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Griff Driscoll and the Corruption of Essence
Keep the fires lit. Whatever it takes.
As far back as Griff could remember, the people of Cordelia lit torches every night to keep the darkness away, to keep the monsters at bay.
But on the night of his sixteenth birthday, everything changed.
Growing up, he’d believed that the nightstalkers were the only thing he had to fear, but he’d never been told where they’d come from.
After a terrifying confrontation and the awakening of a strange and unexpected ability, Griff is left questioning everything he thought he knew about the world. When he gets an invitation to Bergots Academy for young mages, he can’t help but worry that his nightmares are only just beginning.
The journey to discovery will lead Griff to magical places and mysterious people. It will also lead him to answers he’d wish he had never found ...
As far back as Griff could remember, the people of Cordelia lit torches every night to keep the darkness away, to keep the monsters at bay.
But on the night of his sixteenth birthday, everything changed.
Growing up, he’d believed that the nightstalkers were the only thing he had to fear, but he’d never been told where they’d come from.
After a terrifying confrontation and the awakening of a strange and unexpected ability, Griff is left questioning everything he thought he knew about the world. When he gets an invitation to Bergots Academy for young mages, he can’t help but worry that his nightmares are only just beginning.
The journey to discovery will lead Griff to magical places and mysterious people. It will also lead him to answers he’d wish he had never found ...
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First published May 2, 2022
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May 3, 2022
Griff Driscoll had a normal life. Well, dangerous nightstalkers lived in the forest, so it was dangerous to go out at night, but it had been ages since they had been seen close to the village. When he turned 16, he was prepared to take a shift with his father as one of the night guards, but when some unusual things occurred, and the king just happened to show up, and Griff was offered an all-expenses-paid education at Bergots Academy where mages are taught to control their magic, lest it control them, and use it for the good of the king and the kingdom.
Yes, this is an academy story. And yes, you will definitely see Harry Potter influences. It shares the fun and as Brandon likes to call it "whimsy" of other stories where someone is first introduced to the wonder of magic. But there are some fun differences. Wargs, large winged wolves, are a fabulous (if initially frightening) mode of transportation and loyal soldiers when needed. The magic system is tied to emotions and changes based on whether the emotion is positive, negative, or neutral, so while students learn to temper their emotions, they are not taught that emotions are evil and learn that sometimes they are even valuable.
Griff and his friends also learn the power of teamwork. While he does occasionally do things on his own, their academy training is based on teams of five students working together to hone their skills in partnership with each other. And unlike your typical D&D teams, they aren't necessarily composed of one tank, one healer, and three DPS. They are selected in what seems to be a random arrangement and are challenged to find and build strategy based on each others' strengths. And they do exactly that, even when several in their group pose challenges to the team for various reasons. They also learn the power of empathy and compassion and fighting for each other. It was inspiring to me, because even as an adult, I face similar challenges with friends and people in my life.
And then there are two villains to the story. There is the Corruption, something evil that no one understands but that coexists with the beautiful world, marring it and those who touch it. And then there is the man who would challenge the king, claiming he can coopt the Corruption and the nightstalkers and things that are seen as evil and bend them to his will, making him stronger and more powerful than the king. And make no mistake, he is growing in power and gaining followers of those who seek power over goodness.
This is a debut novel, one that was a long time in the writing, and I had the privilege of editing it, so I admit I may have some bias. But I loved the world that Brandon created. I loved the idea of the academy and emphasis on good and truth and values that are sometimes set aside in this type of story for the sake of power and strength. And I loved the characters. Griff with his self-doubt. Mira with her desire to provide for her family. Marth with his constant foot in mouth. Vincent with his quiet strength. Sadie with her tough exterior. Somehow, they made sense together. And I want to be friends with all of them. I look forward to seeing where this series takes us next.
Yes, this is an academy story. And yes, you will definitely see Harry Potter influences. It shares the fun and as Brandon likes to call it "whimsy" of other stories where someone is first introduced to the wonder of magic. But there are some fun differences. Wargs, large winged wolves, are a fabulous (if initially frightening) mode of transportation and loyal soldiers when needed. The magic system is tied to emotions and changes based on whether the emotion is positive, negative, or neutral, so while students learn to temper their emotions, they are not taught that emotions are evil and learn that sometimes they are even valuable.
