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不醒
【你是我刀枪不入的鳞甲，也是我一触即溃的真心。】
仙侠无限流，女主四次重回当年，改变自己和周围所有人的命运。
心机女主x狗东西男主。
一
黄壤成了一个活死人，被囚禁在密室之中。
司天监监正第一秋把她救了出来。
——然后搓澡搓黑了五盆水。
二
司天监监正新做了一个“手办”，异常精致美貌。众人越看越像一个女人。
——那个拒绝自家监正，嫁给了第一仙宗宗主为妻的黄壤！
难道是咱们监正实在过不去这道坎，思念成狂。所以仿着谢夫人……做了个假的？！
众：震惊！
三
长街之上，监正大人忽然停下脚步。
众人立刻拔刀戒备，却见他突然进了一家胭脂铺。
胭、脂、铺？！
半个时辰后，众人为监正大人提着星子黛、额黄茜粉、桃花口脂、牡丹花冻等等瓶瓶罐罐走出胭脂铺，心中充满了“我是谁，我在哪儿”的荒诞感。
四
黄壤一路进到监正大人的房间，坐到他的榻上。
监正大人很自觉地蹲下，为她脱去绣鞋。正解着罗袜的系带，黄壤突然反应过来，兜胸一记窝心脚。
监正提着黄壤的袜子，看看黄壤的脸，又看看她的脚。
如此微贱之事，自己竟干得这般自然流畅，好像曾经为她做过许多次一样。
难道自己在她面前，竟有不自知的奴性？
震惊！！
五
小殿下满月酒，朝廷所有官员全数到场。
黄壤也不管那么多，捡了好吃的，就准备吃个饱。
她喝了口茶准备顺一顺嘴里的糕点。
突然身边有人说：“八十六殿下真是一脸福相，看着就令人喜爱得紧啊。”
“噗——”黄壤一口茶全喷在了地上。
……万万没想到，我也是喝过自己夫君满月酒的人了。
仙侠无限流，女主四次重回当年，改变自己和周围所有人的命运。
心机女主x狗东西男主。
一
黄壤成了一个活死人，被囚禁在密室之中。
司天监监正第一秋把她救了出来。
——然后搓澡搓黑了五盆水。
二
司天监监正新做了一个“手办”，异常精致美貌。众人越看越像一个女人。
——那个拒绝自家监正，嫁给了第一仙宗宗主为妻的黄壤！
难道是咱们监正实在过不去这道坎，思念成狂。所以仿着谢夫人……做了个假的？！
众：震惊！
三
长街之上，监正大人忽然停下脚步。
众人立刻拔刀戒备，却见他突然进了一家胭脂铺。
胭、脂、铺？！
半个时辰后，众人为监正大人提着星子黛、额黄茜粉、桃花口脂、牡丹花冻等等瓶瓶罐罐走出胭脂铺，心中充满了“我是谁，我在哪儿”的荒诞感。
四
黄壤一路进到监正大人的房间，坐到他的榻上。
监正大人很自觉地蹲下，为她脱去绣鞋。正解着罗袜的系带，黄壤突然反应过来，兜胸一记窝心脚。
监正提着黄壤的袜子，看看黄壤的脸，又看看她的脚。
如此微贱之事，自己竟干得这般自然流畅，好像曾经为她做过许多次一样。
难道自己在她面前，竟有不自知的奴性？
震惊！！
五
小殿下满月酒，朝廷所有官员全数到场。
黄壤也不管那么多，捡了好吃的，就准备吃个饱。
她喝了口茶准备顺一顺嘴里的糕点。
突然身边有人说：“八十六殿下真是一脸福相，看着就令人喜爱得紧啊。”
“噗——”黄壤一口茶全喷在了地上。
……万万没想到，我也是喝过自己夫君满月酒的人了。
563 pages, Webnovel
Published November 19, 2021
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* Yi Du Jun Hua (English)
* อี๋ตู้จวินหัว / อีตู้จวินหวา (Thai)
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December 3, 2024
All that we see or seem is nothing but a dream within a dream - Edgar Allan Poe
This is a revenge story of a dream within a dream. The story starts with a rescue mission where the heroine, Huang Rang, the wife of Xie Honchen, leader of the Immortal Sect, is found after missing for the past 10 years. She has been trapped as a living corpse in an underground, secret chamber, completely immobile because of the two magic needles inserted into her head. Leading the rescue is Di Yiqiu of the Celestial Court, a man whose proposal Huang Rang had rejected before her marriage. She is then taken to his house where he meticulously cares for her prompting her to wonder if he is still in love with her.
