Tempest Raj is a twenty-six (26) year-old magician who found herself in a near-death stunt that landed her living at her childhood home with members of her family who cook, coddle & coo around her & tend to her every need. Tempest is on the brink of what she fears might be rock bottom; having lost whatever good graces her magician’s act had given her. In this first instalment of what one might presume to become a series, Tempest finds herself in the middle of a murder mystery; how can a recently deceased body be found behind an aged wall?
Well, most unfortunately for me I did not enjoy this story at all & I will preface this long-winded review by stating simply that this was not meant for people in my age group. I am a couple of years older than Tempest & found her behaviour ranging from absurd to ludicrous. I began to wonder if this character was written as someone who might reflect what younger audiences might think someone in their mid-twenties to be. My reason for questioning the authenticity of Tempest’s character was truly brought about because the writing style employed in this book is very juvenile. The transitions between thoughts, scenes & events circle around a select few catchphrases which would behold the interest of a young audience. This is certainly not a negative thing if the book were targeting young people. Unfortunately, it is being put forth as an ‘adult’ read & for that reason, I found it fell very flat.
I would like to highlight that books are not necessarily restricted to us based on our ages. One can find themselves, for example, appreciating "Le Petit Prince" (1943) by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry at any age because the writing style is filled with artful transitions & beautiful prose. What differentiates this story from one which might be appreciated throughout the ages is the fact that nothing was very magical. By this, I mean that the writing was not bewildering; it was bland & led us around the same corner, over & over again. We see this in the first chapters when Tempest continuously repeats how important a meeting is for her. We understand that the meeting is important, this does not need to be told more than twice. For this reason, I felt that the storyline might appeal to younger audiences as they might be more willing to forgive redundancy than I.
As someone who can, more often than not, clock the twist in the opening chapters of a book, I found this story to not hold much depth in the plot to lead me to want to continue reading until everything was revealed. Being an avid reader of Agatha Christie’s I find myself always paying close attention to wording; even the most mundane phrase is often where the reveal is found. For this reason, I was, again, lead to reflect upon the target audience of this story.
The premise of the plot holds a great deal of potential; the book will be beloved by many a young reader, of that I am certain. However, as someone who has lived in the adult world for many years & has spent many a stormy night reading brooding mystery novels, I found this story to not be anything particularly pleasing for me. The actions that the characters took touched the surface of what they could be. Tempest herself has very shallow interactions with people who are described as being very close to her. I suppose this comes down to the writing style; things were told to the reader rather than them being shown. This is not to say that there were not detailed descriptions, there were, often ample.
Ultimately, this book was not for me. Should you read this review & wonder if you should read the book I would encourage you to give it a chance. Everything I stated was from a very subjective standpoint. If you’ve not delved into closed-door mysteries, this story might appeal to you. If you are fine with redundant descriptors, the length of this book will not bother you. I will say that I appreciated the touches of combined culture which presented themselves within the cooking practices of the characters. This trait did bring the characters together & forged what one might view as a genuine family experience which was authentic to the story we were reading.
I’m sure we will see this story find its way to the ideal target audience as time moves forward & I am glad for every person who reads this story & adores it.
Thank you to NetGalley, St. Martin’s Press & Gigi Pandian for the free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review!