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A Faithful Narrative
Darcy's own name leapt at him from the page and his treacherous eyes could not withstand the temptation drawing them downward. What had Elizabeth written about him?
FITZWILLIAM DARCY IS ON THE VERGE of proposing to Miss Elizabeth Bennet when he happens upon her diary in a field of bluebells. Though he knows he should not, he gives in to the temptation to read it and discovers a perspective of himself he had never before considered. Not only does Elizabeth not reciprocate his love, she considers him arrogant, insulting and disdainful. Her reasons, to his shame, are not entirely unfounded. Properly humbled, Darcy must decide what to do—walk away from his beloved forever or make the effort to please a woman worthy of being pleased.
ELIZABETH BENNET IS A FIRM BELIEVER in the value of first impressions. Mr Darcy made a poor one and his subsequent behaviour did little to improve upon it. Worse yet, he has had the audacity to read her personal diary without permission.
NEVERTHELESS, MR DARCY’S VIOLATION of her privacy forces Elizabeth to reconsider many of her former prejudices against him. As a result, she comes to know herself, and him, better. Can Elizabeth forgive Mr Darcy all his trespasses and give him an opportunity to redeem himself?
ELIZABETH BENNET IS A FIRM BELIEVER in the value of first impressions. Mr Darcy made a poor one and his subsequent behaviour did little to improve upon it. Worse yet, he has had the audacity to read her personal diary without permission.
NEVERTHELESS, MR DARCY’S VIOLATION of her privacy forces Elizabeth to reconsider many of her former prejudices against him. As a result, she comes to know herself, and him, better. Can Elizabeth forgive Mr Darcy all his trespasses and give him an opportunity to redeem himself?
174 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 21, 2022
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Mary Smythe
18 books54 followersMary Smythe is a homemaker living in South Carolina with a rather useless BA in English collecting dust in a closet somewhere. She discovered the works of Jane Austen as a teenager, thanks to the 1995 BBC Pride and Prejudice miniseries featuring Colin Firth and Jennifer Ehle, and has since gone on to read everything written by Ms Austen at least once yearly, always wishing that there were more. She has been writing since 2001, but only discovered Jane Austen Fanfiction in the summer of 2018.
Dare to Refuse Such a Man is the first full-length novel she has ever completed, though she can boast a few shorter works in her library, as well.
Dare to Refuse Such a Man is the first full-length novel she has ever completed, though she can boast a few shorter works in her library, as well.
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May 13, 2022
“Each new day is a blank page in the diary of your life. The secret of success is in turning that diary into the best story you possibly can.” –Douglas Pagels
>>Rating: clean: although the SBRB was in town.
>>Angst Level: low but manipulated separation of lovers was a bit frustrating. There was a fight scene that was pretty exciting. That threw the angst meter up a notch.
>>Source: ARC via Booksprout [2-27-22]. The views and opinions expressed are my own. 13-chapters + epilogue.
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
“Please read my diary, look through my things and figure me out.” –Kurt Cobain, Journals
I had always kept a diary and continued the practice even after I married. My husband thought it was perfectly fine for him to read whatever I had written. I was so horrified to discover that my new husband had read my diary that I immediately burned it. It was years before I started writing in a diary again. Needless to say, I made sure my husband never found it.
“The thing about my diary is that I lied in it. I obscured the truth. I never told even the empty space around me the whole story. I was afraid someone would find it, read it, know me. I wanted them to know a different girl. A better one.” –T.E. Carter, I Stop Somewhere
Timeline: Kent: pre-DHP [Disastrous Hunsford Proposal]. I can imagine Elizabeth’s feelings once she realized that Mr. Darcy had not only found her diary but had read it. In it were her most intimate thoughts on everything since her first encounter with the Netherfield party at the Meryton Assembly. Imagine Darcy’s thoughts when he was in the process of proposing to Elizabeth only to discover she hated him and with good reason. He was stunned to realize her opinion of him since that faithful night was completely opposite from what he thought. Adding fuel to her ire was his separating her sister and Bingley. Then when you throw in Wickham’s poisonous tale… he didn’t think her opinion of him could get any lower.
We spent a lot of time in their heads as they went over their thoughts and feelings. That wasn’t too bad but the manipulated separation that kept them apart felt forced when they only needed a few minutes to talk. That part I didn’t like. So, talk to each other, already. Their recriminations began to get on my nerves. I didn’t care for that part.
The epilogue was a series of diary entries. Don’t miss them as there is a surprise that I nearly missed. OMG! What a hoot. That was totally unexpected and completely hilarious.
>>Rating: clean: although the SBRB was in town.
>>Angst Level: low but manipulated separation of lovers was a bit frustrating. There was a fight scene that was pretty exciting. That threw the angst meter up a notch.
>>Source: ARC via Booksprout [2-27-22]. The views and opinions expressed are my own. 13-chapters + epilogue.
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
“Please read my diary, look through my things and figure me out.” –Kurt Cobain, Journals
I had always kept a diary and continued the practice even after I married. My husband thought it was perfectly fine for him to read whatever I had written. I was so horrified to discover that my new husband had read my diary that I immediately burned it. It was years before I started writing in a diary again. Needless to say, I made sure my husband never found it.
“The thing about my diary is that I lied in it. I obscured the truth. I never told even the empty space around me the whole story. I was afraid someone would find it, read it, know me. I wanted them to know a different girl. A better one.” –T.E. Carter, I Stop Somewhere
Timeline: Kent: pre-DHP [Disastrous Hunsford Proposal]. I can imagine Elizabeth’s feelings once she realized that Mr. Darcy had not only found her diary but had read it. In it were her most intimate thoughts on everything since her first encounter with the Netherfield party at the Meryton Assembly. Imagine Darcy’s thoughts when he was in the process of proposing to Elizabeth only to discover she hated him and with good reason. He was stunned to realize her opinion of him since that faithful night was completely opposite from what he thought. Adding fuel to her ire was his separating her sister and Bingley. Then when you throw in Wickham’s poisonous tale… he didn’t think her opinion of him could get any lower.
We spent a lot of time in their heads as they went over their thoughts and feelings. That wasn’t too bad but the manipulated separation that kept them apart felt forced when they only needed a few minutes to talk. That part I didn’t like. So, talk to each other, already. Their recriminations began to get on my nerves. I didn’t care for that part.
The epilogue was a series of diary entries. Don’t miss them as there is a surprise that I nearly missed. OMG! What a hoot. That was totally unexpected and completely hilarious.
