First off, the description is a straight up lie….
Let’s just start by clarifying the description is a straight up misleading lie. Willow did NOT “run out the door with nothing but the clothes on my back” after catching her husband cheating. Nope, what she did was make the bed she caught him in and cook him dinner. I wish I could say I’m lying. Then a month later she was working as a waitress, but not “ broke, jobless, almost homeless”. She has many temp jobs, and STILL lives with the abusive cheating husband! She does NOT ever “trip and land in the lap of a gorgeous stranger”. She simply serves him as a waitress, then has sex with him. The description says it’s the next day she gets a job offer and finds out it’s from him, but it is not. She literally lives with her cheating abusive husband for MONTHS after finding him cheating. Months. She’s not homeless. Why the description is blatantly lying, I can’t say. It literally turned me off the moment I realized all of that was a lie.
Carrying on…. I found Willow to be too stupid to live and annoyingly pathetic and weak. I actually put this down as a DNF because it was so frustrating to me.
After I read a few other books, I came back and finished it. I liked the overall storyline, but hated significant parts. Weak Willow, for example. Listen up authors- it will NEVER be believable that when a man is humiliating or belittling you, or actively terrifying you (particularly if you are a survivor of abuse), that you would just “melt” at them touching you or cramming their fingers into you. I guarantee she was NOT always dripping wet 🙄 she probably had spent her entire adult life never being turned on or satisfied because her husband was an abusive jerk. She would NOT find that behavior a turn on. It instantly makes me lose respect for the character, and frankly author, and to be honest I skipped over all their smexxy scenes that happened that way. I know she’s starved for affection, but I can’t fathom how many times he could say to her face that he was using her and she was nothing to him as she just kept coming back asking if she meant anything to him. Girl, stop!!
I liked the overall storyline, that’s the ONLY things that made me come back and finish this book. I loathe weak pathetic women, and and lazy writing (“my body betrayed me” is lazy imo). If you can look beyond those things, you’ll probably enjoy this story. There’s a cliffhanger ending as it’s a duet, so I’ll force myself to read the next one to see how it works out. But it’s doubtful this will be on my reread list.