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In Essentials
His mistress, rewarded with a substantial allowance, jewelry, and clothing was in all essentials Mrs. Darcy, except by name.
His wife, with low connections and vulgar relations, is Mrs. Darcy by name, but in essentials she is nothing more than a necessary evil to thwart the plans of his uncle the earl, as well as provide a legitimate heir to Pemberley.
All too soon, Darcy realizes there are hidden depths to his petite wife, and finds himself completely fascinated by not only her beauty but intelligence and wit.
Elizabeth, fully aware of why Mr. Darcy chose her as his wife, fights her growing attraction to the taciturn gentleman from Derbyshire, failing miserably. She is finally forced to acknowledge, that, in essentials, he is the only man who can make her happy.
His wife, with low connections and vulgar relations, is Mrs. Darcy by name, but in essentials she is nothing more than a necessary evil to thwart the plans of his uncle the earl, as well as provide a legitimate heir to Pemberley.
All too soon, Darcy realizes there are hidden depths to his petite wife, and finds himself completely fascinated by not only her beauty but intelligence and wit.
Elizabeth, fully aware of why Mr. Darcy chose her as his wife, fights her growing attraction to the taciturn gentleman from Derbyshire, failing miserably. She is finally forced to acknowledge, that, in essentials, he is the only man who can make her happy.
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Published March 30, 2022
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Sue Barr
19 books90 followers“If I loved you less, I might be able to talk about it more.” ~ Jane Austen
I love all things Regency and sometimes a wee Highlander story. I also have a weakness for Alpha males and feisty heroines, who keep them on their toes.
I love all things Regency and sometimes a wee Highlander story. I also have a weakness for Alpha males and feisty heroines, who keep them on their toes.
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April 30, 2025
>>Rating: MA: that means MATURE. I’m not kidding. This was descriptive, graphic, and not for a young reader. There were swoon-worthy scenes that could melt your reading device. I needed my fan, my salts, and a quick zap from a defib by the time I reached the end of this story.
>>Angst Level: I finally considered this a farce or I might have reached into my reader and tweaked Darcy’s pointy little head. You will either be horrified or you will laugh at the craziness of our dear boy.
>>Source: borrowed from KU [3-31-22] with no expectations of a review. The views and opinions expressed are my own.
>>Trope: FMS [forced marriage scenario], Douche Darcy… for real. This guy was NO prize. Seriously. He was such a prig. I’m surprised he could stand to be in the same room with himself. This was also where the Bennet family [Mr. Bennet, Jane, and Elizabeth] had hidden wealth and exalted connections that only a select few knew about. I love this trope. The current Mrs. Bennet was the second wife and she came to the marriage [via compromise] with Mary, Kitty, and Lydia. She certainly was no prize.
>>Timeline: Darcy at the assembly.
>>Cover Art: Lovely cover. I can just hear Elizabeth's thoughts saying to Darcy… Really? He deserved it. [5+stars]
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
I have read this several times now. The first time, I was horrified by Darcy’s behavior. However, I was so enamored by Elizabeth’s behavior that I relaxed and simply watched her put him through his paces. She had a secret and kept her cards close to her chest. Darcy had no idea of her biological mother’s family. Only a select few in Meryton knew. Oh, Darcy… I hope you enjoy eating crow because you are about to be handed a HUGE serving of your own creation. Upon my subsequent reading, I was more relaxed and enjoyed it even more than the first time. I know I will read it again. Just saying.
Oh, Darcy… what have you done? What the heck do you think you are doing? What a jerk. This guy was so superior and his ego so inflated that I’m surprised his feet even hit the ground. How he was even able to walk through a door with such a swelled head is beyond me. This struck me as funny. Elizabeth had his number from the start. I love it when Elizabeth is smart, I mean really smart and witty. This was so much fun watching Darcy as he tried to catch Elizabeth in a compromising position. What? Yep, our dear boy wanted to tick off his uncle and his aunt. He figured that marrying beneath him would do the trick. And if it was a compromise, that would be even better. Yes, he had it all planned out but you know what they say about the best-laid plans.
Darcy had NO idea whom he had married. He was so obnoxious that I could hardly stand him. Oh, his comeuppance was going to be spectacular when he finally discovered the exalted relations of his new wife. He might even be a bit afraid. I seriously think he should due to the way he had treated Elizabeth.
Several points I liked:
“Be beautiful if you can, wise if you want to, but be respected—that is essential.” –Anna Gould
Elizabeth: Her strength of character. Her resilience and determination to make a difficult situation work. She was a force to be reckoned with. She was protective of Jane, stood her ground against her stepmother, and resisted the attentions of Mr. Collins. What she couldn’t resist was the presence of Mr. Darcy. He confused her and she wasn’t sure what to do with him and couldn’t figure out what he was about.
Jane: Never, NEVER underestimate our dear Jane. Oh-My-Gosh! I loved this characterization of Jane. There was a strength just under the surface that was such a surprise. When the rubber hit the road, she displayed a strength we rarely see. She was simply magnificent.
Bingley: What a guy! I love stories where Bingley has a backbone and stands tall against those who would gainsay him. When Darcy approached him about being careful with Jane, Bingley let his friend know in no uncertain terms what he thought about that. His argument was sound and on point. I was proud of him and so shocked that I had to laugh. It was brilliant.
The cat [no pun intended] was let out of the bag when Lady Catherine de Bourgh stormed Darcy House to annul the marriage and secure Darcy for her daughter. Yep, that Lady was no lady and the confrontation with the new Mrs. Darcy did not go as she planned. Her ammo was faulty due to her using intel from a bitter and disappointed Mr. Collins. We all know the line referencing Elizabeth’s mother… let’s just say… Lady C was not best pleased and a gobsmacked Darcy was shocked to his core. Crow… yes, he will be eating crow for some time after this confrontation.