Huang Rang cannot move or speak. But in her mind she dreams of revenge against those who have hurt her. What happened in these past years? Why has her esteemed husband, a man she is said to have a loving relationship with, not looked for her? While these questions build up. Huang Tang is given the chance to relive the past through her dreams by a mysterious figure. Taking advantage of these dreams, Huang Rang is able to change the past, traveling back a total of 3 times to 3 different timelines in the past, subtly influencing the world outside the dreams, in order to take her revenge.
Huang Rang is my favourite type of heroine: a beautiful coquettish flirt on the outside that can play men like a fiddle, but cold, cunning, and calculating on the inside; someone who is willing to do anything to be able to climb out of the filth she was born into. She is a product of her environment, but despite the lowness of her origins she has the ambition, brilliance, and work ethic needed to make something of herself. It was fun to peel back her layers and figure out why things turned out the way it did or to uncover her tumultuous relationship with her husband Xie Honchen. The dream travel also allowed her to play out different scenarios which is where we get to see her relationship and love with the quirky Di Yiqiu blossom (he is really something!).
The pacing is a little slow and meandering and it takes a while for things to really pick up. Despite being a xianxia novel, it is not very focused on cultivation or world building, reading more like a fantasy farming romance with a mystery element. It can be a little slow and dry at times, but I genuinely enjoyed the mystery and the romance was a hoot! It is HE even though some parts will have you questioning things. But if you want to sink into a story about a woman who has been pushed into an impossible situation, refusing to give up and doing anything possible to take her revenge and change her destiny this might be the one for you. 4 stars.
This is a revenge story of a dream within a dream. The story starts with a rescue mission where the heroine, Huang Rang, the wife of Xie Honchen, leader of the Immortal Sect, is found after missing for the past 10 years. She has been trapped as a living corpse in an underground, secret chamber, completely immobile because of the two magic needles inserted into her head. Leading the rescue is Di Yiqiu of the Celestial Court, a man whose proposal Huang Rang had rejected before her marriage. She is then taken to his house where he meticulously cares for her prompting her to wonder if he is still in love with her.
Huang Rang cannot move or speak. But in her mind she dreams of revenge against those who have hurt her. What happened in these past years? Why has her esteemed husband, a man she is said to have a loving relationship with, not looked for her? While these questions build up. Huang Tang is given the chance to relive the past through her dreams by a mysterious figure. Taking advantage of these dreams, Huang Rang is able to change the past, traveling back a total of 3 times to 3 different timelines in the past, subtly influencing the world outside the dreams, in order to take her revenge.
Huang Rang is my favourite type of heroine: a beautiful coquettish flirt on the outside that can play men like a fiddle, but cold, cunning, and calculating on the inside; someone who is willing to do anything to be able to climb out of the filth she was born into. She is a product of her environment, but despite the lowness of her origins she has the ambition, brilliance, and work ethic needed to make something of herself. It was fun to peel back her layers and figure out why things turned out the way it did or to uncover her tumultuous relationship with her husband Xie Honchen. The dream travel also allowed her to play out different scenarios which is where we get to see her relationship and love with the quirky Di Yiqiu blossom (he is really something!).
The pacing is a little slow and meandering and it takes a while for things to really pick up. Despite being a xianxia novel, it is not very focused on cultivation or world building, reading more like a fantasy farming romance with a mystery element. It can be a little slow and dry at times, but I genuinely enjoyed the mystery and the romance was a hoot! It is HE even though some parts will have you questioning things. But if you want to sink into a story about a woman who has been pushed into an impossible situation, refusing to give up and doing anything possible to take her revenge and change her destiny this might be the one for you. 4 stars.
