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O'Malley Family
Fall In Line
Curvy girl meets reformed bad boy...
Sean O'Malley is a player. At least that's who he was back in our college days, when I had the biggest crush on him.
Now he's a succesful business owner, still hot as f*ck, but totally delusional. He thinks I'm the one for him...
I know better than believing the words of a reformed bad boy. But what if....?
Tag along for a fun, sexy ride, and find out which one of these two will Fall In Line!
Sean O'Malley is a player. At least that's who he was back in our college days, when I had the biggest crush on him.
Now he's a succesful business owner, still hot as f*ck, but totally delusional. He thinks I'm the one for him...
I know better than believing the words of a reformed bad boy. But what if....?
Tag along for a fun, sexy ride, and find out which one of these two will Fall In Line!
40 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 7, 2022
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November 2, 2023
Based on my reading of short stories today, I have learned I’m not a fan of instalove. Also, this book has a lot of grammar mistakes and typos for something that was supposedly professionally edited, which was quite annoying.
April 9, 2022
No longer a player!
Oh my I am seriously loving the O'Malley family!! These men don't waste any time finding their soulmates and making them theirs.
Sean saw Aida and there was nothing else to be said. But Aida did have a minor surprise that took Sean by surprise. But that didn't stop him from claiming his heart.
Imani Jay please keep delivering these amazing instalove stories. They are individually awesome, sexy, sassy and wonderful short stories. I cannot get enough of them!! ❤️❤️❤️
Oh my I am seriously loving the O'Malley family!! These men don't waste any time finding their soulmates and making them theirs.
Sean saw Aida and there was nothing else to be said. But Aida did have a minor surprise that took Sean by surprise. But that didn't stop him from claiming his heart.
Imani Jay please keep delivering these amazing instalove stories. They are individually awesome, sexy, sassy and wonderful short stories. I cannot get enough of them!! ❤️❤️❤️
December 20, 2022
Oh
This is the only book from this O'Malley series I didn't like, Aida seemed unhinged talking about her crush on Sean, the hero worshipping ventured into cringe. The author was overselling it. Most of the book is spent describing Sean physical appearance over & over again. Every new scene Aida was describing him to the readers. Aida was like a stan groupie finally meeting her obsession. It was over the top.
This is the only book from this O'Malley series I didn't like, Aida seemed unhinged talking about her crush on Sean, the hero worshipping ventured into cringe. The author was overselling it. Most of the book is spent describing Sean physical appearance over & over again. Every new scene Aida was describing him to the readers. Aida was like a stan groupie finally meeting her obsession. It was over the top.
April 8, 2022
4/5 STARS. I love SEAN AHHHHHH. He calls Aida, love, macushla, good girl. AHHHHHHH PLEASE GIVE ME A SEAN. He’s so caring and sweet towards Aida and when they first meet his first response was that he was going to make her his and then the office scene happened BAHAHAHAHAHAHA. When he was like give her a watermelon sized diamond I was like HES THE ONE. Aida needs help with something at her work and she calls Sean’s Tech company to help and he does and that’s when they officially meet but Aida already knew who he was due to her attraction towards him in college that he never returned cuz he was a man whore. When he first saw her he was rock hard and crazy for her and when she hugged him and he gave her an orgasm in return, both their feelings were all over the place. Aida doesn’t want to be another one of Sean’s fucks. Sean doesn’t want her to be another one of his fucks. He wants her to be his and he wants to be hers. That all works out in the end. I guess.
SMUT: They never really did have a first time together sex but that’s okay because the office scene got be hot and bothered. 3.5/5.
SMUT: They never really did have a first time together sex but that’s okay because the office scene got be hot and bothered. 3.5/5.
June 13, 2022
My Rating: Probably a half star. Tbf I probably would have never read this one if "instalove" was in the goodreads title the way it is currently on the Amazon Kindle version.
Despite adding this to my kindle library and it having "instalove" in the title, I thought... it's rated so well, why not give it a chance. Wrong. I was very wrong. The pacing is awkward. The male protagonist is surrounded in a cloud of fratbro/douche vibes. I just couldn't get behind it.
I thought, maybe the sex will be off the charts and amazing. Nope. The dialogue during sex took me out. That is probably up to each person's own taste. This novella length story was just not it for me folks. I really wish I could find something about it that I liked.
Despite adding this to my kindle library and it having "instalove" in the title, I thought... it's rated so well, why not give it a chance. Wrong. I was very wrong. The pacing is awkward. The male protagonist is surrounded in a cloud of fratbro/douche vibes. I just couldn't get behind it.
I thought, maybe the sex will be off the charts and amazing. Nope. The dialogue during sex took me out. That is probably up to each person's own taste. This novella length story was just not it for me folks. I really wish I could find something about it that I liked.