There were SO many surprises and twists that it kept the story moving and interesting. What about his mistress, Daphne? I was stunned and shocked beyond belief. Help us all. How did Sue Barr come up with that? I nearly dropped my reader when I hit that part. Oh-My-Gosh!! That was a brilliant twist. Seriously, that was amazing. I highly recommend this amazing story. You will either hate it or love it. I don’t think there is an in-between.
>>Angst Level: I finally considered this a farce or I might have reached into my reader and tweaked Darcy’s pointy little head. You will either be horrified or you will laugh at the craziness of our dear boy.
>>Source: borrowed from KU [3-31-22] with no expectations of a review. The views and opinions expressed are my own.
>>Trope: FMS [forced marriage scenario], Douche Darcy… for real. This guy was NO prize. Seriously. He was such a prig. I’m surprised he could stand to be in the same room with himself. This was also where the Bennet family [Mr. Bennet, Jane, and Elizabeth] had hidden wealth and exalted connections that only a select few knew about. I love this trope. The current Mrs. Bennet was the second wife and she came to the marriage [via compromise] with Mary, Kitty, and Lydia. She certainly was no prize.
>>Timeline: Darcy at the assembly.
>>Cover Art: Lovely cover. I can just hear Elizabeth's thoughts saying to Darcy… Really? He deserved it. [5+stars]
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
I have read this several times now. The first time, I was horrified by Darcy’s behavior. However, I was so enamored by Elizabeth’s behavior that I relaxed and simply watched her put him through his paces. She had a secret and kept her cards close to her chest. Darcy had no idea of her biological mother’s family. Only a select few in Meryton knew. Oh, Darcy… I hope you enjoy eating crow because you are about to be handed a HUGE serving of your own creation. Upon my subsequent reading, I was more relaxed and enjoyed it even more than the first time. I know I will read it again. Just saying.
Oh, Darcy… what have you done? What the heck do you think you are doing? What a jerk. This guy was so superior and his ego so inflated that I’m surprised his feet even hit the ground. How he was even able to walk through a door with such a swelled head is beyond me. This struck me as funny. Elizabeth had his number from the start. I love it when Elizabeth is smart, I mean really smart and witty. This was so much fun watching Darcy as he tried to catch Elizabeth in a compromising position. What? Yep, our dear boy wanted to tick off his uncle and his aunt. He figured that marrying beneath him would do the trick. And if it was a compromise, that would be even better. Yes, he had it all planned out but you know what they say about the best-laid plans.
Darcy had NO idea whom he had married. He was so obnoxious that I could hardly stand him. Oh, his comeuppance was going to be spectacular when he finally discovered the exalted relations of his new wife. He might even be a bit afraid. I seriously think he should due to the way he had treated Elizabeth.
Several points I liked:
“Be beautiful if you can, wise if you want to, but be respected—that is essential.” –Anna Gould
Elizabeth: Her strength of character. Her resilience and determination to make a difficult situation work. She was a force to be reckoned with. She was protective of Jane, stood her ground against her stepmother, and resisted the attentions of Mr. Collins. What she couldn’t resist was the presence of Mr. Darcy. He confused her and she wasn’t sure what to do with him and couldn’t figure out what he was about.
Jane: Never, NEVER underestimate our dear Jane. Oh-My-Gosh! I loved this characterization of Jane. There was a strength just under the surface that was such a surprise. When the rubber hit the road, she displayed a strength we rarely see. She was simply magnificent.
Bingley: What a guy! I love stories where Bingley has a backbone and stands tall against those who would gainsay him. When Darcy approached him about being careful with Jane, Bingley let his friend know in no uncertain terms what he thought about that. His argument was sound and on point. I was proud of him and so shocked that I had to laugh. It was brilliant.
The cat [no pun intended] was let out of the bag when Lady Catherine de Bourgh stormed Darcy House to annul the marriage and secure Darcy for her daughter. Yep, that Lady was no lady and the confrontation with the new Mrs. Darcy did not go as she planned. Her ammo was faulty due to her using intel from a bitter and disappointed Mr. Collins. We all know the line referencing Elizabeth’s mother… let’s just say… Lady C was not best pleased and a gobsmacked Darcy was shocked to his core. Crow… yes, he will be eating crow for some time after this confrontation.
There were SO many surprises and twists that it kept the story moving and interesting. What about his mistress, Daphne? I was stunned and shocked beyond belief. Help us all. How did Sue Barr come up with that? I nearly dropped my reader when I hit that part. Oh-My-Gosh!! That was a brilliant twist. Seriously, that was amazing. I highly recommend this amazing story. You will either hate it or love it. I don’t think there is an in-between.
April 5, 2022
4.5 stars rounded up to 5 stars
There are several other very good and long reviews. This is the fifth book by this author that I have read, all being either 5 or 4 (only one) stars.
The Darcy in this story seemed somewhat OOC (out-of-character) for me. I think the main difference from the canon Darcy was that he had a lover, one with whom he had great sexual chemistry. And her identity just may shock you. He toys with the idea of marrying her but her status in society is just a little below the par. Secondly a driving force in his actions was to thwart the desires of both his uncle, Lord Matlock, and his aunt, Lady Catherine. (Read some of my highlights as to that decision.) There was a fine line between choosing someone he would not hate to bed (He did need an heir) and someone whose family, lack of connections and lack of wealth would appall his relations!
So it is that when he meets Elizabeth, not only does she meets his requirement, but he finds that she has many qualities which appeal to him. NOW, a twist. In order to not only secure her for himself but to also put the crowning touch on his desire to go against his relations, Darcy "compromises" Elizabeth. (I would not call what happens a real compromise but it is identified as that throughout the story.)