Griff and his friends also learn the power of teamwork. While he does occasionally do things on his own, their academy training is based on teams of five students working together to hone their skills in partnership with each other. And unlike your typical D&D teams, they aren't necessarily composed of one tank, one healer, and three DPS. They are selected in what seems to be a random arrangement and are challenged to find and build strategy based on each others' strengths. And they do exactly that, even when several in their group pose challenges to the team for various reasons. They also learn the power of empathy and compassion and fighting for each other. It was inspiring to me, because even as an adult, I face similar challenges with friends and people in my life.
And then there are two villains to the story. There is the Corruption, something evil that no one understands but that coexists with the beautiful world, marring it and those who touch it. And then there is the man who would challenge the king, claiming he can coopt the Corruption and the nightstalkers and things that are seen as evil and bend them to his will, making him stronger and more powerful than the king. And make no mistake, he is growing in power and gaining followers of those who seek power over goodness.
This is a debut novel, one that was a long time in the writing, and I had the privilege of editing it, so I admit I may have some bias. But I loved the world that Brandon created. I loved the idea of the academy and emphasis on good and truth and values that are sometimes set aside in this type of story for the sake of power and strength. And I loved the characters. Griff with his self-doubt. Mira with her desire to provide for her family. Marth with his constant foot in mouth. Vincent with his quiet strength. Sadie with her tough exterior. Somehow, they made sense together. And I want to be friends with all of them. I look forward to seeing where this series takes us next.
August 7, 2022
I first seen this book on a Tiktok video by the author and just heard magic school and knew I had to read it and I’m so happy I did.
Not much happens in the first third of this book but after that it’s pretty much none stop until the end.
I rate this a 4.5 stars, the only reason it’s not a 5 is I found it a little too fast paced at times but I’m really looking forward to the release of the second book as I will be carrying on.
Not much happens in the first third of this book but after that it’s pretty much none stop until the end.
I rate this a 4.5 stars, the only reason it’s not a 5 is I found it a little too fast paced at times but I’m really looking forward to the release of the second book as I will be carrying on.
May 2, 2022
What a fun read! Harriman takes us into a magical world where The Corruption is wreaking havoc. This is a great young adult fantasy book that is good clean reading; no foul language, no major love scenes and lots of characters teens will identify with. The first two chapters I found myself comparing to Potterworld, but suddenly the plot took off and the characters became their own. I loved following their adventures! I can't wait to see what happens next! Will definitely be looking for the next book.
May 13, 2022
The debut novel from Brandon Harriman is a wonderfully built world of magic, hero’s, villains, and self discovery. This novel introduces unique concepts to the “magic academy” genre that makes it a worthy companion to fans of the Harry Potter or Name of the Wind series. Griff and his friends explore ideas of wholesomeness and teamwork without straying into the sappy end of the pool and the strength of the ending of the book makes me wish I had the second book of the series to pick right up as soon as I put the first book down.
May 12, 2022
**3.5 Stars**
Note: I received an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.
I had no expectations going into this book. And while the name should have been a dead giveaway (*Full Name* and the *Something* of *Something*), I was still surprised that this was a Harry-Potter style story. I know, I should have known better. But once our young and naïve protagonist got shipped off to magic school, I caught onto the game. And I suspect the parallels to our beloved Boy Wonder’s story are completely intentional. And I didn’t need the clunky and random (but not entirely unwelcome) “turn to page 394” reference for me to figure THAT out!
Despite it being based on an already known trope, the book does feel like it offers some fresh perspectives. The world is interesting, and the book already starts off in a state of war against evil instead of building towards it. I also genuinely appreciate that the school teaches its mages to fight. Their world is dark and getting darker, so it’s good that the school’s benefactor appreciates the importance of preparing the people with magic to try to fight it.
