3*
Although Making Amends will not be my most memorable Dramione read, it certainly gave me my fix for this couple for the evening, and I sped through it pretty quickly.
However, it wasn’t perfect. Unfortunately, I didn’t love Hermione throughout this story (which is a shame since she’s the FMC and star of the show). She seemed fairly timid, she had certain personality traits that felt rather forced, and she lacked a lot of confidence in herself all-around. Because of this, I didn’t love how she handled some of the things that were thrown at her.
Additionally, there were small plot points that I simply didn’t appreciate either (such as the attempted sexual assault on Hermione, the badly handled introduction/drama surrounding Draco’s parents, and the mean comments and attempted blackmail from Ron). Nevertheless, these were all small points of contention whereas the overarching plotline was fun and entertaining.
Draco has a more redeeming character development plotline (something I always enjoy). Plus, I really liked Theo and Ginny, who both played as the main secondary characters.
The smut in this novel was good too, and it definitely increased my delight in this story.
For a fanfiction novel, the writing wasn’t bad. It kept me engaged, but I do wish at certain points it had undergone another round of proof-reading. I don’t want to knock it too much but there were just a few mistakes or places where the dialogue, plot, and/or inner monologue could’ve/should’ve been edited or developed a little bit more and there was a missed opportunity to have a more well-rounded story.