You may find it ironic, even laughable that there is so much more to Elizabeth and her history than he (or Collins & thus Lady C.) know. Mr. Bennet has had two daughters by his first wife but then (SPOILER ALERT) is compromised by the Mrs. Bennet we all know and brings into this second marriage her 3 daughters. Yes, the 2 youngest make Elizabeth's family seem even more below standards for a wife for Darcy.
Wickham and Colonel Fitzwilliam do make appearances. Charlotte is there and is not a surprise in her decision as to marriage. Plus be warned that there is some MA reading in this story.
I did enjoy this story and recommend it.
There are several other very good and long reviews. This is the fifth book by this author that I have read, all being either 5 or 4 (only one) stars.
The Darcy in this story seemed somewhat OOC (out-of-character) for me. I think the main difference from the canon Darcy was that he had a lover, one with whom he had great sexual chemistry. And her identity just may shock you. He toys with the idea of marrying her but her status in society is just a little below the par. Secondly a driving force in his actions was to thwart the desires of both his uncle, Lord Matlock, and his aunt, Lady Catherine. (Read some of my highlights as to that decision.) There was a fine line between choosing someone he would not hate to bed (He did need an heir) and someone whose family, lack of connections and lack of wealth would appall his relations!
So it is that when he meets Elizabeth, not only does she meets his requirement, but he finds that she has many qualities which appeal to him. NOW, a twist. In order to not only secure her for himself but to also put the crowning touch on his desire to go against his relations, Darcy "compromises" Elizabeth. (I would not call what happens a real compromise but it is identified as that throughout the story.)
You may find it ironic, even laughable that there is so much more to Elizabeth and her history than he (or Collins & thus Lady C.) know. Mr. Bennet has had two daughters by his first wife but then (SPOILER ALERT) is compromised by the Mrs. Bennet we all know and brings into this second marriage her 3 daughters. Yes, the 2 youngest make Elizabeth's family seem even more below standards for a wife for Darcy.
Wickham and Colonel Fitzwilliam do make appearances. Charlotte is there and is not a surprise in her decision as to marriage. Plus be warned that there is some MA reading in this story.
I did enjoy this story and recommend it.
August 7, 2022
Ohh, I loved this one!
Almost unputdownable— at 2:45 this morning with an 8:00 a.m. wake-up call, I finally had to sleep. Please note this review may contain spoilers. I attempt to keep them vague. Be also warned that if you don’t like a Darcy who has a mistress, or mature content, this novel might not be for you. It’s not for purists and, with only minor exceptions, doesn’t follow canon. Ms. Barr took me for quite an entertaining ride with this variation, which has become my favourite of hers to date.
Darcy has a mistress with whom he is quite happy. He is tired of Lord Matlock’s pushing debutantes at him, pressuring him to marry his choice for a Darcy wife. He is also exasperated with Lady Catherine’s unceasing push for him to marry her daughter, Anne. In an act of planned revenge towards these two, he…
“… decided he would find his own wife. And not just any wife. She would be vile, though not in looks. If he had to bed the wench, he wanted some form of beauty and a pleasing body. No, she would be someone who teetered on the edges of polite society. Preferably a gentleman’s daughter with vulgar connections. The more vulgar the better.” — quote from book
When he meets the Bennet family and observes the conduct of Mrs. Bennet and her youngest daughters, then sees Elizabeth try to take Lydia in hand, he figures she is perfect. This arrogant Darcy never once considers her feelings on the matter and plans to compromise her in order to get what he wants. It’s easy not to like him much at this point. What he doesn’t know is that Mrs. Bennet is Elizabeth and Jane’s stepmother, which will lead to more surprises.
“The two eldest daughters are anomalies within the family. They are charming and discreet. It is as though another bird placed her eggs in Mrs. Bennet’s nest.”—quote from book
The portrayals: I loved this Elizabeth who always displays her clever wit when cutting annoying personages down a peg or two and who are well deserving of it. Darcy, once he acknowledges what a pompous arse he is, provides the perfect foil for Elizabeth’s teasing banter. I couldn’t hate him too much though. He redeems himself quite nicely over time, and even before he does, right from the beginning at the assembly, I liked the way he conversed with Elizabeth. The doofus didn’t realize even then he had begun to like her very much. There’s a lot to like about Mr. Bennet too. I especially enjoyed his actions at Netherfield when Jane was ill.
Wickham will make his presence known and his accomplice will be yet another surprise. You may not see that one coming (bad pun not intended).
There are so many things to like about this book. You can look forward to:
* Lady Lucas putting Lydia, Kitty and Mrs. Bennet in their places;
* the letters Darcy writes in response to the Earl and Lady C, expressing what I often feel should be said but rarely seems to be;
* a strong Bingley and an unusually expressive Jane (authors, we need more like this from these two please—Ms. Barr’s portrayals show they don’t always have to be milksoppy); and
* Elizabeth and Jane’s likeable family relations from their mother’s side — Darcy’s cousins and Aunt Matlock too.
* Oh, and I can’t forget Mr. Bennet’s well-deserved happy ending.
As said above, this is my favourite Sue Barr book to date. I also have to agree with my GRF (Goodreads friend) J.W. Garrett’s somewhat farcical view of this book. Believe me, this is a compliment in my opinion. I had intended to read this book, but her review prompted me to bump it up to the top of my WTR stack. For some snorts and giggles, be sure to read her review.
The story is well developed and written. The dialogue is great throughout with good humour. The banter between ODC is often fun and flirty. I read this via KU, but I’m going to purchase it for my Kindle library. I highly recommend this one and I look forward to Ms. Barr’s next book.
Almost unputdownable— at 2:45 this morning with an 8:00 a.m. wake-up call, I finally had to sleep. Please note this review may contain spoilers. I attempt to keep them vague. Be also warned that if you don’t like a Darcy who has a mistress, or mature content, this novel might not be for you. It’s not for purists and, with only minor exceptions, doesn’t follow canon. Ms. Barr took me for quite an entertaining ride with this variation, which has become my favourite of hers to date.