The book feels very middle-grade or YA-lite, though. Which isn’t necessarily a bad thing, but not quite my jam. Like MG or YA books, we run through the plot quickly and there’s a lot of character development and worldbuilding that is lacking. We need more bonding with Griff’s battle group. There needs to be more (and, honestly, better) buildup of the main romantic storyline. I want more Altar Storm (and context on how it is supposed to factor into people’s grades…? Is it like PE or a series of practical exams? Do you get credit for participating or do you have to be on the winning team? At least Quidditch had POINTS and a very clear purpose, amiright?). I want more about the school, more Tyrell (who has the potential to be more interesting than Griff), more context on the Famous Ruling Family that seems to dominate this world for reasons not yet apparent to us… just, well, more everything.
I hope the sequel(s) are longer, and give just as much page space to character and world building as they do plot.
Note: I received an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.
I had no expectations going into this book. And while the name should have been a dead giveaway (*Full Name* and the *Something* of *Something*), I was still surprised that this was a Harry-Potter style story. I know, I should have known better. But once our young and naïve protagonist got shipped off to magic school, I caught onto the game. And I suspect the parallels to our beloved Boy Wonder’s story are completely intentional. And I didn’t need the clunky and random (but not entirely unwelcome) “turn to page 394” reference for me to figure THAT out!
Despite it being based on an already known trope, the book does feel like it offers some fresh perspectives. The world is interesting, and the book already starts off in a state of war against evil instead of building towards it. I also genuinely appreciate that the school teaches its mages to fight. Their world is dark and getting darker, so it’s good that the school’s benefactor appreciates the importance of preparing the people with magic to try to fight it.
The book feels very middle-grade or YA-lite, though. Which isn’t necessarily a bad thing, but not quite my jam. Like MG or YA books, we run through the plot quickly and there’s a lot of character development and worldbuilding that is lacking. We need more bonding with Griff’s battle group. There needs to be more (and, honestly, better) buildup of the main romantic storyline. I want more Altar Storm (and context on how it is supposed to factor into people’s grades…? Is it like PE or a series of practical exams? Do you get credit for participating or do you have to be on the winning team? At least Quidditch had POINTS and a very clear purpose, amiright?). I want more about the school, more Tyrell (who has the potential to be more interesting than Griff), more context on the Famous Ruling Family that seems to dominate this world for reasons not yet apparent to us… just, well, more everything.
I hope the sequel(s) are longer, and give just as much page space to character and world building as they do plot.
May 10, 2023
Griff Driscoll and the Corruption of Essence doesn’t quite knock it out of the park for Mr. Harriman’s debut novel, but it does score a run. The story begins at breakneck speed with a rapid introduction to the main character and an action sequence. The pacing then reverses to a slow, methodic plod as the world is built and information dispensed. This isn’t a bad thing, and the story here is well-ordered, fun, and exciting, making the speedy beginning feel like what is really out of place. The characters are okay as a whole, some bland and some well-developed. I really appreciated the intergenerational interactions in the story. Adults are not evil, antagonistic, or stupid as is often the case in young adult fiction. Rather they function well as mentors, teachers, and friends, displaying how these things transcend age. The world of Griff Driscoll is inspired and truly fantastic. At first I was confused by turns of phrase, and certain details of the world, yet before long all made sense and supplied mysteries to ponder. I will not say more lest I spoil anything. If I’m honest, The Corruption of Essence has a number of problems, but what kept me engaged were the messages sprinkled throughout. Books may have general themes of courage, self-sacrifice, or myriad other topics, but this one took it a step further. Every lesson was unique, nuanced, and had concrete feeling to it. Any time the novel’s problems showed through, another great message would smack me in the face and get me interested again. Messages pertain not only to the young adult crowd but to all generations. In conclusion, The Corruption of Essence is a good time, a good message, and a good book and I absolutely recommend putting it on your reading list.