June 25, 2022
First things first; I like the cover of this book!
Fall in line is the second book in the ‘’O’Malley family’’ series.
This story is short, fast paced and an enjoyable read. I read this book in one sitting and was satisfied throughout. I found the writing style easy to follow, the characters likeable and the storyline enjoyable. When Aida needs an IT consultants help at work, she gets more than she needed. She has crushed on Sean for years. Sean wants Aida as soon as he meets her but will she give him a chance?
The chemistry between Sean and Aida is clear to see and I liked them together.
I liked the ending and the epilogue for this story.
The storyline for this book is easy to follow and it is an enjoyable read.
Fall in line is the second book in the ‘’O’Malley family’’ series.
This story is short, fast paced and an enjoyable read. I read this book in one sitting and was satisfied throughout. I found the writing style easy to follow, the characters likeable and the storyline enjoyable. When Aida needs an IT consultants help at work, she gets more than she needed. She has crushed on Sean for years. Sean wants Aida as soon as he meets her but will she give him a chance?
The chemistry between Sean and Aida is clear to see and I liked them together.
I liked the ending and the epilogue for this story.
The storyline for this book is easy to follow and it is an enjoyable read.
April 30, 2022
Straight to the heart😘❤️😘
Aida never imagined nor expected what happened in the office and in here pants when Sean O’Malley showed up to troubleshoot a IT problem on a day off🥵🔥🥵. Sean was caught off guard by her beauty and confidence, his head both top and bottom had a one track mind😈. It may have been years earlier that Aida crushed on the campus playboy Sean but he still got her the week knees. I loved that Sean made no excuse for his prior ways😜 but that he was certain she was it for him and he made sure of it quick😘😍.
Ms. Jay is great at capturing your attention with short, steamy hot romances. This was another great insta romance and recommend for a quick read.
Aida never imagined nor expected what happened in the office and in here pants when Sean O’Malley showed up to troubleshoot a IT problem on a day off🥵🔥🥵. Sean was caught off guard by her beauty and confidence, his head both top and bottom had a one track mind😈. It may have been years earlier that Aida crushed on the campus playboy Sean but he still got her the week knees. I loved that Sean made no excuse for his prior ways😜 but that he was certain she was it for him and he made sure of it quick😘😍.
Ms. Jay is great at capturing your attention with short, steamy hot romances. This was another great insta romance and recommend for a quick read.
April 10, 2022
Can't help falling for these insta love stories
Aida and Sean give all the feels and have all the heat. It makes sense that Sean never saw Aida in college and that all that drive made his business thrive so they could be ready for each other when they met again. When he ever put her in the car that first day and started their life together I was blown away. You can't stop an alpha who knows what he wants. Awesome quick read. Perfection.
Aida and Sean give all the feels and have all the heat. It makes sense that Sean never saw Aida in college and that all that drive made his business thrive so they could be ready for each other when they met again. When he ever put her in the car that first day and started their life together I was blown away. You can't stop an alpha who knows what he wants. Awesome quick read. Perfection.
May 17, 2022
Aida and Sean
Short story. A few errors. (SPOILER ALERT) Aida had been in love with Sean since high school but he didn’t know she existed. He has an identical twin brother, Jansen, whom Aida knew, and of course, the brothers were/are completely different. For Sean, seeing Aida for the first time it was love at first sight… seven years after high school. Looks like a wedding may be coming up for Aida and Sean.
Short story. A few errors. (SPOILER ALERT) Aida had been in love with Sean since high school but he didn’t know she existed. He has an identical twin brother, Jansen, whom Aida knew, and of course, the brothers were/are completely different. For Sean, seeing Aida for the first time it was love at first sight… seven years after high school. Looks like a wedding may be coming up for Aida and Sean.
April 7, 2022
O’Malleys Ain’t No Joke
Imani Jay has done it once again. The second O’Malley twin is just as hot as his brother. Sean got gobsmacked by Aida and I absolutely loved it! The former “bad boy”gets tamed by true love. The shy girl gets the man. Short, sweet, and definitely steamy. The office scene is …whew! I can’t wait for the next brother to be revealed.
Imani Jay has done it once again. The second O’Malley twin is just as hot as his brother. Sean got gobsmacked by Aida and I absolutely loved it! The former “bad boy”gets tamed by true love. The shy girl gets the man. Short, sweet, and definitely steamy. The office scene is …whew! I can’t wait for the next brother to be revealed.
June 26, 2022
I simply love Sean and Aida story. Sean was a twin and was a player but what he didn't know was his soul mate was there all along but she never told him. what I loved about the story was that when Aida told her secret to Sean he was in shock. The O'Malleys know what they want and they go and get it.