September 9, 2025
Words are but pictures of our thoughts. ~ John Dryden
Elizabeth Bennet writes pictures of her thoughts. Her journal is filled with thoughts, many of them concerning one Fitzwilliam Darcy, her enemy.
In the privacy of the parkland at Rosings, she was encountered by the enemy and makes a quick getaway. In her haste, she leaves her journal behind to be found by the last person she would want to know her private thoughts.
Darcy, with the best of intentions, picks up the book to return it to its owner. The journal falls open to a page with his name featured prominently. He now knows the truth: Elizabeth Bennet despises him and has since their first meeting.
Quote from the book: Unquestionably, she had been mistaken in some instances, overly sensitive in others, but most of what she related in her diary had been a faithful narrative of their interactions.
Let me live, love, and say it well in good sentences. ~ Sylvia Plath
What an eye-opening experience for a man who believes himself to be in love!
Darcy wants to apologize for some issues and explain other topics, but how to begin?
Quote from the book: “My apologies, Miss Bennet, but I read in your diary that Wickham has been spreading lies about me again and I thought you should know…”
No, that definitely would not do. He must find an alternative and he is much more articulate on the page than verbally.
Journal writing is a voyage to the interior. ~ Christina Baldwin
Quote from the book: Opening the diary to a fresh page, he contemplated a moment before dipping his pen into the inkpot and beginning to write.
The Lydia/Wickham story is completely out-of-canon with Fitzwilliam Darcy in charge, and Papa Bennet recognizing his mistakes! Of course, in those circumstances, it would be hard not to recognize mistakes!
“A Faithful Narrative” has one of the best Epilogues I have read. All told through journal entries, of course. Loved it!
I must write it all out, at any cost. Writing is thinking. It is more than living, for it is being conscious of living. ~ Anne Morrow Lindbergh
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Elizabeth Bennet writes pictures of her thoughts. Her journal is filled with thoughts, many of them concerning one Fitzwilliam Darcy, her enemy.
In the privacy of the parkland at Rosings, she was encountered by the enemy and makes a quick getaway. In her haste, she leaves her journal behind to be found by the last person she would want to know her private thoughts.
Darcy, with the best of intentions, picks up the book to return it to its owner. The journal falls open to a page with his name featured prominently. He now knows the truth: Elizabeth Bennet despises him and has since their first meeting.
Quote from the book: Unquestionably, she had been mistaken in some instances, overly sensitive in others, but most of what she related in her diary had been a faithful narrative of their interactions.
Let me live, love, and say it well in good sentences. ~ Sylvia Plath
What an eye-opening experience for a man who believes himself to be in love!
Darcy wants to apologize for some issues and explain other topics, but how to begin?
Quote from the book: “My apologies, Miss Bennet, but I read in your diary that Wickham has been spreading lies about me again and I thought you should know…”
No, that definitely would not do. He must find an alternative and he is much more articulate on the page than verbally.
Journal writing is a voyage to the interior. ~ Christina Baldwin
Quote from the book: Opening the diary to a fresh page, he contemplated a moment before dipping his pen into the inkpot and beginning to write.
The Lydia/Wickham story is completely out-of-canon with Fitzwilliam Darcy in charge, and Papa Bennet recognizing his mistakes! Of course, in those circumstances, it would be hard not to recognize mistakes!
“A Faithful Narrative” has one of the best Epilogues I have read. All told through journal entries, of course. Loved it!
I must write it all out, at any cost. Writing is thinking. It is more than living, for it is being conscious of living. ~ Anne Morrow Lindbergh
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
March 21, 2022
A Fresh Premise
A short story with an intriguing premise, it chronicles the feelings and subsequent events following Darcy’s discovery and reading of Elizabeth’s diary at Rosings Park. The result will lead each to a lesson in self-discovery as they both begin to comprehend their own faults and misunderstandings of their past encounters. Darcy takes steps to amend his past behaviour towards Bingley and Jane (off page) and, to bring Wickham to account for his own ongoing bad behaviour.
Due to the nature of the story, the writing inspires a narrative style, encouraging self-reflection of the protagonists. This worked well for the most part, until I found myself a little frustrated with Darcy’s intentional avoidance of Elizabeth leading up to their finally reaching an understanding. I would have welcomed a little less of that and more courtship and dialogue before jumping into the epilogue. Comprised of Elizabeth’s diary entries —and with notations by Darcy—it was fun to read. I especially chortled at the Lady Elliot reference.
Told from both Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s point of view, this nicely-written novella will please JAff enthusiasts. I enjoyed this pleasant read and do recommend it.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
A short story with an intriguing premise, it chronicles the feelings and subsequent events following Darcy’s discovery and reading of Elizabeth’s diary at Rosings Park. The result will lead each to a lesson in self-discovery as they both begin to comprehend their own faults and misunderstandings of their past encounters. Darcy takes steps to amend his past behaviour towards Bingley and Jane (off page) and, to bring Wickham to account for his own ongoing bad behaviour.
Due to the nature of the story, the writing inspires a narrative style, encouraging self-reflection of the protagonists. This worked well for the most part, until I found myself a little frustrated with Darcy’s intentional avoidance of Elizabeth leading up to their finally reaching an understanding. I would have welcomed a little less of that and more courtship and dialogue before jumping into the epilogue. Comprised of Elizabeth’s diary entries —and with notations by Darcy—it was fun to read. I especially chortled at the Lady Elliot reference.
Told from both Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s point of view, this nicely-written novella will please JAff enthusiasts. I enjoyed this pleasant read and do recommend it.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
April 1, 2022
4.5 stars rounded up to 5 stars
The author's blurb gives us the main premise: Hunsford: Darcy...daring to read Elizabeth's diary, which he found in a field of bluebells, is startled to realize what she really thinks of him. Pondering how to change her opinion he writes "that letter" ....in her diary before accepting the help of his cousin to put the diary back in her hands.
As Elizabeth, at first so angry that he would dare to read a personal journal, begins to observe him more closely. She sees his efforts to correct the Jane/Bingley situation and now is ashamed of her opinion about Wickham. However, when she seeks to meet with him (after all are back in Hertfordshire) he responds by making an about-face to leave her presence time-after-time.
This story gives some of its passages in letter form, more at the ending than the beginning. With JAFF we know we will have our happy ending. I enjoyed this story and recommend it.
The author's blurb gives us the main premise: Hunsford: Darcy...daring to read Elizabeth's diary, which he found in a field of bluebells, is startled to realize what she really thinks of him. Pondering how to change her opinion he writes "that letter" ....in her diary before accepting the help of his cousin to put the diary back in her hands.
