I’m very disappointed in this book, I can’t begin to tell you
Spoiler free review- most of the book was great, normal 4 stars then the ending popped out of nowhere and it was awful
-spoiler territory-
I’m going to tell you all the things I liked about this book first, the beginning was so promising (you start off the book with uncle Paton ofc it’ll be good) and pretty interesting, I loved the whole dinner party reveal I thought that was done perfectly and Benjamin’s finally back,
1) there was WAY too much going on in this book, you have the animals disappearing, the introduction of bartholamew, (idk if I spelt that right) maisie frozen, Charlie’s mom is bewitched, the shadow’s gone from the portrait, the dinner party, Julia’s book store on fire, the diaries, the browns are spying on the kids, the red king tree and circling stuff, and out of the blue, LYELL? Honestly the little paragraph abt what the book is abt only says a fraction of what’s here.
2) WHAT WAS LYELL’S REVEAL??? It was AWFUL the author literally just tacked it on at the end of the book! This has been building up for the past 5 books and they end it like this? Firstly, fidelio said that tally twelve bells was stolen, this should’ve been a key moment but NO Paton and company, rush up to mr pilgrim/Lyell with this magic potion thing that makes him better, also where did man Fred come from? He just showed up, broke the vial, and ran away but don’t worry, him breaking the vial is only bad for another 2 sentences because Lyell ends up consuming it anyway and now he can remember
It was such a bad ending that lasted like 4 pages for something that’s been building up in all these books, also they didn’t explain why they thought the kings tears would work they were just like “here’s a random vial, let’s give it to him!” It was really just awful storytelling, it’s like the author didn’t want to go over her 400 pages and just quickly wrote out the ending.
Now I want to tell you what I would’ve done and how I would’ve rewritten the ending,
Charlie reveals to his mother that he knows who his father is, maisie asks what they’re going to do about it and Charlie stands up dramatically and is like “we’re going to get my father back”
End of book 5, leave it on a clifffhanger
Book 6, to free Lyell from hypnotism they need to play the exact things he heard when he was hypnotized, since tally twelve bells has been stolen they have to orchestrate the exact same melody from that night, grandma bone has gotten wind of what they’re up to and warns manFred and all his cronies, they dismiss school for the week and lock up their doors, mr pilgrim can still hear from where he resides so it’s time for the big night
Fidelio is a big piece in this operation, he’s the conductor for them, (this is also good because Fidelio is always left out of the endowed and this can make him feel important) Gabriels’s playing the organ, everyone else in the group in music is also helping out (Billy raven, Charlie, etc) while the musicians are doing that, Olivia, Emma, Tancred and Lysander are trying to get into the academy, they’re breaking down the doors and have to take out dorcas, the twins, all those guys with the help of Paton and Mrs bone walking with them to reach Lyell, speaking of Lyell, of course they couldn’t replicate the sounds entirely since there are different people singing and not as many but it’s still just enough to help Lyell, he starts vaguely remembering his wife and Charlie and Lyell fights off the hypnotism himself then tries to reach his family downstairs, there’s an epic fight going on down there and they eventually get Lyell but manfred and his gang vow to get revenge, after playing, Charlie rushes down to meet his father and they see each other at the exact street corner where he was hypnotized, they embrace, do whatever else you want, and bam
THAT is a satisfactory ending, that’s what should’ve went down but instead we have kings tears Ex machina that fixes everything in 2 pages
The book was crammed enough all ready with all the stuff they put in, and that ending gave this book 2 stars