This was one of my most anticipated reads of this year! I was lucky enough to get my hands on the special Goldsboro edition too.
To be honest, I had high expectations, and I’m still coming to terms about how I felt about this sequel. We start the story right where we left off, with Ropa Moyo ex-ghost talker, as she finds herself tangled deeper with the library.
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First thing’s first, the titles of these books do NOT match the contents. In book 1 we were very briefly introduced to the library of the dead, and I felt like this book had much more happening at the library itself. The title of this book, likewise, does not match. Granted, it sounds cool, but Our Lady is not even a central setting in the story. Yes, there’s some aspects of it, but this wasn’t enough to bother me, but I still wanted to mention it.
Moving on to the plot, we actually have a clearer plot than the first book. Ropa is investigating school boys who go missing and dark magic is coating all the mysterious things going on in Edinburgh. However, although I like the way the story unfolded (minus the big ‘reveal’), there was so much more that could be explored. This book is a case of one cool idea and little to no sub plot. It did make me pause and not to want to continue on about 30% through, because it just felt wishy washy. We were introduced to the astral planes, dark magic, and all the interesting concepts, but none of it was executed? It was mentioned and some history behind it, so it felt more telling than showing. Which brings us to the writing...
I love being in Ropa’s head. She’s funny, witty and smart, but it felt like this book was written differently, and it SHOWS. We have instances where Ropa’s voice completely disappears i.e. the beginning of the book sounds the most like her- the colloquialisms and the language made me love being back inside her head. However, this quickly faded, and then there were bouts of her witty language in and out of the story. It felt so stilted and sort of ‘fake’- in the sense that she would be herself and the next few chapters would be SO formal, it made NO sense? There was no development to Ropa’s character, and no more information on other characters except Jomo.
Also, there was a prominent section of this book, where about for 20% of it, we get strong, vulgar language and jokes for no reason? I get it, Ropa’s a teenager and honestly I don’t mind reading rude words or jokes, but to have a whole chunk of it and then completely cast it aside? Made NO sense. Again, this made the narrative so messy and felt like it had been written by different people. It got annoying fast.
And then the repetition. There was so much of it, and so consistently too. The dialogue especially was the most visible with the repetition. The constant monologue of how much Ropa loves her family was repeated one too many times. And although I love them, it was very frustrating to read the same lines over and over. If you read this book over a long period of time, I guess you wouldn’t really notice it. But it’s not too long and I did enjoy it enough to finish it quickly, despite its many flaws.
Moreover, the world building was flimsy at best I really thought we’d get to know more about this dystopian Edinburgh, but alas. We just get constant religious names thrown in for no reason- this doesn’t tell us anything about the world! It was just annoying!
In conclusion, I would recommend this one, although it has MANY flaws. I did enjoy it, but if you like characters who take action and do things of their own accord, maybe go in with low expectations. Much of the stuff in here happens TO Ropa. She is almost replaceable in that sense, which is sad because I LOVED book 1. Still, I liked this one, but at times it felt like the author was projecting his own views to the reader through the characters...