As Elizabeth, at first so angry that he would dare to read a personal journal, begins to observe him more closely. She sees his efforts to correct the Jane/Bingley situation and now is ashamed of her opinion about Wickham. However, when she seeks to meet with him (after all are back in Hertfordshire) he responds by making an about-face to leave her presence time-after-time.
This story gives some of its passages in letter form, more at the ending than the beginning. With JAFF we know we will have our happy ending. I enjoyed this story and recommend it.
March 9, 2022
That old adage - let sleeping dogs lie, or, eavesdroppers never hear anything good about themselves. In this case, open someone else's diary and you won't like what you read about yourself.
However, it does stop Darcy from making the huge mistake of proposing the an Elizabeth who dislikes him. It also sets him on the path of trying to make amends towards Jane and Bingley. But before he leaves Hunsford he uses the diary to leave a letter for E. This brings her turmoil and the consequent thought process flipping her opinion of D around.
On D's return to to Meryton he also takes care of further business, but meanwhile following a minor misunderstanding, refuses to meet with E again. She does a bit of chasing to everyone's final satisfaction.
I read this as a WIP and was looking forward to reading the whole together all in one go. A quick, sweet read, with low angst, some high emotions and of course - a HEA for ODC.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
However, it does stop Darcy from making the huge mistake of proposing the an Elizabeth who dislikes him. It also sets him on the path of trying to make amends towards Jane and Bingley. But before he leaves Hunsford he uses the diary to leave a letter for E. This brings her turmoil and the consequent thought process flipping her opinion of D around.
On D's return to to Meryton he also takes care of further business, but meanwhile following a minor misunderstanding, refuses to meet with E again. She does a bit of chasing to everyone's final satisfaction.
I read this as a WIP and was looking forward to reading the whole together all in one go. A quick, sweet read, with low angst, some high emotions and of course - a HEA for ODC.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
February 26, 2022
This story starts at Rosings Park, where Darcy is contemplating a proposal when he comes across Elizabeth on one of her outings and she flees the scene, leaving a book behind her. Darcy intends to return it to her but the temptation to read it gets too strong when he realizes it's her diary and gets an accidental glimpse of his own name on the pages. He writes the equivalent of the Letter in the diary, explaining his history with Wickham and promising to tell Bingley the truth. He makes no reference to his matrimonial wishes but does make it clear that his opinion of Elizabeth is vastly different than one might suppose on the basis of his assembly insult. Elizabeth has mixed feelings after reading the letter but is hopeful of a chance to apologize. However, this opportunity is hard to grasp as Darcy returns to Longbourn with Bingley later and reading her nonverbal cues, gets the impression that he is not welcome.. He stays in town to deal with Wickham but seems to be actively avoiding Elizabeth.
I enjoyed reading this variation. The story flows well and the author's writing style is a delight. I might have hoped for a few more scenes of courting as there is little interaction between our dear couple for most of the book and then it jumps from not-yet-but-you-have-a-chance to an epilogue of sorts in which they have been happily married for some time already. Steam level: Hand kissing.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. I had read this as a WIP before and it was just as enjoyable the second time around.
I enjoyed reading this variation. The story flows well and the author's writing style is a delight. I might have hoped for a few more scenes of courting as there is little interaction between our dear couple for most of the book and then it jumps from not-yet-but-you-have-a-chance to an epilogue of sorts in which they have been happily married for some time already. Steam level: Hand kissing.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. I had read this as a WIP before and it was just as enjoyable the second time around.
March 18, 2022
A pity it's so pithy
Synopsis:
The premiss of the story boiled down to what if Darcy was handed an insight into how Elizabeth genuinely viewed him and the events of their entire acquaintance at a crucial crosspoint, before he could really muff it up with a premature & insulting proposal.
This has been done in other ways previous; through him being told by someone (usually the Colonel,) accidentally eavesdropping, etc. - but here it is done with him unintentionally reading Lizzy's diary.
This story gets straight to business: it opens on Rosings with Darcy on the precipice of delivering his proposal to Elizabeth. He finds her in a grove, but she startles like a doe and quickly makes her excuses to leave. In her haste she has abandoned her book. Darcy pockets it thinking he will return it to her, only to discover when dropping it and it falling on an open page his very name accompanied with less than flattering sentiments.
Ok, so it wasn't as brutal & ineloquent as our modern day Burn Book, but it was in the spirit of it and just as devastating to Darcy.
After processing all the stages of grief, Darcy decides he will quite literally fill in the blank gaps of her understanding of the order of events by responding to her charges in her diary's empty pages. I like the metaphor of it; Lizzy started writing the story to her comprehension and Darcy took up his pen to set it straight in her very book.
With Darcy accepting his faults, correcting the narrative, and hinting at his regard it only takes some time for Lizzy to be remedied of her prejudice and start to reevaluate her certainties and grow to feel quite the opposite
Lizzy:
Will Lizzy be able to overlook Darcy's accidental invasion of privacy?
Darcy to Lizzy:
The Brass Tacks:
Well written as it is, it still ranks as my least favorite Mary Smythe thus far, and I posit that is chiefly due to how late the ODC interactive scenes descend, for this same reason I didn’t like Sleepless in Seattle. The reflection both characters had in the first half is much the same fare you get in any JAFF, except it accounts for half of the story and right off the bat the only novelty is its context: of it being from a diary. Bearing in mind it is fast paced and relatively short it wasn't so arduous but it still felt delayed in getting to the more novel and interesting aspects.
I prefer more scenes, dialogue and less introspection.
Recall the 2005 adaptation of Lizzy in contemplation on a swing? That is what the first half felt like.
I find it more vivid, interesting and fertile ground for an author to create something new out of the tale as old as time.
I haven't watched Hell's Kitchen in a couple of years, and what I watched was usually what I caught on hotel tv's turned on in the background, but if I recall correctly, all chefs were given the same three or so main ingredients from which they had to concoct their own original dish- which resonates for fan fiction. All the authors get the same story and from it they derive the key ingredients/ guidelines for their own interpretation/ derivation.
I think the most interesting ingredient to spotlight is this category is Darcy and Lizzy interacting. I want that ingredient present at the forefront of every P&P JAFF dish. That is what I am looking for. How you use that is what will most intrigue me. So yes, this is a well written, solid JAFF, but it does not appeal heavily to my personal predilection.
