This was a good one! I really liked the explanation of Fjord's character, that he's quite shy, but that through effort and intent, he can turn that natural sweet, quiet nature into something more reserved and intimidating, to suit his needs. I liked how Fjord thought of the sword as the source of his newfound magical abilities, but how those abilities also manifested out of the skills he was already learning before he made an unknowing pact with a sea monster. He had already learned how to blend in and escape detection, and how he has magic that literally lets him disguise himself. He'd already learned how to make people do what he wanted, and now he has actual compulsion abilities. It's cool to see those skills rooted naturally in his training, and then enhanced by magic.
There were a few kind of dumb things... I think my least favorite detail is that they added in this thing where Fjord's last name is "Stone" because his boss at the orphanage said he was "useless like a stone" and then Vandran has this whole bit about how stones are what build the streets and bridges and stuff... I don't know. It just feels really forced. Like in that dumb Han Solo movie, him picking the last name Solo because he's always alone. I believe in the campaign, it's briefly mentioned that "Stone" is just the placeholder last name given to orphans who don't have a surname, a la Jon Snow in A Song of Ice and Fire. I'm not really sure why they had to change that simple explanation!
In terms of the visuals, I loved the underwater scenes that frame the bulk of the story, the image of the sunken ship, and the Mighty Nein all together in their exploration of it. All the stuff on the ships, with the ropes and the rigging and the sales, looked so cool. And the creepy sword! Very cool design, really said a lot with a little.
This is one of the stronger ones, of these origin stories for the Mighty Nein. I really like it! I'm looking forward to getting Beau's and Cad's later this year.