April 3, 2023
补评论3.3
这是今年第一本好看的书吗，发现了一个作者宝藏，我要看作者其他的书，之前听过她的书，可能没看进去？星落看剧又看书，书还行吧，但！昨天中午看了下她的神仙肉，也一般没看完，直到看了不醒，一发不能收拾，看到今早就看完了，眼睛有点受不了。这边最大新的亮点，故事结构吧，仙侠伪重生无限流，有四梦，第二梦最好看，并且梦中梦外衔接得很好，悬念迭起扣人心弦，梦中只有女主没失忆凭一己之力扭转局势，梦醒是所有人都带有梦中的记忆，并延续梦中的结局，喜欢男主的毒舌深情吃醋女主的直率开朗敢爱敢恨。男主变蛇，那个塔，最后的大BOSS。写的句子短句很言简意赅，不知道是不是看的快的缘故情景相融没多么调出我情绪，太跟着女主或喜或悲，奇幻想象力还可以。这要是放国外吊打很多畅销的奇幻小说了。
这本书弱的一点，写女主身世出生那里好土，古早味，有的地方文笔语言很好，有的地方大白话，昨天热门微博看到作者发文征集想看什么番外内容，自己会写为出书做准备。
（看见大家说《不醒》里面，还想看第一秋对阿壤的感情由来。所以在实体书的上册里单独写了一万两千字的番外。专门写秋师傅的情之所起。渣一算宠粉了吧？《不醒》下册的番外，大家还想看什么内容呢？评论区留言叭，万一实现了呢？)——一度君华
为了翻这篇微博原文，我又看到她发了一个让人笑不过活的微博，一个美国粉丝来贵阳旅游顺便想让她签名，聊得不错于是邀请来家里做客，顺便找了个电影看了看，聊到背景是抗美援朝的哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈救命于是两人同时陷入了沉思，sorry这位美国粉丝说以后带个日本朋友过来做客😂。。。。。。
这是今年第一本好看的书吗，发现了一个作者宝藏，我要看作者其他的书，之前听过她的书，可能没看进去？星落看剧又看书，书还行吧，但！昨天中午看了下她的神仙肉，也一般没看完，直到看了不醒，一发不能收拾，看到今早就看完了，眼睛有点受不了。这边最大新的亮点，故事结构吧，仙侠伪重生无限流，有四梦，第二梦最好看，并且梦中梦外衔接得很好，悬念迭起扣人心弦，梦中只有女主没失忆凭一己之力扭转局势，梦醒是所有人都带有梦中的记忆，并延续梦中的结局，喜欢男主的毒舌深情吃醋女主的直率开朗敢爱敢恨。男主变蛇，那个塔，最后的大BOSS。写的句子短句很言简意赅，不知道是不是看的快的缘故情景相融没多么调出我情绪，太跟着女主或喜或悲，奇幻想象力还可以。这要是放国外吊打很多畅销的奇幻小说了。
这本书弱的一点，写女主身世出生那里好土，古早味，有的地方文笔语言很好，有的地方大白话，昨天热门微博看到作者发文征集想看什么番外内容，自己会写为出书做准备。
（看见大家说《不醒》里面，还想看第一秋对阿壤的感情由来。所以在实体书的上册里单独写了一万两千字的番外。专门写秋师傅的情之所起。渣一算宠粉了吧？《不醒》下册的番外，大家还想看什么内容呢？评论区留言叭，万一实现了呢？)——一度君华
为了翻这篇微博原文，我又看到她发了一个让人笑不过活的微博，一个美国粉丝来贵阳旅游顺便想让她签名，聊得不错于是邀请来家里做客，顺便找了个电影看了看，聊到背景是抗美援朝的哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈救命于是两人同时陷入了沉思，sorry这位美国粉丝说以后带个日本朋友过来做客😂。。。。。。
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February 16, 2024Maybe just my mood but I read the first 2 ch then skipped to 28 & meh
(Or maybe it was also the translating - no flow)
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(Or maybe it was also the translating - no flow)
https://secondlifetranslations.com/no...
December 23, 2025
This was a roller-coaster ride from start to end.
Unconscious, as the title suggests, is not the state Huang Rang spends most of the book in, but she might as well be. Paralysed by needles in her head, she has been "missing" from her sect for a decade, hidden in the dungeons under her husband's master's peak, a place her filial husband will never check. A hundred years of marriage, and Xie Hongchen is barely affected by her absence.
Enter Di Yiqiu, a man who has no relation to her, except for once proposing marriage that she had turned down. She did not regret it then, nor regrets it now when he and four other cultivation sect masters find and break her out of her solitary prison. All she wants is revenge, but mute and paralysed, she can hardly achieve it.
Until, suddenly, she is cast back into a dream, ten years ago, before her abduction.
I loved Huang Rang as a character. Bold, cunning, utterly sure of what she wants—mainly revenge at the moment—she spends every single moment in this dream-space to harm Xie Lingbi, her husband's master. And succeeds! Only, as dreams do, it comes to an end, and she finds herself back in the still body of her current self.
Except, for some strange reason, people now can remember the changes she made in her dream, and are even affected by it. I liked how she does a couple of different things each dream—the first is her revenge, but it is short lived.
The second is also revenge, but this time she wishes to do it by her own hand, and learns the sword as a disciple under her own husband, thoroughly changing their relationship, and thus, for the first time, entangling with Di Yiqiu instead.
The third time... she lets go and finally simply lives a good life, but certain events always come to pass, like her enmity with Xie Lingbi. There was a decent amount of mystery in how she is able to enter dreams and change things, and why her, specifically. The romance between Huang Rang and Di Yiqiu was also quite realistic.
