great creative choice. Again the spice was fire tho which is why it’s more than 1 star.
May 11, 2024
Ok, I'm giving this one a 3 bc I thought there was going to be some kind of story.... silly me.
1:9 ratio of story to smut 😂😂
While the fun times were written decently, I enjoyed how they tried to put it some kind of story to make as the plot.
Female barber showing up in a random new town that she picked from a map with a dart. Never has to work and has an amazing business. 😅 She has a stalker that is suddenly obsessed with her and then goes to great lengths to get to her while behind bars for what reason.....? 😂 Added drama to try to sell this one as a story.
So, to summarize: if you are just here for down and dirty times with one female and twin brothers and are not expecting much past that- you are good to read on! 👍
1:9 ratio of story to smut 😂😂
While the fun times were written decently, I enjoyed how they tried to put it some kind of story to make as the plot.
Female barber showing up in a random new town that she picked from a map with a dart. Never has to work and has an amazing business. 😅 She has a stalker that is suddenly obsessed with her and then goes to great lengths to get to her while behind bars for what reason.....? 😂 Added drama to try to sell this one as a story.
So, to summarize: if you are just here for down and dirty times with one female and twin brothers and are not expecting much past that- you are good to read on! 👍
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 19, 2023
HARD TO GET THROUGH
if you’re looking for a book with tons of smut and very little plot, then this might be the book for you. It did have plenty of smut. Very hot smut. Every page filled with smut.
What did I learn from this book:
1. Identical twin brothers make the best husbands… to one wife
2. Taint apparently doesn’t mean the same thing I think it means.
3. The best relationship apparently consists of nothing more that smex and napping… repeatedly
I do want to point out that I am not rating based on editing or grammatical errors. That doesn’t bother me as much as the lack of chemistry between characters besides hot smut and very little plot.
if you’re looking for a book with tons of smut and very little plot, then this might be the book for you. It did have plenty of smut. Very hot smut. Every page filled with smut.
What did I learn from this book:
1. Identical twin brothers make the best husbands… to one wife
2. Taint apparently doesn’t mean the same thing I think it means.
3. The best relationship apparently consists of nothing more that smex and napping… repeatedly
I do want to point out that I am not rating based on editing or grammatical errors. That doesn’t bother me as much as the lack of chemistry between characters besides hot smut and very little plot.
September 2, 2022
God. I have to say I didn’t even finish this book. It was SO terrible.
The writing? Awful.
Our heroine? Annoying, whiny, not believable
The hero(s)? Alpha (normally I’m a fan of alphas) but in this case it was just terribly done
I’m sorry I have giving books bad reviews but unless you want to read a book that has basically no plot besides in the bedroom, don’t waste your time.
I kept waiting for something to change, the plot to thicken, give me SOMETHING besides sex, but it just continues to get worse and worse before I finally decided this was a waste of my time.
The writing? Awful.
Our heroine? Annoying, whiny, not believable
The hero(s)? Alpha (normally I’m a fan of alphas) but in this case it was just terribly done
I’m sorry I have giving books bad reviews but unless you want to read a book that has basically no plot besides in the bedroom, don’t waste your time.
I kept waiting for something to change, the plot to thicken, give me SOMETHING besides sex, but it just continues to get worse and worse before I finally decided this was a waste of my time.
March 15, 2023
I really didn’t like this book! The cover and description makes you think small town romance. WRONG! This was simply a cheesy porn with typos. Now I love a great spicy book. It is actually my favorite genre ;). But this was all spice (smut) and absolutely zero plot. I mean, come on, how about a little story line thrown in there. The only reason it was a 2 star, I’d because I was actually able to finish the book. (I hate DNF!)
January 4, 2023
Almost DNF. Only finished because I had already spent a day into it. I enjoy smut, but this played it out and just became boring to me. Had multiple grammatical errors as well.
June 8, 2022
Is it hot in here?
I was not expecting all the heat that came off these pages! It starts out with Bailey moving to a small town for a fresh start and leaves you fanning yourself wishing you were Bailey!
So much to love from start to finish, I could not stop reading this. The writing was fantastic, I was sucked into this small town in Montana. I was blushing, laughing, crying, swooning, and needing a cold shower.
Even with the amount of spice in this there was still plenty of plot and some dark sprinkled in, very well balanced. Everything I needed and love all wrapped in one. I saw a tiktok and ran over to get started and was not disappointed at all. Definitely another to add to the I wish I could read this again for the first time list.
My first read from this author, and it won't be the last!
I was not expecting all the heat that came off these pages! It starts out with Bailey moving to a small town for a fresh start and leaves you fanning yourself wishing you were Bailey!