Darcy has a mistress with whom he is quite happy. He is tired of Lord Matlock’s pushing debutantes at him, pressuring him to marry his choice for a Darcy wife. He is also exasperated with Lady Catherine’s unceasing push for him to marry her daughter, Anne. In an act of planned revenge towards these two, he…
“… decided he would find his own wife. And not just any wife. She would be vile, though not in looks. If he had to bed the wench, he wanted some form of beauty and a pleasing body. No, she would be someone who teetered on the edges of polite society. Preferably a gentleman’s daughter with vulgar connections. The more vulgar the better.” — quote from book
When he meets the Bennet family and observes the conduct of Mrs. Bennet and her youngest daughters, then sees Elizabeth try to take Lydia in hand, he figures she is perfect. This arrogant Darcy never once considers her feelings on the matter and plans to compromise her in order to get what he wants. It’s easy not to like him much at this point. What he doesn’t know is that Mrs. Bennet is Elizabeth and Jane’s stepmother, which will lead to more surprises.
“The two eldest daughters are anomalies within the family. They are charming and discreet. It is as though another bird placed her eggs in Mrs. Bennet’s nest.”—quote from book
The portrayals: I loved this Elizabeth who always displays her clever wit when cutting annoying personages down a peg or two and who are well deserving of it. Darcy, once he acknowledges what a pompous arse he is, provides the perfect foil for Elizabeth’s teasing banter. I couldn’t hate him too much though. He redeems himself quite nicely over time, and even before he does, right from the beginning at the assembly, I liked the way he conversed with Elizabeth. The doofus didn’t realize even then he had begun to like her very much. There’s a lot to like about Mr. Bennet too. I especially enjoyed his actions at Netherfield when Jane was ill.
Wickham will make his presence known and his accomplice will be yet another surprise. You may not see that one coming (bad pun not intended).
There are so many things to like about this book. You can look forward to:
* Lady Lucas putting Lydia, Kitty and Mrs. Bennet in their places;
* the letters Darcy writes in response to the Earl and Lady C, expressing what I often feel should be said but rarely seems to be;
* a strong Bingley and an unusually expressive Jane (authors, we need more like this from these two please—Ms. Barr’s portrayals show they don’t always have to be milksoppy); and
* Elizabeth and Jane’s likeable family relations from their mother’s side — Darcy’s cousins and Aunt Matlock too.
* Oh, and I can’t forget Mr. Bennet’s well-deserved happy ending.
As said above, this is my favourite Sue Barr book to date. I also have to agree with my GRF (Goodreads friend) J.W. Garrett’s somewhat farcical view of this book. Believe me, this is a compliment in my opinion. I had intended to read this book, but her review prompted me to bump it up to the top of my WTR stack. For some snorts and giggles, be sure to read her review.
The story is well developed and written. The dialogue is great throughout with good humour. The banter between ODC is often fun and flirty. I read this via KU, but I’m going to purchase it for my Kindle library. I highly recommend this one and I look forward to Ms. Barr’s next book.
April 11, 2022
When you read a Sue Barr story there are certain things to be aware of
1] there's gonna be some steamy love scenes
2] Lizzy and Jane aren't going to be Bennets
3] There's going to be some steam love scenes
This one is a dark Darcy story and personally I find him irredeemable but that's me
Darcy is pissed at his uncle the Earl and decides to force a woman who will be barely acceptable to be his bride he plans to compromise Lizzy but in the end merely asserts in public that she has accepted him
(reason 412367 to be glad you don't live in the 1810s) So they are married and he is a gorgon and she is miserable
But eventually he realizes that she is the only one he loves and they HEA
1] there's gonna be some steamy love scenes
2] Lizzy and Jane aren't going to be Bennets
3] There's going to be some steam love scenes
This one is a dark Darcy story and personally I find him irredeemable but that's me
Darcy is pissed at his uncle the Earl and decides to force a woman who will be barely acceptable to be his bride he plans to compromise Lizzy but in the end merely asserts in public that she has accepted him
(reason 412367 to be glad you don't live in the 1810s) So they are married and he is a gorgon and she is miserable
But eventually he realizes that she is the only one he loves and they HEA
May 29, 2022
Not for everyone
Spoiler alert/trigger warning: I am aware wives were property at the time but Darcy is vile. He compromises our girl and her wedding night is a nightmare. He does work hard to redeem himself but if you have issues this is not the book for you. I have enjoyed her other books but I won’t be reading this one again.
Spoiler alert/trigger warning: I am aware wives were property at the time but Darcy is vile. He compromises our girl and her wedding night is a nightmare. He does work hard to redeem himself but if you have issues this is not the book for you. I have enjoyed her other books but I won’t be reading this one again.
April 21, 2022
another dark Darcy
Seems to be quite of few books being released which may be in competition to present Darcy in his worse light.
In this story Darcy compromises Lizzy, shows her how little she means to him and he is none to gentle during her night time “duties”. The writing is good but I couldn’t really believe his turn around AND she believing his turn around so easily. We get lots pages describing and showing us how little empathy or care he has for Lizzy. We don’t get as many pages convincing us of the miracle turn around.
I understand how Lizzy is treated was considered ok and normal for the Regency period but Jane Austen’s version of Darcy is much nicer so forgiveness for this Darcy should be harder than for Darcy in Pride and Prejudice.
Seems to be quite of few books being released which may be in competition to present Darcy in his worse light.
In this story Darcy compromises Lizzy, shows her how little she means to him and he is none to gentle during her night time “duties”. The writing is good but I couldn’t really believe his turn around AND she believing his turn around so easily. We get lots pages describing and showing us how little empathy or care he has for Lizzy. We don’t get as many pages convincing us of the miracle turn around.