📎Another JAFF that features a diary being read: Something New to Observe A Pride and Prejudice Vagary
꙳ Spice Scale rating: Belle Pepper Chaster 🌶/5 ꙳
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Synopsis:
The premiss of the story boiled down to what if Darcy was handed an insight into how Elizabeth genuinely viewed him and the events of their entire acquaintance at a crucial crosspoint, before he could really muff it up with a premature & insulting proposal.
This has been done in other ways previous; through him being told by someone (usually the Colonel,) accidentally eavesdropping, etc. - but here it is done with him unintentionally reading Lizzy's diary.
This story gets straight to business: it opens on Rosings with Darcy on the precipice of delivering his proposal to Elizabeth. He finds her in a grove, but she startles like a doe and quickly makes her excuses to leave. In her haste she has abandoned her book. Darcy pockets it thinking he will return it to her, only to discover when dropping it and it falling on an open page his very name accompanied with less than flattering sentiments.
Ok, so it wasn't as brutal & ineloquent as our modern day Burn Book, but it was in the spirit of it and just as devastating to Darcy.
After processing all the stages of grief, Darcy decides he will quite literally fill in the blank gaps of her understanding of the order of events by responding to her charges in her diary's empty pages. I like the metaphor of it; Lizzy started writing the story to her comprehension and Darcy took up his pen to set it straight in her very book.
With Darcy accepting his faults, correcting the narrative, and hinting at his regard it only takes some time for Lizzy to be remedied of her prejudice and start to reevaluate her certainties and grow to feel quite the opposite
Lizzy:
Will Lizzy be able to overlook Darcy's accidental invasion of privacy?
Darcy to Lizzy:
The Brass Tacks:
Well written as it is, it still ranks as my least favorite Mary Smythe thus far, and I posit that is chiefly due to how late the ODC interactive scenes descend, for this same reason I didn’t like Sleepless in Seattle. The reflection both characters had in the first half is much the same fare you get in any JAFF, except it accounts for half of the story and right off the bat the only novelty is its context: of it being from a diary. Bearing in mind it is fast paced and relatively short it wasn't so arduous but it still felt delayed in getting to the more novel and interesting aspects.
I prefer more scenes, dialogue and less introspection.
Recall the 2005 adaptation of Lizzy in contemplation on a swing? That is what the first half felt like.
I find it more vivid, interesting and fertile ground for an author to create something new out of the tale as old as time.
I haven't watched Hell's Kitchen in a couple of years, and what I watched was usually what I caught on hotel tv's turned on in the background, but if I recall correctly, all chefs were given the same three or so main ingredients from which they had to concoct their own original dish- which resonates for fan fiction. All the authors get the same story and from it they derive the key ingredients/ guidelines for their own interpretation/ derivation.
I think the most interesting ingredient to spotlight is this category is Darcy and Lizzy interacting. I want that ingredient present at the forefront of every P&P JAFF dish. That is what I am looking for. How you use that is what will most intrigue me. So yes, this is a well written, solid JAFF, but it does not appeal heavily to my personal predilection.
📎Another JAFF that features a diary being read: Something New to Observe A Pride and Prejudice Vagary
꙳ Spice Scale rating: Belle Pepper Chaster 🌶/5 ꙳
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
February 28, 2022
Review also posted on my blog
https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...
Fitzwilliam Darcy is finally ready to propose to Elizabeth Bennet.
It has taken him some time to overcome his objections to her status, family, connexions with trade and lack of fortune.
As he seeks the perfect opportunity to offer for Elizabeth, he comes across her diary, in amongst the bluebells. He initially thinks it to be a novel and takes it, planning to return it to Elizabeth.
When picking up the book he sees his name and cannot resist a glance.
Darcy is brought up short by reading Elizabeth’s diary and discovering just how much she despises him.
Elizabeth has long disliked Fitzwilliam Darcy, considering him proud, arrogant and devoid of any proper feeling. Her opinions are backed up by the “evidence” of the handsome Mr Wickham.
Darcy is heartbroken to read her opinion of him and resolves to answer her allegations by writing a letter in her diary. He knows Mr Wickham to be a scoundrel and debaucher, so must ensure Elizabeth has the knowledge to protect herself and her family.
As a result, both Elizabeth and Darcy have much to consider and re-evaluate.
Will they ever meet again? How will they react to each other? Is there hope?
I really like this Darcy. Instead of haughty and angry when he takes his leave of Elizabeth, he is sorrowful and wistfully apologetic.
Elizabeth is mortified at her mistaken assumptions and prejudice. She wants to apologise for her unkindness but Darcy misinterprets her shyness and embarrassment as ongoing disdain.
With Darcy avoiding her she has to resort to devious measures to be able to speak to him.
Lovely resolution and as a bonus, Wickham gets his comeuppance, twice!
Really enjoyable novella.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. All views expressed are my own.
https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...
Fitzwilliam Darcy is finally ready to propose to Elizabeth Bennet.
It has taken him some time to overcome his objections to her status, family, connexions with trade and lack of fortune.
As he seeks the perfect opportunity to offer for Elizabeth, he comes across her diary, in amongst the bluebells. He initially thinks it to be a novel and takes it, planning to return it to Elizabeth.
When picking up the book he sees his name and cannot resist a glance.
Darcy is brought up short by reading Elizabeth’s diary and discovering just how much she despises him.
Elizabeth has long disliked Fitzwilliam Darcy, considering him proud, arrogant and devoid of any proper feeling. Her opinions are backed up by the “evidence” of the handsome Mr Wickham.
Darcy is heartbroken to read her opinion of him and resolves to answer her allegations by writing a letter in her diary. He knows Mr Wickham to be a scoundrel and debaucher, so must ensure Elizabeth has the knowledge to protect herself and her family.
As a result, both Elizabeth and Darcy have much to consider and re-evaluate.
Will they ever meet again? How will they react to each other? Is there hope?
I really like this Darcy. Instead of haughty and angry when he takes his leave of Elizabeth, he is sorrowful and wistfully apologetic.
Elizabeth is mortified at her mistaken assumptions and prejudice. She wants to apologise for her unkindness but Darcy misinterprets her shyness and embarrassment as ongoing disdain.
With Darcy avoiding her she has to resort to devious measures to be able to speak to him.
Lovely resolution and as a bonus, Wickham gets his comeuppance, twice!
Really enjoyable novella.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. All views expressed are my own.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 8, 2022
"Dear Diary, what a day it's been..." (Moody Blues)
Poor Mr. Darcy. His bubble has been burst. He honestly didn't mean to read her words...but he saw his name and the temptation was just too great. And then he does what I hoped he would do!
