Did Not Finish
I tried, but I could not make myself finish this one. Stopped at 56%. Problem 1 was that I didn't like and / or care about the characters. They seemed superficial and stupid too many times for me to ignore. Problem 2 was the large amount of things in the world that did not make any sense. I'm not talking about the fictional things that don't make sense, although there were too many of those. I'm talking about the plot not making sense. There was pretty much nothing here I was interested in reading more of and every 10 pages or so just added another thing to the list of things that bothered me.
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This Book Includes*Only read 56%
Violence. Reference to murder / execution of hero's family including children, punches / fighting, murder by tail barb, references to likely war coming, implied threat of rape to female by various others (other crew, bad guy, etc...), character confined to quarters.
Sex. Veiled references to prior sexual assault of female, brief discussion that characters are not bartering sex, MF sex with anal component, some hand pinning, virgin male?, pierced tongue, cock with extras (ridge on top & tickler appendage)
Alien race description. Light blue flesh with silver scales more dense in some areas (shoulders) than others (stomach), black hair, pointed black horns that move?, dexterous tail that ends in sharp needle-like tip capable of injecting various substances (killing or sedating), ridges / frill along neck & down spine, spinning eyes, areas glow different colors with emotions (tail, frills, & eyes), cock with ridge along top and tickler appendage underneath, forked tongue with piercing in middle.
Things That Bothered Me
Heroine.
The first time we meet the heroine I got the impression she was a) stupid or b) a doormat. She finds an interesting specimen and instead of saying nothing & taking it to her boss she tells the asshole that has been harassing her and lets him take the credit. Why? The asshole keeps asking her out, and she makes up things instead of saying no or reporting him. Why? Half or more of everything this heroine did had me throwing up my hands. She gets a translator then fails to use it half the time. She gets embarrassed when the hero tells the others of their argument. They are talking about the genocide of her own & another entire race. That's devastating not embarrassing. She talks him into taking on the man that slaughtered his entire family, then basically says 'huh I guess I am asking a lot of him'. Only death & torture, which should've been obvious. She doesn't say anything the first time the hero says he'll come back for her after the war - which will kill and enslave her race. I'm sorry, is she really going to want to see him after he's complicit in that?
Plot Issues.
The hero and the last of his house are already away where the bad guy can't touch them, so why are they going back when ordered? If the leverage the bad guy has over him is the well-being of his people, then shouldn't he run while he still has his people safe with him? If that's his main concern why go where they can all easily be killed?
What exactly can the hero and so few other people do to stop a war? The heroine talks almost from the beginning like he can just snap his fingers and make it stop, which is directly opposite of everything the book has said so far. So, her saying that just kind of makes her look stupid, again.
How are people supposed to follow the hero, as I'm assuming they must against the bad guy, if he can't get his own crew to follow & respect him? A few spies who don't are fine. However, it appears that no one outside of his circle respects him.
World Issues
This whole attacking worlds for their oxygen and then razing them to the ground makes no sense. If you destroy a resource, then there won't be more of it. If you manage it properly, like a fishery or a forest, then you could have the resource for centuries theoretically even longer. This is not an advanced concept. Any advanced species in need of resources would be idiots to destroy said resource. Also, aren't females also a resource they could use? So why would they kill them? If they want to raze the planets to feed their living ships, then what the heck are the ships supposed to eat after those planets are gone? Won't they just die?
A living space ship that eats oxygen - something that doesn't exist in space. Yeah having trouble with that. Also it is unclear whether the ship is eating oxygen or the flora of a planet. Since the ship is basically flora, shouldn't it produce it's own oxygen? Shouldn't it eat sunlight, water, & CO2 and produce oxygen? Yeah, its fiction, but you have to give me some reason that this makes some kind of sense. I don't care if you make the reason as simple as 'it's magic'. Also if the ship eats oxygen and the people need oxygen - well then those people should be highly motivated to feed the ship or would probably suffocate to death.