So much to love from start to finish, I could not stop reading this. The writing was fantastic, I was sucked into this small town in Montana. I was blushing, laughing, crying, swooning, and needing a cold shower.
Even with the amount of spice in this there was still plenty of plot and some dark sprinkled in, very well balanced. Everything I needed and love all wrapped in one. I saw a tiktok and ran over to get started and was not disappointed at all. Definitely another to add to the I wish I could read this again for the first time list.
My first read from this author, and it won't be the last!
April 4, 2022
I had the pleasure of reading Bailey Dunn and let me just say that is was absolutely amazing. It was a bit of a slow burn for me but it got hot and heavy as we dived into each and every scene. If you are a visual person and can imagine a movie while you read this is definitely your book. The way the author described each and every aspect in the book made it come alive. When Bailey first moved to Wayfield I was very disappointed with some of the characters choices when it came to her. But enter Finn and Walker holy hell. This two fine specimen will definitely be swimming in my head for awhile. I am not one to give spoilers so just believe me when I say if you like MFM then pick up this book you will not be disappointed.
April 8, 2022
Loved it!
This was a sweet story and rather fun and light. Yes, it really is more about the sexy times, so if that's not your thing don't read it. But for those that do like spicy, this has a good amount and will leave you feeling satisfied.
Love that this isn't a true RH, it does show off how a good throuple works!
And honestly now all I can think is that I need some Camden men. 😊
This was a sweet story and rather fun and light. Yes, it really is more about the sexy times, so if that's not your thing don't read it. But for those that do like spicy, this has a good amount and will leave you feeling satisfied.
Love that this isn't a true RH, it does show off how a good throuple works!
And honestly now all I can think is that I need some Camden men. 😊
September 4, 2022
3.5 ⭐️ this story is 90% smut, 10% plot so definitely make sure you’re in the headspace for that type of book. The scenes were 🌶🌶🌶🌶🌶/5 spicy and sure to leave you hot and bothered. I normally love tons of smut but I felt like there might have been slightly too much and not enough plot to balance it out. What I can usually finish in several hours took me several days to finish. The plot heated up around 90% and that was when I couldn’t put it down. Bailey sure won the jackpot with these twins!
June 7, 2022
Honestly I had to push thru this one . It was way more smut than actual story and the parts that had story were far fetched at best . Not gonna lie I skimmed some of it because the smut was just too much .. don’t get me wrong I love the seggsy times BUT I don’t need it in every single chapter . The book also could use a thorough go over and things fixed…
April 20, 2022
I could not put this one down & finished in less than two days. Amazing content and story line. Would definitely recommend to any smut readers out there. 10/10!
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October 25, 2022Dnf
May 20, 2023
90% smut 10% story but I enjoyed it. Worth a read if you can get past the minor grammatical errors.
November 28, 2023
I enjoyed it, but it fell just a bit flat for me. I really enjoyed Bailey’s character, and the guys were great too. I love a protective book boyfriend, and love two even more. The spice was so hot, I wish there had been a little bit more plot to go with it.
May 16, 2022
The book that helped me out of my slump.
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🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️/5
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⭐⭐⭐⭐.5/5
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Who wants one twin when you can have both!?! 🙃
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Bailey the sweet new girl in town following her dream of opening a barber shop. Little did she know she would be gaining the interest of not one but two Tall, bearded, tattooed twin alpha cops, along with a couple of jealous town folks.
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The book brings the 🥵 along with some suspense and drama.
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Check triggers before diving into the Camden twins and Sweet Bailey.
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🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️/5
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⭐⭐⭐⭐.5/5
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Who wants one twin when you can have both!?! 🙃
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Bailey the sweet new girl in town following her dream of opening a barber shop. Little did she know she would be gaining the interest of not one but two Tall, bearded, tattooed twin alpha cops, along with a couple of jealous town folks.
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The book brings the 🥵 along with some suspense and drama.
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Check triggers before diving into the Camden twins and Sweet Bailey.
October 24, 2022
HOLY HOTNESS!!!! I was so not anticipating this ending!!! This book was GOOD. It was kinda slow in the beginning, but had a lot of steamy moments and toe curling scenes!!! But the ending?!? Wow, not at all what I was expecting. I kept thinking when is this b!tch getting hers! And right then is when everything flips!
Bailey moves to a small town in Montana and meets not one, but two incredibly hot cops! And they’re twins!! And super protective over her. These brothers share everything and have been waiting for their perfect woman to enter their lives. And that’s Bailey Dunn. But there’s also a jealous woman who wants one twin, and also her insane brother who Bailey has a restraining order against for assaulting her. One wants her gone because she’s jealous and the other is pissed because Bailey put him in jail. Everything seems perfect for the trio, they’ve got everything they’ve wanted. But it falls apart when Bailey gets attacked and it’s because of the brother/sister, they’re about to show these twins how far they’ll go to get rid of Bailey.