"Darcy never felt more the buffoon in his life. Or more arrogant." (quote from the book)
Poor Miss Elizabeth Bennet. She has lost her diary and worries over someone finding it. As Mr. Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam take their leave of the parsonage for their return to London, her diary is quietly returned to her. Mr. Darcy offers her a very moving good-bye and Elizabeth is not unaffected by his gesture.
"I have recently learned that my ability to sketch characters is not so infallible as I had once believed. It was a difficult lesson and has left me wondering if I ever knew myself at all?" (quote from the book)
This novella was such a delightful treat. I loved how each of the chapter headings took phrases from canon. I loved the twists and turns taken to make this such a unique variation. But most of all, I loved how Darcy and Elizabeth came to understand each other and themselves better. The epilogue at the end was a perfect way to end the story.
"Dear Diary, it's been like just a dream...(Moody Blues)
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
March 31, 2022
reading a diary can be an eye opener moment
At Hunsford Darcy finds Lizzy’s diary, which she lost, and reads it. Of course it’s filled with many reasons Lizzy dislikes him. The rest of the book is about Darcy seeing himself through her eyes and deciding he has changes to make. No nasty proposal here.
The rest of the story is much fun to read. Especially noteworthy is Lizzy has to chase him a little since he rightly thinks she doesn’t like him much and doesn’t chase her as much. Something which we don’t experience in many variations. All in all, I enjoyed the story.
At Hunsford Darcy finds Lizzy’s diary, which she lost, and reads it. Of course it’s filled with many reasons Lizzy dislikes him. The rest of the book is about Darcy seeing himself through her eyes and deciding he has changes to make. No nasty proposal here.
The rest of the story is much fun to read. Especially noteworthy is Lizzy has to chase him a little since he rightly thinks she doesn’t like him much and doesn’t chase her as much. Something which we don’t experience in many variations. All in all, I enjoyed the story.
January 8, 2023
What If Mr. Darcy Discovered Elizabeth’s Diary Before Making His Disastrous Proposal?
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Publisher
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation Novella
THE PREMISE: Unable to resist the unforgivable temptation, Mr. Darcy reads Elizabeth’s diary when he finds it left behind in a field of bluebells and spots his own name on an opened page. Instead of making his disastrous proposal to Elizabeth, Mr. Darcy reveals himself to Elizabeth in another manner and sets about attending her reproofs. Will it be enough to amend Elizabeth’s unfavorable opinion of him or is all hope lost..
MY THOUGHTS:
What an excellent premise! I love that this story diverges right before Mr. Darcy makes his proposal. And I love that Elizabeth keeps a diary – it kinda brought on some Bridget Jones’s Diary vibes. Especially since Elizabeth, like Bridget, likes to vents her frustration about Mr. Darcy in her diary. It is always illuminating to see glimpses of any letters or diary entries penned by characters because readers are able to hear their true voice. I appreciated the clever and skillful ways Ms. Smythe used Elizabeth’s diary as a device of revelation and communication in this tale.
Aside from the unique and interesting premise, what I enjoyed most in this tale was witnessing Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s behaviors. Readers see them both traverse a myriad of emotions. I loved this portrayal of Mr. Darcy – he is blindsided by Elizabeth’s true opinion of him and heavily reprimands himself for his arrogance, conceit, and for breaking his own moral code. He battles with his feelings of despair and hope, and overall is propelled in all things my his ardent love. In addition, I loved Elizabeth’s reactions to Mr. Darcy – she is very thoughtful and observant about his character and all she learns about him. I love her boldness and determination in wanting to see him and speak with him. And I love how she begins to understand Mr. Darcy’s character and reviews her judgments about him, even without speaking to him. Our Elizabeth is audacious and secure enough to not be easily put off by Mr. Darcy’s defection.
Another element I loved about this story is what happens in Meryton with Mr. Wickham. This sequence of events escalated quickly and ratcheted up the excitement a bit. Mr. Darcy was everything honorable and swoon-worthy – I love a man of action! It is always refreshing to see something new happen with Mr. Wickham, and I greatly enjoyed the chaotic and entertaining reactions at Longbourn to this new development.
Clever, distinctive, and charming – A Faithful Narrative is a lovely Pride and Prejudice variation that is sure to be adored by Jane Austen fans! I loved seeing more of Ms. Smythe’s playful twists and her perceptive portrayal of each character’s introspection and evolution in this succinct tale. The only thing I could have wished for would be a chapter or two more of courtship/romantic developments before the terrific epilogue.
Austenesque Reviews
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Publisher
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation Novella
THE PREMISE: Unable to resist the unforgivable temptation, Mr. Darcy reads Elizabeth’s diary when he finds it left behind in a field of bluebells and spots his own name on an opened page. Instead of making his disastrous proposal to Elizabeth, Mr. Darcy reveals himself to Elizabeth in another manner and sets about attending her reproofs. Will it be enough to amend Elizabeth’s unfavorable opinion of him or is all hope lost..
MY THOUGHTS:
What an excellent premise! I love that this story diverges right before Mr. Darcy makes his proposal. And I love that Elizabeth keeps a diary – it kinda brought on some Bridget Jones’s Diary vibes. Especially since Elizabeth, like Bridget, likes to vents her frustration about Mr. Darcy in her diary. It is always illuminating to see glimpses of any letters or diary entries penned by characters because readers are able to hear their true voice. I appreciated the clever and skillful ways Ms. Smythe used Elizabeth’s diary as a device of revelation and communication in this tale.
Aside from the unique and interesting premise, what I enjoyed most in this tale was witnessing Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s behaviors. Readers see them both traverse a myriad of emotions. I loved this portrayal of Mr. Darcy – he is blindsided by Elizabeth’s true opinion of him and heavily reprimands himself for his arrogance, conceit, and for breaking his own moral code. He battles with his feelings of despair and hope, and overall is propelled in all things my his ardent love. In addition, I loved Elizabeth’s reactions to Mr. Darcy – she is very thoughtful and observant about his character and all she learns about him. I love her boldness and determination in wanting to see him and speak with him. And I love how she begins to understand Mr. Darcy’s character and reviews her judgments about him, even without speaking to him. Our Elizabeth is audacious and secure enough to not be easily put off by Mr. Darcy’s defection.
Another element I loved about this story is what happens in Meryton with Mr. Wickham. This sequence of events escalated quickly and ratcheted up the excitement a bit. Mr. Darcy was everything honorable and swoon-worthy – I love a man of action! It is always refreshing to see something new happen with Mr. Wickham, and I greatly enjoyed the chaotic and entertaining reactions at Longbourn to this new development.