I understand how Lizzy is treated was considered ok and normal for the Regency period but Jane Austen’s version of Darcy is much nicer so forgiveness for this Darcy should be harder than for Darcy in Pride and Prejudice.
May 13, 2022
Fitzwilliam Darcy is searching for a bride that will annoy some key members of his family. He is happy with his mistress but needs a wife to stop the constant marriage pressure. Luckily he finds a girl, Elizabeth Bennet, who he believes fits all his criteria to make his family hate her. After an inconsequential compromise, he finds his world turned upside down in almost all aspects.
Our dear couple finds their happiness but not until a lot of wit is shared and crow eaten.
Our dear couple finds their happiness but not until a lot of wit is shared and crow eaten.
April 17, 2024
Another fun OTP read from this author. This is a Darcy that you’ll love to hate (and then love to love him).
He’s despicable as he attempts to compromise E but completely blind as to who his mistress truly is (oh my!)
This is a fun 5 star read but like other books by this author, the end falls apart for me. This could have ended at the 80% mark - the rest is just filler.
He’s despicable as he attempts to compromise E but completely blind as to who his mistress truly is (oh my!)
This is a fun 5 star read but like other books by this author, the end falls apart for me. This could have ended at the 80% mark - the rest is just filler.
May 14, 2023
Meh. Elizabeth forgives Darcy way too easily. The way he treats her on their wedding night and the things he says afterwards…despicable. I wish Elizabeth would’ve projectile vomited all over HIM! Not only is Elizabeth fast to forgive Darcy; her family is all “Welcome to the family! That business about forcing Elizabeth to marry you then treating her in such a degrading way? Water under the bridge.” Why is there no nut punching?
April 17, 2024
Darcy’s character is questionable
Darcy’s character is questionable in the beginning of this story for me. He has a “love interest” and want to marry someone his uncle will not approve of but is still a gentleman’s daughter, he does have some standards.
Darcy is at the Merton Assembly and in comes Elizabeth, who he assumes is related to Mrs. Bennet and her awful daughters. From there it gets pretty rocky.
I thought the Bennet background was held back too long, well actually why Mr. Bennet married Mrs. Bennet actually. That part of the story bothered me, I thought some parts of the backstory were too vague.
Darcy’s love interest was rushed, although I could see why he did not want that public knowledge but Elizabeth knew.
I enjoyed the story but I felt the beginning of their marriage was too compliant for me. Then I felt the rest of story after they married just felt a bit too rushed for me. There was a lot going on but I did not connect to it. I will not say what happened but overall our dear couple was happy. Jane was a surprise.
Darcy’s character is questionable in the beginning of this story for me. He has a “love interest” and want to marry someone his uncle will not approve of but is still a gentleman’s daughter, he does have some standards.
Darcy is at the Merton Assembly and in comes Elizabeth, who he assumes is related to Mrs. Bennet and her awful daughters. From there it gets pretty rocky.
I thought the Bennet background was held back too long, well actually why Mr. Bennet married Mrs. Bennet actually. That part of the story bothered me, I thought some parts of the backstory were too vague.
Darcy’s love interest was rushed, although I could see why he did not want that public knowledge but Elizabeth knew.
I enjoyed the story but I felt the beginning of their marriage was too compliant for me. Then I felt the rest of story after they married just felt a bit too rushed for me. There was a lot going on but I did not connect to it. I will not say what happened but overall our dear couple was happy. Jane was a surprise.
December 21, 2023
A very quick read. Low angst though some characters will annoy you, especially Darcy. But he redeems himself fast. The reconciliation and love between ODC felt too quick. Elizabeth has connections up to her ears which reminds me of the Wolf's word to Red riding hood. "What many connections you have!", "The better to rub your face with my dear!"
April 11, 2022
I enjoyed this take variation. Well written but some modern language was in it that was jarring, for example ‘meltdown’.
April 21, 2022
Too many deleted scenes
This is one of those stories where you just have to go with it, because it's hard to believe Darcy, an intelligent man, who I thought valued the Darcy legacy, would just pick any low-born lady to spend all eternity with (a vulgar family is a must, love isn't necessary) to carry the name of Darcy, and raise his future kids just to anger his uncle and aunt.
I was able to gloss that over. What I had a hard time wrapping my head around was why Elizabeth fell in love with Darcy in the first place. The author did a fantastic job painting Darcy as a insensitive brute on Darcy and Elizabeth's wedding night, but only told us he was attentive to Elizabeth's sexual needs on all other couplings. Unfortunately, Darcy never issued an apology for his treatment of Elizabeth (not until much much later.) I'm only left with the vivid showing of their lovemaking that played out on the pages on that awful wedding night. I couldn't buy into their happy sex life afterwards just because the author said it was so.
Other things took place off screen that I thought would have made a difference if it played out on the pages. For instance, from the beginning of the story Darcy would always mention to others- one of things he admired about Elizabeth was her wit and intelligence- only those witty and intelligent conversations didn't take place on screen.
Another off screen moment was Darcy finally telling Elizabeth that he loved her. There were scenes where Darcy said he would tell Elizabeth, and when he would tell her, but it never happened. The next time they spoke of love Elizabeth confronts Darcy and ask, how do I know you love me like you claim. I had to go back to see if I missed something. I didn't.
If these things doesn't bother you you might enjoy the book. It's not a bad book, it's just sometimes certain things can turn you off. I plan on reading another book from the author and see how that goes.
This is one of those stories where you just have to go with it, because it's hard to believe Darcy, an intelligent man, who I thought valued the Darcy legacy, would just pick any low-born lady to spend all eternity with (a vulgar family is a must, love isn't necessary) to carry the name of Darcy, and raise his future kids just to anger his uncle and aunt.
