When I first started to read "Intoxicated," I was immediately drawn to the word "building" that initially started off on a promising note but gradually transformed into a disappointment.
The concept of two characters with deeply flawed personalities and their vulnerability being showcased early on intrigued me. However, as the story progressed, I began to lose interest in Gabriel and Zyon. What initially seemed promising transformed into a dull and tedious experience.
I despise "push and pull" tales, as they create the illusion of drama through miscommunication, misconceptions, and unnecessary drama. It's a powerful narrative device that can be effective when used sparingly, but when it becomes the sole focus of the story, it becomes unbearable.
Zyon and Gabriel's demons were mentioned prominently at the beginning of the story, but they kept tiptoeing around this issue, which I found to be quite meh (boring). I understand that both characters have horrible things haunting them, but the constant avoidance of disclosing their true feelings created a frustrating and lackadaisical atmosphere. They kept hiding their true feelings, causing a sense of faux drama that felt contrived, which totally ruined the story for me.
Throughout the story, an abundance of unnecessary drama arises due to their rigid attitudes and behaviors, which serve little purpose other than to hinder the progression of an already flawed narrative.
The lack of empathy I felt towards both characters was a result of their persistent avoidance of the elephant in the room. They kept alluding to their shared attraction, but never fully committed to their feelings. This lack of sincerity and honesty prevented me from fully investing in their love story, rendering the entire narrative lackluster and uninteresting.
Ultimately, it was the constant dancing around the truth that soured my experience with "Intoxicated." By avoiding their demons and avoiding genuine communication, both Zyon and Gabriel failed to create a compelling romantic narrative. In the end, their demons were finally revealed, but by then, it was too late to redeem the story for me.
If you’re looking for something to read that has unnecessary drama due to the characters being overly uptight for no apparent purpose other than to advance a plotline that suffered from its inherent flaws.
Then this is the book for you.