Who doesn't love a good retelling? I certainly do, especially Cinderella-based as it is my favorite fairytale (despite how bad it truly is. Guilty of having guilty pleasures!).
THIS
was not a good retelling though *shrug*
Be prepared for a few light spoilers concerning the growth (or lack thereof) of the story.
It all started beautifully. Of course, with a setting like "The Bachelor", I did not expect a lot of quality development, but it shined when it came to Cindy's home life. She had a very interesting stepmother who was actually a NICE person who cared about her and did not limit her in her options, but was there to support it. Same with her stepsisters. They were supporting her in e-v-e-r-y-t-h-i-n-g and it was wonderful. There were some scenes in the past where the sisters weren't too nice in high school, but it really showed how close they are now and despite Cindy's awkwardness sometimes, that she truly loved them. It was a heavenly change to the very beaten stereotype of evil step family.
But that's where all the good things end.
It is with my biggest disappointment to say that Cindy's main (and arguably only) trait was that she was plus size. Where is the self growth? Nowhere in this book!
At first I was intrigued, but it showed me some points of view I had never really considered too much (such as backhanded compliments/insults just for existing) and I appreciated that, but soon it just devolved to Cindy always getting into situations that had to do with only her size. Production failing MULTIPLE times to have prepared any kind of clothes for her, leaving it to Cindy to educate AND convince industry people in less than 10 seconds why inclusivity is the best business plan (which it is, don't get me wrong, it was just the way that ONLY Cindy knows and everyone else is a brainless stick of wood). The only pat on the back I'll give her is that she never truly compared herself to her skinnier rivals and thought lowly of herself.
Then of course comes the meaning to her existence in this book which is Henry, our universally agreed hot guy. Talk about a most underdeveloped romance to the point of making Cindy simply an imbecile. There is immediate attraction between them despite not really knowing each other.
And that's ok. Chemistry is a thing.
What is not ok is Cindy for the entirety of the book going back and forth between her feelings towards him, basically making out whenever she can with him and then thinking that she just MIGHT like him, that he does not like her and he has never said anything, DESPITE being the only "couple" that kept stealing time together, sharing items that were forbidden and generally breaking rules in secret. But no, Cindy is not sure about liking him.
Which brings us to the big finale. Cindy throughout the book is equating her love with Henry to the prize itself. If he does not pick her, then OBVIOUSLY he is rejecting her in every form and does not love her and then she will have to live a few years avoiding news about his happy marriage with one of the other contestants. Because OBVIOUSLY, if Henry proposed to another girl instead of her (since we know all reality tv decisions are made exclusively by the players and never the ratings/ production), he would HAVE to marry her and live the happily ever after ending without Cindy. I kept waiting for some rational thinking coming back to her head, but she keeps saying it ALL. THE. TIME. Not like she thinks reality tv is real, but somehow this made sense in her head.
I will not spoil what her actions were towards the finale, but suffice to say that my opinion of her being a moron never changed. Somehow the author tried to give legit reasons towards the very end, but you can't just delete everything I read for paaaages and paaaaages, Julie!
Now, after Cindy, the 2nd prize of stupidity takes the whole production team. I have never been part of a reality tv show and I will not pretend to know exactly how they work, but more or less, we all related to the book's logic that ratings above everything, right? Yes, because we all realise that this is a financial decision for them, nothing to do with love. So this means they try to make it work as much as possible, right? Well... no. They keep being unprepared for basic things and have no backups for absolutely anything. The point is for them to get all the tears and drama they want, but not with the production being in front of the camera. WELL... They are THAT good, let's say.
In general, the entire show was not really depicted well. It seemed like the whole show lasted what, 5/6 episodes? I never really watched "The Bachelor", but with my experience of general reality tv, I know there is more complexity and duration from what the author portrayed.
The other characters? If Cindy and Henry are that underdeveloped, you can guess for the rest (step family excluded). I think maybe only Stacy had a real enough character, probably because she was a bystander with barely any lines that was actually very likable. There's a mean girl who is even recognised by the characters as the token mean girl, but she is also treated like that in the book too. She's a prop to the author as well, she is forgotten. Maybe Beck was decent as well I suppose, she probably had the most stress out of everyone and yet, she still tried to be as human as possible and made it work. Ah, there is also the token best friend, who has 0 opinion of her own and only exists to cheer for Cindy. Such great friendship <3
That is all I can say. Mishandled premise, not only boring main characters but very badly written characters, a reality tv show that made little sense as to how it promotes itself. For me, they even butchered a part of the body positivity message. I can't find a reason to give this anything more than 1 star.