Note: This review is a departure from the all-praise words written for this book, and very, very specific to me.
***
First the good part. Story is intriguing and too real. The simplicity of the characters and conversations made it seem that I was actually eaves dropping in people's lives. The dillemma they face about partition, how can a place go from one place to another, where and what exactly is Pakistan...the naive questions characters ask cause deep strikes in the mind. This observational commentary made the story believable. Situations are presented as they are, but dealt with sensitively. The language is a treat to read, bringing characters closer to reality. They are, as the author mentions in the beginning.
Now, for the bad part.
The story is intriguing, however, the writing style didn't sit well with me. The story introduces far too many characters, perhaps to show the village is enriched with multitudes of people, but without their sketches, background and relationships, and if done, they are concentrated in few pages that are pushed into oblivion in the reader's mind as the story goes on. Some character's are abandoned mid-way, while some are introduced in the middle of the story we know nothing of from before. It is difficult to keep track of who is who, and what's their relation to the others and to the story. The same character is referred to with different names.
Understandably, there is no lead character, the village itself is the lead. So, while writing of two characters, a third is introduced, their story is continued until a fourth character is introduced and then their story is continued and so on and so forth. This chain building exercise just leads reader from one character to another incessantly, with no story leading anywhere.
As much as I appreciated the story, going through it was a difficult task.