April 23, 2022
The academy books I've read before have all been with females as the MC, I was interested to see how it would be with a male MC. This book has a bit of a Harry Potter vibe but I feel it's aimed at a younger audience, especially the first two thirds of the book. It centres around Griff and his attending an academy for mages. Very typical academy, boy comes from a little known village, boy struggles to fit in, boy makes a few friends, boy finds out he has unusual magic and of course, there's the proverbial bully. I almost stopped reading it, I'm not that into academy books. But as the story progressed, a few interesting titbits started surfacing. Yes, there's a bad guy wanting to oust the king and take over the kingdom, although, the baddie thinks he's doing it for a good cause. There's a magical corruption spreading throughout the kingdom and baddie is convinced he's the only hope to stop it. Only problem is, baddie is prepared to kill anyone who doesn't toe the line, his line that is. I did enjoy the battle scenes, as well as seeing how Griff grows into his magic, that was pretty cool. As I said, the last third felt more like a plot unfolding and well paced. Would I read book 2? Probably. Just as I was getting into it, I was at the end and I'd like to see what happens next
May 30, 2022
I received Griff Driscoll and the Corruption of Essence (Book 1) by Brandon Harriman from BookFunnel and am now reviewing. On the night of his 16th birthday everything changed for Griff. He'd believed the nightstalkers were the only thing he had to fear. After a terrifying confrontation the awakening of an unexpected ability Griff is left questioning everything he thought about the world. When he gets an invitation to Bergots Academy for young mages, he can't help but worry that his nightmares are only just beginning. The journey to discovery will lead him to magical places and mysterious people. It will also lead him to answers he'd wish he never found. I enjoyed reading this book and look forward to more writing by Brandon. This book is available on Amazon
April 29, 2022
Griff Driscoll, a seemingly typical boy of sixteen, finds that he is in possession of magical abilities from mysterious origins. Yes, he goes to magic school with other teenagers so readers will see ties to Harry Potter. However, J. K. Rowling’s wizarding world was not the first magic school written and there will be many more to come. Avid fantasy readers will easily get past this as Bergots is different enough to stand on its own legs. With budding friendships, arcane competitions, and magical discoveries, this young adult fantasy adventure is a wonderful introduction into this world befallen by the Corruption. Unearthing artifacts of the previous era (cars, swing sets, guns) makes unraveling the mystery as to the origin of the Corruption most intriguing. Understanding the cause of this curse and the source of his own power may help Griff to stop Korrun Aldamund from wreaking havoc across Oriel. Will he be able to halt the King’s brother or will he fall to the forces of evil?
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May 4, 2022
This was such a fun read! Full of intriguing magic, fantastic creatures, and EPIC battles! I so enjoyed following Griff on his journey to Bergots Academy and "oohed" and "ahhed" over the magic right along with him. The descriptions of the world were so vivid and detailed. (Hello, winged wolves? Nightstalkers? LOVE). It was probably my favorite thing about the book, aside from the story! There were so many twists and turns, and then the end... amazing! If you love Harry Potter or magic academy books, but you're looking for a world that's different from the rest, definitely check out Brandon Harriman's debut novel!
May 3, 2022
Great book! There were lots of similarities to Harry Potter, but at the same time lot of creative differences. The details throughout the book were fantastic; whether it was the appearance of a town, a monster, someone's facial expression, or the night sky, it really added to the story. The characters were believable, relatable, and had great depth to them. The story was action packed and also completely clean, both of which made it fun to read. I really enjoyed it and am looking forward to reading the next one.
June 17, 2022
I thoroughly enjoyed part one of the Griff Driscoll series. There’s plenty of good action, the author writes well (which is a big deal to me), and the plot is nicely developed. If you enjoy this kind of fantasy fiction, I’ll most certainly recommend this series to you. It has a feel like a bit of a cross between Harry Potter and the Eragon series early on, but as the book progresses, develops its own unique flavor of excitement. Hope you enjoy it as much as I did.
August 30, 2022
The main point I want to get across about this book is how quickly my mind took to this story. I felt like I was watching a movie in my head and before I knew it, I was flipping the last page. The author does a great job with the world building and telling such a descriptive compelling story. I am excited about book 2 and can’t wait to see what happens next!
May 2, 2022
Griff quickly captured my attention then wouldn’t let me go. Very inspirational as you identify with his struggles then wish to be in his world fighting with him. Definitely a age turner!!!!
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