⭐️ one star -
I’m stopping this at 27% and shelving to DNF. I just can’t take it anymore. It’s too horrible to go on; especially when there’s lots of other new releases this month (June 2022) that I could give a chance to instead of forcing my way through this torturous read.
Here’s why you should save yourself time and money and pick up something else to read:
1- like you, I was lured to download this one to my kindle due to the high number of four and five star reviews. Do not be fooled. I’m not sure who these people are that liked this enough to rate it that high, but it’s not going to be me. I would’ve given this two stars if I had lasted enough to actually read to maybe the halfway mark then skim to the finish, but I just didn’t care. I got off this train at 27% when the heroine “murmured” again for an un-stomach-able umpteenth time too many. Enough with the repetitive descriptors. To jump on what a fellow reviewer noted, this author could surely benefit by learning to utilize a thesaurus.
2- I have previously tried to read this author, and read the first two from Mathewson’s Neighbor From Hell series, which I also rated at one and two stars for books I and II, respectively. While I hadn’t loved either of those previous reads, I was willing to give this one a try - again due to the high number of positive reviews. Now I’m just convinced that reviews are influenced in some way and need to be taken objectively. This just proves to me the importance of following reviewers here on gr that are - like me, not like me, somewhat like me, in no way like me. Why? In my opinion, this makes sense because reviews are subjective and a greater sample of reviews gives you a truer picture, saving me precious book time 📚
3- I think I’m done with this author. The writing style is not what I care to read, and I’ve had the same issues with all three books I’ve read from this author now - surface character development, lack of scene setting, lack of world building, lack of emotion in storytelling. I’m not expecting Austen, just something more engaging, and given the fact that there’s other authors in this genre (grumpy boss/spunky heroine) that I like better, I’m going to pass on Mathewson in the future and pick something else up instead 💁♀️
4- Now for my rant about the story, up to my DNF at 27% anyway, - how on earth has our heroine survived in life? I’m convinced she has untreated ADHD and has never learned to manage it. How on earth has someone who’s presented as a child genius never been able to hold a job? I was completely confused as to how the heroine ended up rudderless when she was supposedly a genius. It surely didn’t help that the author didn’t flesh out the character more, as too many holes were left in the character arc to satisfy this reader, and the underdeveloped writing became too much for me stomach to carry on to find out if this improved, so I got to the point where I didn’t care.
5- stop bashing accounting! Seriously! That just put me off, but that’s my personal hang up 😂
Overall, this is a DNF and a do not recommend. One lousy star. Save yourself and choose something else.