This book had me hooked and I couldn’t wait to flip to the next page to find out what happens!
Bailey moves to a small town in Montana and meets not one, but two incredibly hot cops! And they’re twins!! And super protective over her. These brothers share everything and have been waiting for their perfect woman to enter their lives. And that’s Bailey Dunn. But there’s also a jealous woman who wants one twin, and also her insane brother who Bailey has a restraining order against for assaulting her. One wants her gone because she’s jealous and the other is pissed because Bailey put him in jail. Everything seems perfect for the trio, they’ve got everything they’ve wanted. But it falls apart when Bailey gets attacked and it’s because of the brother/sister, they’re about to show these twins how far they’ll go to get rid of Bailey.
This book had me hooked and I couldn’t wait to flip to the next page to find out what happens!
May 13, 2023
I picked this one up because it was recced for having good OWD. Sadly, it didn’t. The OWD was lame. As was everything else here too.
As all the other reviews have stated there was entirely too much sex without any sort of other intimacies being built. They don’t go on dates, they don’t really hang out, they don’t really talk, there’s no cuddling. The amount of sex would have been fine if it had all that other stuff too.
It was entirely too insta for me too. The h has spent all of maybe 90 minutes max with dude one and then she’s having sex with him bare!! An extremely intimate sex act that is majorly cringey because there is no chemistry or connection between them! The next sex scene one of the dudes has his tongue up her butt. Really?! Just jumping right in there with the anal stuff without confirmation that you guys are committed and exclusive?! So weird. This was all in the first 20% too.
The ending was just as OTT as the sex scenes. We go from having nothing aside from sex to a full on attack and SA scene! Like wtf. Talk about whiplash.
As all the other reviews have stated there was entirely too much sex without any sort of other intimacies being built. They don’t go on dates, they don’t really hang out, they don’t really talk, there’s no cuddling. The amount of sex would have been fine if it had all that other stuff too.
It was entirely too insta for me too. The h has spent all of maybe 90 minutes max with dude one and then she’s having sex with him bare!! An extremely intimate sex act that is majorly cringey because there is no chemistry or connection between them! The next sex scene one of the dudes has his tongue up her butt. Really?! Just jumping right in there with the anal stuff without confirmation that you guys are committed and exclusive?! So weird. This was all in the first 20% too.
The ending was just as OTT as the sex scenes. We go from having nothing aside from sex to a full on attack and SA scene! Like wtf. Talk about whiplash.
April 27, 2023
-There’s no way you can feel a clit through a pair of jeans.
-Gagging her when just earlier that day she had to safe word out of a scene…what are we doing?!
-Needs editing or at bare minimum proof reading done by the author. Also a lesson about comma placement would help.
-The idea that 2 county deputies would be engaging in road head from both ends while driving is ludicrous.
-Actually it had the mild potential to be a good smut book but with major ick lines/phrases like “bright pink nipples” “it’s time to push her over the edge and fuck her ass” “3 of their fingers was about 2 shy of their cocks in terms of thickness” “exploding calamitously” “tiny p*ssy lips”
-A lot of the sexual logistics weren’t even remotely possible.
-Gagging her when just earlier that day she had to safe word out of a scene…what are we doing?!
-Needs editing or at bare minimum proof reading done by the author. Also a lesson about comma placement would help.
-The idea that 2 county deputies would be engaging in road head from both ends while driving is ludicrous.
-Actually it had the mild potential to be a good smut book but with major ick lines/phrases like “bright pink nipples” “it’s time to push her over the edge and fuck her ass” “3 of their fingers was about 2 shy of their cocks in terms of thickness” “exploding calamitously” “tiny p*ssy lips”
-A lot of the sexual logistics weren’t even remotely possible.
May 1, 2022
HOT, HOT, HOT
So if you don’t like a story with a lot, and I mean a lot of HOT threesome sex, then move along. This book is not for you.
However, if you do. OMG read this NOW!
Bailey is awesome and fairly wholesome until she meets the hot twin police officers - suddenly all bets are off. These two Alpha males, pull out all the moves .. and I mean ALL THE MOVES to have Bailey in their life
So if you don’t like a story with a lot, and I mean a lot of HOT threesome sex, then move along. This book is not for you.
However, if you do. OMG read this NOW!
Bailey is awesome and fairly wholesome until she meets the hot twin police officers - suddenly all bets are off. These two Alpha males, pull out all the moves .. and I mean ALL THE MOVES to have Bailey in their life
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