I … didn't finish it. To be fair, I got four chapters in, and then I decided it wasn't me. If any readers who love it (or the author) are reading this, now is a good time to start because I am going to roast it. But know this is just for fun, and if you like this kind of book, you might enjoy this - and further, you might still enjoy it. Because not everyone has the same taste.
But here's why I DNF'd:
This book starts off by introducing Aaron, who is not very good at getting on things. Namely, he's a procrastinator, the first one ever who has beat me, in that he's engaged to a woman he hasn't seen in tens years. Now, Beatrice, his childhood tag-along (NOT FRIEND, he frequently clarifies) is nineteen, and he's almost thirty, and he found out about a year ago (A YEAR THOUGH) that he's been betrothed to her since she was born. If he marries her, he gets to keep the family coal mine in the family - if not, he loses it to his father's partner, Beatrice's father.
So Aaron's father is dead now - very recently. (It's worth mentioning that one thing I really hated was how the book doesn't touch on Aaron having any grief - or his mother having any grief - and his sister is even worse, being outright nasty as if he's not even her dad. Granted, it's briefly mentioned a couple times that their dad was not super involved, but even so, them being SO callous, insensitive, and just without any concern to the fact that their dad died is interesting.) And Aaron recently realized that the marriage has to happen by his 30th birthday.
So he goes to meet with Beatrice's father and asks if maybe they can't undo the contract. After trying one (1) time to convince Beatrice's father to break the betrothal, and being denied, he then does a complete 180 and says, "Okay, fine, I'll get a special license tonight and marry her tomorrow."
Uhhhhh …?
This is problematic in a few ways. First, it shows that the novel doesn't particularly understand how Regency society works. If this was just Aaron being a jerk (which he is, but more on that later), that might be understandable, because he doesn't seem to care about Beatrice and presumably isn't too concerned about appearances given his later actions. Plus, he's an earl, so despite all eyes being on him, theoretically he can do more socially-inappropriate things and get away with it. Unlikely and pushing the boundaries, but for the sake of the story, I would've allowed it. But no one brings up the negative rep that a special license has in this era (it's the "whoops, we're pregnant, let's get engaged" of the Regency era, though it could be used for other reasons), even Beatrice's father, who originally refused to break the engagement because it might ruin Beatrice's reputation. (NOTE: I question this because I think that no one knows about the engagement because even Aaron didn't know until recently, but maybe it's become more publicized in recent years. I don't know. It could also just be a lame excuse because he wanted his daughter to marry an earl.)
So after this, Aaron goes off to get drunk with a couple friends who are like, "...???" I do have to give the novel credit for having these friends (briefly and mildly) ask Aaron what he's thinking, but his explanation ("he just wants to get it over with") and then his utter lack of respect and total disdain for Beatrice just put me off. I know we might have a Mr. Darcy transformation later in the story, but we're in his head, and we know exactly why he doesn't want her: she's not attractive.
Or so he thinks. Which just shows that Aaron doesn't have brains. He watched his sister (who is exactly Beatrice's age!) grow up, and yet he thinks that Beatrice is going to look exactly like her NINE-YEAR-OLD CHILD self. He thinks she'll still have the same "horse face" (buck teeth, thin face). And that's what he cares about. It's the only reason he gives for his frequent insistence that "they wouldn't suit," though I assume the book would eventually explain what he meant by that. (I think he does mention that she was annoying at NINE YEARS OLD but again, not enough to make me like him.) He's just not that sympathetic.
Okay, so we've talked about Aaron a lot. Let's go over to Beatrice. Nineteen-years-old, she varies in maturity greatly over the course of the couple scenes I read in her point of view, which is probably realistic for a nineteen-year-old (I'm twenty, and my maturity varies greatly over the course of every five minutes! :P), though it was a bit jarring.
At first, Beatrice is introduced as the typical Regency lass - well, in ROMANCE novels, not in reality. She doesn't care about what society thinks, she's practical, etc. But then in the next scene, she becomes a completely different person, daydreaming about Aaron, thinking about how they're going to turn their marriage into a love match, and even believing that he must be into her because of the special license (logic???).
Then a few pages later, her dad tells her that the mines were linked to the marriage (WHY WOULD HE TELL HER!?!!!), and she immediately does a 180 and decided that things AREN'T so great. Then at the wedding (more on that later), she has another abrupt change.
I think the real issue here may be Beatrice's undiagnosed hormonal issues, because she is all over the place emotionally.
Okay, anyways, we arrive at the church for the wedding with Aaron and Beatrice having never seen each other in the last ten years. Aaron is blind-stinkin' drunk, and that makes him less-than-pleasant. He is shocked that Beatrice is actually pleasant-looking (so … no character growth for him, I guess) and informs her of this immediately, proceeding to insult her childhood self while he awkwardly (drunkenly) compliments her current self.
For some reason, despite knowing that Aaron is super drunk, the thing that seems to bother Beatrice more than anything is his insults about her looks. So yeah. She immediately tells him she's not going to marry him - scandal or no scandal - and leaves.
And around then, I decided to quit reading. I mean, I read a couple more scenes where Aaron is super hungover and doesn't remember ANYTHING (hmm) and Beatrice is all upset and then I just opted out.
It also wasn't well-written in my opinion. It just felt awkward.
So that's why I DNF'd the novel! Some people may still enjoy it, as I mentioned, but it just wasn't my cuppa. Not saying it was a wrong book - just the wrong book for me.