If there's one gripe, it's the quality of translation. But well, the content in itself was fascinating enough for me to ignore it.
3½⭐️
Unconscious, as the title suggests, is not the state Huang Rang spends most of the book in, but she might as well be. Paralysed by needles in her head, she has been "missing" from her sect for a decade, hidden in the dungeons under her husband's master's peak, a place her filial husband will never check. A hundred years of marriage, and Xie Hongchen is barely affected by her absence.
Enter Di Yiqiu, a man who has no relation to her, except for once proposing marriage that she had turned down. She did not regret it then, nor regrets it now when he and four other cultivation sect masters find and break her out of her solitary prison. All she wants is revenge, but mute and paralysed, she can hardly achieve it.
Until, suddenly, she is cast back into a dream, ten years ago, before her abduction.
I loved Huang Rang as a character. Bold, cunning, utterly sure of what she wants—mainly revenge at the moment—she spends every single moment in this dream-space to harm Xie Lingbi, her husband's master. And succeeds! Only, as dreams do, it comes to an end, and she finds herself back in the still body of her current self.
Except, for some strange reason, people now can remember the changes she made in her dream, and are even affected by it. I liked how she does a couple of different things each dream—the first is her revenge, but it is short lived.
The second is also revenge, but this time she wishes to do it by her own hand, and learns the sword as a disciple under her own husband, thoroughly changing their relationship, and thus, for the first time, entangling with Di Yiqiu instead.
The third time... she lets go and finally simply lives a good life, but certain events always come to pass, like her enmity with Xie Lingbi. There was a decent amount of mystery in how she is able to enter dreams and change things, and why her, specifically. The romance between Huang Rang and Di Yiqiu was also quite realistic.
If there's one gripe, it's the quality of translation. But well, the content in itself was fascinating enough for me to ignore it.
3½⭐️
March 9, 2023
【4】
故事情节让我想起了古早的三生三世套路……在这篇里是靠女主的梦境，大差不差。三次分别回到了和前夫婚后、遇到男主/前夫前，和小时候，每一次女主都做出了不同的选择，走向了不同的人生轨迹。
第一梦使计虐杀仇人，第二梦苦修用实力杀掉仇人顺便和男主培养爱情，第三梦就是从小的时候开始反向养成男主哈哈哈！可爱极了，无论是梦外的现实，还是梦中男主的默默守护及欢喜冤家剧情，都好可爱啊，快来让我摸摸头！
好多时候已经感受到了作者开车之心……每次女主的勾引，无论是对前夫还是对男主，都好可爱啊！！好色气！！只恨是在晋江……
除了感情戏之外，女主开的金手指虽大，但是丝毫不觉得违和，甚至看得有点爽www。尤其是第三梦掉马的场景，又爽又好笑wwwww
简介和第一章看得半懂不懂，等到第二章开头就几乎能分清人物了！每个人的性格和经历各有不同，非常鲜明。
设定有点仙侠+朝廷，妖和人的区别没那么大还能相互通婚（）男主的名字一开始真的让人怀疑不是来搞笑的吗……后来发现确实如此（。对于仙门的故事背景也感觉很有意思！
第四梦也就是揭穿真相那一part没太看懂，但是选择了BE的结局还是很棒！
节奏非常好，看了就停不下来。文笔也很不错，看到许多非常触动的句子。总体而言非常值得一看！
Apr 03, 2022.
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这次看的时候已经基本忘掉剧情了，相当于是从头到尾重新看了一次。居然和第一遍读隔了快一年，真是时光飞逝。结局真是骗人眼泪呜呜呜！姐姐说「你怎么还不消失？以前我送你到门口，就醒了呀。」
全文剧情线、暗线、感情线都埋得非常和谐，能吸引人探寻某个情节背后的真相，真相过后又是更大的真相，吊足了胃口和悬念。感情线也恰到好处，可爱极了！！
最近在追日剧《重启人生》，不由得联想，黄壤也是每过一世就有新的收获，认真修武的那一世也为最后的决战出了不少力。人果然还是要有一个自己的技能啊！
上一次没怎么仔细看结局，这次认真看完了。和前面这种低魔的背景显得过于玄学了（）不过皇帝那个「做天下之主，这样天下的怨气都为我所用」，真是高效又阴损啊……
无论多少次还是会被第二梦中的情节感动到：
一在黄壤夤夜不归，在城镇见穿梭，一家一家地对照良种和姨妈给的册子，那时她满腔仇恨，不信任任何人，却在那一夜发现真心可贵不虚伪，世上竟有这样的好人。她问姨母「如果母亲求救你会不会拉她一把」，姨母说会，第三梦的时候她去求救，姨母果然如她所说帮助母女三人，被拒绝多次仍伸着那只援助的手。
二在第一秋中了虺毒、浑身变形不能见人，从牢房中逃出来，正好碰上黄壤与宫女在宫中行走。本来疾驰的他发现是她，就不再动弹，安静地被宫人捉走。他在牢房中等待恢复的时候，抱着对黄壤的念想活下去，正如他在真世界中，靠着黄壤峰上的九曲灵瞳度过幽闭的日子。谢红尘看到的是黄壤光鲜靓丽、娇俏可人的一面，而第一秋看到的是她一个人在没人的院子里练习厨艺舞艺、消磨时光，一点一点把自己磨成一个优秀的仙尊夫人的日子。他当然懂得，当然会共情，当然，谢红尘看不到这些，三生三世都看不到，也就不懂黄壤有多可爱。
Mar 9, 2023.