I was able to gloss that over. What I had a hard time wrapping my head around was why Elizabeth fell in love with Darcy in the first place. The author did a fantastic job painting Darcy as a insensitive brute on Darcy and Elizabeth's wedding night, but only told us he was attentive to Elizabeth's sexual needs on all other couplings. Unfortunately, Darcy never issued an apology for his treatment of Elizabeth (not until much much later.) I'm only left with the vivid showing of their lovemaking that played out on the pages on that awful wedding night. I couldn't buy into their happy sex life afterwards just because the author said it was so.
Other things took place off screen that I thought would have made a difference if it played out on the pages. For instance, from the beginning of the story Darcy would always mention to others- one of things he admired about Elizabeth was her wit and intelligence- only those witty and intelligent conversations didn't take place on screen.
Another off screen moment was Darcy finally telling Elizabeth that he loved her. There were scenes where Darcy said he would tell Elizabeth, and when he would tell her, but it never happened. The next time they spoke of love Elizabeth confronts Darcy and ask, how do I know you love me like you claim. I had to go back to see if I missed something. I didn't.
If these things doesn't bother you you might enjoy the book. It's not a bad book, it's just sometimes certain things can turn you off. I plan on reading another book from the author and see how that goes.
July 28, 2025
DNF at 54%.
Seems this author has a tbing for Elizabeth being titled and for some illogical reason keeping it a secret. The Wager also had the same background and i found it just as stupid here.
The characterisation is also so inconsistent every chapter. Elizabeth seems to be infatuated with Darcy, he is polite, paying her attention etc, then quickly believes Wickham's lies immediately. Then that lie is cleared, and after the marry, Colonel reveals Darcy purposely married her in order to displease his uncle and Elizabeth doesn't react strongly to that. Also, why would Colonel reveal all these to Elizabeth when he only met her??? And, Elizabeth reveals her parentage to him but not to Darcy when he asked about her mother, why that inconsistency. From colonels conversation, Elizabeth knows Darcy doesn't know but doesn't clear it to him. She also doesn't confront him about the planned compromise until after the wedding night.. Why?
Darcy is even more inconsistent than Elizabeth. One chapter, he is all into Elizabeth and forgotten his mistress. In another, he is going to see his mistress and describes how eager he was and how much he missed. Then another chapter, he is all about how he has feelings for her. It seems Darcy's feelings change based on what drama author wants to have on that chapter.
I think this author's writing is not for me
Seems this author has a tbing for Elizabeth being titled and for some illogical reason keeping it a secret. The Wager also had the same background and i found it just as stupid here.
The characterisation is also so inconsistent every chapter. Elizabeth seems to be infatuated with Darcy, he is polite, paying her attention etc, then quickly believes Wickham's lies immediately. Then that lie is cleared, and after the marry, Colonel reveals Darcy purposely married her in order to displease his uncle and Elizabeth doesn't react strongly to that. Also, why would Colonel reveal all these to Elizabeth when he only met her??? And, Elizabeth reveals her parentage to him but not to Darcy when he asked about her mother, why that inconsistency. From colonels conversation, Elizabeth knows Darcy doesn't know but doesn't clear it to him. She also doesn't confront him about the planned compromise until after the wedding night.. Why?
Darcy is even more inconsistent than Elizabeth. One chapter, he is all into Elizabeth and forgotten his mistress. In another, he is going to see his mistress and describes how eager he was and how much he missed. Then another chapter, he is all about how he has feelings for her. It seems Darcy's feelings change based on what drama author wants to have on that chapter.
I think this author's writing is not for me
April 25, 2022
Randy Darcy
I don't care for explicit (illicit?) Regency novels nor ones where sex solves all problems. This Darcy has a despicable, selfish, odd idea but he is not irredeemable since he did not really carry it through. Yet the story continues to refer to a compromise, which seems ridiculous. I like the explanation of why Jane and Lizzy are so different but their rotational with the Gainers is a bit of a stretch. I don't think the Gardiners would live across the park from Darcy, more likely Bingley. Somehow the shifted around JA quotes worked in their new locations. Usually that bothers me, but this story was different enough to make the words work elsewhere.
I don't care for explicit (illicit?) Regency novels nor ones where sex solves all problems. This Darcy has a despicable, selfish, odd idea but he is not irredeemable since he did not really carry it through. Yet the story continues to refer to a compromise, which seems ridiculous. I like the explanation of why Jane and Lizzy are so different but their rotational with the Gainers is a bit of a stretch. I don't think the Gardiners would live across the park from Darcy, more likely Bingley. Somehow the shifted around JA quotes worked in their new locations. Usually that bothers me, but this story was different enough to make the words work elsewhere.
April 10, 2022
I think no one does “despicable Darcy” better than Sue Barr. There is always plenty of angst. The plot runs along nicely. I love a trope where EB is more than she seems. It always seems to illustrate the hypocrisy of FD’s arrogance and pride. I’d say s the shortfall in this story is that ODC seem to make up just a tad too easily. I think he needs more time to really learn his lessons and become a better person.
April 13, 2022
Enjoyable experience
Darcy is looking for an unsuitable bride who will not be acceptable to his Uncle Matlock and Lady Catherine. This brings him to Meryton where he meets Elizabeth. He's unaware that Jane and Elizabeth are daughters of the previous Mrs Bennet who was daughter, niece , granddaughter of various Earls, Marques, and even a Duke or two. This Mrs Bennet doesn't even know about this family history. She compromised the grieving widower and then moved in with her 3 daughters to make life miserable. Darcy decides to compromise Elizabeth to add insult to injury. He mildly does this by stating they are betrothed in front of witnesses. In the meantime, he goes back to London where he discovers his long-term mistress conspired with Wickham to get Georgiana to elope and split the dowry. Needless to say he has Miss Daphne Younge tossed out with only what she came with. No money, no jewelry, no expensive gowns!
