Almost DNF’d but the ending came before I could. (SPOILERS)
This read more like a creative writing class assignment than a book.
SPOILERS AHEAD….
First there wasn’t really any depth to any of the characters. There wasn’t really any world building. There were inconsistencies throughout, for example she talked about driving to the mall in the beginning then later talks about her dad won’t have money to buy her a car when she gets her license. Also the guy asks her to be his girlfriend then she has a freak out about if they’re exclusive. Also she’s 16 and immediately goes on a date with a 19 year old before getting into a relationship with her boyfriend who I’m not sure we know the age of I’m guessing under 18 because he’s going to high school. In the last like 15% of the book out of nowhere there is a feud between packs that there is no lead up to. Then there is a witch best friend out of nowhere. She’s rescued, kidnapped again, magically turned werewolf, bad guy unalived, she jumps to ridiculous conclusions, she’s attacked again bad guy unalived, mate bond story ends. So like I said I was on the verge of DNF’ing and all of a sudden the book was done it was confusing.