故事情节让我想起了古早的三生三世套路……在这篇里是靠女主的梦境，大差不差。三次分别回到了和前夫婚后、遇到男主/前夫前，和小时候，每一次女主都做出了不同的选择，走向了不同的人生轨迹。
第一梦使计虐杀仇人，第二梦苦修用实力杀掉仇人顺便和男主培养爱情，第三梦就是从小的时候开始反向养成男主哈哈哈！可爱极了，无论是梦外的现实，还是梦中男主的默默守护及欢喜冤家剧情，都好可爱啊，快来让我摸摸头！
好多时候已经感受到了作者开车之心……每次女主的勾引，无论是对前夫还是对男主，都好可爱啊！！好色气！！只恨是在晋江……
除了感情戏之外，女主开的金手指虽大，但是丝毫不觉得违和，甚至看得有点爽www。尤其是第三梦掉马的场景，又爽又好笑wwwww
简介和第一章看得半懂不懂，等到第二章开头就几乎能分清人物了！每个人的性格和经历各有不同，非常鲜明。
设定有点仙侠+朝廷，妖和人的区别没那么大还能相互通婚（）男主的名字一开始真的让人怀疑不是来搞笑的吗……后来发现确实如此（。对于仙门的故事背景也感觉很有意思！
第四梦也就是揭穿真相那一part没太看懂，但是选择了BE的结局还是很棒！
节奏非常好，看了就停不下来。文笔也很不错，看到许多非常触动的句子。总体而言非常值得一看！
Apr 03, 2022.
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这次看的时候已经基本忘掉剧情了，相当于是从头到尾重新看了一次。居然和第一遍读隔了快一年，真是时光飞逝。结局真是骗人眼泪呜呜呜！姐姐说「你怎么还不消失？以前我送你到门口，就醒了呀。」
全文剧情线、暗线、感情线都埋得非常和谐，能吸引人探寻某个情节背后的真相，真相过后又是更大的真相，吊足了胃口和悬念。感情线也恰到好处，可爱极了！！
最近在追日剧《重启人生》，不由得联想，黄壤也是每过一世就有新的收获，认真修武的那一世也为最后的决战出了不少力。人果然还是要有一个自己的技能啊！
上一次没怎么仔细看结局，这次认真看完了。和前面这种低魔的背景显得过于玄学了（）不过皇帝那个「做天下之主，这样天下的怨气都为我所用」，真是高效又阴损啊……
无论多少次还是会被第二梦中的情节感动到：
一在黄壤夤夜不归，在城镇见穿梭，一家一家地对照良种和姨妈给的册子，那时她满腔仇恨，不信任任何人，却在那一夜发现真心可贵不虚伪，世上竟有这样的好人。她问姨母「如果母亲求救你会不会拉她一把」，姨母说会，第三梦的时候她去求救，姨母果然如她所说帮助母女三人，被拒绝多次仍伸着那只援助的手。
二在第一秋中了虺毒、浑身变形不能见人，从牢房中逃出来，正好碰上黄壤与宫女在宫中行走。本来疾驰的他发现是她，就不再动弹，安静地被宫人捉走。他在牢房中等待恢复的时候，抱着对黄壤的念想活下去，正如他在真世界中，靠着黄壤峰上的九曲灵瞳度过幽闭的日子。谢红尘看到的是黄壤光鲜靓丽、娇俏可人的一面，而第一秋看到的是她一个人在没人的院子里练习厨艺舞艺、消磨时光，一点一点把自己磨成一个优秀的仙尊夫人的日子。他当然懂得，当然会共情，当然，谢红尘看不到这些，三生三世都看不到，也就不懂黄壤有多可爱。
Mar 9, 2023.
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