Clever, distinctive, and charming – A Faithful Narrative is a lovely Pride and Prejudice variation that is sure to be adored by Jane Austen fans! I loved seeing more of Ms. Smythe’s playful twists and her perceptive portrayal of each character’s introspection and evolution in this succinct tale. The only thing I could have wished for would be a chapter or two more of courtship/romantic developments before the terrific epilogue.
Austenesque Reviews
May 24, 2023
This variation is just plain fun. I immediately want to read it again. It starts off in Hunsford where Darcy meets Elizabeth on one of her walks and intends to propose. She gives him a cold reception and begs to return to the house. Thus his proposal is thwarted. On his way back to Rosings, Darcy finds Elizabeth’s diary and once he accidentally sees his name in it, he reads it all. The story continues from there with some surprising twists and turns. It’s a quick read that I very much enjoyed.
April 27, 2022
Our dear couple discovers their true feelings about each other via Elizabeth Bennet’s diary. She left it in a field at Rosings. Fitzwilliam Darcy can’t help himself but to read it and discover what she really thinks of him. He writes a response in her diary before he returns it. What follows is lots of assumptions, miscommunications, a few discoveries, and a happily ever after.
June 21, 2022
Dearest Diary,
We have learned that, in general, written communication can, at times, generate misunderstandings, but on the other hand, it can be read several times, allowing new interpretations. In some cases, it can alleviate or prevent discomfort caused by words spoken in times of stress or anger.
Mr. Darcy is unable to propose to Elizabeth Bennet, but accidentally finds her diary, where he sees his actions through her eyes.
After a moment of initial shock, Darcy discovers that her feelings are far from being reciprocated. He makes the decision to write an apology for his behavior in Elizabeth's diary, where he also provides information about his past and about Mr. Wickham.
Through what was written by both, Elizabeth will rethink actions, qualities, defects and feelings not only of Mr. Darcy but yours too.
From there, both will make mistakes and successes in search of forgiveness and love from the other.
Initially, I had already the book on my wish list. Then, I had the opportunity to receive a free copy of this book, actually an ebook, via Booksprout in exchange for an honest review and read it before its release, but I liked it so much that I couldn't resist and bought the book in the paperback version.
We have learned that, in general, written communication can, at times, generate misunderstandings, but on the other hand, it can be read several times, allowing new interpretations. In some cases, it can alleviate or prevent discomfort caused by words spoken in times of stress or anger.
Mr. Darcy is unable to propose to Elizabeth Bennet, but accidentally finds her diary, where he sees his actions through her eyes.
After a moment of initial shock, Darcy discovers that her feelings are far from being reciprocated. He makes the decision to write an apology for his behavior in Elizabeth's diary, where he also provides information about his past and about Mr. Wickham.
Through what was written by both, Elizabeth will rethink actions, qualities, defects and feelings not only of Mr. Darcy but yours too.
From there, both will make mistakes and successes in search of forgiveness and love from the other.
Initially, I had already the book on my wish list. Then, I had the opportunity to receive a free copy of this book, actually an ebook, via Booksprout in exchange for an honest review and read it before its release, but I liked it so much that I couldn't resist and bought the book in the paperback version.
April 1, 2022
This is another P&P what if that requires you to know the material as it starts at Rosings the day Lizzy learns of Mr. Darcy's efforts to separate Jane and Bingley.
In a twist the author omits the DP@H and skips right to the morning after when Darcy attempts to speak to Lizzy who rebuffs him and heads for the the parsonage leaving a small book behind.
Darcy finds it and turns out it is Lizzy's diary; where he learns all that he previously learned during the DP@H and MORE. He flows through various emotions until deciding to pen a letter in her diary.
Then things proceed much like the source material; until Bingley and Darcy return to Netherfield and Lizzy and Darcy misunderstand one another for quite a while until you want to reach into the book and shake them
Several others things happen
In a twist the author omits the DP@H and skips right to the morning after when Darcy attempts to speak to Lizzy who rebuffs him and heads for the the parsonage leaving a small book behind.
Darcy finds it and turns out it is Lizzy's diary; where he learns all that he previously learned during the DP@H and MORE. He flows through various emotions until deciding to pen a letter in her diary.
Then things proceed much like the source material; until Bingley and Darcy return to Netherfield and Lizzy and Darcy misunderstand one another for quite a while until you want to reach into the book and shake them
Several others things happen
April 12, 2022
I will start by saying, I really enjoyed the first half of this book. Bridget Jones’ Diary is P&P inspired and the beginning felt like BJD inspired - which ❤️.
But then we get to the 2nd half where Darcy needs to grow a pair and TALK to the girl.
Once we get to the “epilogue” it’s back to the diary and while cute it goes on for too long.
But then we get to the 2nd half where Darcy needs to grow a pair and TALK to the girl.
Once we get to the “epilogue” it’s back to the diary and while cute it goes on for too long.
May 13, 2022
my enemy read my diary! wait, I can’t kill him?
It was so easy to enter into the cruel disenchantment Darcy experienced after reading about himself in Elizabeth’s diary. My stomach clenched when he was contemplated reading it but we knew he would. Then I was plunged into Elizabeth’s mortification when she learned her diary was read by none other than the man she had spewed such vitriol on in her written thoughts. Gads. I easily felt the despair of both.
We’ve read so many variations with serious angst over misunderstandings but this one is unique. The angst went on for what felt like an agonizingly long while but the story moves and the book is novella length depending upon how quickly you read resolves in time to save you from resorting to medicating with that pint of chocolate ice cream in the freezer. What great images Mary Smythe provides of Darcy’s daily doses of his love. Very romantic.
What a great ‘coming to an understanding’ scene.
The epilogue might have ended after the first diary entry…..but read on. It’s pure fun. Highly recommended.
It was so easy to enter into the cruel disenchantment Darcy experienced after reading about himself in Elizabeth’s diary. My stomach clenched when he was contemplated reading it but we knew he would. Then I was plunged into Elizabeth’s mortification when she learned her diary was read by none other than the man she had spewed such vitriol on in her written thoughts. Gads. I easily felt the despair of both.
We’ve read so many variations with serious angst over misunderstandings but this one is unique. The angst went on for what felt like an agonizingly long while but the story moves and the book is novella length depending upon how quickly you read resolves in time to save you from resorting to medicating with that pint of chocolate ice cream in the freezer. What great images Mary Smythe provides of Darcy’s daily doses of his love. Very romantic.
What a great ‘coming to an understanding’ scene.
The epilogue might have ended after the first diary entry…..but read on. It’s pure fun. Highly recommended.