September 24, 2022
LOVED IT ❤❤
I really enjoyed reading Sean and Aida's story. This was a very short read,and an enjoyable story my only regret is that it ended so soon. I would absolutely recommend reading this book it was a fun and sexy read. Good job Ms. Jay please keep these stories coming thank you.👍🙏❤
I really enjoyed reading Sean and Aida's story. This was a very short read,and an enjoyable story my only regret is that it ended so soon. I would absolutely recommend reading this book it was a fun and sexy read. Good job Ms. Jay please keep these stories coming thank you.👍🙏❤
April 7, 2022
good quick read
This was definitely a very short read but it was great. This was definitely an instalove story but it didn’t seem rushed or totally far out there. I thoroughly enjoyed this book.
This was definitely a very short read but it was great. This was definitely an instalove story but it didn’t seem rushed or totally far out there. I thoroughly enjoyed this book.
April 8, 2022
office meet and greet
Sean and Aida met at her place of work! But she has had feelings for him since she was a teen! She finally gets to talk and interact with her crush in real life instead of in her dreams! Sean looks at her and he falls hard! A quick read!
Sean and Aida met at her place of work! But she has had feelings for him since she was a teen! She finally gets to talk and interact with her crush in real life instead of in her dreams! Sean looks at her and he falls hard! A quick read!
April 12, 2022
Aida has been pinning for Sean for years. In comes Sean after a work issue and its history. INSTA-LOVE on Sean's end. I loved this short O'Malley book. I was also glad that Aida called Sean out for his "player" ways as well. That was a cute little part. :)
April 20, 2022
This Really Surprised Me
This didn't begin with the usual meet cute and I liked it. We have a woman who is obviously about her business seeing a man she had a crush on seven years ago. It was so well orchestrated and took a different route to get the HEA.
Loved it!
This didn't begin with the usual meet cute and I liked it. We have a woman who is obviously about her business seeing a man she had a crush on seven years ago. It was so well orchestrated and took a different route to get the HEA.
Loved it!
May 21, 2022
I think it’s perfect that Sean knows Aida is the one for him. She has loved him from a far, seven years ago. They both are single, matured and have their own careers. It seems like everything is meant to be. Great romantic love story.
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December 28, 2023
Worst of the series
It clearly hasn't been edited. The only spicy scene is just referencing that it happened. This is nothing but a trashy money grab. If this wasn't free I'd want a refund.
It clearly hasn't been edited. The only spicy scene is just referencing that it happened. This is nothing but a trashy money grab. If this wasn't free I'd want a refund.
May 5, 2024
As soon as I get invested
I get sucked into these steamy, love at first sight stories and before I can get ready to fall in deep love with the male love interest. And how he instantly loves the woman he meets, it's done. But it's still good and would probably read it again.
I get sucked into these steamy, love at first sight stories and before I can get ready to fall in deep love with the male love interest. And how he instantly loves the woman he meets, it's done. But it's still good and would probably read it again.
April 10, 2022
Amazing short
Short sweet and to the point a quick li y the read to get the blood pumping but didn't disappoint
Short sweet and to the point a quick li y the read to get the blood pumping but didn't disappoint
April 15, 2022
Nice Read
This was a nice read. It was short, steamy and a fast paced read. Aida and Sean knew what they wanted from the beginning
This was a nice read. It was short, steamy and a fast paced read. Aida and Sean knew what they wanted from the beginning
April 15, 2022
Enjoyed reading this book
April 17, 2022
Another short quick read this time Sean and Aida. Another O'Malley brother.
May 2, 2022
Ginger Snap
Too yummy. Every girl needs a Sean O’Malley. I can’t with the gingers; too much sensory overload and bonafide swoon! Fan, fan.
Too yummy. Every girl needs a Sean O’Malley. I can’t with the gingers; too much sensory overload and bonafide swoon! Fan, fan.
May 2, 2022
amazing read
Just what I was needing this weekend. Feels like Imani Jay always has something to chase away the cobwebs of life.
Just what I was needing this weekend. Feels like Imani Jay always has something to chase away the cobwebs of life.
May 9, 2022
Steamy and sweet.
June 4, 2022
very very insta
But I don’t really mind they are super cute though I do wish one or had happened. It feels kind of like not much happened
But I don’t really mind they are super cute though I do wish one or had happened. It feels kind of like not much happened
June 17, 2022
the best of the series
June 28, 2022
I loved it! A sweet,sexy and beautiful love story!🥰🔥❤😍
July 19, 2022
The minute he followed her home and wouldn't take "no" or "stop" for an answer, I was OUT. DNF at 50%
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