By the time he finds out who Elizabeth is, he's fallen in love with her. In this Elizabeth we find a kinder, less judgmental woman who forgives as easily as possible.
Its fun and we don't have as much Caroline, Collins, or Lady Catherine as usual.
Darcy is looking for an unsuitable bride who will not be acceptable to his Uncle Matlock and Lady Catherine. This brings him to Meryton where he meets Elizabeth. He's unaware that Jane and Elizabeth are daughters of the previous Mrs Bennet who was daughter, niece , granddaughter of various Earls, Marques, and even a Duke or two. This Mrs Bennet doesn't even know about this family history. She compromised the grieving widower and then moved in with her 3 daughters to make life miserable. Darcy decides to compromise Elizabeth to add insult to injury. He mildly does this by stating they are betrothed in front of witnesses. In the meantime, he goes back to London where he discovers his long-term mistress conspired with Wickham to get Georgiana to elope and split the dowry. Needless to say he has Miss Daphne Younge tossed out with only what she came with. No money, no jewelry, no expensive gowns!
By the time he finds out who Elizabeth is, he's fallen in love with her. In this Elizabeth we find a kinder, less judgmental woman who forgives as easily as possible.
Its fun and we don't have as much Caroline, Collins, or Lady Catherine as usual.
November 14, 2024
4.5 stars rounded up. Well. When I first read this book I hated this Darcy so much I quit reading it after the wedding night. But then I read a few reviews, especially J. W. Garrett, and decided to continue. Woah! Plot twist! Overall I agree with Ms. Garrett's review, although I could not quite bring myself to give it a full 5 stars, but I guess 4.5 rounded up amounts to the same thing.
I think that Darcy was totally rotten to Elizabeth at the beginning of their marriage and she forgave him much too easily. However, I did love how he had to eat a lot of humble pie. He did redeem himself by finally realizing how much he had cheated and wronged Elizabeth with his compromise and proor treatment. Fortunately in my mind, he started to realize that before he knew who her mother's family was.
Jane was great - I loved her steel spine that we don't usually see. Mr. Bingley was also a great guy & I loved his "meltdown" after learning about Jane and Elizabeth's mother's family, then Darcy trying to calm him.
Mr. Darcy, of course, really grows a lot; going from rather a cad to a very romantic guy.
I definitely recommend this book!
I think that Darcy was totally rotten to Elizabeth at the beginning of their marriage and she forgave him much too easily. However, I did love how he had to eat a lot of humble pie. He did redeem himself by finally realizing how much he had cheated and wronged Elizabeth with his compromise and proor treatment. Fortunately in my mind, he started to realize that before he knew who her mother's family was.
Jane was great - I loved her steel spine that we don't usually see. Mr. Bingley was also a great guy & I loved his "meltdown" after learning about Jane and Elizabeth's mother's family, then Darcy trying to calm him.
Mr. Darcy, of course, really grows a lot; going from rather a cad to a very romantic guy.
I definitely recommend this book!
May 17, 2024
Darcy has a mistress before Elizabeth trope…
I thought the plot was well thought out. If you don’t mind this trope, I recommend it. We get a nice HEA. The secret of Elizabeth/Jane’s connections and wealth was the most interesting part of this variation. The portrayal of E&D, however, was disappointing. Perhaps, some additional scenes/dialogue of their time together in Hertfordshire would have helped. Elizabeth, especially, was deficient of her usual personality traits. She often lacked the confidence to give an arrogant Darcy a proper set-down. While, Darcy’s moments of contrition were severely lacking. I was glad that Darcy received his own lesson on love and lust. *Spoiler hint* Darcy’s mistress has some secrets. Once married, there is a sweet scene where Darcy helps a sick Elizabeth by snuggling with her by the fire. More scenes like that would have been great to elevate the love story. Instead we are simply told that Darcy loves Elizabeth.
I thought the plot was well thought out. If you don’t mind this trope, I recommend it. We get a nice HEA. The secret of Elizabeth/Jane’s connections and wealth was the most interesting part of this variation. The portrayal of E&D, however, was disappointing. Perhaps, some additional scenes/dialogue of their time together in Hertfordshire would have helped. Elizabeth, especially, was deficient of her usual personality traits. She often lacked the confidence to give an arrogant Darcy a proper set-down. While, Darcy’s moments of contrition were severely lacking. I was glad that Darcy received his own lesson on love and lust. *Spoiler hint* Darcy’s mistress has some secrets. Once married, there is a sweet scene where Darcy helps a sick Elizabeth by snuggling with her by the fire. More scenes like that would have been great to elevate the love story. Instead we are simply told that Darcy loves Elizabeth.
June 3, 2023
I enjoyed this book, I liked seeing a cynical, almost malicious Darcy determined to put his obnoxious relatives in their place. I just wished it was a little bit more...fleshed out. A little more tension. A slightly longer road to forgiveness, redemption, and understanding. A lot of things were left out, things that while minor relative to the main plot, would have been nice to see more detail. The reaction to Mrs. Bennet's fate was underwhelming, and considering the level of scandal such a thing would have been in the time period, not particularly realistic. That alone could have added a lot of meat to this story. It left me with the feeling that parts of it were stripped down, and though I did enjoy it, I'm deducting one star for that reason.
September 27, 2022
Not quite
This book didn't quite hit the spot. Darcy was forgiven far too easily. The whole of their coming together emotionally seemed based on sex which, given their first time, is almost offensive, particularly as there's no apology and little other communication. Darcy seems as self centred at the end as at the story's beginning.
I couldn't buy the sub plot of the Bennet marriage either. What kind of misplaced honour would make you feel obligated to a scheming woman who set up a compromise over someone you love and to whom you have proposed? It was a contortion for the sake of the main plot line that pulled me out of the story due to its implausibility.