April 2, 2022
Avid Reader
I read this on FanFiction, and loved every minute of the draft. Of course I had to read the published version! After finding Elizabeth 's diary and reading exactly how she feels about him, Darcy writes a reply explaining why he did some of the things that he did. Elizabeth has to rethink her last behavior as well as her prejudices. Darcy changes his behavior and attitudes and behaviors as well😊😊
I read this on FanFiction, and loved every minute of the draft. Of course I had to read the published version! After finding Elizabeth 's diary and reading exactly how she feels about him, Darcy writes a reply explaining why he did some of the things that he did. Elizabeth has to rethink her last behavior as well as her prejudices. Darcy changes his behavior and attitudes and behaviors as well😊😊
February 7, 2023
Unexpected plot
An enlightening finding avoids unpleasant scenes between our beloved couple and helps Darcy to understand where he has been wrong in his assumptions,and why. His response helps Elizabeth to see her mistakes and to correct them. A very interesting story!
An enlightening finding avoids unpleasant scenes between our beloved couple and helps Darcy to understand where he has been wrong in his assumptions,and why. His response helps Elizabeth to see her mistakes and to correct them. A very interesting story!
May 17, 2022
This was sweet, almost too much so. I very predictable and light novella.
March 24, 2022
Wonderful
Hard to believe, but our beloved but stiff and upright Mr Darcy actually reads Elizabeth's personal diary! Can't say I blame him, since the author provides the perfect excuse, namely that after finding it, he drops it and it opens to a page whereon he clearly sees his own name in the text of the writing, and succumbs to his curiosity. The story begins during Elizabeth's visit to Charlotte Collins at Hunsford parsonage. Darcy has just made up his mind that he can't live without Elizabeth as his wife. He goes to meet her for her daily walk, and startles her as she's making an entry into her diary. Elizabeth has just been told by Colonel Fitzwilliam that Darcy is responsible for separating Jane and Bingley, so she's writing the latest in a long series of nasty observations about Darcy. She accidentally drops the book in her haste to get away from him.
As in the original P&P, Darcy is shocked to discover that Elizabeth isn't ready to fall at his feet, as he had thought. Armed with the knowledge that he has gleaned from the diary, he determines to clean up the mess he's made about Bingley, and about Wickham. However, he plans to return the diary to Elizabeth with a little surprise waiting for her inside.
I love these variations wherein Elizabeth and Darcy have a clear understanding of the issues facing them, instead of the usual beating around the bush that usually goes on. The diary spells everything out that Elizabeth would never dare to say in propriety-heavy Regency speak. Darcy has it straight from the horse's mouth how much of a snob that he's been. It's very satisfying.
The romance is lovely. This is a swoon worthy Darcy, and a suitably humbled Elizabeth. I like this version of Elizabeth that isn't so pig-headed as usual. The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.
Hard to believe, but our beloved but stiff and upright Mr Darcy actually reads Elizabeth's personal diary! Can't say I blame him, since the author provides the perfect excuse, namely that after finding it, he drops it and it opens to a page whereon he clearly sees his own name in the text of the writing, and succumbs to his curiosity. The story begins during Elizabeth's visit to Charlotte Collins at Hunsford parsonage. Darcy has just made up his mind that he can't live without Elizabeth as his wife. He goes to meet her for her daily walk, and startles her as she's making an entry into her diary. Elizabeth has just been told by Colonel Fitzwilliam that Darcy is responsible for separating Jane and Bingley, so she's writing the latest in a long series of nasty observations about Darcy. She accidentally drops the book in her haste to get away from him.
As in the original P&P, Darcy is shocked to discover that Elizabeth isn't ready to fall at his feet, as he had thought. Armed with the knowledge that he has gleaned from the diary, he determines to clean up the mess he's made about Bingley, and about Wickham. However, he plans to return the diary to Elizabeth with a little surprise waiting for her inside.
I love these variations wherein Elizabeth and Darcy have a clear understanding of the issues facing them, instead of the usual beating around the bush that usually goes on. The diary spells everything out that Elizabeth would never dare to say in propriety-heavy Regency speak. Darcy has it straight from the horse's mouth how much of a snob that he's been. It's very satisfying.
The romance is lovely. This is a swoon worthy Darcy, and a suitably humbled Elizabeth. I like this version of Elizabeth that isn't so pig-headed as usual. The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.
November 27, 2023
At some point in the book, Darcy asks himself if he should fight or flee. This was in reference to his love for Elizabeth. Honestly, at that point I rather he flee and we end the story there lol. He has legit ran away a million times every time he sees her AND even when she has gone to him directly (and he knows and admits this), he instead runs away. Is he even deserving anymore?
This book started off SO promising! Interesting and gripping beginning. But then halfway thru I started to lose interest and later on I just no longer liked this version of Mr Darcy who is all cowardice and no kahuna’s when it comes to Elizabeth. Even in the original P&P he tries to make a good impression when he sees her for the first time after giving her his letter. And he doesn’t shy away or run just because their meeting was awkward and she wanted to get away.
Great beginning, but disappointing after :( i think this storyline has great potential if it’s re-written differently with stronger characters.
This book started off SO promising! Interesting and gripping beginning. But then halfway thru I started to lose interest and later on I just no longer liked this version of Mr Darcy who is all cowardice and no kahuna’s when it comes to Elizabeth. Even in the original P&P he tries to make a good impression when he sees her for the first time after giving her his letter. And he doesn’t shy away or run just because their meeting was awkward and she wanted to get away.
Great beginning, but disappointing after :( i think this storyline has great potential if it’s re-written differently with stronger characters.
March 22, 2022
This is a sweet story with the twist being Darcy finds and gets an accidental glimpse of Elizabeth’s diary, which leads to him reading all about himself, and derails his proposal in Kent. Darcy doesn’t just get a few harsh words, he reads all about Elizabeth’s feelings for him. (Ouch! But also, you get what you get when you read a diary not intended for you!)
I do think reading the diary is a bit much, and at least a bit OOC for Darcy, who values his honor. The author provides an explanation, and I found it to be enough here.
Darcy also shows more reluctance to face Elizabeth than I might have expected, but I could mostly overlook that given the circumstances here. Lots of guilt on his side. Since we don’t have the failed proposal, Darcy’s feelings are a bit less discernible by Elizabeth, so that is a bit interesting to see as well.
Overall, I enjoyed this story. It was a good evening read.
I do think reading the diary is a bit much, and at least a bit OOC for Darcy, who values his honor. The author provides an explanation, and I found it to be enough here.
