I received an ARC and I’m leaving an honest review.
Actual rating: 2.25 stars, I think.
What I liked:
• fat female main character
• the focus on board games
• it was short so it was a relatively quick read
My inevitable rant:
I seem to only be (accidentally) reading fast paced books recently. In this one, in the span of three chapters they met and spent the night together playing games, a whole week went by in which they constantly texted each other, and then they had a date. Quite a lot of things to happen in such a short time, in my opinion. Especially since the beginning of a relationship is often the most important part. They seem to have shared a lot of information about their own lives, and shared emotional connections through texts, but we’re only told about it in a couple of sentences and don’t actually see any of it happen.
In general, most of the events are told to us, and not actually shown. Many conversations happens with different people in different situations, but we’re told about them as if they’re past events and we’re already moving on with the story.
Rooting for the main couple was already hard as we didn’t actually see them develop their relationship, but the third act break up made this even worse. He got insecure, so he blamed her for everything that is seemingly going wrong in his life, then threw her worries and insecurities back at her. If he’s such an asshole to her when he gets mad, then he doesn’t deserve her. No amount of groveling can make me change my mind.
Their first meeting also threw me off. Sebastian gets real grumpy about a croissant and starts demanding Farren that she gives hers to him, and then actually grabs her. In any other situation, the main character would have the wits to find that creepy and scary, especially since it's done by a stranger, but because we *know* he's the future love interest, Farren is not only nice about it, but even invites him to play with her and her friends.
The way Corinne talks to and about Farren makes it seems as if she thinks that Farren is a terrible friend, but Corinne also spends her time diminishing Farren’s life and everything she is and does, only talking to her to complain about her own life and never even actually paying attention to Farren. I wouldn’t consider her a good friend either, and the supposed apology Farren received (which we've never seen but are just told happened off-page) was not enough to make me believe that she suddenly became a good friend. It was extremely frustrating.
Last, but not least, this book seems to have a recurring theme of starting chapters with long flashbacks. We end one chapter with something, then the next chapter is the other character's pov, but instead of continuing the story where it left off, we go back in time and we're told all that has happened to lead to the actual moment where the previous chapter ended, and then we finally continue the story. It does this in almost every chapter and sometimes it takes three to four pages to catch up with the actual events, only to go back to flashback-to-real-time in the next chapter, making the actual timeline messy, confusing and annoying.