This book didn't quite hit the spot. Darcy was forgiven far too easily. The whole of their coming together emotionally seemed based on sex which, given their first time, is almost offensive, particularly as there's no apology and little other communication. Darcy seems as self centred at the end as at the story's beginning.
I couldn't buy the sub plot of the Bennet marriage either. What kind of misplaced honour would make you feel obligated to a scheming woman who set up a compromise over someone you love and to whom you have proposed? It was a contortion for the sake of the main plot line that pulled me out of the story due to its implausibility.
November 24, 2023
I am disappointed. Well writing story, but that's all. I wait for some redemption, some development - but in vain. For what purpose Elizabeth need to suffer so much? - For nothing. She could escape all unpleasant situations she was put in without too much trouble for herself, she had means. After what happened at her first night in Darcy House she should remove herself forever from this place and company.
At the same time Mr Darcy (who need therapy, in my opinion, not wife) didn't suffer at all, besides some minor heartache, or little injurie to his pride. Still he get more than he deserved in this story.
At the same time Mr Darcy (who need therapy, in my opinion, not wife) didn't suffer at all, besides some minor heartache, or little injurie to his pride. Still he get more than he deserved in this story.
June 6, 2022
I liked this!
It wasn't quite was scandalous was it sounds in the blurb. There is no actual infidelity, and the bed scenes left quite a bit to the imagination. This uses some of my favorite variations. First, Jane and Elizabeth were from a different mother. Second, Wickham is caught and legally punished. Third, Lydia is a minor character. Fourth, Jane is revealed as more than just a pretty face, among others.
It wasn't quite was scandalous was it sounds in the blurb. There is no actual infidelity, and the bed scenes left quite a bit to the imagination. This uses some of my favorite variations. First, Jane and Elizabeth were from a different mother. Second, Wickham is caught and legally punished. Third, Lydia is a minor character. Fourth, Jane is revealed as more than just a pretty face, among others.
June 19, 2022
Hidden Connections
I’m happy with any variation in which Lizzy and Jane are not Mrs Bennet’s biological offsprings, it just makes so much sense. I really enjoyed the original storyline of Ms Younge as Darcy’s mistress while in cahoots with Wickham. Darcy having a mistress or multiple prior intimacy partners makes sense for the era and his status even if he is rather secretive about them.
I’m happy with any variation in which Lizzy and Jane are not Mrs Bennet’s biological offsprings, it just makes so much sense. I really enjoyed the original storyline of Ms Younge as Darcy’s mistress while in cahoots with Wickham. Darcy having a mistress or multiple prior intimacy partners makes sense for the era and his status even if he is rather secretive about them.
July 8, 2022
Honestly, I truly enjoyed this
I was a little worried after reading the reviews. Many claim to have a callous FD, and honestly I didn't really get that. Does he have a mistress, yes. But honestly, she's not super important.
We get to see some insight to a FD that's not our perfect version, but he seemed more real to me.
We have a lovely supporting cast, and EB's family is just fantastic. I truly loved Jane in this.
The ending left me saying saying, "aww!"
I was a little worried after reading the reviews. Many claim to have a callous FD, and honestly I didn't really get that. Does he have a mistress, yes. But honestly, she's not super important.
We get to see some insight to a FD that's not our perfect version, but he seemed more real to me.
We have a lovely supporting cast, and EB's family is just fantastic. I truly loved Jane in this.
The ending left me saying saying, "aww!"
April 6, 2022
There was a lot that I loved about this story. But…. I found it hard to like Darcy. Truly, for a good while he was a d-bag.
I did love that Jane and Elizabeth had such noble connections though I had hoped Darcy would have received a stronger comeuppance.
Spoiler: the intimacy between ODC may be steamier than purists would prefer.
I did love that Jane and Elizabeth had such noble connections though I had hoped Darcy would have received a stronger comeuppance.
Spoiler: the intimacy between ODC may be steamier than purists would prefer.
April 10, 2022
Very different yet very enjoyable.
Enjoyed this adaptation. The evolution of all the relationships was well thought out and found myself not confused at all which speaks to the writer’s storytelling. Usually I get confused at family lineages but this one I was able to follow. A delightful story.
Enjoyed this adaptation. The evolution of all the relationships was well thought out and found myself not confused at all which speaks to the writer’s storytelling. Usually I get confused at family lineages but this one I was able to follow. A delightful story.
December 1, 2022
Emotional funny interesting realistic aspect
I found this story to included a realistic feeling along with the emotional aspects throughout. I loved how the "title" did not make the people and was a hush. I loved how it was kept for so long from Mrs Bennett. I loved what happened to the villains within the story. Well written, will keep you wanting more, and highly recommended.
I found this story to included a realistic feeling along with the emotional aspects throughout. I loved how the "title" did not make the people and was a hush. I loved how it was kept for so long from Mrs Bennett. I loved what happened to the villains within the story. Well written, will keep you wanting more, and highly recommended.
July 2, 2022
Trigger warning missing
I hated this Darcy. He basically r*ped Lizzy their first night and then after "giving" her one night of rest we have to just accept that she liked his nightly visits and came to love him. Up to that point the book was good.
I hated this Darcy. He basically r*ped Lizzy their first night and then after "giving" her one night of rest we have to just accept that she liked his nightly visits and came to love him. Up to that point the book was good.
May 9, 2023
Kept my heart
Kept my heart involved the whole time. I really enjoyed all the secrets and how much they loved each other. I got tickled that Mrs Bennett and Lydia got a set down. Oh my, Mrs Bennett!!!
HEA! Read to see!
Kept my heart involved the whole time. I really enjoyed all the secrets and how much they loved each other. I got tickled that Mrs Bennett and Lydia got a set down. Oh my, Mrs Bennett!!!
HEA! Read to see!
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