Darcy also shows more reluctance to face Elizabeth than I might have expected, but I could mostly overlook that given the circumstances here. Lots of guilt on his side. Since we don’t have the failed proposal, Darcy’s feelings are a bit less discernible by Elizabeth, so that is a bit interesting to see as well.
Overall, I enjoyed this story. It was a good evening read.
March 22, 2022
What would happen if Mr Darcy happened upon Lizzie Bennet’s diary… and was presumptuous enough to read it? And what if he found that the woman he adored, admired and loved most ardently disliked him? Hated him. Despised the very air he breathed, the ground he walked on?
A Faithful Narrative is a nice spin on Pride and Prejudice. Dialogue from Jane Austen’s original tale is often retold in different ways, sometimes new contexts, telling parts of the story from different points of view. A smitten Mr Darcy is perhaps a little shyer and even less comfortable in company than Jane Austen imagined him, but both Darcy and Lizzie grow through this nicely paced retelling.
Some characters end as the reader expects, but others don’t, and these reimaginings are pleasing; in particular, the diary entries of the epilogue are charming.
Disclaimer: I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout in exchange for an honest review.
A Faithful Narrative is a nice spin on Pride and Prejudice. Dialogue from Jane Austen’s original tale is often retold in different ways, sometimes new contexts, telling parts of the story from different points of view. A smitten Mr Darcy is perhaps a little shyer and even less comfortable in company than Jane Austen imagined him, but both Darcy and Lizzie grow through this nicely paced retelling.
Some characters end as the reader expects, but others don’t, and these reimaginings are pleasing; in particular, the diary entries of the epilogue are charming.
Disclaimer: I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout in exchange for an honest review.
March 22, 2022
fun, fast read
I have come to love Mary Smythe books, and this new one does not disappoint. It has everything we love in P&P variations, including a couple unexpected twists, most notably with Lydia, and none of those irritating bits that can weigh a book down. I particularly appreciate that misunderstandings are kept to a minimum and are confronted in a timely manner and everyone behaves in accordance with cannon. Bonus: it’s extremely well edited. If you are looking for a low-angst, fast-paced and thoroughly enjoyable read, this is the book for you. And if you don’t want that kind of book, get it anyway and just read the epilogue. You will see why when you get there. Happy reading!
I have come to love Mary Smythe books, and this new one does not disappoint. It has everything we love in P&P variations, including a couple unexpected twists, most notably with Lydia, and none of those irritating bits that can weigh a book down. I particularly appreciate that misunderstandings are kept to a minimum and are confronted in a timely manner and everyone behaves in accordance with cannon. Bonus: it’s extremely well edited. If you are looking for a low-angst, fast-paced and thoroughly enjoyable read, this is the book for you. And if you don’t want that kind of book, get it anyway and just read the epilogue. You will see why when you get there. Happy reading!
March 29, 2022
This was a book of novella length that started with, and continued to use throughout the story, Elizabeth's diary as a catalyst to bring Darcy and Elizabeth to a HEA. The story begins with Darcy finding Elizabeth's diary and shockingly, he decides to read the diary before returning it to Elizabeth. Before returning it, however, Darcy writes a version of the "letter" in Elizabeth's diary. There is some awkward moments with Elizabeth and Darcy when they meet, but that is easily overcome with some honest discussion between them. I absolutely loved the Epilogue format - it tied up the story very nicely.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout in exchange for an honest review.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout in exchange for an honest review.
March 25, 2022
On the verge of proposing, Fitzwilliam Darcy finds Elizabeth Bennet's diary in a glen. He discovers her various uncharitable feelings towards him, both deserved and undeserved. As he returns the diary, he provides a faithful narrative of his version of events. What ensues is a path of redemption. Mary Smythe does not disappoint in this Pride and Prejudice alternate retelling. Her real strength is regency PP retellings and I commend her on this one. While it is somewhat simpler than some of her other offerings, it is still a worthwhile read. 5/5 stars . I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout in exchange for an honest review.
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October 6, 2022Elizabeth Bennet's diary
Rosings Park: Darcy comes upon Elizabeth sitting surrounded by bluebells and realizes he has never seen such beauty. Elizabeth flees to Longbourn and Darcy finds a book among the bluebells. Thinking it is a novel or volume of poetry she was reading, he puts it in his pocket intending to return it to her that afternoon when he plans to propose.
On his return to Netherfield, he removes the book from his pocket and drops it. The book lands in the open position. When he bends to pick it up, his eye catches on his name. He realizes it is Elizabeth's diary and cannot resist wanting to see what she has said about him.
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Rosings Park: Darcy comes upon Elizabeth sitting surrounded by bluebells and realizes he has never seen such beauty. Elizabeth flees to Longbourn and Darcy finds a book among the bluebells. Thinking it is a novel or volume of poetry she was reading, he puts it in his pocket intending to return it to her that afternoon when he plans to propose.
On his return to Netherfield, he removes the book from his pocket and drops it. The book lands in the open position. When he bends to pick it up, his eye catches on his name. He realizes it is Elizabeth's diary and cannot resist wanting to see what she has said about him.
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March 12, 2022
A thoughtful spin on a theme
This well-constructed novella allows the reader more time to reflect on the impact on Elizabeth and Darcy of revealing their feelings to one another.
The careful narrative is very true to all we know of the characters of Jane Austen’s hero and heroine and is a delight to read. The handling of Wickham and Lydia was quite masterful.
I particularly appreciated the epilogue which brought the reader full circle in a most delightful way.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout in exchange for an honest review.
This well-constructed novella allows the reader more time to reflect on the impact on Elizabeth and Darcy of revealing their feelings to one another.
The careful narrative is very true to all we know of the characters of Jane Austen’s hero and heroine and is a delight to read. The handling of Wickham and Lydia was quite masterful.
I particularly appreciated the epilogue which brought the reader full circle in a most delightful way.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout in exchange for an honest review.
March 27, 2022
Story started with Mr. Darcy learning how Elizabeth feels about him through her diary. (He did the unthinkable for a gentleman). The rest of the story followed and it seems the bulk of it, our couple were apart from each other. This enabled the two to reflect on their feelings, plans and decisions. There were only 13 chapters (plus epilogue) but it was a good read. The last part (Spoiler) were journal entries of what happened to the othet characters and ODC.
This is another entertaining story from Ms Mary Smythe. Highly recommend to P & P fans.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout in exchange for an honest review.
This is another entertaining story from Ms Mary Smythe. Highly recommend to P & P fans.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout in exchange for an honest review.
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